TOEFL TPO 28 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal, then state her opinion about the proposal, and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中，发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿不太自然。建议在练习时注意提高语言的流利度，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括提议并说明女士的观点及理由。但在组织结构上可以更加清晰。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇来使回答更加连贯。同时，在给出例子时可以更具体一些，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The student proposes that the school should keep the music building open till midnight. The proposal suggests that the university should extend the music building's hours until midnight. (原句表达较为简单，修改后的句子更加正式和自然) Firstly, there are some students will use it later in the midnight. First, some students would utilize it late at night. (修改语法错误并简化表达) Secondly, it will be more convenient for the students to reserve the room. Second, this would make room reservations more convenient for students. (调整句子结构，使其更自然流畅) In the listening, the woman agrees with this. Firstly, First, (避免重复使用“Firstly”) she thinks that the students will know where to go in the night because they will keep quiet in other places in the school, so that it will not disrupt the students' sleep and the music building is a proper place. Secondly, for example, the winter concert and the summer concert, Additionally, during events like winter and summer concerts, (调整句子结构，使其更自然流畅) there are a lot of concerts like always trying to use this. And as the man regarded that the students always have already booked because the time is very short, so the longer time makes it convenient to reserve the room.

Revised Answer (140 words): The proposal suggests that the university should extend the music building's hours until midnight. First, some students would utilize it late at night. Second, this would make room reservations more convenient for students. In the listening, the woman agrees with this. First, she thinks that students will know where to go at night because they will keep quiet in other places on campus, ensuring that it will not disrupt other students' sleep and making the music building a proper place for practice. Additionally, during events like winter and summer concerts, there is a high demand for practice rooms. The man mentions that students often find all time slots already booked due to limited availability, so extending the building's hours would make it more convenient for them to reserve rooms.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Extend music building hours until midnight

- Reasons
  - Late-night practice
  - Convenient room reservations

- Woman's opinion (listening)
  - Agrees with proposal
    - Avoids disrupting others' sleep
    - Proper place for practice
    - High demand during concerts
      - Winter and summer concerts
      - Limited availability of time slots

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方还需要注意控制语速和适当的停顿。建议在练习时注意发音的准确性，尤其是在一些单词的发音上。此外，可以适当加强对连词和短语的运用，使语言更加自然。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答结构清晰，观点明确，并且提供了充分的支持和例子。在今后的练习中，可以尝试使用更多不同类型的连接词和过渡词汇，以增强说话内容之间的连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: A student suggests that the school should keep the music building open later, and the woman thinks that's a great idea for two reasons. The student proposes extending the music building's hours, and the woman agrees, citing two reasons. (将句子结构简化，使用更高级的词汇) First, she mentions that usually the students have to practice in their dorms because they have nowhere else to go. Firstly, she points out that students often resort to practicing in their dormitories due to a lack of alternative locations. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) And that is really bad, because even if they try to keep the volume down, it is still noisy. This is problematic as, despite attempts to reduce noise levels, it remains disruptive. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) Second, she also mentions that when there are so many sections in winter or in summer, and the students need to practice, it's so hard for students to book a place to practice. Secondly, she highlights the difficulty of reserving practice spaces during peak seasons such as winter and summer. (简化句子结构，使用更高级的词汇) And if the music building can open later, it will definitely be helpful. Extending the music building's hours would undoubtedly alleviate these issues. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) As a result, she thinks that's a great idea. Consequently, she strongly supports the proposal. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式)

Revised Answer (140 words): The student proposes extending the music building's hours, and the woman agrees, citing two reasons. Firstly, she points out that students often resort to practicing in their dormitories due to a lack of alternative locations. This is problematic as, despite attempts to reduce noise levels, it remains disruptive. Secondly, she highlights the difficulty of reserving practice spaces during peak seasons such as winter and summer. Extending the music building's hours would undoubtedly alleviate these issues. Consequently, she strongly supports the proposal.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Extending music building hours

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees
  - Two reasons
    - Practicing in dormitories
      - Lack of alternative locations
      - Disruptive noise levels
    - Difficulty reserving practice spaces
      - Peak seasons (winter and summer)

- Benefits of extended hours
  - Alleviate issues
  - Strong support for the proposal

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语言流畅度和语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点符号使用不当导致了不恰当的停顿。此外，发音上也存在一些不准确之处。建议发言者注意在练习时加强对标点符号的运用，同时提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间的联系也较为清晰，并给出了足够的支持或例证。但仍有改进空间，例如可以更详细地描述女生提到的原因，以使回答更具说服力。建议在练习时尝试提供更多具体细节来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading, the students suggested the university to keep the museum building lit because the students have no place to practice and it is difficult for them to reserve one room. In the reading, it is suggested that the university should keep the music building open later as students have no place to practice and find it difficult to reserve a room.（将"museum building"改为"music building"，将"lit"改为"open later"，调整句子结构使其更自然。）

In the listening, the woman agreed with this idea for two reasons. In the listening, the woman supports this proposal for two reasons.（将"agreed with this idea"改为"supports this proposal"，使表达更准确。）

Firstly, there is no place for students to play except for dormitory. Firstly, there is no other place for students to practice besides their dormitories.（将"play"改为"practice"，将"dormitory"改为"dormitories"，使表达更准确。）

However, when she plays her violin indoors, she feels it is bad for others because they are sleeping or studying. However, when she practices her violin in her room, she feels guilty as it may disturb others who are sleeping or studying.（将"plays her violin indoors"改为"practices her violin in her room"，将 "it is bad for others because they are sleeping or studying." 改为 "she feels guilty as it may disturb others who are sleeping or studying."，使表达更自然。）

Secondly, when the concert is coming, all students need to practice their instruments. Secondly, when a concert is approaching, all students need to practice their instruments.（将"when the concert is coming"改为"when a concert is approaching"，使表达更自然。）

However, the orchestra will book every room. However, the orchestra members often book all available rooms.（将"the orchestra will book every room"改为"the orchestra members often book all available rooms"，使表达更准确。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading, it is suggested that the university should keep the music building open later as students have no place to practice and find it difficult to reserve a room. In the listening, the woman supports this proposal for two reasons. Firstly, there is no other place for students to practice besides their dormitories. However, when she practices her violin in her room, she feels guilty as it may disturb others who are sleeping or studying. Secondly, when a concert is approaching, all students need to practice their instruments. However, the orchestra members often book all available rooms.

6.思维导图

• Reading

  • Suggestion
    • Keep music building open later
    • No place to practice
    • Difficult to reserve a room

• Listening

  • Woman's opinion
    • Supports proposal
    • Reason 1: No other place besides dormitories
      • Disturbs others (sleeping, studying)
    • Reason 2: Concert approaching
      • Orchestra members book all rooms

7.关键词