TOEFL TPO 1 Speaking Task 2 Sample: Explain why the woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：2.5

• 语言使用：2.5

2.预估分数

• 22

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。建议在练习口语时，注意保持连贯性和语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容与问题不符，没有准确地解释女士为什么不同意信中的观点。建议在回答问题时，确保理解问题的要求，并根据听力材料中的信息进行组织和阐述。在这个问题中，应该关注女士对于雕塑支付方式和空间占用的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the passage, it talks about a notice that the university planned to match the roommates based on students' interests. In the conversation, the woman disagrees with the letter's reasons for opposing the new sculpture on campus. (原文内容与问题不符，需要根据听力材料进行修改。) First, it can improve the experience of the first-year students to get along well with others. Secondly, it can reduce the work for the housing office because few students will switch rooms in the middle of the school. Firstly, she points out that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university. Secondly, she believes that Paul's concern about space is due to his personal convenience as he and his friends play soccer in that area. (修改内容以回答问题要求。) However, the woman disagreed with this idea. Firstly, she said it doesn't need similar interests to make friends. She and her roommates have different personalities, but they are friends. And secondly, there are many cases for students to decide to move, such as they have different schedules or they want better locations. So even they have similar interests, they still want to move.

Revised Answer (140 words): In the conversation, the woman disagrees with the letter's reasons for opposing the new sculpture on campus. Firstly, she points out that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university. This contradicts Paul's assumption that purchasing such an expensive sculpture would put a financial burden on the university. Secondly, she believes that Paul's concern about the sculpture taking up all the green space in front of the campus center is due to his personal convenience. She explains that Paul and his friends often play soccer in that area, and they would have to find another place to play if the sculpture is installed. Therefore, the woman thinks that Paul's opposition to the sculpture is based on incorrect assumptions and personal convenience rather than genuine concerns for the university or its students.

6.思维导图

• Woman's disagreement
  • Anonymous donor
    • Paying for sculpture
    • University not burdened
  • Paul's concern about space
    • Personal convenience
    • Soccer playing area

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在解释女士不同意信中观点的原因时，可以更加明确地表达。例如，在提到捐赠者支付雕塑费用这一点时，可以强调这意味着学校并不需要承担费用。另外，在讨论雕塑占用空间问题时，可以指出女士认为保留绿地并不是一个重要问题，因为学生可以在其他地方进行活动。通过提供更多具体细节和例子来支持观点，可以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the letter, Paul opposed the idea that school requires a new sculpture for campus. This is because of the poor financial condition, which increases the housing and tuition fees, and the sculpture is too large and takes up the green space. The woman doesn't support about this change to about his ideas. To begin with, she points out that the sculpture is donated by someone and she is really glad to see a nice art in the campus. Moreover, she argues that sculpture doesn't take up the space. Paul doesn't want to change since it takes up the place he kick soccer.

Corrected Answer: According to the letter, Paul opposes the idea of adding a new sculpture to the campus. He cites the school's poor financial condition, which led to increased housing and tuition fees, and also argues that the sculpture is too large and will occupy valuable green space. The woman disagrees with his reasoning. Firstly, she highlights that an anonymous donor is funding the sculpture, so it won't burden the school financially. She is also excited about having an impressive piece of art on campus. Furthermore, she contends that although the sculpture will take up some space, it won't significantly impact students' activities. Paul's resistance stems from his personal inconvenience since he plays soccer in that area. (根据信中的内容，Paul反对在校园增加新雕塑的想法。他提到学校财政状况不佳，导致住房和学费上涨，还认为雕塑太大，会占用宝贵的绿地。女士不同意他的观点。首先，她强调是匿名捐赠者资助雕塑，因此不会给学校带来负担。她还对校园里有一件令人印象深刻的艺术品感到兴奋。此外，她认为尽管雕塑会占用一些空间，但不会对学生的活动产生重大影响。Paul的抵触源于他个人的不便，因为他在那个区域踢足球。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the letter, Paul opposes the idea of adding a new sculpture to the campus. He cites the school's poor financial condition, which led to increased housing and tuition fees, and also argues that the sculpture is too large and will occupy valuable green space. The woman disagrees with his reasoning. Firstly, she highlights that an anonymous donor is funding the sculpture, so it won't burden the school financially. She is also excited about having an impressive piece of art on campus. Furthermore, she contends that although the sculpture will take up some space, it won't significantly impact students' activities. Paul's resistance stems from his personal inconvenience since he plays soccer in that area. Overall, the woman believes that Paul's concerns are unfounded and that the new sculpture will be a valuable addition to the campus.

