TOEFL TPO 39 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, the speaker should work on pronunciation to avoid any spelling errors that may result from inaccurate pronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to further support their opinion. To improve, the speaker should focus on expanding their explanations and providing more concrete evidence to strengthen their argument.

5.Language Use

The school announces university proposes (clarifying the subject) to start a ride-sharing program. In fact, the woman totally agrees with the idea. This is because she believes that students will be beneficial benefited (correcting word form) because of the program. Take herself for example. She drives the car to school every day all by gas using gas (improving clarity). So she spends a lot of money on gas and some repair, such as tire repair. So due to the program, she can save a lot of money. And she goes on to say the policy would cause some positive impact on the environment because there are more people coming to the city now. So there are more traffic than before, leading to a polluting environment. So if the school passed the program, less carbon dioxide would be released to the air, resulting in a decrease in pollution. Consequently, air quality will be improved.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university proposes to start a ride-sharing program, and the woman completely agrees with this idea. She believes that students will greatly benefit from this program. For instance, she drives her car to school every day using gas, which results in significant expenses on fuel and occasional repairs like tire replacements. With this program in place, she could save a considerable amount of money. Moreover, she mentions that due to an increasing number of people coming into the city, traffic has become worse and contributes to environmental pollution. If the university implements this ride-sharing program, it would lead to a reduction in carbon dioxide emissions, ultimately decreasing pollution levels and improving air quality.

6.Mind Map

- Ride-sharing program proposal
  - Woman's agreement
    - Benefits for students
      - Example: herself
        - Gas expenses
        - Car repairs
    - Positive environmental impact
      - Increased traffic in the city
      - Pollution reduction
        - Decreased carbon dioxide emissions
        - Improved air quality

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3.5

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 4

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分: 27

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分是清晰流畅的，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议在练习时注意掌握自然的语调和节奏，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容条理清晰，组织良好，观点之间关联紧密，并且提供了充足的支持和例子。在这方面已经做得很好，继续保持。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the letter, the student Jim is proposing a ride-sharing program because it could potentially save money and also raise a positive impact on the overall environment. In the letter, Jim, a student, proposes a ride-sharing program as it could potentially save money and have a positive impact on the environment. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然流畅) The woman in the listening material agrees on this proposal. The woman from the listening passage agrees with this proposal. (改进了词汇选择) Firstly, she thinks that students can possibly save on gas fees and also on maintenance and repair fees if they use their cars less often. First, she believes that students could save on gas expenses and maintenance costs by using their cars less frequently. (优化了句子结构和词汇) Secondly, she also feels that there's currently many people coming into the cities, resulting in more cars and more carbon dioxide pollutions. Second, she also thinks that the increasing number of people moving to cities leads to more cars and higher carbon dioxide emissions. (改进了句子结构和词汇) If fewer cars are going to the campus through this ride-sharing program, there would be less polluting and also a better air quality for the campus and the city. With fewer cars going to campus through this ride-sharing program, there would be less pollution and improved air quality for both the campus and the city. (优化了句子结构和词汇)

Revised Answer (140 words): In the letter, Jim, a student, proposes a ride-sharing program as it could potentially save money and have a positive impact on the environment. The woman from the listening passage agrees with this proposal. First, she believes that students could save on gas expenses and maintenance costs by using their cars less frequently. Second, she also thinks that the increasing number of people moving to cities leads to more cars and higher carbon dioxide emissions. With fewer cars going to campus through this ride-sharing program, there would be less pollution and improved air quality for both the campus and the city. By implementing this program, students can not only save money but also contribute to a cleaner environment, making it a beneficial solution for everyone involved.

