TOEFL TPO 12 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman supports the proposal described in the article. Explain why she thinks it will achieve the university’s goals.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 17

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议发言者练习更清晰、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker's response lacks coherence and organization. The answer does not accurately reflect the content of the reading and listening passages, and some parts are difficult to understand. To improve, the speaker should focus on clearly summarizing the main points from both the reading and listening passages, and then explain how these points support the woman's opinion on the proposal. Additionally, providing specific examples from the passages will help strengthen the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school is 90 feet and the video stations are touching the edge. The university plans to expand the college radio station's broadcasting range. (原文中提到的是大学广播电台的扩展，而不是学校的尺寸和视频站。) What she believes is that staff will be through the survival shock as they have job opportunities. She believes that students will gain more professional experience and better job opportunities after graduation. (原文中女生讨论的是学生获得更多的专业经验和毕业后的就业机会，而不是员工。) This is because this proposal does not sell to her program. This is because the proposal will provide a larger, real-life audience for students to experiment with programming. (原文中提到的是提案将为学生提供更大、真实的受众，而不是销售给她的项目。) Therefore, if you are interested in a professional challenge, I recommend this program for a much larger. Second, she thinks that the whole reason is because they are making a lot of money out of commercials. As a result, the news is conducive to offer more scholarships and help fund projects of other programs. Thank you for watching.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman supports the proposal to expand the college radio station's broadcasting range because she believes it will achieve the university's goals. She thinks that students will gain more professional experience by experimenting with programming for a larger, real-life audience, which will ultimately lead to better job opportunities after graduation. Additionally, she believes that the expanded radio station will attract more listeners and generate revenue through commercials. This extra income can be used to offer more scholarships and fund projects for other programs at the university. Overall, the woman is confident that the proposal will not only benefit the communication program but also contribute to the overall success of the university.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Expand college radio station's broadcasting range

• Woman's support

  • Professional experience for students
    • Larger, real-life audience
    • Better job opportunities after graduation
  • Attract more listeners
    • Generate revenue through commercials
      • Offer more scholarships
      • Fund projects for other programs

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some instances where the speaker could improve their pronunciation to avoid confusion. For example, "pro-videos" should be "provide those." To improve, the speaker should practice enunciating words more clearly and work on their pronunciation of specific words.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully addressing the woman's reasons for supporting the proposal. The speaker could have mentioned the woman's friend Tony and his university's successful experience with a similar plan as additional evidence. To improve, the speaker should ensure they include all relevant information from the listening passage to strengthen their response.

5.Language Use

The university planss to expand their boardingbroadcasting range to attract more students and to make more benefits(change "benefits" to "revenue"). And the women agree with this plan for many aspects. First, I think this expanded range will mean more programs will be played on the radio. And this will give students more chance(change "chance" to "opportunities") to practice their skills. And they will do more real-life programs, pro-videos(change "pro-videos" to "providing"). And second, this will make more money and this money will enhance the development of the university. And they can use this money to help other programs.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to expand their broadcasting range in order to attract more students and generate additional revenue. The woman supports this plan for several reasons. Firstly, she believes that the expanded range will result in a greater variety of programs being aired on the radio, providing students with increased opportunities to practice and develop their skills. By working on real-life programs, students can gain valuable experience that will improve their chances of securing employment after graduation. Secondly, the woman argues that the increased revenue generated by the expanded radio station can be used to support the development of other university programs and initiatives. Overall, she is confident that the proposed changes will help achieve the university's goals and benefit both the students and the institution as a whole.