6.思维导图

• Paul's Opposition

  • Poor financial condition
  • Large sculpture occupying green space

• Woman's Disagreement

  • Anonymous donor funding sculpture
    • No financial burden on school
  • Excitement for impressive art on campus
  • Limited impact on students' activities

• Paul's Personal Inconvenience

  • Plays soccer in the area

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 15

3.表达 在回答中，发音不够清晰，语速不稳定，有时会出现停顿。建议练习更流利、自然的发音，并保持稳定的语速。在练习过程中，注意正确的发音和适当的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容与问题不符，没有准确地解释女士为什么不同意信中的观点。建议在准备回答时，仔细审题并确保理解问题要求。在组织回答时，要确保内容与问题相关，并提供充分的支持或例子。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The letter proposed that to close the parking areas on campus and the woman in the conversation find it's a good idea because first she believed that students need more green area on campus so they can hang out and study in the grass area. The woman in the conversation disagrees with the letter because she believes that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university. She also thinks that Paul's concern about losing green space is due to his personal convenience, as he and his friends play soccer on the lawn where the sculpture will be placed. (原回答没有准确回答问题，已修改为正确回答。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman in the conversation disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter for two main reasons. First, she believes that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university as mentioned in the letter. This means that Paul's concern about the university's poor financial condition is not valid since it is not spending its own money on the sculpture. Second, she thinks that Paul's concern about losing green space is due to his personal convenience, as he and his friends play soccer on the lawn where the sculpture will be placed. The woman suggests that they can simply use another part of the campus to play soccer. Therefore, she finds Paul's arguments unconvincing and supports having a new sculpture on campus.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Anonymous donor
    - Paying for sculpture
    - University not spending its own money
  - Personal convenience
    - Paul and friends play soccer on the lawn
    - Use another part of the campus

- Support for new sculpture

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体而言，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议发言者注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。加强这些方面的练习将有助于提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 The speaker's response is generally coherent and well-organized, but there are a few areas that could be improved. The speaker should focus on providing clearer connections between ideas and offering more specific examples to support their points. Additionally, the speaker should avoid repeating certain phrases and instead use a variety of expressions to convey their thoughts. By working on these aspects, the speaker can further enhance their topic development skills in future responses.

5.语言使用

Original: Students in the latter letter (原文中的“latter”应改为“letter”，以表示“信件”) disagree with the school's decision to build new sculptures on campus because of two separate reasons. First of all, it is because the school is faced with financial difficulties, especially when the housing and tuition is rising. What's more, there are little space for the school, available for school to build that sculptures. The woman in the conversation, however, disagree with the opinion with two specific points. First of all, it is because it is the donors who pay the bills for the sculptures so that the students' opposition is based on a wrong assumption. In addition, it only cause inconvenience to the students who kick soccers around the campus. So in the end, that's how the woman shows a disagreement over the student's opinion.

Revised (140 words): Students in the letter disagree with the school's decision to install new sculptures on campus due to two distinct reasons. Firstly, they argue that the school faces financial difficulties, particularly with increasing housing and tuition costs. Furthermore, they claim there is limited space available for constructing such sculptures. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with these points for two specific reasons. Firstly, she highlights that donors are funding the sculptures, rendering students' opposition based on an incorrect assumption. Secondly, she asserts that it only causes minor inconvenience to students playing soccer on campus. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the woman disagrees with the students' opinion expressed in the letter.

