TOEFL TPO 12 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman supports the proposal described in the article. Explain why she thinks it will achieve the university’s goals.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 17

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议发言者练习更清晰、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker's response lacks coherence and organization. The answer does not accurately reflect the content of the reading and listening passages, and some parts are difficult to understand. To improve, the speaker should focus on clearly summarizing the main points from both the reading and listening passages, and then explain how these points support the woman's opinion on the proposal. Additionally, providing specific examples from the passages will help strengthen the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school is 90 feet and the video stations are touching the edge. The university plans to expand the college radio station's broadcasting range. (原文中提到的是大学广播电台的扩展，而不是学校的尺寸和视频站。) What she believes is that staff will be through the survival shock as they have job opportunities. She believes that students will gain more professional experience and better job opportunities after graduation. (原文中女生讨论的是学生获得更多的专业经验和毕业后的就业机会，而不是员工。) This is because this proposal does not sell to her program. This is because the proposal will provide a larger, real-life audience for students to experiment with programming. (原文中提到的是提案将为学生提供更大、真实的受众，而不是销售给她的项目。) Therefore, if you are interested in a professional challenge, I recommend this program for a much larger. Second, she thinks that the whole reason is because they are making a lot of money out of commercials. As a result, the news is conducive to offer more scholarships and help fund projects of other programs. Thank you for watching.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman supports the proposal to expand the college radio station's broadcasting range because she believes it will achieve the university's goals. She thinks that students will gain more professional experience by experimenting with programming for a larger, real-life audience, which will ultimately lead to better job opportunities after graduation. Additionally, she believes that the expanded radio station will attract more listeners and generate revenue through commercials. This extra income can be used to offer more scholarships and fund projects for other programs at the university. Overall, the woman is confident that the proposal will not only benefit the communication program but also contribute to the overall success of the university.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Expand college radio station's broadcasting range

• Woman's support

  • Professional experience for students
    • Larger, real-life audience
    • Better job opportunities after graduation
  • Attract more listeners
    • Generate revenue through commercials
      • Offer more scholarships
      • Fund projects for other programs

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达基本清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。例如，可以尝试减少一些不必要的词汇，如“moreover”和“and”。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。为了提高口语表达能力，可以多加练习和模仿地道的英语发音。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在提到扩大广播范围对学生的好处时，可以更具体地说明这将如何帮助他们获得更多的专业经验。另外，在谈到托尼的大学例子时，可以更详细地描述他们是如何成功地增加收入并用于资助项目的。总体来说，在回答中加入更多具体细节和例子将使话题发展得更好。

5.语言使用

原文：The university decided to expand the range of the radio station to attract more students to apply for their radio programming. The university plans to expand the radio station's range to attract more students to its communication program.（将“apply for their radio programming”修改为“its communication program”，使句子更准确。）

Moreover, the expansion may increase the university's revenue. Additionally, the expansion could boost the university's revenue.（用“Additionally”替换“Moreover”，用“could boost”替换“may increase”，使句子更自然。）

The woman supports the proposal because she thinks that it will help students to gain some professional experience and it will help them have a better shot when they decide to find a job. The woman supports the proposal as she believes it will provide students with professional experience and improve their job prospects after graduation.（将原句改为更简洁、自然的表达。）

Moreover, her friend Tony's university also did the same thing and it does increase the university's revenue. Furthermore, her friend Tony's university implemented a similar plan, which successfully increased its revenue.（用“Furthermore”替换“Moreover”，并调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Their university used the revenue to give students scholarships and fund more programs. That university utilized the additional revenue to offer scholarships and support other programs.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to expand the radio station's range to attract more students to its communication program. Additionally, the expansion could boost the university's revenue. The woman supports the proposal as she believes it will provide students with professional experience and improve their job prospects after graduation. Furthermore, her friend Tony's university implemented a similar plan, which successfully increased its revenue. That university utilized the additional revenue to offer scholarships and support other programs.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Expand radio station's range
  • Attract more students to communication program
  • Increase revenue

• Woman's Support

  • Professional experience for students
  • Improved job prospects after graduation

• Tony's University Example

  • Similar plan implemented
  • Successful increase in revenue
  • Utilized revenue for scholarships and other programs

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确性，避免因发音错误导致的拼写错误。同时，尽量减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现较好，能够清楚地阐述女生支持提议的原因，并给出了合理的例子。但在组织结构上还有待加强，建议在练习时注意逻辑顺序和连接词的使用，使回答更加条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The passage informs students that there will be some radio station change for two reasons. This can attract more students to the community program and can encourage business place commercials on the program. The passage states that the university plans to make changes to the radio station for two reasons: to attract more students to the communication program and to encourage businesses to place commercials on the station.（将“community program”改为“communication program”，因为原文中提到的是communication program。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

In the conversation, the old man totally agree with such a stance. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with this proposal.（将“old man”改为“man”，因为原文中并未提到这个人是老年人。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

The first one is that it can benefit the students. If the radio station is for the nearby towns, there will be more programs and the students will have valuable job experience to serve the large audience. The first reason is that it can benefit students. If the radio station expands its range to nearby towns, there will be more programs, providing students with valuable job experience as they serve a larger audience.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

She also believes that it will gain revenue for the university. The university of her friend did this five years ago and earned a lot of money, so it can offer more scholarship and fund more projects. She also believes that it will generate revenue for the university. Her friend's university implemented a similar plan five years ago and made a lot of money, allowing them to offer more scholarships and fund additional projects.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

It is overall beneficial. Overall, it is beneficial.（对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The passage states that the university plans to make changes to the radio station for two reasons: to attract more students to the communication program and to encourage businesses to place commercials on the station. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with this proposal. The first reason is that it can benefit students. If the radio station expands its range to nearby towns, there will be more programs, providing students with valuable job experience as they serve a larger audience. She also believes that it will generate revenue for the university. Her friend's university implemented a similar plan five years ago and made a lot of money, allowing them to offer more scholarships and fund additional projects. Overall, it is beneficial.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Attract more students to the communication program
  - Encourage businesses to place commercials

- Conversation
  - Man agrees with the proposal
  - Benefits for students
    - Expanded range to nearby towns
    - More programs
    - Valuable job experience
  - Generating revenue for the university
    - Friend's university example
      - Implemented similar plan
      - Made a lot of money
      - Offered more scholarships and funded additional projects

- Overall beneficial

7.关键词