TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the university's plan. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语言表达较为清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。例如，可以尝试减少不必要的停顿，以保持一致的语速。此外，注意正确发音单词以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在描述女生对电子设备易损坏和更新的观点时，可以更详细地解释这些问题如何影响学生的学习。另外，在谈到女生对传统教材的喜好时，可以提供更多具体例子来支持观点。建议在练习中关注这些方面，使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The school planned to switch the traditional textbook to electronic device. The university plans to switch from traditional textbooks to electronic devices.（将“学校”改为“大学”，将“传统教材”改为“传统教科书”，将“电子设备”改为“电子设备”，使句子更自然。）
The woman in the lecture disagreed with this proposal for several reasons. The woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan for several reasons.（将“讲座”改为“对话”，使句子更准确。）
Firstly, she thinks it is unrealistic for students to use the same electronic device all the time because it is very easy to break and updated constantly. First, she believes it is unrealistic for students to use the same electronic device throughout their studies since they can easily break and are constantly updated.（将“首先”改为“首先”，将“一直使用相同的电子设备”改为“在整个学习过程中使用相同的电子设备”，使句子更自然。）
So students will always have demand to buy a new version with new features, so it cannot be considered as a good way to save money. Therefore, students will continually need to purchase new versions with updated features, making it an ineffective method of saving money.（将“所以学生总是需要购买具有新功能的新版本，所以它不能被认为是节省资金的好方法”改为“因此，学生将不断需要购买具有更新功能的新版本，使其成为节省资金的无效方法”，使句子更自然。）
Second, the woman also pointed out that it cannot be an effective way to study because it is too small to control, especially when do some tasks like highlighting or underlining make it difficult for students to study. Second, the woman also points out that it may not be an effective study tool due to its small size, making tasks like highlighting or underlining difficult for students.（将“第二”改为“第二”，将“它不能成为有效的学习方式，因为它太小而难以控制，尤其是在执行一些诸如高亮或下划线之类的任务时，使学生难以学习”改为“第二，女子还指出，由于其尺寸较小，可能无法成为有效的学习工具，使得诸如高亮或下划线之类的任务对学生来说变得困难”，使句子更自然。）
In addition, the woman also pointed out that she is more comfortable with the traditional textbook which can give her the paper to make notes and underline tasks. Additionally, the woman mentions that she prefers traditional textbooks as they allow her to write notes and underline directly on the pages.（将“此外，女子还指出，她更喜欢传统教材，因为它们可以让她在纸上做笔记和划线任务”改为“此外，女子提到，她更喜欢传统教科书，因为它们允许她直接在页面上写笔记和划线”，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to switch from traditional textbooks to electronic devices. The woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan for several reasons. First, she believes it is unrealistic for students to use the same electronic device throughout their studies since they can easily break and are constantly updated. Therefore, students will continually need to purchase new versions with updated features, making it an ineffective method of saving money. Second, the woman also points out that it may not be an effective study tool due to its small size, making tasks like highlighting or underlining difficult

6.思维导图

• University plan

  • Switch from traditional textbooks to electronic devices

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan

• Reasons for disagreement

  • Unrealistic expectations
    • Device durability and constant updates
  • Ineffective study tool
    • Small size, difficult to control
  • Preference for traditional textbooks
    • Writing notes and underlining on pages

7.关键词