6.思维导图

- Ride-sharing program
  - Proposal
    - Save money
      - Gas expenses
      - Maintenance costs
    - Positive impact on environment
      - Less pollution
      - Improved air quality
  - Woman's opinion
    - Agrees with proposal
    - Reasons
      - Financial benefits for students
      - Environmental benefits for campus and city

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答相对清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持连贯流畅。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答较为完整，能够概括信件中的建议，并阐述女生对此的观点及理由。但在组织结构上还有待提高，可以尝试使用更清晰的逻辑连接词来使回答更加条理分明。同时，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试多加一些细节描述，以使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The latter The letter (原文中的“latter”应改为“letter”，因为这里指的是信件) proposes to create a ride-sharing program so students in the same area can actually go to the school in just one car. The girl in the recording agrees with the idea. First, she thinks that this can really help students because this will help them to spend less on gas and actually if the car is used in more times, they will need more maintenance, which is a really complex thing. And second, lots of people are coming to school nowadays, so it causes more traffic in the school or the surrounding areas and this leads to more pollution in the area. And if the proposal is actually implemented, there will be less traffic around the area and less carbon dioxide and the air quality will actually improve.

Revised (140 words): The letter proposes creating a ride-sharing program so students living in the same area can travel to school using just one car. The woman in the recording agrees with this idea for two main reasons. Firstly, she believes that it would significantly help students save money on gas expenses and reduce wear and tear on their vehicles due to less frequent use. Secondly, she mentions that there has been an increase in people coming to school recently, resulting in heavier traffic and higher pollution levels in the surrounding areas. If this proposal were implemented, it would lead to reduced traffic congestion and lower carbon dioxide emissions, ultimately improving air quality.

6.思维导图

- Ride-sharing program
  - Students in the same area
  - Travel to school in one car

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with the idea
    - Reason 1: Save money and reduce wear and tear on vehicles
    - Reason 2: Reduce traffic congestion and pollution
      - Increased number of people coming to school
      - Implementation benefits: Lower carbon dioxide emissions and improved air quality

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

24. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的语言流畅度和语速基本上是一致的，偶尔有停顿。为了提高发音准确性，请注意一些拼写错误可能是由于发音不准确造成的。建议多加练习，提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答内容连贯、组织良好，观点之间关系明确，举例充分。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original: The letter supposes that universities should start a car-sharing program, which refers to several students share one car when they need to go to college and return. One reason given by the letter is, students can save money by sharing their car ride. Also, it will be good for the environment because ride-sharing can reduce the frequency of vehicle using. Moreover, the woman in the conversation agreed with the idea. Firstly, she points out that students will spend less time, less frequency on gas and the wear and tear of car if they can share cars together. Secondly, she mentions that this change can reduce the traffic. As a result, less carbon dioxide will be released to the air. So the pollution will also decrease and the air quality will become better.

Corrected: The letter supposes proposes(建议) that universities should start a car-sharing program, which refers to involves(涉及) several students share sharing(分享) one car when they need to go to college and return. One reason given by the letter is, students can save money by sharing their car ride. Also, it will be good for the environment because ride-sharing can reduce the frequency of vehicle using usage(使用). Moreover, the woman in the conversation agreed with the idea. Firstly, she points out that students will spend less time, less frequency on gas and the wear and tear of car the car(汽车) if they can share cars together. Secondly, she mentions that this change can reduce the traffic. As a result, less carbon dioxide will be released to into(进入) the air. So the pollution will also decrease and the air quality will become better.

Revised (140 words): The letter proposes that universities should start a car-sharing program, which involves several students sharing one car when they need to go to college and return. One reason given by the letter is that students can save money by sharing their car rides. Additionally, it will be beneficial for the environment because ride-sharing can reduce vehicle usage frequency. The woman in the conversation agrees with this idea. First, she points out that students will spend less time and money on gas and experience less wear and tear on their cars if they share rides. Second, she mentions that this change can reduce traffic congestion. Consequently, less carbon dioxide will be released into the air, leading to decreased pollution and improved air quality.

