TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

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5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading, a student proposes that the university should let students borrow cameras from the course. In the reading passage, a student proposes that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras from the art department. (原文中提到的是让所有学生从艺术系借相机，而不仅仅是从课程中借相机。) In this way, students can advance their photograph skills, By doing so, students can enhance their photography skills, (使用“enhance”更自然，同时注意将“photograph”改为“photography”。) and if the learning time is shortened, many students can access the cameras. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. Firstly, most of the cameras are technologically sophisticated, so it is not easy for all students to use it without receiving any training before. And secondly, the students who take part in the photograph class have to take a lot of time to finish the assignment, and it's almost impossible for them to finish the assignment in such a shortened time. They have to go off-campus and shoot at different locations, which is not convenient to use the cameras.

Revised Answer (140 words): In the reading passage, a student proposes that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras from the art department. By doing so, students can enhance their photography skills, and if the loan time is reduced, more students could have access to these cameras. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this proposal for two main reasons. First, most of these cameras are technologically advanced, making it difficult for students without prior training to use them effectively. Second, photography students need a significant amount of time to complete their assignments, and it would be nearly impossible for them to finish within a shortened time frame. These assignments often require off-campus shooting at various locations, making the proposed camera usage inconvenient.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Proposal: Allow all students to borrow cameras
  • Benefits: Enhance photography skills, more students access cameras

• Conversation

  • Man's disagreement
    • Reason 1: Technologically advanced cameras, difficult without training
    • Reason 2: Photography students need more time for assignments, shortened time frame not feasible

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

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4.话题发展 回答没有提供关于提案的总结，也没有说明男子对提案的看法以及他给出的理由。请重新组织回答，确保包含所有要求的信息。

5.语言使用

原回答：🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨 无回答（原回答没有提供任何内容，因此无法评估语言使用方面的问题。请重新录制回答，并确保提供完整的信息。）

修订后的回答（满分30分）：

In the proposal, Mary suggests that all university students should be allowed to borrow the high-quality professional cameras owned by the art department, instead of just those enrolled in photography courses. She believes that this would give more students the opportunity to advance their photography skills. To accommodate this change, she proposes shortening the loan time from a full day to a couple of hours.

However, the man disagrees with Mary's proposal for two main reasons. First, he believes that most people would not benefit much from using these sophisticated cameras without extensive training, as they have many settings and adjustments. Second, he argues that the assignments for photography students are time-consuming and often require going off-campus to shoot in various locations. If everyone had access to the cameras as Mary suggests, it would be nearly impossible for photography students to complete their assignments within the shortened loan time.

总结：请确保在回答中使用高级词汇、正确的语法、自然的陈述流程、平滑的过渡和有力的结论。同时，请注意使用自然 sounding 的语言风格。

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • All university students borrow cameras
  • Shorten loan time

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Sophisticated technology
    • Extensive training needed
  • Time-consuming assignments
    • Off-campus locations
    • Impossible to complete within shortened loan time

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：0

• 主题发展：0

• 语言使用：0

2.预估分数

• 总分：0

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4.话题发展 回答没有涉及到问题的主题，因此无法评估话题发展方面的得分。请重新回答问题，并确保内容与问题相关。

5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. (原回答与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

修正后的回答：The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. He believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn and can use the existing walkways instead. He also thinks that the dirt path looks more natural and beautiful than a concrete sidewalk would.

根据审阅建议修改后的完整回答（140词）：

The proposal in Patty Greene's letter suggests paving a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to prevent muddy shoes and improve the lawn's appearance. However, the man disagrees with this proposal for two reasons. First, he believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn as there are already nice walkways around that area. He thinks students can avoid getting their shoes dirty by taking an extra minute or two to walk around using these existing paths. Second, he finds the dirt path more natural and beautiful compared to a concrete sidewalk. In his opinion, covering the path with concrete would ruin its natural beauty. Therefore, he believes that the lawn should remain as it is without any changes.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Pave sidewalk
  • Main lawn on campus

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees
  • Reasons
    • Existing walkways
    • Natural beauty

7.关键词