TOEFL TPO 43 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the change described in the article. Briefly summarize the change Then state his opinion about the change and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言较为清晰，流利度尚可，但仍有一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语速和连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答基本上符合题目要求，能够概括文章中的变化，并说明男生对变化的看法及原因。但在组织结构上还有待加强，可以尝试使用更清晰的逻辑连接词来组织句子，使回答更加条理清晰。同时，在举例和论述方面可以更具体一些，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

There are two changes to the orientation program. The orientation program has two changes. (改变语序，使句子更自然) Firstly, the university will offer students with choices of activities and these activities will only last one day. First, the university will provide students with a choice of activities, which will only last for one day. (修改表达，使句子更清晰) In the listening, the men man (拼写错误) thinks (单数第三人称动词需加s) the changes are very interesting and attractive. Firstly, First, (保持一致性) people usually don't like the same things. So like if if (删除多余词汇) the student doesn't like sleep in the tank, sleeping in a tent, (修正表达) they can choose the hiking one other option (更清晰的表达) instead and they were not feeling missed out. won't feel left out. (修正时态和表达) And secondly, change the program with last one day only. Students will not give up the whole weekend. They have other big bigger more significant (修正表达) commitments (名词复数形式) such as buying books, cleaning their dormitory and preparing for their first classes. So these are the two reasons why students agree with that.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The orientation program has two changes. First, the university will provide students with a choice of activities, which will only last for one day. In the listening, the man thinks these changes are interesting and attractive. First, people usually don't like the same things. If a student doesn't like sleeping in a tent, they can choose the other option instead and won't feel left out. Second, by making the program last only one day, students won't have to give up their entire weekend. They have more significant commitments such as buying books, setting up their dormitory, and preparing for their first classes. These are the two reasons why students agree with these changes.

6.思维导图

Orientation Program Changes
├── Two Changes
│   ├── Choice of activities
│   └── One-day duration
└── Man's Opinion
    ├── Reasons
    │   ├── Different preferences
    │   │   └── Example: Tent vs. other option
    │   └── Time commitment
    │       └── Example: Buying books, setting up dormitory, preparing for classes
    └── Agreement with changes

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。为了提高交付效果，建议练习更连贯、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。此外，注意在适当的地方暂停，以避免出现不必要的标点错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以在某些方面进行改进。例如，在描述男子对变化的看法时，可以更详细地解释他为什么认为这些变化会吸引更多人参加。此外，在提供支持或举例时，尝试使用更具体和详细的信息，以便更充分地支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：According to the announcement, Medicine University will make some changes to the orientation program for newcoming students. According to the announcement, Madison University will make some changes to the orientation program for incoming students.（将Medicine University改为Madison University，将newcoming students改为incoming students。）

The first change is that the university will offer choice of activities to either go hiking or participate in group games. The first change is that the university will offer a choice of activities: either go hiking or participate in group games on campus.（在choice前加上a，以及在group games后加上on campus。）

The second change is that the program will last only one day. The second change is that the program will be shortened to last only one day.（将last only one day改为be shortened to last only one day。）

The mayor agrees with these policies. The man agrees with these changes.（将mayor改为man，将policies改为changes。）

To begin with, he points out that it's more attractive since not everybody likes the same thing. To begin with, he points out that it's more appealing because not everyone has the same preferences.（将attractive改为appealing，将likes the same thing改为has the same preferences。）

For example, somebody that likes sleeping in the tent will not participate in this activity. For instance, someone who dislikes sleeping in a tent might not participate in the camping activity.（将somebody改为someone，将likes改为dislikes，将in the tent改为in a tent，将this activity改为the camping activity。）

Moreover, he argues that students will not have to waste the whole weekend because students will have a lot of other things to do for the few days like buying books, setting up rooms, or preparing for classes. Furthermore, he argues that students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend since they have numerous tasks to complete during their first few days, such as purchasing books, arranging their rooms, and preparing for classes.（将waste改为sacrifice，将a lot of other things改为numerous tasks，将for the few days改为during their first few days。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the announcement, Madison University will make some changes to the orientation program for incoming students. The first change is that the university will offer a choice of activities: either go hiking or participate in group games on campus. The second change is that the program will be shortened to last only one day. The man agrees with these changes. To begin with, he points out that it's more appealing because not everyone has the same preferences. For instance, someone who dislikes sleeping in a tent might not participate in the camping activity. Furthermore, he argues that students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend since they have numerous tasks to complete during their first few days, such as purchasing books, arranging their rooms, and preparing for classes.

6.思维导图

• Madison University

  • Changes to orientation program
    • Choice of activities
      • Hiking
      • Group games on campus
    • Duration
      • Shortened to one day

• Man's opinion

  • Agrees with changes
    • More appealing
      • Different preferences
    • Time-efficient
      • Numerous tasks during first few days

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方还有一些不必要的停顿。建议同学在练习口语时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但在解释男生观点时，可以更具体地提到男生所提到的原因，例如“有些人不喜欢露营”可以改为“有些人不喜欢在帐篷里过夜”。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出男生对这个改变的态度是积极的。建议同学在练习时注意更加详细地阐述观点，并在总结时明确表达态度。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the article, the university is deciding to change the orientation programs for the new students. They want to change the two-day program into one day, and then students can choose which one to take. In the conversation, the men strongly support this change. Firstly, he mentioned that not everyone likes the same things. For example, some people do not want to go camping trips. The second reason is that some students do not want to give up the whole weekend. Because for the students, they have many other things to do. For example, they have to buy books, or prepare for the class, or find the classroom, and so on. In conclusion, the men strongly support the change of the university, and he gives his point.