6.思维导图

• Car-sharing program

  • Universities
  • Students sharing one car

• Benefits

  • Save money
    • Sharing car rides
  • Environment
    • Reduced vehicle usage frequency

• Woman's opinion

  • Agrees with the idea
  • Reasons
    • Less time and money on gas
    • Less wear and tear on cars
    • Reduced traffic congestion
    • Decreased pollution and improved air quality

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数: 23

3.表达 在交付方面，你的回答相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。要确保你的发音准确，避免不必要的停顿。此外，保持一致的语速和流利度也很重要。建议多加练习，提高发音准确度和语言流畅度。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，你的回答基本上涵盖了所需内容，但可以更有条理地组织。首先简要总结提案，然后陈述女士对提案的看法，并解释她给出的理由。尝试使用更多连接词和短语来使回答更连贯。例如，在解释女士给出的理由时，可以使用“首先”和“其次”等词汇来组织内容。多加练习，提高回答的条理性和连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The student in the letter suggests that the university should create a student ride-sharing program to help students to get to university more easily. The letter proposes that the university establish a ride-sharing program for students to facilitate their commute to campus. (修改了句子结构，使其更简洁明了)
And the woman in the listening part likes this idea because firstly she says that she always drives car to university by herself, so this idea will help students a lot, which can help students save gas and save money on repairing. The woman in the conversation supports this proposal, stating that since she drives to campus alone, such a program would significantly benefit students by helping them save on gas and car maintenance costs. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰；使用了更高级的词汇)
Secondly, she thinks that the traffic is hard for students to drive to the university and the environment is so bad because of the carbon dioxide which released of the air. Furthermore, she believes that heavy traffic makes it difficult for students to drive to campus, and increased carbon dioxide emissions from vehicles contribute to environmental pollution. (修改了句子结构，使其更连贯；使用了更高级的词汇和正确的语法)

Revised Answer (140 words): The letter proposes that the university establish a ride-sharing program for students to facilitate their commute to campus. The woman in the conversation supports this proposal, stating that since she drives to campus alone, such a program would significantly benefit students by helping them save on gas and car maintenance costs. Furthermore, she believes that heavy traffic makes it difficult for students to drive to campus, and increased carbon dioxide emissions from vehicles contribute to environmental pollution. By implementing the ride-sharing program, there would be fewer cars on the road, reducing carbon dioxide emissions and improving air quality. This would not only benefit the students financially but also have a positive impact on the environment.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Ride-sharing program
  - Facilitate commute

- Woman's opinion
  - Supports proposal
  - Benefits
    - Save on gas
    - Car maintenance costs
  - Traffic and environment
    - Heavy traffic
    - Carbon dioxide emissions
    - Environmental pollution

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发音的准确性，请注意在练习时关注正确的发音。此外，尝试保持一致的语速，避免过多的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答在话题发展方面做得很好，内容连贯且组织良好。回答中明确提到了信中的建议，并对女士的观点及其原因进行了详细解释。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

原文：And the woman in the listening part likes this idea, because firstly she thinks it could help students to save some money. The woman in the listening part supports this idea, primarily because she believes it could help students save money.（将"likes"改为"supports"，使表达更正式；删除"firstly"，使句子更自然；将"to save some money"改为"save money"，简化表达。）

That's because students drive to campus by themselves and spend a lot of money on gas. This is due to students driving to campus individually and spending a significant amount on gas.（将"that's because"改为"this is due to"，使句子更正式；将"a lot of money"改为"a significant amount"，提高词汇水平。）

With this new trend, students can share the cost of the gas and reduce wear and tear on the car, which could help them to save some money. With this proposed program, students can share fuel expenses and minimize wear and tear on their vehicles, ultimately saving money.（将"new trend"改为"proposed program"，使表达更准确；将"gases cost "改为 "fuel expenses "，提高词汇水平；将 "to save some money " 改为 "ultimately saving money " ，使句子更自然。）

