TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article.Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体而言，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现尚可，但仍有改进空间。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注重逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加紧密。此外，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试给出更具体的信息，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The passage discussed the summer study abroad in Peru is cancelled because it's low enrollment due to its lack of resources and funding, and also the option for the other Spanish Peru summer. The man in the conversation didn't think it's a great idea. Firstly, he believed that it still leaves time to recruit more applicants. Furthermore, the high requirements prevent these applicants, including the three recommendations and high grades. Secondly, it's not enough to just take their language course. It should be enjoyed in the culture, which to make it a real plan.

Corrected Answer: The passage discussed the that summer study abroad in Peru is cancelled canceled because it's of its low enrollment due to its lack of resources and funding, and also the option for the other Spanish Peru language summer programs. The man in the conversation didn't think it'sit was a great idea.(原文中的“the”应改为“that”，因为这里是引述句子。此外，将“cancelled”改为美式拼写“canceled”。将“it's”改为“of its”，使句子更通顺。将“Peru”改为“language”，以避免重复。最后，将“it's”改为过去时态的“it was”。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The passage discussed that the summer study abroad program in Peru was canceled due to its low enrollment, which resulted from a lack of resources and funding. Additionally, the university offered other Spanish language summer programs as alternatives. The man in the conversation disagreed with the decision to cancel the program. He believed that there was still time to recruit more applicants by relaxing the stringent requirements, such as obtaining three recommendation letters and maintaining high grades. Moreover, he argued that merely participating in a language course was insufficient; students should also immerse themselves in the local culture to make the experience truly worthwhile. He expressed his interest in Peru's unique history and culture, which could not be found in other Spanish-speaking countries, making the cancellation particularly disappointing for him.

6.思维导图

• Cancellation

  • Low enrollment
  • Lack of resources and funding

• Alternative Spanish language programs

• Man's disagreement

  • Time to recruit more applicants
  • Relaxing requirements
    • Recommendation letters
    • High grades
  • Cultural immersion
    • Interest in Peru's history and culture

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，说话者的语言流利，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点使用不当可能导致了不恰当的停顿。此外，拼写错误可能是发音不准确的结果。建议说话者练习更清晰、准确的发音，并注意在适当的地方停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，说话者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，观点之间关系明确，也给出了足够的支持和例子。但仍有改进空间。建议说话者在总结计划时更详细地描述阅读材料中提到的具体措施，并在陈述男生观点时更明确地解释其原因。这样可以使回答更加完整和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The reading materials propose that the club will initiate an eco-friendly program. The reading passage states that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project.（将“club”改为“university”，使描述更准确；将“propose”改为“states”，使表述更自然。）

Original: Firstly, the location will be located at the roof. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof of the student center.（将“location will be located at”改为“solar panels will be installed on”，使表述更清晰。）

Original: Secondly, the outdoor seating area will be replaced. Second, the outdoor seating area on the roof will be removed to make room for the solar panels.（将“replaced”改为“removed”，并补充描述，使表述更准确。）

Original: He thinks it will help because this year is very bright and the location is very good. He believes it will be beneficial due to the sunny weather and ideal location.（将“this year is very bright”改为“the sunny weather”，使表述更自然；将“the location is very good”改为“ideal location”，使表述更准确。）

Original: There is no need for making air conditioner. The university can save on air conditioning costs.（将原句改为“the university can save on air conditioning costs”，使表述更清晰。）

Original: But in the evening, it's very cool and he can see all the campus in the roof. However, in the evenings, it is cooler and offers a great view of the entire campus from the roof.（将“he can see all the campus in the roof”改为“offers a great view of the entire campus from the roof”，使表述更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof of the student center. Second, the outdoor seating area on the roof will be removed to make room for the solar panels. The man agrees with the first idea. He believes it will be beneficial due to the sunny weather and ideal location. The university can save on air conditioning costs. However, he has mixed feelings about removing the outdoor seating area. In his opinion, although it is hot during daytime, in the evenings it is cooler and offers a great view of the entire campus from the roof. Despite his concerns about losing this space, he still thinks that overall, implementing solar panels is a good idea.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - University's environmentally friendly project
  - Solar panels installation
  - Removal of outdoor seating area

- Man's Opinion
  - Agrees with solar panels installation
    - Sunny weather
    - Ideal location
    - Saving on air conditioning costs
  - Mixed feelings about removing seating area
    - Cooler in the evenings
    - Great view of the campus from the roof

- Overall, good idea despite concerns about losing seating area.

