TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the letter writer's proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state the man's opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔有停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及正确发音单词，避免出现拼写错误。同时，可以多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但是，在提供支持或举例方面还有待加强。建议发言者在解释观点时尽量提供更多具体的例子和详细的解释，以便更好地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：Reading a student's university to open the student around snack shop on campus. The reading suggests that the university should open a student-run snack shop on campus. (原句表达不清，修改为更自然的表述)

First, it will be beneficial, it will be very convenient for others, First, it would benefit students by providing convenience, (修改为更自然的表述)

and secondly, also provide good job opportunities. and secondly, by offering job opportunities. (简化句子结构，使其更自然)

In this conversation, the boys really like this idea for two main reasons. In the conversation, the man supports this idea for two main reasons. (修改为更准确的表述)

First, he thinks that it really provides good experience for job and students going to run their own business on campus, First, he believes that it provides valuable work experience for students who plan to run their own businesses, (修改为更自然的表述)

like making schedule, tracking inventories. such as creating schedules and managing inventory. (修改为更自然的表述)

These are great skills that are going to be useful even after graduation, eventually for students who want to run their own business. These skills will be useful even after graduation, particularly for students who want to run their own businesses. (修改为更自然的表述)

Secondly, he thinks that while there are cafeterias and a lot of other stores nearby, but the cafeterias are quite long. Secondly, he thinks that although there are cafeterias and other stores nearby, the lines at the cafeterias can be quite long. (修改为更自然的表述)

A lot of people are waiting there. Students just do not have time to wait, especially for some quick food, Many students don't have time to wait in line, especially for quick snacks, (修改为更自然的表述)

and lots of people do not have cars, so they cannot run. and many students don't have cars to go off-campus for food. (修改为更自然的表述)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading suggests that the university should open a student-run snack shop on campus. First, it would benefit students by providing convenience, and secondly, by offering job opportunities. In the conversation, the man supports this idea for two main reasons. First, he believes that it provides valuable work experience for students who plan to run their own businesses, such as creating schedules and managing inventory. These skills will be useful even after graduation, particularly for students who want to run their own businesses. Secondly, he thinks that although there are cafeterias and other stores nearby, the lines at the cafeterias can be quite long. Many students don't have time to wait in line, especially for quick snacks, and many students don't have cars to go off-campus for food.

6.思维导图

- Reading
    - Student-run snack shop
        - Convenience
        - Job opportunities

- Conversation
    - Man's opinion
        - Supports the idea
            - Reason 1: Valuable work experience
                - Running businesses
                - Creating schedules
                - Managing inventory
            - Reason 2: Cafeteria lines are long
                - Lack of time for waiting
                - Quick snacks needed
                - Limited transportation options (no cars)

7.关键词