Secondly, she mentions that it has a positive impact on the environment. Furthermore, she mentions the program's potential positive impact on the environment.（将"secondly"改为"furthermore"，使句子更自然；将"it has a positive impact"改为"the program's potential positive impact"，使表达更准确。）

That's because there is a lot of traffic and carbon dioxide emission in the city. This is attributed to the high levels of traffic and carbon dioxide emissions in the city.（将"that's because"改为"this is attributed to"，使句子更正式；将"a lot of traffic and carbon dioxide emission"改为"high levels of traffic and carbon dioxide emissions"，提高词汇水平。）

With this new trend, it could reduce environmental pollution and improve the air quality. Implementing this program could potentially reduce environmental pollution and enhance air quality.（将"new trend"改为"program"，使表达更准确；将 "reduce environmental pollution and improve the air quality " 改为 "potentially reduce environmental pollution and enhance air quality " ，提高词汇水平。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman in the listening part supports this idea, primarily because she believes it could help students save money. This is due to students driving to campus individually and spending a significant amount on gas. With this proposed program, students can share fuel expenses and minimize wear and tear on their vehicles, ultimately saving money. Furthermore, she mentions the program's potential positive impact on the environment. This is attributed to the high levels of traffic and carbon dioxide emissions in the city. Implementing this program could potentially reduce environmental pollution and enhance air quality.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Ride-sharing program

• Woman's opinion

  • Supports the idea

• Reasons

  • Save money
    • Share fuel expenses
    • Minimize wear and tear on vehicles
  • Positive impact on the environment
    • Reduce traffic
    • Lower carbon dioxide emissions

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 4

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 26

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor punctuation issues that can be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and work on appropriate pauses to make the speech sound more conversational.

4.Topic Development The topic development in the response is excellent. The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The summary of the proposal, the woman's opinion, and her reasons for holding that opinion are all well-presented. No significant improvements are needed in this aspect.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: A student thinks that the university should start a ride-share program because it benefits students as well as the environment. For the first reason, it can save money for the student by driving to the campus, and it also can have a positive impact on the environment. In the reading path in the conversation, the woman liked this idea because she can spend less on gas and spend less in repairing to the car. Secondly, she thinks it's good for the environment because it helps produce less carbon dioxide and it means that it can reduce pollution. As the result, the quality of environment will be improved.

Corrected Answer: A student suggests that the university should implement a ride-sharing program as it benefits both students and the environment. Firstly, this program can save money for students by carpooling to campus, and also positively impact the environment. In their conversation, the woman supports this idea because she could spend less on gas and reduce expenses related to car maintenance. Secondly, she believes it is beneficial for the environment as it helps decrease carbon dioxide emissions, thereby reducing pollution. Consequently, environmental quality would improve. (The corrected answer uses more advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, smoother transitions, and stronger conclusions.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

A student proposes that the university should implement a ride-sharing program since it offers advantages to both students and the environment. The first benefit is that this program enables students to save money by carpooling to campus while also having a positive effect on environmental conditions. In their conversation, the woman expresses her agreement with this proposal as she could reduce her spending on gas and minimize expenses associated with car maintenance. Furthermore, she contends that such a program would be advantageous for the environment due to its potential to decrease carbon dioxide emissions, ultimately leading to a reduction in pollution levels. As a result of these factors, the overall quality of the environment would experience significant improvement.

6.Mind Map

- Ride-sharing program proposal
  - Benefits
    - Students
      - Save money
        - Carpooling to campus
        - Reduced gas expenses
        - Lower car maintenance costs
    - Environment
      - Decreased carbon dioxide emissions
      - Reduced pollution levels
      - Improved environmental quality
  - Woman's opinion
    - Supports the proposal
    - Personal benefits (gas and maintenance)
    - Environmental benefits (emissions and pollution)

7.Key Words

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 4

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 26

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are a few instances where the speaker could improve their pronunciation for better clarity. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice pronouncing words more accurately and work on reducing pauses in their speech.

4. Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The summary of the proposal is accurate, and the woman's opinion is well-explained with relevant reasons. No significant improvements are needed in this aspect, as the speaker effectively addresses the task requirements.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The university proposes to start a ride-sharing program, and the woman completely agrees with this idea. She believes that students will greatly benefit from this program. For instance, she drives her car to school every day using gas, which results in significant expenses on fall and occasional repairs like tire replacement. With this program in place, she could save a considerable amount of money. Moreover, she mentions that due to an increasing number of people coming into the city, traffic has become worse and contributes to environmental pollution. If the university implements this ride-sharing program, it will lead to a reduction in carbon dioxide emissions, automatically decreasing pollution levels and improving air quality.

Corrected Answer: The university proposes suggests ("suggests" is a more natural choice here) starting a ride-sharing program, and the woman completely agrees with this idea. She believes that students will greatly benefit from this program. For instance, she drives her car to school every day using gas, which results in significant expenses on fall fuel ("fuel" is the correct term for gas consumption) and occasional repairs like tire replacement. With this program in place, she could save a considerable amount of money. Moreover, she mentions that due to an increasing number of people coming into the city, traffic has become worse and contributes to environmental pollution. If the university implements this ride-sharing program, it will lead to a reduction in carbon dioxide emissions, automatically decreasing pollution levels and improving air quality.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university suggests starting a ride-sharing program, with which the woman wholeheartedly agrees. She asserts that students would significantly benefit from such an initiative. For example, she commutes to school daily using her car, incurring substantial fuel expenses and occasional repair costs, such as tire replacements. Implementing this program would enable her to save a considerable sum of money. Furthermore, she highlights the growing influx of people into the city, exacerbating traffic conditions and contributing to environmental pollution. By adopting the ride-sharing program, the university could reduce carbon dioxide emissions, subsequently lowering pollution levels and enhancing air quality.

6. Mind Map

- Ride-sharing program
  - Woman's agreement
    - Benefits for students
      - Save money
        - Fuel expenses
        - Repair costs
    - Environmental impact
      - Increased traffic
      - Carbon dioxide emissions reduction
      - Improved air quality

7. Key Words

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that could be reduced. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and confidently, minimizing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to further support their points. To improve topic development, the speaker should practice elaborating on their ideas and incorporating more concrete examples from the reading and listening passages to strengthen their response.

5.Language Use

The student proposes that the university should start a ride-sharing program, and the woman thinks that is a great idea for two reasons. First, she mentions that she drives herself and she spends a lot of money on buying gas and repairing her car. It will end up if there is such a program, it can help her save a lot of money. Second, she also mentions that there are more people on the traffic nowadays. The carbon dioxide will pollute the environment. If there is such a program, it can have less carbon dioxide and it can reduce the pollution. The air quantity will increase.

The student proposes that the university should start a ride-sharingridesharing program, and the woman thinks that is a great idea for two reasons. First, she mentions that she drives herselfalone ("herself" is not incorrect but "alone" sounds more natural in this context) and she spends a lot of money on buying gas and repairing her car. It will end up if there is such a program,With such a program, (rephrased for clarity) it can help her save a lot of money. Second, she also mentions that there are more people on the trafficin traffic (correct preposition usage) nowadays. The carbon dioxide will pollute the environment. If there is such a program, it can have lessfewer ("fewer" is used for countable nouns like "cars") carbon dioxide and it can reduce the pollution. The air quantityquality (correct word choice) will increase.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student proposes that the university should start a ridesharing program, and the woman agrees that it is an excellent idea for two main reasons. Firstly, she explains that she currently drives alone to campus, which results in significant expenses for gas and car maintenance. With the implementation of a ridesharing program, she believes that students like her would save a considerable amount of money. Secondly, she highlights the increasing number of people in traffic nowadays, which leads to higher carbon dioxide emissions and environmental pollution. By adopting a ridesharing program, there would be fewer cars on the road, resulting in reduced carbon dioxide emissions and improved air quality. Overall, the woman strongly supports the proposal due to its potential financial benefits for students and positive environmental impact.