6.Mind Map

- University plans
  - Expand broadcasting range
  - Attract more students
  - Generate additional revenue

- Woman's support
  - Increased variety of programs
    - More opportunities for students
    - Real-life experience
  - Revenue benefits
    - Support other university programs
    - Enhance overall development

- Conclusion
  - Achieve university's goals
  - Benefit students and institution

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 从表达方面来看，回答的语音清晰，流利度较好，但有时停顿不太合适。建议在练习时注意语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively explains the woman's support for the proposal, mentioning the benefits of real-life experience for students and the potential financial benefits for the university. No significant improvements are needed in topic development.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the announcement, the university is planning to expand the broadcasting range of the radio station to nearby towns. In the announcement, it is mentioned that the university plans to extend the radio station's broadcasting range to encompass nearby towns. (将句子改为更自然的表达方式) And the woman in the conversation agrees with this plan. The woman in the conversation supports this plan. (简化表达，使其更自然) In the first place, she contends that there will be more programs relevant to the real life, Firstly, she argues that there will be more programs related to real-life situations, (使用更恰当的词汇和表达) which means that the students will have to face the real-life audience, meaning that students will engage with a real-life audience, (简化表达，使其更自然) and this experience will be a good shot for their future job hunting. and this experience will greatly benefit their future job prospects. (使用更准确的词汇和表达) Secondly, she believes that it will benefit the whole college. Secondly, she believes that it will benefit the entire university. (使用更准确的词汇) According to her friend Tony, there is another university which has done this issue five years ago, According to her friend Tony, another university implemented a similar plan five years ago, (使用更恰当的词汇和表达) and they have earned a lot of money, and they have generated significant revenue, (使用更准确的词汇) and they use this money to facilitate other programs. which they use to support other programs. (简化表达，使其更自然)

Revised Answer (140 words): In the announcement, it is mentioned that the university plans to extend the radio station's broadcasting range to encompass nearby towns. The woman in the conversation supports this plan. Firstly, she argues that there will be more programs related to real-life situations, meaning that students will engage with a real-life audience, and this experience will greatly benefit their future job prospects. Secondly, she believes that it will benefit the entire university. According to her friend Tony, another university implemented a similar plan five years ago, and they have generated significant revenue, which they use to support other programs.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - Extend broadcasting range

- Woman's support
  - Real-life experience
    - Engage with real-life audience
    - Benefit future job prospects
  - Benefit entire university
    - Tony's example
      - Implemented similar plan
      - Generated significant revenue
      - Support other programs

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 4

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 26

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper pauses and work on accurate pronunciation of certain words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively explains the woman's support for the proposal and provides relevant examples from the conversation. No significant improvements are needed in this aspect, as the topic development is strong.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: The college plans to expand the radio station's broadcasting range in order to attract more students to apply its to its (added "to" for correct preposition usage) communication program. Meanwhile, university officials hope this expansion can increase the number of listeners, which will create extra revenue for the university. Actually, the Women woman (corrected spelling error) in Conversation approves the policy. Firstly, if the university decides to expand the radio station, there will be more programs, so the students who participate in its program can obtain more professional experience. And these experiences are really useful for them to get a good job after they graduate. Secondly, the woman's friend Tony said that his university had a similar program five years ago, which made a lot of money. And the university used this money to offer more scholarships and found meaningful programs.

Revised Answer (140 words): The college plans to expand the radio station's broadcasting range to attract more students to apply to its communication program. University officials believe this expansion will increase listener numbers and generate additional revenue. The woman in the conversation supports this proposal for two main reasons. First, expanding the radio station will provide students with more programs and opportunities to gain valuable professional experience, enhancing their job prospects upon graduation. Second, she cites her friend Tony's experience at another university that implemented a similar expansion five years ago. This initiative proved successful, generating significant revenue that was used to fund scholarships and establish meaningful programs across campus. Overall, she believes that expanding the radio station will achieve the university's goals and benefit both students and the institution as a whole.

6.Mind Map

- College radio station expansion
  - Attract more students to communication program
  - Increase listener numbers
  - Generate additional revenue

- Woman's support
  - More programs and professional experience for students
    - Enhanced job prospects after graduation
  - Friend Tony's experience at another university
    - Successful expansion and revenue generation
    - Funding scholarships and meaningful programs across campus

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达基本清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。例如，可以尝试减少一些不必要的词汇，如“moreover”和“and”。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。为了提高口语表达能力，可以多加练习和模仿地道的英语发音。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在提到扩大广播范围对学生的好处时，可以更具体地说明这将如何帮助他们获得更多的专业经验。另外，在谈到托尼的大学例子时，可以更详细地描述他们是如何成功地增加收入并用于资助项目的。总体来说，在回答中加入更多具体细节和例子将使话题发展得更好。