Corrected Answer: According to the article, the university has decided (改为完成时，表示已经决定) to change the orientation programs the orientation program (改为单数，因为只有一个项目) for the new students incoming students (用更专业的词汇). They want to change the two-day program into one day, it from a two-day program to a one-day event, (改为更自然的表达方式) and then students can choose which one to take. In the conversation, the men the man (改为单数，因为只有一个人) strongly supports (加s，使动词与主语一致) this change. Firstly, he mentioned that not everyone likes the same things. For example, some people do not want to go camping trips on camping trips (加on，使句子更自然). The second reason is that some students do not want to give up the whole weekend, (加逗号，使句子更自然) because they have many other things to do. For example, they have to buy books, prepare for the class classes (改为复数，表示多个课程), or find the classrooms (加s，表示多个教室). In conclusion, the man strongly supports (加s，使动词与主语一致) the change of the university, made by the university, (改为更自然的表达方式) and he gives his point.

Revised Answer (140 words): According to the article, the university has decided to change the orientation program for incoming students. They want to change it from a two-day program to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between activities. In the conversation, the man strongly supports this change. He first mentions that not everyone enjoys the same activities, and some people do not want to go on camping trips. The second reason is that some students do not want to give up their entire weekend because they have other tasks to complete, such as buying books, preparing for classes, or finding classrooms. In conclusion, the man strongly supports the change made by the university and provides valid reasons for his opinion.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - University's decision
  - Change in orientation program

- Conversation
  - Man's support for the change
  - Reasons
    - Different preferences
      - Example: Dislike camping trips
    - Time commitment
      - Example: Other tasks (buying books, preparing for classes, finding classrooms)

- Conclusion
  - Man's strong support
  - Valid reasons for his opinion

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 在交付方面，您的发言相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。建议您练习更流畅、自然的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，请注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，您的回答基本上涵盖了所需内容，但组织和连贯性还有待提高。建议您在回答时更明确地总结变化，并确保提到男生对变化的看法以及他给出的理由。此外，尝试使用更多的连接词来使回答更连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：The university has decided to change the orientation program. The university decided to change the orientation program.（删除多余的助动词has，使句子更自然）
The first reason is that the university will offer a choice of some activities, which will last one day only instead of all the weekend, and mine in the listening part likes this idea. The first reason is that the university will offer a choice of activities, lasting only one day instead of the entire weekend, and the man in the listening part likes this idea.（删除多余的some，改为entire weekend，修改mine为man，使句子更自然）
Because, firstly, he thinks that not all students like the similar activities. Firstly, he thinks that not all students enjoy similar activities.（删除because，改为enjoy，使句子更自然）
That's because some students prefer to get up late and participate these activities, but other students prefer to give up these activities. This is because some students prefer to sleep in and participate in these activities, while others prefer to skip them.（改为sleep in和participate in，使用while连接，使句子更自然）
So with this new trend, this is good for students to make choice. Therefore, with this new option, it is beneficial for students to make a choice.（改为new option和beneficial，使句子更自然）
Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have all the free time on the weekend. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time during the weekend.（改为ample free time和during，使句子更自然）
That's because some students prefer to buy some books and set up their rooms and prepare some materials. This is because some students prefer to purchase books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials.（删除多余的some，改为purchase，使句子更自然）
So this is good for students to study. Thus, this change is beneficial for students' studies.（改为beneficial和students' studies，使句子更自然）

修订版（140词）：

The university decided to change the orientation program. The first reason is that the university will offer a choice of activities, lasting only one day instead of the entire weekend, and the man in the listening part likes this idea. Firstly, he thinks that not all students enjoy similar activities. This is because some students prefer to sleep in and participate in these activities, while others prefer to skip them. Therefore, with this new option, it is beneficial for students to make a choice. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time during the weekend. This is because some students prefer to purchase books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials. Thus, this change is beneficial for students' studies.

6.思维导图

• Orientation Program Change
  • Choice of Activities
    • One-day duration
    • Man's opinion: Positive
      • Reason 1: Different preferences
        • Enjoyment of activities
        • Sleep in vs. participate
      • Reason 2: Limited free time
        • Weekend tasks
          • Purchase books
          • Set up rooms
          • Prepare materials
      • Benefits for students' studies

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答中的语音清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意提高语言的流利度，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上涵盖了文章和听力材料中的关键信息，并对男生的观点进行了总结。但在组织结构上还有待加强，可以尝试使用更明确的连接词来组织句子，使回答更加连贯。此外，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试使用更具体的细节来增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university announced that they will make a change to the orientation program for the first-year students by offering a choice of activities. They think it will encourage students to take advantage of the opportunity of the orientation program. However, the men in the conversation don't agree with the decision because he thinks students sleeping in the tents will not participate actively in the camping. The woman also thinks students don't like going camping, so the activities may be changed. Additionally, the men think students are unwilling to give up their weekends as they have lots of things to do on the weekend, such as reviewing classes for the Thursday of next week or setting up the room. So, there are lots of big-time commitments getting in the way.

