TOEFL TPO 52 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the idea expressed in the newspaper. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在表述观点时可以更加明确和具体。建议在练习时关注提供更多支持观点的细节和例子，以便让回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the announcement, somebody in the university asked the university to invite famous business leaders in the graduation ceremony so that make the business guru program more famous and have many beneficials. But the guru totally disagreed about this solution. First of all, she thinks that they have already invited many business leaders in the ceremony in the past few years and she thinks there should be some change, such as inviting some teachers. And also, a teacher is a very important role in the society. Secondly, she thinks the business program is big enough and very famous enough, but the education program is not.

Corrected Answer: In the announcementletter, somebody ina student from the university askedsuggested that the university invite famous business leaders toin the graduation ceremony,. This would makepromote the business guruprogram and have many beneficialsbenefits. However, the woman disagreed with this solutionproposal. Firstly, she believes that they have already invited numerous business leaders toin past ceremonies and that there should be a change, such as inviting teachers. Additionally, teachers play a crucial role in society. Secondly, she thinks the business program is already well-established and renowned, but the education program is not.

(原文中的“announcement”应改为“letter”，因为这是一封信。原文中的“somebody in”应改为“a student from”，以更准确地描述信的来源。原文中的“asked”应改为“suggested that”，以使句子更自然。原文中的“make”应改为“promote”，以使词汇更准确。原文中的“guru”应改为“program”，以避免混淆。原文中的“beneficials”应改为“benefits”，以使语法正确。原文中的“solution”应改为“proposal”，以使表达更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words): In the letter, a student from the university suggested that the university invite famous business leaders to the graduation ceremony. This would promote the business program and provide many benefits. However, the woman disagreed with this proposal. Firstly, she believes that they have already invited numerous business leaders to past ceremonies, and it's time for a change, such as inviting teachers who play a crucial role in society. Secondly, she thinks the business program is already well-established and renowned, so it doesn't need further promotion. On the other hand, the education program could benefit from increased exposure and recognition. By inviting a local teacher to speak at the graduation ceremony, the university could draw attention to its excellent teacher training program and attract more prospective students interested in pursuing a career in education.

6.思维导图

• Letter

  • Suggestion
    • Invite business leaders
    • Promote business program

• Woman's disagreement

  • Already invited business leaders
  • Need for change
    • Invite teachers
      • Crucial role in society
  • Business program well-established
  • Education program needs exposure

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and reduce unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific examples or support for the points made. To strengthen topic development, the speaker should consider incorporating more detailed explanations or examples to further illustrate their points and make their argument more persuasive.

5.Language Use

Original: The newspaper stressed that the university should invite a business leader to be graduation speakers. The newspaper emphasized that the university should invite a business leader as the graduation speaker. (Changed "stressed" to "emphasized" and "to be graduation speakers" to "as the graduation speaker" for better sentence structure and clarity.)

Original: First, he points out that although business leaders represent the meaning of professional success, the graduation ceremony always invites business leaders. First, she points out that even though business leaders embody professional success, they are consistently invited to speak at graduation ceremonies. (Corrected pronoun from "he" to "she," rephrased for clarity and improved sentence structure.)

Original: Moreover, teachers who are influential and place an important role in real world can also be an excellent alternative for students to invite. Furthermore, influential teachers who play a significant role in the real world could also be excellent alternatives for students to consider inviting. (Improved sentence structure and word choice.)

Original: Second, the woman emphasizes that advertising business programs cannot attract more students as they are already well-known, but advertisements on teacher training programs will be more efficient for students to attract more teachers to enroll in these programs. Second, the woman emphasizes that promoting business programs may not attract more students since they are already well-known; however, advertising teacher training programs could be more effective in attracting prospective teachers to enroll. (Improved sentence structure and clarity.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The newspaper emphasized that the university should invite a business leader as the graduation speaker. The woman disagrees with this suggestion. First, she points out that even though business leaders embody professional success, they are consistently invited to speak at graduation ceremonies. Furthermore, influential teachers who play a significant role in the real world could also be excellent alternatives for students to consider inviting. Second, the woman emphasizes that promoting business programs may not attract more students since they are already well-known; however, advertising teacher training programs could be more effective in attracting prospective teachers to enroll. By considering these points, the university could diversify its choice of graduation speakers and better showcase its various programs, ultimately achieving a more balanced and engaging ceremony for all attendees.

