TOEFL TPO 71 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速和发音大致清晰，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者练习更流畅、自然的语言表达，并注意在适当的地方停顿。此外，尝试纠正发音错误以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent response that summarizes the plan and states the woman's opinion. However, the response could be better organized by clearly separating the summary of the plan from the woman's opinion and reasons. To improve, the speaker should work on creating clear connections between ideas and providing more specific examples or details from the conversation to support their points.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The letter proposed holding lunchtime free concert in the music building, stating that it is beneficial for music students ordering them opportunities to perform and offering free snacks for students for audience. The article proposes hosting free lunchtime concerts in the music building, stating that it will benefit music students by providing them with performance opportunities and offering free snacks for the audience.（将“letter”改为“article”，以更准确地描述来源；将“ordering”改为“providing”，以提高语言的自然度；将“students for audience”改为“the audience”，以简化表达。）

However, in the conversation, we are aware that the woman supports the proposal for these reasons. In the conversation, it is clear that the woman supports the proposal for several reasons.（将“we are aware”改为“it is clear”，以提高语言的自然度。）

Firstly, it offers opportunities for them to play music since there is only one concert at the end of the year, they only can play one piece. Firstly, it provides more opportunities for students to perform since there is currently only one concert at the end of the year where they can play just one piece.（将“offers”改为“provides”，以保持一致的词汇使用；将“they only can play one piece”改为“they can play just one piece”，以提高语言的自然度。）

Secondly, musical building is 15 minutes walk away from the other buildings. Students squeezing from class have no time to eat. Secondly, the music building is a 15-minute walk away from other buildings, so students attending the concert between classes may not have time to eat.（将“musical building”改为“music building”，以更准确地描述建筑物；将“students squeezing from class”改为“students attending the concert between classes”，以提高语言的自然度。）

Offering snacks to them were helpful. Providing snacks would be helpful for them.（将“offering”改为“providing”，以保持一致的词汇使用；将“were helpful”改为“would be helpful”，以提高语言的自然度。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The article proposes hosting free lunchtime concerts in the music building, stating that it will benefit music students by providing them with performance opportunities and offering free snacks for the audience. In the conversation, it is clear that the woman supports the proposal for several reasons. Firstly, it provides more opportunities for students to perform since there is currently only one concert at the end of the year where they can play just one piece. Secondly, the music building is a 15-minute walk away from other buildings, so students attending the concert between classes may not have time to eat. Providing snacks would be helpful for them.

6.思维导图

• Article Proposal

  • Free lunchtime concerts
  • Music building
  • Performance opportunities
  • Free snacks for audience

• Woman's Opinion

  • Supports proposal
  • Reasons:
    • More performance opportunities
      • Only one concert at the end of the year
    • Music building location
      • 15-minute walk away from other buildings
      • Students attending between classes may not have time to eat

7.关键词