Corrected Answer: The university announced that they will make changes to the orientation program for first-year students by offering a choice of activities. They believe this will encourage students to take advantage of the opportunities provided by the orientation program. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision because he thinks that students who sleep in tents will not actively participate in camping. The woman also believes that many students do not enjoy camping, so alternative activities should be offered. Furthermore, the man thinks that students are reluctant to sacrifice their weekends since they have numerous tasks to complete, such as preparing for classes or organizing their living spaces. Consequently, there are significant time commitments that may hinder participation. (将原文中的一些表达进行了修改，使其更加自然和准确。例如，将"the men"改为"the man"，将"the opportunity of"改为"the opportunities provided by"等。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced changes to its orientation program for first-year students by offering a choice of activities, believing this will encourage students to take advantage of the opportunities provided by the program. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision, as he thinks students who sleep in tents will not actively participate in camping. The woman also believes that many students do not enjoy camping and suggests alternative activities should be offered. Furthermore, the man thinks that students are reluctant to sacrifice their weekends since they have numerous tasks to complete, such as preparing for classes or organizing their living spaces. Consequently, there are significant time commitments that may hinder participation. Offering a variety of activities and reducing the time commitment can make the orientation program more appealing and inclusive for all incoming students.

6.思维导图

• Orientation Program Changes

  • Choice of activities
  • Encourage participation

• Man's Opinion

  • Disagreement
    • Students not actively participating in camping
    • Alternative activities needed
  • Weekend commitments
    • Reluctance to sacrifice weekends
    • Numerous tasks to complete

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体而言，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿稍显不自然。建议发言者在练习时注意自己的停顿，使之更加自然流畅。同时，注意提高发音准确度，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得很好。回答内容条理清晰，观点之间的联系明确，并且提供了足够的支持和例子。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

原文：The university has decided to make a change to the orientation program. The university has made changes to the orientation program.（改为现在完成时，表示已经发生的事情）
In the past, it used to be a two-day hiking trip, but now students will be able to choose which event to take part in. Previously, it was a two-day hiking trip; however, now students can choose which activity they want to participate in.（改善句子结构和词汇）
The university thinks it can encourage more students to take advantage of the opportunity to know more people. The university believes this change will encourage more students to seize the opportunity to meet new people.（改善句子结构和词汇）
Besides, these activities will last one day only, not two. Additionally, these activities will now last only one day instead of two.（改善句子结构）
The man in the conversation really likes this idea. The man in the conversation is quite fond of this idea.（使用更高级的词汇）
Like he didn't like sleeping in a tent, so that's why he didn't participate in the orientation program. For example, he didn't enjoy sleeping in a tent, which is why he didn't participate in the orientation program.（改善句子结构和词汇）
Besides, with this new change, students do not have to give up their whole weekend anymore. Furthermore, with this new change, students no longer have to sacrifice their entire weekend.（改善句子结构和词汇）
You know, they are always very busy doing other things like buying their books and setting up their rooms. As we know, they are often occupied with other tasks such as purchasing textbooks and organizing their living spaces.（改善句子结构和词汇）
So the big-time commitment used to get in the way. Thus, the significant time commitment used to be a hindrance.（使用更高级的词汇）
Therefore, the man really likes this idea. Hence, the man is quite pleased with this idea.（使用更高级的词汇）

修订版（140字）：

The university has made changes to the orientation program. Previously, it was a two-day hiking trip; however, now students can choose which activity they want to participate in. The university believes this change will encourage more students to seize the opportunity to meet new people. Additionally, these activities will now last only one day instead of two. The man in the conversation is quite fond of this idea. For example, he didn't enjoy sleeping in a tent, which is why he didn't participate in the orientation program. Furthermore, with this new change, students no longer have to sacrifice their entire weekend. As we know, they are often occupied with other tasks such as purchasing textbooks and organizing their living spaces. Thus, the significant time commitment used to be a hindrance. Hence, the man is quite pleased with this idea.

6.思维导图

Orientation Program Changes
├── Previous Format
│   ├── Two-day hiking trip
│   └── Limited choice
├── New Format
│   ├── Choice of activities
│   ├── One-day duration
│   └── Increased participation
└── Man's Opinion
    ├── Fond of the idea
    ├── Personal experience (tent)
    └── No need to sacrifice the entire weekend

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，演讲者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议在练习时注意以下几点：1) 尝试减少不必要的停顿，使语言更流畅；2) 注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误；3) 在练习时多关注语调和重音，使发音更自然。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent response with clear connections between ideas. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific examples and support for the points made. To enhance topic development, consider the following suggestions: 1) Elaborate on the reasons for the man's opinion by providing more detailed examples or explanations; 2) Focus on clearly summarizing the change mentioned in the reading passage before discussing the man's opinion; 3) Ensure that all key points from both the reading and listening passages are included in the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The letter says the school wants to make a change to orientation program for first-year students, and the man agrees with this change in two reasons. The reading passage states that the university plans to modify the orientation program for first-year students, and the man supports this change for two reasons.（原文中的表达较为口语化，修改后的句子更为正式和自然。）

