TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article.Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体而言，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现尚可，但仍有改进空间。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注重逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加紧密。此外，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试给出更具体的信息，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The passage discussed the summer study abroad in Peru is cancelled because it's low enrollment due to its lack of resources and funding, and also the option for the other Spanish Peru summer. The man in the conversation didn't think it's a great idea. Firstly, he believed that it still leaves time to recruit more applicants. Furthermore, the high requirements prevent these applicants, including the three recommendations and high grades. Secondly, it's not enough to just take their language course. It should be enjoyed in the culture, which to make it a real plan.

Corrected Answer: The passage discussed the that summer study abroad in Peru is cancelled canceled because it's of its low enrollment due to its lack of resources and funding, and also the option for the other Spanish Peru language summer programs. The man in the conversation didn't think it'sit was a great idea.(原文中的“the”应改为“that”，因为这里是引述句子。此外，将“cancelled”改为美式拼写“canceled”。将“it's”改为“of its”，使句子更通顺。将“Peru”改为“language”，以避免重复。最后，将“it's”改为过去时态的“it was”。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The passage discussed that the summer study abroad program in Peru was canceled due to its low enrollment, which resulted from a lack of resources and funding. Additionally, the university offered other Spanish language summer programs as alternatives. The man in the conversation disagreed with the decision to cancel the program. He believed that there was still time to recruit more applicants by relaxing the stringent requirements, such as obtaining three recommendation letters and maintaining high grades. Moreover, he argued that merely participating in a language course was insufficient; students should also immerse themselves in the local culture to make the experience truly worthwhile. He expressed his interest in Peru's unique history and culture, which could not be found in other Spanish-speaking countries, making the cancellation particularly disappointing for him.

6.思维导图

• Cancellation

  • Low enrollment
  • Lack of resources and funding

• Alternative Spanish language programs

• Man's disagreement

  • Time to recruit more applicants
  • Relaxing requirements
    • Recommendation letters
    • High grades
  • Cultural immersion
    • Interest in Peru's history and culture

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，说话者的语言流利，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点使用不当可能导致了不恰当的停顿。此外，拼写错误可能是发音不准确的结果。建议说话者练习更清晰、准确的发音，并注意在适当的地方停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，说话者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，观点之间关系明确，也给出了足够的支持和例子。但仍有改进空间。建议说话者在总结计划时更详细地描述阅读材料中提到的具体措施，并在陈述男生观点时更明确地解释其原因。这样可以使回答更加完整和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The reading materials propose that the club will initiate an eco-friendly program. The reading passage states that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project.（将“club”改为“university”，使描述更准确；将“propose”改为“states”，使表述更自然。）

Original: Firstly, the location will be located at the roof. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof of the student center.（将“location will be located at”改为“solar panels will be installed on”，使表述更清晰。）

Original: Secondly, the outdoor seating area will be replaced. Second, the outdoor seating area on the roof will be removed to make room for the solar panels.（将“replaced”改为“removed”，并补充描述，使表述更准确。）

Original: He thinks it will help because this year is very bright and the location is very good. He believes it will be beneficial due to the sunny weather and ideal location.（将“this year is very bright”改为“the sunny weather”，使表述更自然；将“the location is very good”改为“ideal location”，使表述更准确。）

Original: There is no need for making air conditioner. The university can save on air conditioning costs.（将原句改为“the university can save on air conditioning costs”，使表述更清晰。）

Original: But in the evening, it's very cool and he can see all the campus in the roof. However, in the evenings, it is cooler and offers a great view of the entire campus from the roof.（将“he can see all the campus in the roof”改为“offers a great view of the entire campus from the roof”，使表述更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof of the student center. Second, the outdoor seating area on the roof will be removed to make room for the solar panels. The man agrees with the first idea. He believes it will be beneficial due to the sunny weather and ideal location. The university can save on air conditioning costs. However, he has mixed feelings about removing the outdoor seating area. In his opinion, although it is hot during daytime, in the evenings it is cooler and offers a great view of the entire campus from the roof. Despite his concerns about losing this space, he still thinks that overall, implementing solar panels is a good idea.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - University's environmentally friendly project
  - Solar panels installation
  - Removal of outdoor seating area

- Man's Opinion
  - Agrees with solar panels installation
    - Sunny weather
    - Ideal location
    - Saving on air conditioning costs
  - Mixed feelings about removing seating area
    - Cooler in the evenings
    - Great view of the campus from the roof

- Overall, good idea despite concerns about losing seating area.

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但有些地方需要改进。例如，在一些词汇和短语之间需要适当的停顿，以提高整体的流畅度。此外，注意正确发音一些单词，如“air conditioner”。建议多加练习，提高发音准确性和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论证方面还有待加强。首先，在总结阅读材料时，可以更明确地指出学校计划在学生中心的屋顶安装太阳能板，并移除室外座位区。然后，在陈述男生观点时，可以更清晰地表达他对计划的支持和担忧。例如，在谈到他对太阳能板的支持时，可以强调这将有助于节省能源和降低空调成本；而在谈到他对移除座位区的担忧时，可以指出这将影响到学生们在傍晚时分欣赏美景和呼吸新鲜空气的机会。建议在练习时注意提高回答的条理性和论证的充分性。

5.语言使用

Original: The reading materials propose that the club will initiate an eco-friendly program. The reading passage mentions that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project. (将“club”改为“university”，使表述更准确。同时，调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

Original: Firstly, the location will be located at the roof. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof. (调整句子结构，使表述更清晰。)

Original: Secondly, the outdoor seating area will be replaced. Second, the outdoor seating area will be removed. (将“replaced”改为“removed”，使表述更准确。)

Original: There is no need for making air conditioner. This could reduce the need for air conditioning. (调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

Original: But in the evening, it's very cool and he can see all the campus in the roof. However, in the evening, it's cooler and students can enjoy a panoramic view of the campus from the rooftop. (调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage mentions that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof of the student center. Second, the outdoor seating area will be removed. The man agrees with the first idea, as he believes it will help save energy and reduce the need for air conditioning due to the bright and sunny weather. However, he has concerns about removing the seating area. Although it is hot during the day, in the evening, it's cooler and students can enjoy a panoramic view of the campus from the rooftop. The man appreciates having a place to relax and breathe fresh air after a long day of classes. Despite his concerns, he thinks that overall, the plan is a good idea.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - University's plan
    - Environmentally friendly project
      - Solar panels installation
      - Outdoor seating area removal

- Man's Opinion
  - Agreement
    - Energy saving
    - Reduced air conditioning needs
  - Concerns
    - Loss of seating area
    - Evening relaxation and views

- Overall Assessment
  - Good idea despite concerns

7.关键词