5.语言使用

原文：The university decided to expand the range of the radio station to attract more students to apply for their radio programming. The university plans to expand the radio station's range to attract more students to its communication program.（将“apply for their radio programming”修改为“its communication program”，使句子更准确。）

Moreover, the expansion may increase the university's revenue. Additionally, the expansion could boost the university's revenue.（用“Additionally”替换“Moreover”，用“could boost”替换“may increase”，使句子更自然。）

The woman supports the proposal because she thinks that it will help students to gain some professional experience and it will help them have a better shot when they decide to find a job. The woman supports the proposal as she believes it will provide students with professional experience and improve their job prospects after graduation.（将原句改为更简洁、自然的表达。）

Moreover, her friend Tony's university also did the same thing and it does increase the university's revenue. Furthermore, her friend Tony's university implemented a similar plan, which successfully increased its revenue.（用“Furthermore”替换“Moreover”，并调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Their university used the revenue to give students scholarships and fund more programs. That university utilized the additional revenue to offer scholarships and support other programs.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to expand the radio station's range to attract more students to its communication program. Additionally, the expansion could boost the university's revenue. The woman supports the proposal as she believes it will provide students with professional experience and improve their job prospects after graduation. Furthermore, her friend Tony's university implemented a similar plan, which successfully increased its revenue. That university utilized the additional revenue to offer scholarships and support other programs.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Expand radio station's range
  • Attract more students to communication program
  • Increase revenue

• Woman's Support

  • Professional experience for students
  • Improved job prospects after graduation

• Tony's University Example

  • Similar plan implemented
  • Successful increase in revenue
  • Utilized revenue for scholarships and other programs

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确性，避免因发音错误导致的拼写错误。同时，尽量减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现较好，能够清楚地阐述女生支持提议的原因，并给出了合理的例子。但在组织结构上还有待加强，建议在练习时注意逻辑顺序和连接词的使用，使回答更加条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The passage informs students that there will be some radio station change for two reasons. This can attract more students to the community program and can encourage business place commercials on the program. The passage states that the university plans to make changes to the radio station for two reasons: to attract more students to the communication program and to encourage businesses to place commercials on the station.（将“community program”改为“communication program”，因为原文中提到的是communication program。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

In the conversation, the old man totally agree with such a stance. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with this proposal.（将“old man”改为“man”，因为原文中并未提到这个人是老年人。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

The first one is that it can benefit the students. If the radio station is for the nearby towns, there will be more programs and the students will have valuable job experience to serve the large audience. The first reason is that it can benefit students. If the radio station expands its range to nearby towns, there will be more programs, providing students with valuable job experience as they serve a larger audience.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

She also believes that it will gain revenue for the university. The university of her friend did this five years ago and earned a lot of money, so it can offer more scholarship and fund more projects. She also believes that it will generate revenue for the university. Her friend's university implemented a similar plan five years ago and made a lot of money, allowing them to offer more scholarships and fund additional projects.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

It is overall beneficial. Overall, it is beneficial.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The passage states that the university plans to make changes to the radio station for two reasons: to attract more students to the communication program and to encourage businesses to place commercials on the station. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with this proposal. The first reason is that it can benefit students. If the radio station expands its range to nearby towns, there will be more programs, providing students with valuable job experience as they serve a larger audience. She also believes that it will generate revenue for the university. Her friend's university implemented a similar plan five years ago and made a lot of money, allowing them to offer more scholarships and fund additional projects. Overall, it is beneficial.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Attract more students to the communication program
  - Encourage businesses to place commercials

- Conversation
  - Man agrees with the proposal
  - Benefits for students
    - Expanded range to nearby towns
    - More programs
    - Valuable job experience
  - Generating revenue for the university
    - Friend's university example
      - Implemented similar plan
      - Made a lot of money
      - Offered more scholarships and funded additional projects

- Overall beneficial

7.关键词