Firstly is about the choice, because he thinks not everyone likes the same thing, so it is better for students to choose between two-day hiking or other choice. Firstly, it is about providing options, as he believes that not everyone has the same preferences, making it better for students to choose between a two-day hiking trip or another activity.（修改了句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）

Secondly, he talked about not everyone want to pay the whole week into the orientation program. Secondly, he mentioned that not everyone wants to dedicate their entire weekend to the orientation program.（改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表达更准确。）

Other students may want to read book, clean their rooms, or prepare for the next day class. Some students might prefer to buy books, set up their rooms, or prepare for their first day of classes instead.（调整了句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然。）

（以上修改主要针对句子结构、词汇和语法问题，以提高语言使用得分。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage states that the university plans to modify the orientation program for first-year students, and the man supports this change for two reasons. Firstly, it is about providing options, as he believes that not everyone has the same preferences, making it better for students to choose between a two-day hiking trip or another activity. This way, more students can participate in an activity they enjoy. Secondly, he mentioned that not everyone wants to dedicate their entire weekend to the orientation program. Some students might prefer to buy books, set up their rooms, or prepare for their first day of classes instead. By shortening the duration of the activities, the university can accommodate these students' needs and make the orientation program more appealing to a wider range of participants.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Reading passage: University plans to modify orientation program
  - Man's opinion: Supports the change for two reasons

- Reason 1: Providing options
  - Different preferences among students
  - Choice between hiking trip or another activity

- Reason 2: Shortening the duration
  - Not everyone wants to dedicate entire weekend
  - Students' other priorities: buying books, setting up rooms, preparing for classes

- Conclusion
  - University accommodating students' needs and preferences
  - Orientation program more appealing to a wider range of participants

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰、流畅的，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方可能需要注意发音的准确性。建议多加练习，提高发音的准确度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间有明确的联系，并且提供了足够的支持或例子。但在某些地方可能需要更加深入地阐述观点。建议在练习时尝试更详细地解释观点，以便让听众更好地理解你的意思。

5.语言使用

原文：The university makes a change that students can choose one to participate in and the whole program reduced to one day. The university has made a change allowing students to choose one activity to participate in, and the entire program has been reduced to one day.（建议使用现在完成时表示已经发生的改变，并注意句子结构和词汇的准确性。）

The men agree with it for two reasons. The man agrees with it for two reasons.（注意单复数的一致性。）

Firstly, not all students like to do the same thing. Firstly, not all students enjoy doing the same activities.（使用更自然的表达方式。）

If they have choice, they will be more motivated to participate in the program. If given a choice, they will be more motivated to participate in the program.（使用更自然的表达方式。）

Secondly, it will give them more time to do some preparation, such as buying books, setting up dormitory or preparing for the first class. Secondly, it will provide them with more time for preparations, such as purchasing books, setting up their dormitory rooms, or getting ready for their first class.（注意词汇的准确性和句子结构。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has made a change allowing students to choose one activity to participate in, and the entire program has been reduced to one day. The man agrees with it for two reasons. Firstly, not all students enjoy doing the same activities. If given a choice, they will be more motivated to participate in the program. Secondly, it will provide them with more time for preparations, such as purchasing books, setting up their dormitory rooms, or getting ready for their first class. This new approach will not only cater to the diverse interests of students but also allow them to better manage their time during the crucial first days on campus. By offering a variety of activities and a shorter time commitment, the university is making the orientation program more accessible and appealing to a larger number of incoming students.

6.思维导图

• University changes

  • Choice of activities
  • One-day program

• Man's opinion

  • Positive
  • Reasons
    • Diverse interests
    • Time management

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大体上是清晰和流畅的，但在某些地方存在适当的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意掌握自然的语调和节奏，尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以更加明确地表达观点和原因。建议在练习时注意明确陈述观点，并提供充足的支持或例子来支持你的观点。同时，注意在回答中保持一致性，以便更好地传达信息。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, in the reading material, the school changed the orientation proposal into one day of campus hiking activities. In the reading material, the university changed the orientation program to include one day of on-campus activities. (将“学校”改为“大学”，将“提案”改为“项目”，将“校园徒步活动”改为“校园活动”，使表达更准确。) In the listening material, the male students approve of this idea, In the listening material, the man approves of this change, (将“男生们”改为“男生”，使表达更简洁。) firstly, because not everybody likes to live in a tent and some students can choose other choices, and secondly, students don't need to spend whole weekends to do this, they can spend one day for the class beginning, therefore, it's okay.

Corrected Answer: In the reading material, the university changed the orientation program to include one day of on-campus activities. In the listening material, the man approves of this change, firstly, because not everyone enjoys sleeping in a tent and now students have alternative options; and secondly, students no longer need to spend an entire weekend on this activity and can dedicate one day to prepare for their classes.

