TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the letter writer's proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state the man's opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔有停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及正确发音单词，避免出现拼写错误。同时，可以多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但是，在提供支持或举例方面还有待加强。建议发言者在解释观点时尽量提供更多具体的例子和详细的解释，以便更好地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：Reading a student's university to open the student around snack shop on campus. The reading suggests that the university should open a student-run snack shop on campus. (原句表达不清，修改为更自然的表述)

First, it will be beneficial, it will be very convenient for others, First, it would benefit students by providing convenience, (修改为更自然的表述)

and secondly, also provide good job opportunities. and secondly, by offering job opportunities. (简化句子结构，使其更自然)

In this conversation, the boys really like this idea for two main reasons. In the conversation, the man supports this idea for two main reasons. (修改为更准确的表述)

First, he thinks that it really provides good experience for job and students going to run their own business on campus, First, he believes that it provides valuable work experience for students who plan to run their own businesses, (修改为更自然的表述)

like making schedule, tracking inventories. such as creating schedules and managing inventory. (修改为更自然的表述)

These are great skills that are going to be useful even after graduation, eventually for students who want to run their own business. These skills will be useful even after graduation, particularly for students who want to run their own businesses. (修改为更自然的表述)

Secondly, he thinks that while there are cafeterias and a lot of other stores nearby, but the cafeterias are quite long. Secondly, he thinks that although there are cafeterias and other stores nearby, the lines at the cafeterias can be quite long. (修改为更自然的表述)

A lot of people are waiting there. Students just do not have time to wait, especially for some quick food, Many students don't have time to wait in line, especially for quick snacks, (修改为更自然的表述)

and lots of people do not have cars, so they cannot run. and many students don't have cars to go off-campus for food. (修改为更自然的表述)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading suggests that the university should open a student-run snack shop on campus. First, it would benefit students by providing convenience, and secondly, by offering job opportunities. In the conversation, the man supports this idea for two main reasons. First, he believes that it provides valuable work experience for students who plan to run their own businesses, such as creating schedules and managing inventory. These skills will be useful even after graduation, particularly for students who want to run their own businesses. Secondly, he thinks that although there are cafeterias and other stores nearby, the lines at the cafeterias can be quite long. Many students don't have time to wait in line, especially for quick snacks, and many students don't have cars to go off-campus for food.

6.思维导图

- Reading
    - Student-run snack shop
        - Convenience
        - Job opportunities

- Conversation
    - Man's opinion
        - Supports the idea
            - Reason 1: Valuable work experience
                - Running businesses
                - Creating schedules
                - Managing inventory
            - Reason 2: Cafeteria lines are long
                - Lack of time for waiting
                - Quick snacks needed
                - Limited transportation options (no cars)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太合适，可能会影响听众的理解。建议发言者在练习时注意自己的停顿和发音，以提高表达的准确性和流畅性。

4.话题发展 发言者对于阅读材料和听力材料的内容进行了较好的总结，并给出了男生对建议的看法及其理由。但在组织结构上，可以进一步优化。例如，在提到男生的观点时，可以先简要概括他的观点，然后再详细解释他给出的两个理由。此外，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试使用更多连接词，使得回答更加连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, in the reading, a student suggests the universities to create their own museum on campus so that they can provide more opportunities for students to enjoy the arts. In the reading, a student suggests that universities create their own museums on campus to provide more opportunities for students to enjoy the arts.（建议使用that引导宾语从句，以及将"museum"改为复数形式。）

And this money can be asked from the alumni. This money can be raised by asking alumni for donations.（建议使用更自然的表达方式。）

In the conversation, the boy doesn't like this idea and think it's impractical for two main reasons. In the conversation, the boy disagrees with this idea and thinks it's impractical for two main reasons.（建议使用disagrees替换doesn't like，并在think前加上s。）

Well, first off, he thinks that students already can enjoy the great stuff in the central museums. Firstly, he believes that students can already enjoy great art at central museums.（建议使用更自然的表达方式。）

It's close nearby, only takes half an hour by bus and it's not that expensive. It's nearby, only a half-hour bus ride away and not very expensive.（建议使用更自然的表达方式。）

It only takes two bucks for students if you show your student card and it's even free for students on Monday. It costs only two dollars for students with a student ID, and it's even free for students on Mondays.（建议使用更自然的表达方式。）

So they already have the good ways to enjoy museum. So, they already have good ways to enjoy museums.（建议使用更自然的表达方式。）

On top of that, he thinks that despite, although the alumni are very generous, they already paid for the student center and libraries and there is nothing else can do. Moreover, he thinks that although the alumni are very generous, they have already funded the student center and libraries, so there might not be much left for other projects.（建议使用更自然的表达方式。）

修订后的回答（140词）：

In the reading, a student suggests that universities create their own museums on campus to provide more opportunities for students to enjoy the arts. This money can be raised by asking alumni for donations. In the conversation, the boy disagrees with this idea and thinks it's impractical for two main reasons. Firstly, he believes that students can already enjoy great art at central museums. It's nearby, only a half-hour bus ride away and not very expensive. It costs only two dollars for students with a student ID, and it's even free for students on Mondays. So, they already have good ways to enjoy museums. Moreover, he thinks that although the alumni are very generous, they have already funded the student center and libraries, so there might not be much left for other projects.

6.思维导图

- Reading
    - Proposal
        - University museums
        - Opportunities for students
        - Funding from alumni

- Conversation
    - Boy's opinion
        - Disagrees with proposal
        - Reasons
            1. Central museums accessible
                - Nearby, affordable, student discounts
            2. Alumni generosity limited
                - Already funded student center and libraries

7.关键词