6.Mind Map

- Introduction
  - Proposal: Ridesharing program
  - Woman's opinion: Excellent idea

- Reason 1: Financial benefits
  - Driving alone: High expenses
    - Gas
    - Car maintenance
  - Ridesharing program: Save money

- Reason 2: Environmental impact
  - Increasing traffic: More pollution
    - Carbon dioxide emissions
  - Ridesharing program: Fewer cars on the road
    - Reduced emissions
    - Improved air quality

- Conclusion
  - Woman's strong support for proposal

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语音清晰，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议练习更连贯、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。为了提高话题发展得分，建议在回答中明确提出观点，并用更多的细节和例子来支持观点。同时，注意在不同观点之间建立清晰的联系，使回答更加条理清晰。

5.语言使用

原文：A student proposed that the university create a student ride-sharing program because it can save student money and have positive impact in the environment. A student proposed that the university create a ride-sharing program for students because it can save them money and have a positive impact on the environment.（将“学生”改为“他们”，使句子更自然；将“in”改为“on”，使语法更准确）

The woman intellectual part agree with it. The woman agrees with the proposal.（删除“intellectual part”，简化句子，使其更自然）

First, she think student can spend less on gas and because of the less use, it can reduce the maintenance and repairment. First, she thinks students can spend less on gas, and due to less usage, it can reduce maintenance and repair costs.（将“think”改为“thinks”，使语法更准确；将“repairment”改为“repair costs”，使词汇更准确）

Second, with more and more people enter into the city, this plan can reduce carbon dioxide power into the environment and would reduce environmental pollution and improve the quality of the air. Second, as more people move into the city, this plan can reduce carbon dioxide emissions, thereby reducing environmental pollution and improving air quality.（将“enter into”改为“move into”，使词汇更准确；将“power”改为“emissions”，使词汇更准确；简化句子，使其更自然）

修订版（140字）：

A student proposed that the university create a ride-sharing program for students because it can save them money and have a positive impact on the environment. The woman agrees with the proposal. First, she thinks students can spend less on gas, and due to less usage, it can reduce maintenance and repair costs. Second, as more people move into the city, this plan can reduce carbon dioxide emissions, thereby reducing environmental pollution and improving air quality.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Ride-sharing program for students
  - Save money
  - Positive impact on the environment

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with the proposal
  - Reasons:
    - Less spending on gas
    - Reduced maintenance and repair costs
    - Reduced carbon dioxide emissions
    - Improved air quality

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的语言表达基本清晰，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高交付分数，建议在练习口语时注意保持连贯流畅的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容条理清晰，主题发展完整。学生首先总结了信件中的建议，然后陈述了听力部分女士对该建议的看法及其理由。在这方面，学生的表现已经非常出色。为了进一步提高分数，可以尝试在解释理由时提供更多具体的细节和例子。

5.语言使用

原文：The student in the letter suggests that the university should start a ride-sharing program, and the woman in the listening part likes this idea, because, first, she thinks it could help students to save some money. The student in the letter proposes that the university initiate a ride-sharing program, and the woman in the listening section supports this idea because she believes it could assist students in saving money.（将suggests改为proposes，使语言更正式；将should start改为initiate，提高词汇水平；将likes改为supports，更准确地表达女士的态度；将thinks改为believes，提高词汇水平；将to save some money改为in saving money，使语言更自然。）

That's because students drive to campus by themselves and spend a lot of money on the gas. This is due to students driving to campus individually and spending a significant amount of money on gasoline.（将That's because改为This is due to，使语言更正式；将by themselves改为individually，提高词汇水平；将a lot of money改为a significant amount of money，提高词汇水平；将the gas改为gasoline，提高词汇水平。）