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage states that Madison University has made changes to its orientation program for first-year students by offering a choice between hiking or participating in organized group games on campus. These activities will now last only one day instead of two. In the listening passage, the man expresses his approval of these changes for two main reasons. First, he believes that offering a choice of activities will cater to a wider range of student preferences, as not everyone enjoys camping and sleeping in tents. Second, he thinks that reducing the duration of the orientation activities to one day will allow students to better manage their time and focus on other important tasks, such as buying textbooks and preparing for their first day of classes.

6.思维导图

• Reading Material

  • University changes orientation program
  • One day of on-campus activities

• Listening Material

  • Man approves of the change
  • Reasons:
    1. Cater to different preferences
    2. Better time management for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，整体上说得还算清楚，但有些地方的停顿不太合适，导致句子的连贯性受到影响。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量让发音更加准确，避免不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答基本上是连贯和有条理的。但在解释男生观点时，可以更详细地描述一下他提到的原因。例如，在提到多样化选择时，可以举例说明这样可以吸引更多不同兴趣爱好的学生参与。此外，在谈到时间安排方面，可以强调一下这种变化对学生适应大学生活的帮助。总之，在回答中加入更多具体细节和例子会使回答更加丰富和有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, in the article, the proposal is about to change the orientation program from a two-day hiking to a multiple choice that choosing go hiking or group games on campus for only one day. In the article, it is proposed to change the orientation program from a two-day hiking trip to offering multiple choices, such as hiking or participating in group games on campus for just one day.（在文章中，建议将迎新活动从两天的徒步旅行改为提供多种选择，如徒步旅行或参加校园内的团队游戏，仅持续一天。）

Well, in the listening, the man totally agree with this change and he thought it's very attractive for first-year students for two reasons. In the listening, the man completely agrees with this change and thinks it's very appealing to first-year students for two reasons.（在听力部分，男生完全同意这个改变，并认为这对于大一新生来说非常有吸引力，原因有两点。）

The first reason is that not everyone likes the same thing, like someone won't like sleep in a tent. The first reason is that not everyone has the same preferences; for example, some people may not enjoy sleeping in a tent.（第一个原因是不是每个人都喜欢相同的事物；例如，有些人可能不喜欢睡帐篷。）

So making multiple choices help them to participate in the orientation program more actively. Therefore, providing multiple options helps them participate in the orientation program more actively.（因此，提供多种选择有助于他们更积极地参与迎新活动。）

Secondly, he thought that the changing about two days to one day helps the first-year students not give up, don't give up their whole weekend. Secondly, he believes that reducing the duration from two days to one day allows first-year students not to sacrifice their entire weekend.（其次，他认为将活动时间从两天缩短到一天可以让大一新生不用放弃整个周末。）

They can have time to prepare for the study and set rooms. This way, they can have time to prepare for their studies and set up their rooms.（这样，他们就有时间准备学习和布置宿舍了。）

Therefore, the plan is a great opportunity for them. Thus, this plan presents a great opportunity for them.（因此，这个计划为他们提供了一个很好的机会。）

修订版（140词）：

In the article, it is proposed to change the orientation program from a two-day hiking trip to offering multiple choices, such as hiking or participating in group games on campus for just one day. In the listening, the man completely agrees with this change and thinks it's very appealing to first-year students for two reasons. The first reason is that not everyone has the same preferences; for example, some people may not enjoy sleeping in a tent. Therefore, providing multiple options helps them participate in the orientation program more actively. Secondly, he believes that reducing the duration from two days to one day allows first-year students not to sacrifice their entire weekend. This way, they can have time to prepare for their studies and set up their rooms. Thus, this plan presents a great opportunity for them.

6.思维导图

• Article

  • Change in orientation program
  • Multiple choices
  • One-day duration

• Listening

  • Man's opinion
    • Agree with the change
    • Two reasons
      • Different preferences
      • Time management

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的语言表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持连贯流畅的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，对文章中的变化进行了总结，并说明了男生对变化的看法及其原因。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如可以先简要介绍男生对变化的看法，然后再详细阐述他给出的两个原因。此外，在解释原因时可以加入更多细节，如提到女生没有参加露营活动的经历来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The Madison University proposes is proposing (建议使用进行时，表示正在进行的动作) to provide a choice of activities for incoming students, and it lasts only one day. The man in the recording agrees with the proposition change (为保持一致性，使用“change”替换“proposition”) and says that it should be implemented two years ago. Firstly, he thinks that because not everyone likes the same thing, so it is better to let students choose which activity they should participate. And secondly, the man argues that if the activity only lasts for one day, the students could not give up the whole weekend, which is a fantastic thing. And actually, he thinks that students have many other things to do during the weekend, such as preparing for the incoming semesters, and big-time commitments used to get in the way.

Revised (140 words): Madison University is proposing to provide a choice of activities for incoming students, lasting only one day. The man in the recording agrees with the change and believes it should have been implemented two years ago. He thinks that since not everyone enjoys the same activities, offering a choice allows students to participate in what interests them. Additionally, he argues that having a one-day activity prevents students from giving up their entire weekend, which is beneficial. He believes that students have other important tasks to complete during their first weekend on campus, such as preparing for the upcoming semester and settling into their new environment. By reducing the time commitment of orientation activities, more students can participate without sacrificing their valuable time.