6.Mind Map

- Disagreement
  - Business leaders consistently invited
  - Influential teachers as alternatives

- Reasons
  - Business programs already well-known
  - Teacher training programs need promotion

- Suggestion
  - Diversify graduation speakers
  - Showcase various programs

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度较好，但仍有一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者继续练习，提高语速和连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论据方面还有待加强。建议发言者在回答问题时更加关注逻辑性和条理性，明确表达观点，并给出更具说服力的例子和论据来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman opposes the proposal for two reasons. First of all, she thinks the university always invites business executives to give a speech, but other professionals can't be as influential. The woman opposes the proposal for two reasons. First of all, she believes that the university consistently invites business executives to deliver speeches, while other professionals who could be equally influential are overlooked.（建议使用更自然的表达方式，并使用更高级的词汇。）

And she suggests the campus to invite teachers, for example. For instance, she suggests that the university should consider inviting teachers.（改进句子结构，使其更自然。）

What's more, she thinks the business program in this university is big enough, Furthermore, she believes that the business program at this university is already well-established,（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

and some other department also needs attention, and that other departments also require attention,（改进句子结构，使其更自然。）

like the university can ask professionals in educational background to give a speech, such as inviting professionals with an educational background to deliver speeches,（改进句子结构，使其更自然。）

and that will be contributing to the educational program in the school, which is also a great one. which would contribute to the promotion of the university's education program, which is also exceptional.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman opposes the proposal for two reasons. First of all, she believes that the university consistently invites business executives to deliver speeches, while other professionals who could be equally influential are overlooked. For instance, she suggests that the university should consider inviting teachers. Furthermore, she believes that the business program at this university is already well-established, and that other departments also require attention, such as inviting professionals with an educational background to deliver speeches, which would contribute to the promotion of the university's education program, which is also exceptional.

6.思维导图

- Woman's Opinion
  - Opposes proposal
  - Two reasons
    - Consistent invitation of business executives
      - Overlooking other influential professionals
        - Example: Teachers
    - Business program well-established
      - Other departments require attention
        - Example: Education program
          - Inviting professionals with educational background
          - Promotion of the university's education program

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，从表达方面来看，这位考生的发言较为清晰，语速稳定，但偶尔有停顿。建议考生在练习时注意提高发音准确性，避免不必要的停顿，以提高整体表达能力。

4.话题发展 The speaking answer provides a clear opinion of the woman and explains her reasons for holding that opinion. However, it could be more coherent and well-organized by connecting the ideas more effectively and providing more specific examples or support for the woman's opinion. To improve, the speaker should focus on creating a more logical flow of ideas and elaborating on the reasons given by the woman in the conversation.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The policy that the university should invite a business leader to speak at this year's graduation ceremony. The woman disagrees with the idea of inviting a business leader to speak at the graduation ceremony. (原文没有明确表示女士的观点，修改后更清晰地表达了女士的观点。)

Corrected Answer: The woman disagrees with the idea of inviting a business leader to speak at the graduation ceremony.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman expresses her disagreement with the idea of inviting a business leader to speak at this year's graduation ceremony. She believes that other professions, such as teachers, can also be considered influential and successful. She argues that the university should consider having someone from another profession speak since business leaders always do it. Additionally, she thinks that the business program is already quite big and well-known, so it doesn't need the extra attention or free advertising that a graduation speaker would bring. Instead, she suggests that the education program could benefit from the free publicity, as it is a great teacher training program but not as well-known. Having a local teacher as a speaker could draw attention to it and help promote the education program at the university.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Inviting business leader

- Other professions
  - Teachers
  - Influential and successful

- Business program
  - Already big and well-known

- Education program
  - Benefit from free publicity
  - Local teacher as speaker

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更自然地连接句子，减少停顿。同时注意一些发音错误，以免影响听众理解。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在提到与教育相关的观点时，可以更详细地说明为什么教育专业也应该有机会在毕业典礼上发言。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出女生的观点和原因。为了提高话题发展能力，建议多加练习并尝试使用更多的连接词和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: In the ratings, In the conversation, the students proposed that the school should let business leaders to speak at the graduation ceremonies because they are successful and influential and they can advertise in the school's business program. The woman in the conversation doesn't agree with this proposal. She thinks that for the first reasons, there is always business students who speak at the ceremonies and it is not fair because other professions are also successful, like educational or teachers. They don't have the chance to speak at the ceremonies. And the second reason is that the business program in the school is already big and well-known. It doesn't really need any advertising. But there are educational programs that are really good but not well-known by lots of people. They are the programs that should be advertised.

(将“ratings”改为“conversation”，因为这里是在讨论一封信，而不是评分。)

Revised (140 words):

In the conversation, students proposed inviting business leaders to speak at graduation ceremonies due to their success, influence, and ability to promote the school's business program. However, the woman disagrees with this idea. She believes that firstly, it's unfair as business speakers always dominate these events, while other successful professionals like educators don't get a chance to speak. Secondly, she argues that the already prominent business program doesn't need further advertising, whereas lesser-known but high-quality educational programs could benefit from increased exposure. Thus, she suggests giving other professions an opportunity to speak at graduation ceremonies to promote a more diverse range of programs.

