TOEFL TPO 44 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the letter writer's proposal. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但偶尔会有些停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但在解释男生观点的原因时，可以更具体地给出一些例子或者详细说明。建议在练习时尝试提供更多支持性的论据或例子，以增强论点的说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The proposal is that the university should create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations because students can be in charge of such things and some students may gain leadership experience. The proposal suggests that the university create a student committee to allocate funding for student organizations, as students can manage these decisions and potentially gain leadership experience. (建议使用更自然的表达方式，如“allocate funding”代替“decide funding”，以及使用“potentially”来表示可能性。)

However, the man in the listening doesn't agree with it because, for one, he thinks that students can't be too close to such organizations because they may not be so objective as the administrators do, which can lead to unfairness. However, the man disagrees because he believes that students' close involvement with these organizations may compromise their objectivity compared to administrators, leading to potential unfairness. (使用更准确的词汇和语法结构，如“compromise their objectivity”和“potential unfairness”。)

What's more, he thinks that it will be hard to find students interested in such committees because they are too busy with their studies, so it will consume too much time for the administration. Furthermore, he argues that finding interested students might be difficult due to their busy schedules, resulting in a significant time commitment for the administration. (使用更自然的连接词“Furthermore”，并简化句子结构。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal suggests that the university create a student committee to allocate funding for student organizations, as students can manage these decisions and potentially gain leadership experience. However, the man disagrees because he believes that students' close involvement with these organizations may compromise their objectivity compared to administrators, leading to potential unfairness. Furthermore, he argues that finding interested students might be difficult due to their busy schedules, resulting in a significant time commitment for the administration.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Student committee
  - Allocate funding
  - Leadership experience

- Man's disagreement
  - Compromise objectivity
    - Close involvement
    - Potential unfairness
  - Difficulty finding interested students
    - Busy schedules
    - Time commitment for administration

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

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5.语言使用

原回答：Bye-bye. You This The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal because he believes that students are not the right people to make decisions about funding for student organizations. He thinks that students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective or fair as university administrators. Additionally, he doubts that there would be enough students interested in serving on the committee due to existing leadership positions being unfilled and students being too busy. (原回答内容不完整，已根据听力材料进行修改和补充。)

修订后的回答（140字）：

The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal because he believes that students are not the right people to make decisions about funding for student organizations. He thinks that students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective or fair as university administrators, potentially favoring their friends' groups or their own groups. Furthermore, he doubts that there would be enough students interested in serving on the committee due to existing leadership positions being unfilled, such as the Student Council lacking a vice president, and students being too busy with other commitments.

6.思维导图

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Students not objective or fair
    • Too close to the situation
    • Favoritism
  • Lack of interest in serving on the committee
    • Unfilled leadership positions
    • Busy students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方可能需要稍微减慢语速，以便更好地表达观点。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。建议多练习发音和语调，以便在考试中更自信地表达自己的观点。

4.话题发展 回答内容组织得很好，观点之间的联系清晰，提供了充足的支持和例子。在主题发展方面，你已经做得很好。继续保持这种水平，并在实际考试中尽量保持冷静和专注。

5.语言使用

原文：Essentially, a student proposes that the university should set up a student committee to decide funding for students' organizations, because students know better about their organizations and it can provide them with leadership experience. Essentially, a student proposes that the university should establish a student committee to determine funding for student organizations, as students have better knowledge of their organizations and it can offer them valuable leadership experience. (建议使用“establish”代替“set up”，以使句子更自然。此外，将“decide”改为“determine”，使句子更准确。将“know better about”改为“have better knowledge of”，使句子更流畅。最后，将“provide them with”改为“offer them”，使句子更自然。)

原文：However, the man in the conversation disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. However, the man in the conversation opposes the proposal for two reasons. (将“disagrees with”改为“opposes”，使句子更自然。)

原文：The first reason is that students are not in the right place to make the decision, as they involve themselves in the student groups. The first reason is that students are not in an appropriate position to make decisions since they are directly involved in student groups. (将“not in the right place”改为“not in an appropriate position”，使句子更准确。此外，将“as they involve themselves in”改为“since they are directly involved in”，使句子更自然。)

原文：They cannot make objective and fair decisions. They are unable to make objective and impartial decisions. (将“cannot”改为“are unable to”，使句子更自然。此外，将“fair”改为“impartial”，使句子更准确。)

原文：The second reason is that the student committee may have a hard time to find people interested in the leadership position. The second reason is that the student committee might struggle to find individuals interested in leadership positions. (将“may have a hard time to find”改为“might struggle to find”，使句子更自然。此外，将“people”改为“individuals”，使句子更准确。)

原文：Since students are too busy, they would not devote their volunteer time to the committee. As students are preoccupied, they would not dedicate their voluntary time to the committee. (将“too busy”改为“preoccupied”，使句子更自然。此外，将“devote”改为“dedicate”，使句子更准确。)

根据修改建议，回答的修订版本如下：

Essentially, a student proposes that the university should establish a student committee to determine funding for student organizations, as students have better knowledge of their organizations and it can offer them valuable leadership experience. However, the man in the conversation opposes the proposal for two reasons. The first reason is that students are not in an appropriate position to make decisions since they are directly involved in student groups. They are unable to make objective and impartial decisions. The second reason is that the student committee might struggle to find individuals interested in leadership positions. As students are preoccupied, they would not dedicate their voluntary time to the committee. For instance, even the student council doesn't have a vice president. Therefore, these are two reasons why the man disagrees with the proposal.

Answer statistics: {"words": 140, "unique_words": 89}

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student proposal
    - Establish student committee
    - Determine funding for student organizations
    - Better knowledge of organizations
    - Valuable leadership experience

- Man's opposition
  - Reason 1: Inappropriate position for decision-making
    - Direct involvement in student groups
    - Unable to make objective and impartial decisions
  - Reason 2: Difficulty finding interested individuals for leadership positions
    - Students preoccupied with other commitments
    - Unwilling to dedicate voluntary time to the committee

- Example: Student council lacking vice president

- Conclusion: Two reasons for man's disagreement with the proposal

7.关键词