6.思维导图

- Madison University
  - Proposing change
    - Choice of activities
    - One-day duration

- Man's opinion
  - Agrees with change
  - Reasons
    - Different interests/preferences
    - Time commitment (weekend)
      - Other tasks (preparing, settling in)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微调整一下语速和停顿。建议同学在练习时注意语音的连贯性和自然的停顿，以便更好地表达自己的观点。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在总结部分有些混乱。建议同学在练习时注意明确地陈述文章中的变化以及男生对这些变化的看法和原因。同时，在总结时要确保观点清晰且一致。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading passage, it is proposed that the university decided to offer students a choice to go hiking or participate in group games in campus, and the activities will last one day, in order to let students take advantages in opportunities to get to know other students. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the university has decided to offer students a choice between going hiking or participating in group games on campus, with the activities lasting only one day, aiming to provide students with more opportunities to get to know each other.（在阅读文章中，提到大学决定让学生在徒步旅行和校园团体游戏之间进行选择，活动仅持续一天，旨在为学生提供更多相互了解的机会。）

And the man in the conversation disagrees with those ideas. However, the man in the conversation agrees with these changes.（然而，对话中的男子同意这些变化。）（原文表达错误，男子实际上是同意这些变化的。）

Firstly, he thinks that lots of people wouldn't like to do the same thing, just like lots of people wouldn't like to live in a tent together. Firstly, he believes that offering choices caters to different preferences, as not everyone enjoys doing the same thing or sleeping in a tent together.（首先，他认为提供选择可以满足不同的喜好，因为并非所有人都喜欢做相同的事情或一起睡在帐篷里。）

And also, he thinks that it is hard to let students give up the whole weekend, because the students will have something to do in the weekend, like reading books, or having class, or participate in different activities. Additionally, he thinks that reducing the time commitment to one day is beneficial, as students have other tasks to complete during the weekend, such as buying books, setting up their rooms, or preparing for classes.（此外，他认为将时间投入减少到一天是有益的，因为学生在周末还有其他任务要完成，如购买书籍、布置宿舍或准备上课。）

In conclusion, that is the reason why the man disagrees with those ideas. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the man agrees with the changes.（总之，这就是男子同意这些变化的原因。）（原文表达错误，男子实际上是同意这些变化的。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the university has decided to offer students a choice between going hiking or participating in group games on campus, with the activities lasting only one day, aiming to provide students with more opportunities to get to know each other. However, the man in the conversation agrees with these changes. Firstly, he believes that offering choices caters to different preferences, as not everyone enjoys doing the same thing or sleeping in a tent together. Additionally, he thinks that reducing the time commitment to one day is beneficial, as students have other tasks to complete during the weekend, such as buying books, setting up their rooms, or preparing for classes. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the man agrees with the changes.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • University changes
  • Hiking or group games
  • One-day activities

• Conversation

  • Man's opinion
    • Agreement with changes
    • Reasons
      • Catering to preferences
      • Time commitment reduction

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。为了提高发音，请注意在句子中保持连贯的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步改进。首先，在总结变化时，请确保更清楚地描述大学所做的改变。其次，在解释男子持有这一观点的原因时，可以更详细地说明这些原因如何使新方案更具吸引力。例如，可以强调选择活动如何让更多人参与其中，以及缩短活动时间如何使学生有更多时间处理其他事务。

5.语言使用

原文：A university planned to change their orientation program from two days to one day and people can choose if they want to hiking or playing game. The university plans to change its orientation program from two days to one day, allowing students to choose between hiking or playing games. (将主语改为“大学”，使用正确的动词形式，以及改进句子结构和词汇)

In the conversation, the man agreed with this idea. In the conversation, the man supports this change. (使用更自然的表达方式)

Firstly, he believed that not everyone are going to do the same things, like many people didn't take rest in term time, so most students didn't participate in the first year. Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities, and since many people didn't like camping during their first year, they didn't participate. (修正语法错误，简化句子结构，提高词汇质量)

Another reason is students have many things to do in the first week. Another reason is that students have many tasks to complete during their first week. (添加连接词“that”，提高词汇质量)

By doing so, students didn't need to give up their whole week. As a result, students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend. (改进句子结构和词汇)

They can do something more significant, such as preparing for their first class or buying some book. They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class or purchasing textbooks. (提高词汇质量，修正语法错误)

That's why the man agreed with this proposal. That's why the man supports this proposal. (使用更自然的表达方式)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to change its orientation program from two days to one day, allowing students to choose between hiking or playing games. In the conversation, the man supports this change. Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities, and since many people didn't like camping during their first year, they didn't participate. Another reason is that students have many tasks to complete during their first week. As a result, students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend. They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class or purchasing textbooks. That's why the man supports this proposal.