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但有些地方需要改进。例如，在一些词汇和短语之间需要适当的停顿，以提高整体的流畅度。此外，注意正确发音一些单词，如“air conditioner”。建议多加练习，提高发音准确性和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论证方面还有待加强。首先，在总结阅读材料时，可以更明确地指出学校计划在学生中心的屋顶安装太阳能板，并移除室外座位区。然后，在陈述男生观点时，可以更清晰地表达他对计划的支持和担忧。例如，在谈到他对太阳能板的支持时，可以强调这将有助于节省能源和降低空调成本；而在谈到他对移除座位区的担忧时，可以指出这将影响到学生们在傍晚时分欣赏美景和呼吸新鲜空气的机会。建议在练习时注意提高回答的条理性和论证的充分性。

5.语言使用

Original: The reading materials propose that the club will initiate an eco-friendly program. The reading passage mentions that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project. (将“club”改为“university”，使表述更准确。同时，调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

Original: Firstly, the location will be located at the roof. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof. (调整句子结构，使表述更清晰。)

Original: Secondly, the outdoor seating area will be replaced. Second, the outdoor seating area will be removed. (将“replaced”改为“removed”，使表述更准确。)

Original: There is no need for making air conditioner. This could reduce the need for air conditioning. (调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

Original: But in the evening, it's very cool and he can see all the campus in the roof. However, in the evening, it's cooler and students can enjoy a panoramic view of the campus from the rooftop. (调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage mentions that the university plans to implement an environmentally friendly project. First, the solar panels will be installed on the roof of the student center. Second, the outdoor seating area will be removed. The man agrees with the first idea, as he believes it will help save energy and reduce the need for air conditioning due to the bright and sunny weather. However, he has concerns about removing the seating area. Although it is hot during the day, in the evening, it's cooler and students can enjoy a panoramic view of the campus from the rooftop. The man appreciates having a place to relax and breathe fresh air after a long day of classes. Despite his concerns, he thinks that overall, the plan is a good idea.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - University's plan
    - Environmentally friendly project
      - Solar panels installation
      - Outdoor seating area removal

- Man's Opinion
  - Agreement
    - Energy saving
    - Reduced air conditioning needs
  - Concerns
    - Loss of seating area
    - Evening relaxation and views

- Overall Assessment
  - Good idea despite concerns

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and minimize unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help to avoid any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to further support their points. To improve topic development, the speaker should consider elaborating on the reasons for their opinion and providing more concrete evidence or examples to strengthen their argument.

5.Language Use

Original: The reading passage announces the change to the campus. To be more specific, it announces the close of student vegetable garden. In the conversation, the man strongly opposes this change for following two reasons. Firstly, he thinks that instead of giving the vegetable garden up, the university should have given students more guidance and instructions on planting vegetables. In addition, he thinks that this place is not ideal for other purposes. Since it is exposed to sunshine, it makes the space an ideal one for growing vegetables. However, the student might prefer to hang out at a more shaded place.

Corrected: The reading passage announces thea change to the campus(use "a" instead of "the" for a more natural-sounding language). To be more specific, it announces the closeclosure of student vegetable gardenthe student vegetable garden(use "closure" instead of "close" and add "the" for proper grammar). In the conversation, the man strongly opposes this change for following two reasonstwo main reasons(use "two main reasons" for a smoother transition). Firstly, he thinks that instead of giving the vegetable garden upup on the vegetable garden, the university should have given students more guidance and instructions on planting vegetables(use "up on" for a more natural flow). In addition, he thinks that this place is not ideal for other purposes. Since it is exposed to sunshine, it makes the space an ideal one for growing vegetables. However, the students might prefer to hang out at a more shaded place(add "s" to "student" for proper grammar).

Revised (140 words): The reading passage announces a change to the campus, specifically the closure of the student vegetable garden. In the conversation, the man strongly opposes this change for two main reasons. First, he believes that instead of giving up on the vegetable garden, the university should have provided students with more guidance and instructions on planting vegetables. This would have allowed them to better understand and manage their plots. Second, he thinks that this sunny location is not ideal for other purposes, such as studying or socializing. The space is perfect for growing vegetables due to its exposure to sunlight; however, students might prefer to hang out in more shaded areas for comfort. Therefore, he argues that the university should reconsider its decision and continue supporting the vegetable garden initiative.

6.Mind Map

- Change to campus
  - Closure of student vegetable garden

- Man's opposition
  - Reason 1: Lack of guidance and instructions
    - University should provide more support
  - Reason 2: Location not ideal for other purposes
    - Sunny for vegetables, but students prefer shade

- Suggestion
  - Reconsider decision and support vegetable garden initiative

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在某些地方可以进一步加强。例如，在总结男子对计划的看法时，可以更明确地表达他的观点。此外，在解释他给出的理由时，可以提供更多具体细节和例子来支持观点。建议在练习时关注这些方面以提高话题发展水平。

