TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

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0. 3.表达

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5.语言使用

原回答：🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨 无回答（原回答没有提供任何内容，因此无法评估语言使用方面的问题。请重新录制回答，并确保提供完整的信息。）

修订后的回答（满分30分）：

In the proposal, Mary suggests that all university students should be allowed to borrow the high-quality professional cameras owned by the art department, instead of just those enrolled in photography courses. She believes that this would give more students the opportunity to advance their photography skills. To accommodate this change, she proposes shortening the loan time from a full day to a couple of hours.

However, the man disagrees with Mary's proposal for two main reasons. First, he believes that most people would not benefit much from using these sophisticated cameras without extensive training, as they have many settings and adjustments. Second, he argues that the assignments for photography students are time-consuming and often require going off-campus to shoot in various locations. If everyone had access to the cameras as Mary suggests, it would be nearly impossible for photography students to complete their assignments within the shortened loan time.

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6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • All university students borrow cameras
  • Shorten loan time

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Sophisticated technology
    • Extensive training needed
  • Time-consuming assignments
    • Off-campus locations
    • Impossible to complete within shortened loan time

7.关键词

1.子项得分

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5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. (原回答与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

修正后的回答：The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. He believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn and can use the existing walkways instead. He also thinks that the dirt path looks more natural and beautiful than a concrete sidewalk would.

根据审阅建议修改后的完整回答（140词）：

The proposal in Patty Greene's letter suggests paving a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to prevent muddy shoes and improve the lawn's appearance. However, the man disagrees with this proposal for two reasons. First, he believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn as there are already nice walkways around that area. He thinks students can avoid getting their shoes dirty by taking an extra minute or two to walk around using these existing paths. Second, he finds the dirt path more natural and beautiful compared to a concrete sidewalk. In his opinion, covering the path with concrete would ruin its natural beauty. Therefore, he believes that the lawn should remain as it is without any changes.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Pave sidewalk
  • Main lawn on campus

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees
  • Reasons
    • Existing walkways
    • Natural beauty

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的语言流利度和语速基本上是一致的，偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意提高发音准确性，尤其是在一些单词的发音上。此外，适当减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间也有明确的联系。但在论述原因时可以更具体一些，给出更充分的支持或例子。建议在练习时注意提高论述深度和完整性，以便更好地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the students think that the university should pave a dirty path with concrete. First of all, they think that by doing so, the students won't get mud in their foot. And besides, they think that it will just make the route more attractive. And the man in the conversation doesn't like his idea. First of all, he thinks that the students don't have the motive to do it. I mean, he said that there's already a road, so they don't have to walk through this dirty path. They just can spend an extra minute to walk through the road. And also, he thinks that this road will just make them look natural. I mean, if you create concrete, the students think that you will just ruin it. And he didn't like concrete.

Corrected Answer: Well, some students believe that the university should pave a dirt path with concrete. Firstly, they argue that by doing so, students won't get mud on their shoes. Additionally, they believe that it would make the path more attractive. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this idea. He believes that students don't have a valid reason for taking this shortcut since there's already a paved walkway nearby; they could simply take an extra minute to use it instead of walking through the dirt path. Furthermore, he thinks that leaving the path as is preserves its natural appearance and beauty; paving it with concrete would only ruin its charm. (修改了一些词汇和句子结构，使语言更自然、连贯。同时，对一些表达进行了调整，使其更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Some students believe that the university should pave a dirt path with concrete for two main reasons. Firstly, they argue that paving the path would prevent students from getting mud on their shoes during rainy days. Additionally, they believe that a paved path would be more visually appealing. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. He believes that students don't have a valid reason for taking this shortcut since there's already a paved walkway nearby; they could simply take an extra minute to use it instead of walking through the dirt path. Furthermore, he thinks that leaving the path as is preserves its natural appearance and beauty; paving it with concrete would only ruin its charm. In conclusion, the man opposes the idea of paving the dirt path due to its unnecessary nature and potential negative impact on the environment.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Pave dirt path with concrete
    - Reasons
      - Prevent mud on shoes
      - More visually appealing

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with proposal
    - Reasons
      - No valid reason for shortcut
        - Paved walkway nearby
      - Preserve natural appearance and beauty
        - Concrete would ruin charm

7.关键词