6.思维导图

• Change in orientation program

  • From two days to one day
  • Choice between hiking or playing games

• Man's opinion

  • Supports the change
    • Reason 1: Different preferences
      • Not everyone enjoys camping
    • Reason 2: Busy first week
      • More time for important tasks

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：2

• 主题发展：2

• 语言使用：2

2.预估分数

• 总分：18

3.表达 在交付方面，您的回答需要改进。您的语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高这方面的表现，请尝试练习更自然、流畅的语音，并注意在适当的地方停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，您的回答需要更加清晰和有组织。首先，请确保简要总结文章中描述的变化，并明确陈述男子对变化的看法。然后，在解释他给出的理由时，请提供更多具体细节和例子来支持您的观点。为了改进这方面，请尝试使用更清晰的连接词汇和短语来组织您的想法，并确保充分支持您的论点。

5.语言使用

原文：The university has decided to change orientation program. The university has decided to change the orientation program.（在“orientation”前加上定冠词“the”使句子更自然。）

The first reason is that students could take some advantages of the opportunity to get to know other students, and students could hear or participate some program activities. The first reason is that students can take advantage of the opportunity to get to know other students by participating in various program activities.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述学生可以通过参加各种活动来了解其他学生的机会。）

And Mai in the listening part supports this idea, because first he mentioned that not all students like the similar activities. The man in the listening part supports this idea, stating that not all students enjoy similar activities.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述男子在听力部分支持这个想法的原因。）

That's because some students prefer to get up late and participate activities, and other students prefer to give up these activities. This is because some students prefer engaging in different activities, while others may choose not to participate at all.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述学生对活动的不同偏好。）

With this new change, this is good for students. This new change benefits the students.（使用更简洁、自然的表达方式来描述这个变化对学生的好处。）

Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have all the free time on the weekend. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time on the weekend.（使用“ample”替换“all”使句子更自然。）

That's because some students need to buy some books, clean some rooms, and prepare some materials. This is because some students need to buy books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述学生需要做的事情。）

So with this new change, this is good for students to study. Thus, this new change is beneficial for students' studies.（使用更简洁、自然的表达方式来描述这个变化对学生学习的好处。）

修订后的回答（140词）：

The university has decided to change the orientation program. The first reason is that students can take advantage of the opportunity to get to know other students by participating in various program activities. The man in the listening part supports this idea, stating that not all students enjoy similar activities. This is because some students prefer engaging in different activities, while others may choose not to participate at all. This new change benefits the students. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time on the weekend. This is because some students need to buy books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials. Thus, this new change is beneficial for students' studies.

6.思维导图

• Change in Orientation Program
  • More choices
    • Different activities
  • Man's opinion
    • Supports the change
      • Not all students enjoy similar activities
      • Limited free time on weekends
  • Benefits for students
    • Better socialization
    • Flexibility in schedule

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。建议在练习时注意语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了所需的信息，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在练习时关注如何更清晰地组织回答内容，以及如何在不同观点之间建立明确的联系。可以尝试使用一些过渡词汇来帮助连接不同的想法，并确保提供足够的支持或例子来支持你的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The orientation program for first-year students will be changed into a one-day-only trip or campus event, The orientation program for first-year students will now offer a one-day trip or campus event,（将“改变为”改为“现在提供”，使语句更自然）（将“改变为”改为“现在提供”，使语句更自然） and the man-in-the-conversation holds a positive view towards the announcement. The first reason he feels that not everyone likes to do the same things. Many students just missed out the orientation program since they didn't like it. The orientation program should be involved with multiple activities. Secondly, the man proposes this change can save the whole weekend for the incoming students. It is better for those who need to prepare for the first days. Therefore, he agrees with that opinion.

修订版（140词）：

The orientation program for first-year students at Madison University will now offer a one-day trip or campus event, and the man in the conversation holds a positive view towards this change. He believes that providing a choice of activities will attract more students because not everyone enjoys doing the same things. In the past, many students missed out on the orientation program because they did not like hiking and camping. By offering multiple activities, more students can participate and benefit from this opportunity to connect with their peers. Furthermore, the man appreciates that this change can save an entire weekend for incoming students, allowing them to focus on preparing for their first days at university. Thus, he strongly agrees with this modification to the orientation program.

6.思维导图

• Orientation program
  • One-day trip or campus event
  • Man's positive view
    • Attract more students
      • Different preferences
    • Save entire weekend
      • Prepare for university

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，从表达方面来看，这个回答的语言流畅度和语速基本上是一致的，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议在练习时注意提高发音的准确性，同时尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但是，在提供支持或例子方面还有待加强。建议在练习时尝试提供更多具体的例子和详细的解释来支持观点，以便使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In Reading Passive, we first decided to make change to the orientation programs that will differ from the past that students will spend two days going hiking. In this year, students can make a choice between going hiking and participating in the organized group games. In the conversation, the men agree with this plan. He believes that it's become more attractive for the change. First, he believes that since not everyone likes the same things, so not every student wants to go hiking together. And second, he believes that if you need to go hiking for two days, that means you need to give up your whole weekend. However, students are always so busy. The week before they start up, they need to buy some books and also they prepare for the first week class.