5.语言使用

原文：The reading materials propose that they will reduce the max-minimum work hours for students. The reading passage states that the university plans to reduce the maximum work hours for students. (将“materials”改为“passage”，将“propose”改为“states”，将“max-minimum”改为“maximum”，使句子更清晰、准确。)
Firstly, they will reduce 20 hours a week to 10 hours a week. First, the weekly work hours will be reduced from 20 to 10. (简化句子结构，使其更自然。)
Secondly, it can provide more on-campus jobs for more students. Second, this change will create more on-campus job opportunities for students. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)
But the main dissenters agree that, firstly, they will have an upside effect because students want to earn money. However, the man disagrees and argues that, first, it may have a negative impact as students need to earn money. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)
So they have to find another off-campus job. As a result, they might seek off-campus jobs instead. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)
To go to the off-campus job, they should spend more time. This would require additional time for commuting to off-campus jobs. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)
Secondly, it is not very hard for students to find a job. Second, he believes that it is not difficult for students to find on-campus jobs. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)
Though it is desirable jobs, for example, in the library jobs, they also can't find enough students to do the job. Even though some positions may be less desirable, such as library jobs, there are still available positions that students are not filling. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)
So it will be available for students to find a job. Therefore, finding a job on campus should not be an issue for students. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)

修订版（140字）：

The reading passage states that the university plans to reduce the maximum work hours for students. First, the weekly work hours will be reduced from 20 to 10. Second, this change will create more on-campus job opportunities for students. However, the man disagrees and argues that, first, it may have a negative impact as students need to earn money. As a result, they might seek off-campus jobs instead. This would require additional time for commuting to off-campus jobs. Second, he believes that it is not difficult for students to find on-campus jobs. Even though some positions may be less desirable, such as library jobs, there are still available positions that students are not filling. Therefore, finding a job on campus should not be an issue for students.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Reduce maximum work hours
  - More on-campus job opportunities

- Man's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons:
    - Negative impact due to students' need to earn money
      - Seek off-campus jobs instead
      - Additional commuting time
    - Not difficult to find on-campus jobs
      - Less desirable positions still available

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位考生的回答相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。建议考生注意在适当的地方停顿，以便更好地表达自己的观点。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，考生的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。然而，可以在解释男子对计划的看法时提供更多具体细节和例子。例如，在谈到学生可能会选择校外工作时，可以进一步说明这将如何影响他们的学习和生活。总之，尽量在回答中提供更多相关信息和支持观点的例子，以便使回答更加完整和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The letter proposed that the school should set a limit for on-campus job hours. The reading passage proposes that the university should set a limit for on-campus job hours.（原文中的“letter”应改为“reading passage”，同时将“school”改为“university”，以保持与题目一致。）

This way, the students can focus on their schoolwork, and it can help the students by giving them more jobs. By doing so, students can concentrate on their academic work, and it will create more job opportunities for them.（将原文中的“this way”改为“by doing so”，使句子更自然；同时，用“concentrate on their academic work”替换“focus on their schoolwork”，并用“create more job opportunities”替换“giving them more jobs”，以提高词汇的多样性。）

However, the man does not like this idea. Nonetheless, the man disagrees with this plan.（用“Nonetheless”替换“However”，使句子更自然；同时，用“disagrees with this plan”替换“does not like this idea”，以提高词汇的多样性。）

It was due to the fact that more students want to earn money, and they will do this by getting off-campus jobs instead of on-campus jobs, and they will have to spend time traveling from point A to point B even though their job hours are still the same. This is because many students still want to earn money, so they will resort to off-campus jobs instead of on-campus ones, resulting in additional time spent on commuting even if their working hours remain the same.（将原文中的“It was due to the fact that”改为“This is because”，使句子更自然；同时，用“resort to off-campus jobs”替换“getting off-campus jobs”，并用“resulting in additional time spent on commuting”替换“they will have to spend time traveling from point A to point B”，以提高词汇的多样性。）

Besides, he had never heard of a student that is really hard to find a position. Moreover, he has never heard of a student who has difficulty finding a job on campus.（将原文中的“Besides”改为“Moreover”，使句子更自然；同时，用“has difficulty finding a job on campus”替换“is really hard to find a position”，以提高词汇的多样性。）

For instance, the library hadn't found more people to work in that place, so in his perspective, he doesn't think that this whole thing will be a problem. For example, the library has not been able to hire more staff; therefore, from his perspective, this issue does not seem problematic.（将原文中的“the library hadn't found more people to work in that place”改为“the library has not been able to hire more staff”，使句子更自然；同时，用“this issue does not seem problematic”替换“he doesn't think that this whole thing will be a problem”，以提高词汇的多样性。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage proposes that the university should set a limit for on-campus job hours. By doing so, students can concentrate on their academic work, and it will create more job opportunities for them. Nonetheless, the man disagrees with this plan. This is because many students still want to earn money, so they will resort to off-campus jobs instead of on-campus ones, resulting in additional time spent on commuting even if their working hours remain the same. Moreover, he has never heard of a student who has difficulty finding a job on campus. For example, the library has not been able to hire more staff; therefore, from his perspective, this issue does not seem problematic.

6.思维导图

• Reading passage

  • Limit on-campus job hours
  • Focus on academic work
  • Create more job opportunities

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Reasons:
    • Students still want to earn money
    • Resort to off-campus jobs
    • Additional time spent on commuting
    • No difficulty in finding on-campus jobs
    • Example: Library not able to hire more staff

7.关键词