With this new change, students can share the cost of the gas and reduce the wear and tear on the car, which could help them to save some money. With this proposed change, students can share fuel expenses and decrease vehicle wear and tear, ultimately saving money.（将new change改为proposed change，更准确地描述建议；将the gas改为fuel expenses，提高词汇水平；将reduce改为decrease，提高词汇水平；将to save some money改为ultimately saving money，使语言更自然。）

Secondly, she mentions that it has a positive impact on the environment. Furthermore, she points out that it would have a beneficial effect on the environment.（将mentions改为points out，提高词汇水平；将has a positive impact改为would have a beneficial effect，提高词汇水平。）

That's because there is a lot of traffic and carbon dioxide emissions in the city. This is attributed to the high volume of traffic and carbon dioxide emissions in the city.（将That's because改为This is attributed to，使语言更正式；将a lot of traffic改为high volume of traffic，提高词汇水平。）

With this new change, it could reduce the environmental pollution and improve the air quality. Implementing this proposed change could decrease environmental pollution and enhance air quality.（将new change改为proposed change，更准确地描述建议；将reduce改为decrease，提高词汇水平；将improve改为enhance，提高词汇水平。）

修订后的回答（140字）：

The student in the letter proposes that the university initiate a ride-sharing program, and the woman in the listening section supports this idea because she believes it could assist students in saving money. This is due to students driving to campus individually and spending a significant amount of money on gasoline. With this proposed change, students can share fuel expenses and decrease vehicle wear and tear, ultimately saving money. Furthermore, she points out that it would have a beneficial effect on the environment. This is attributed to the high volume of traffic and carbon dioxide emissions in the city. Implementing this proposed change could decrease environmental pollution and enhance air quality.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Ride-sharing program

• Woman's opinion

  • Supports the idea

• Reasons

  • Saving money
    • Sharing fuel expenses
    • Decreasing vehicle wear and tear
  • Beneficial effect on the environment
    • Decreasing environmental pollution
    • Enhancing air quality

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

24. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor pronunciation issues that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more slowly and clearly, focusing on accurate pronunciation of words.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The summary of the proposal and the woman's opinion is well-presented, as well as the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. No suggestions for improvement are needed in this aspect.

5.Language Use

The university will create a rationing ride-sharing program, and the woman agrees with the proposal. First, the proposal says that it will benefit students by saving money as they can go to campus in group groups. The woman agrees and says that students would spend less on gas and also associated wear and tear expenses. Second, the proposal claims that it will have a positive environmental impact. The woman supports and states that more and more people come to the city, resulting in a traffic jam and associated air pollution. Through this program, students can use fewer cars, resulting in a less emission of carbon dioxide and an improvement of air quality.

("rationing" was changed to "ride-sharing" because the original term was incorrect; "group" was changed to "groups" for grammatical consistency.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university proposes creating a ride-sharing program, which the woman agrees with. Firstly, the proposal suggests that this program would benefit students by saving money since they can travel to campus in groups. The woman concurs, stating that students would spend less on gas and also reduce wear and tear expenses on their vehicles. Secondly, the proposal claims that implementing this program would positively impact the environment. The woman supports this notion by explaining that as more people come to the city, traffic congestion increases along with air pollution. By participating in this ride-sharing program, students can reduce the number of cars on the road, leading to decreased carbon dioxide emissions and improved air quality. Overall, she believes that this initiative would be advantageous for both students' finances and environmental sustainability.

6.Mind Map

- Ride-sharing program
  - Woman's opinion
    - Agreement
      - Benefits for students
        - Save money
          - Less gas expenses
          - Reduced wear and tear
      - Positive environmental impact
        - Traffic congestion
        - Air pollution reduction
          - Fewer cars on the road
          - Decreased carbon dioxide emissions
          - Improved air quality

7.Key Words