Corrected Answer: In the reading passage, it was mentioned that changes were made to the orientation program, which now offers students a choice between going hiking and participating in organized group games on campus. In the conversation, the man agrees with this change. He believes that it has become more attractive due to these changes. Firstly, he thinks that since not everyone has the same preferences, not all students want to go hiking together. Secondly, he believes that if students have to go hiking for two days, it means they have to give up their entire weekend. However, students are usually very busy during their first week of school; they need to buy books and prepare for their classes. (原文中的语言表达较为简单，修改后的回答使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的语言风格。同时，修正了一些语法错误。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it was mentioned that Madison University made changes to the orientation program for first-year students. Instead of the previous two-day hiking trip, students now have a choice between going hiking and participating in organized group games on campus. In the conversation, the man expresses his agreement with this change, stating that it has become more attractive due to these modifications. Firstly, he thinks that since people have different preferences, not all students want to participate in hiking activities. Secondly, he believes that if students have to go hiking for two days, they would need to give up their entire weekend. This is inconvenient as students are usually very busy during their first week of school, needing time to buy books and prepare for their classes. Overall, the man supports the change because it offers more options and is less time-consuming for students.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Changes to orientation program
  • Choice between hiking and group games

• Conversation

  • Man's opinion
    • More attractive
      • Different preferences
      • Less time-consuming

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太合适，可能导致了标点符号的问题。建议发言者在练习时注意自己的停顿，以便更好地掌握语言节奏。此外，尽量减少发音错误，以免影响听众的理解。

4.话题发展 发言者对话题进行了较好的阐述和组织，但仍有改进空间。首先，在总结变化时，需要更准确地描述这个变化：新增了校园内的团队游戏活动作为选择，并将活动时间缩短为一天。其次，在解释男生观点时，可以更具体地说明他认为这种变化能吸引更多人参加，并给出他提到的原因。例如，可以提到女生没有参加露营活动的经历来支持观点。最后，在组织上可以更加流畅和连贯，使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The change in the university's announcement is that students will be able to decide whether to join the orientation program by themselves. The change announced by the university is that students can now choose between different orientation activities. (修改了句子结构，使描述更准确) It will not be a mandatory program. These activities are no longer mandatory. (简化了句子结构，使表达更自然) The men in the listening totally agree with it, because for one, he thinks that not everyone likes the same program, so it will be better for students to listen to themselves. The man in the conversation completely agrees with this change, as he believes that offering different options caters to diverse preferences among students. (改进了句子结构和词汇，使表达更清晰) What's more, he thinks that some students can not give up the weekend for other things such as get prepared for the further education and swap the house or reading what they want to read. Moreover, he thinks that some students cannot sacrifice their entire weekend for other tasks like preparing for classes and setting up their living spaces. (修改了句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然和准确) So he thinks that it is a good change.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The change announced by the university is that students can now choose between different orientation activities, such as hiking or participating in organized group games on campus. These activities are no longer mandatory. The man in the conversation completely agrees with this change, as he believes that offering different options caters to diverse preferences among students. He also mentions that not everyone enjoys camping and hiking, so providing alternatives allows more students to participate in the orientation program. Moreover, he thinks that some students cannot sacrifice their entire weekend for other tasks like preparing for classes and setting up their living spaces. By reducing the duration of the activities to one day, the university addresses these concerns and makes the orientation program more appealing to a wider range of students. The man believes that these changes are positive and will benefit incoming students.

6.思维导图

• Change announced

  • Choose between activities
  • No longer mandatory

• Man's opinion

  • Agrees with change
  • Reasons
    • Diverse preferences
    • Time commitment
    • More appealing to students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分：27

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方稍显生硬。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更自然地组织句子，注意语速和停顿的恰当性。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容完整，结构清晰，观点明确。在主题发展方面已经做得很好。可以尝试在解释观点时提供更多具体的例子和细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to change its orientation program from two days to one day, allowing students to choose between hiking or playing games. The university plans to change its orientation program from a two-day event to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between hiking and playing games.（将“from two days to one day”改为“from a two-day event to a one-day event”，使句子结构更自然；将“or”改为“and”，表示两个选项之间的关系。）

In the conversation, the man supports this change. In the conversation, the man expresses his support for this change.（将“supports”改为“expresses his support for”，使句子更自然。）

Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities and since many people didn't like camping during the first year, they didn't participate. Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities; thus, many people who didn't like camping during their first year chose not to participate.（在两个独立子句之间添加分号，使句子结构更清晰；将“since”改为“thus”，表示因果关系。）

Another reason is that students have many tasks to accomplish during the first week. Another reason is that students have numerous tasks to complete during their first week.（将“many”改为“numerous”，提高词汇水平；将“accomplish”改为“complete”，使句子更自然。）

As a result, students won't have to stay quiet their entire weekend. As a result, students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend.（将“stay quiet”改为“sacrifice”，使句子更自然。）

They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class or purchasing textbooks. They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class and purchasing textbooks.（将“or”改为“and”，表示两个任务都需要完成。）

That's why the man supports this proposal. That's why the man supports this change.（将“proposal”改为“change”，与前文保持一致。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to change its orientation program from a two-day event to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between hiking and playing games. In the conversation, the man expresses his support for this change. Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities; thus, many people who didn't like camping during their first year chose not to participate. Another reason is that students have numerous tasks to complete during their first week. As a result, students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend. They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class and purchasing textbooks. That's why the man supports this change.

6.思维导图

• Change in Orientation Program

  • Two-day event to one-day event
  • Choice between hiking and playing games

• Man's support for the change

  • Not everyone enjoys the same activities
    • Many didn't like camping, chose not to participate
  • Numerous tasks during the first week
    • Students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend
    • Focus on important tasks (preparing for class, purchasing textbooks)

7.关键词