6.思维导图

• Conversation
  • Business leaders
    • Success
    • Influence
    • Promote business program
  • Woman's disagreement
    • Unfairness
      • Dominance of business speakers
      • Other successful professionals (educators)
    • Advertising needs
      • Prominent business program
      • Lesser-known educational programs

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方有不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音连贯性和减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对话题进行了较好的阐述，提出了与女士观点相关的理由。然而，在组织结构上还有改进空间。建议发言者在练习时注意明确表达观点，并在给出理由时保持条理清晰。同时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇来增强论述之间的联系。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: opinion in the letter. The woman expresses her opinion on the idea presented in the letter. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然) The woman they said there is always a business person to speak in the year's graduation ceremony and it's time to have a change. Maybe they can give the chance to other influential jobs such as teachers. As for the statement that in the letter that the business person can reinforce business program, the woman states that the business program was already big and doesn't need to be improved by the free advertisement. However, education, because it's not well known, it can benefit greatly from this free advertisement and gain popularity.

Revised Answer: The woman expresses her opinion on the idea presented in the letter, stating that there is always a business person speaking at graduation ceremonies, and it's time for a change. She suggests giving opportunities to other influential professions, such as teachers. Regarding the statement in the letter about a business person reinforcing the business program, she argues that since it is already well-established, it doesn't need further improvement through free advertisement. On the other hand, she believes that education, being less well-known, could greatly benefit from this exposure and gain popularity.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the idea presented in the letter and believes it's time for a change since there is always a business person speaking at graduation ceremonies. She suggests considering other influential professions like teachers for this role. She argues that although having a business leader as a speaker might reinforce the business program, it is already well-established and doesn't need further improvement through free advertisement. Instead, she believes that education, being less well-known, could greatly benefit from this exposure and gain popularity. By inviting a local teacher as a speaker, the university could draw attention to its education program, which would be a more effective use of the opportunity.

6.思维导图

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with the letter
  - Time for a change

- Other professions
  - Teachers as speakers

- Business program
  - Already well-established
  - Doesn't need free advertisement

- Education program
  - Less well-known
  - Could benefit from exposure

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

24. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔有停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意掌握适当的停顿，以提高整体表达的流畅性。同时，注意发音的准确性，避免因发音不准确而导致拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回应，观点之间的联系清晰，且给出了充分的支持和例子。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, a student proposes that the university should invite a business leader to the graduation ceremony because they are the excellent role model for the business students and it can help reinforce the good impression of the business program in the community. The student suggests that a business leader should be invited to the graduation ceremony as they serve as an excellent role model for business students and can help enhance the reputation of the business program in the community.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。同时，将"proposes"改为"suggests"，使表达更准确。）

However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this proposal. Nonetheless, in the conversation, the woman opposes this suggestion.（将"proposal"改为"suggestion"，使表达更准确。）

Firstly, she thinks the university has invited business leaders every year and she thinks there are also many influential persons from other professional fields, for example, teachers who are very influential to the community should be invited to the ceremony. Firstly, she believes that since the university has invited business leaders every year, it should also consider inviting influential individuals from other professions, such as teachers who have a significant impact on the community.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

And secondly, she thinks the programs of business are already very well known to the public. Secondly, she believes that business programs are already well-known to the public.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

However, other programs such as the education program are not so well known to the community. However, other programs, like the education program, are not as well-known in the community.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

So she thinks if the university can invite teachers to the ceremony, it will draw much attention to this program, which would be beneficial. Therefore, she believes that inviting teachers to the ceremony would attract more attention to the education program, which would be advantageous.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。同时，将"beneficial"改为"advantageous"，使词汇更丰富。）

Therefore, she disagrees with this proposal. As a result, she disagrees with this suggestion.（将"proposal"改为"suggestion"，使表达更准确。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student suggests that a business leader should be invited to the graduation ceremony as they serve as an excellent role model for business students and can help enhance the reputation of the business program in the community. Nonetheless, in the conversation, the woman opposes this suggestion. Firstly, she believes that since the university has invited business leaders every year, it should also consider inviting influential individuals from other professions, such as teachers who have a significant impact on the community. Secondly, she believes that business programs are already well-known to the public. However, other programs, like the education program, are not as well-known in the community. Therefore, she believes that inviting teachers to the ceremony would attract more attention to the education program, which would be advantageous. As a result, she disagrees with this suggestion.

6.思维导图

• Introduction

  • Student's suggestion
  • Woman's disagreement

• Reason 1

  • Business leaders invited every year
  • Consider other professions (e.g., teachers)

• Reason 2

  • Business programs well-known
  • Education program not as well-known

• Conclusion

  • Inviting teachers beneficial
  • Woman disagrees with the suggestion

7.关键词