6.思维导图

- Letter
  - Disagreement
  - Financial difficulties
  - Limited space

- Woman's response
  - Donors funding sculptures
  - Incorrect assumption
  - Minor inconvenience
  - Soccer on campus

- Conclusion
  - Reasons for disagreement

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音的连贯性和减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在描述女士对雕塑的看法时，可以更详细地说明她认为这是校园里的艺术品。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出女士与信中观点的分歧。建议发言者在练习时关注话题的深入发展和逻辑关系的明确表达。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Paul suggested that the university shouldn't have purchased such an expensive but ugly-looking with odd angles sculpture. Paul suggested that the university shouldn't have purchased such an expensive, ugly-looking sculpture with odd angles.（将描述雕塑的词语顺序调整得更自然。）
It not only increases the student's financial burden but also take up the empty spaces in front of the campus center. It not only increases the students' financial burden but also takes up the empty space in front of the campus center.（改为复数形式，以及修正动词形式。）
But the woman in the listening party disagrees with him because for one thing, the sculpture is purchased by a donor but not the school's money and it is really an art in the school. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with him because, for one thing, the sculpture is funded by a donor, not by the school's money, and it is truly a piece of art on campus.（使用更自然的连接词，调整句子结构，以及使用更准确的词汇。）
For another thing, Paul and his friends used to play soccer in front of the campus center where the sculpture will be placed there, so he opposed it because of his own convenience. Additionally, Paul and his friends used to play soccer in front of the campus center where the sculpture will be placed; thus, he opposes it due to his own convenience.（使用更自然的连接词，以及调整句子结构。）
That's all. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the woman disagrees with Paul's opinion.（使用更正式的结论语句。）

Revised Answer (140 words): Paul suggested that the university shouldn't have purchased such an expensive, ugly-looking sculpture with odd angles. It not only increases the students' financial burden but also takes up the empty space in front of the campus center. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with him because, for one thing, the sculpture is funded by a donor, not by the school's money, and it is truly a piece of art on campus. Additionally, Paul and his friends used to play soccer in front of the campus center where the sculpture will be placed; thus, he opposes it due to his own convenience. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the woman disagrees with Paul's opinion.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Paul's opinion

- Disagreement
  - Woman's perspective
    - Donor-funded sculpture
    - Piece of art on campus

- Personal reason
  - Paul's convenience
    - Soccer playing area affected

- Conclusion
  - Reasons for disagreement

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流畅度和语速基本一致，偶尔有停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言的连贯性。同时，注意准确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者没有完全回答问题，而是回答了与问题无关的内容。建议发言者在回答问题时要确保理解问题的要求，并针对问题提供有条理、组织良好的回答，以及清晰的观点和充分的例证。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, in the letter, Sun suggests more students should invite a business leader as their graduation speaker because, first of all, the business leaders are excellent role models that can represent the professional side and, besides, it can reinforce the community that the business profile identifies and biggest in this area. In the letter, the author argues against acquiring a new sculpture for campus due to financial reasons and concerns about space. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with these points. (原文中的内容与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

The woman in the conversation disagreed with this letter because, first of all, she thinks it has always been the business leaders who speak at the graduation ceremony. The woman disagrees with the letter because she reveals that an anonymous donor is funding most of the sculpture's cost, not the university. (原文中的内容与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

So, other professions should also be considered like the teacher since they are also very influential and successful. Besides, the business program is already very big and well-known, so it doesn't really need the extra attention or free advertisement that the graduation speaker will bring. However, the education program can really benefit from this since it is a very great training teacher program but it is less well-known, so this can really draw more attention to this program. Additionally, she believes that Paul's concern about space is due to his personal convenience as he and his friends play soccer on that lawn. She suggests that they can use another part of the campus for their activities. (原文中的内容与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the letter, the author argues against acquiring a new sculpture for campus due to financial reasons and concerns about space. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with these points. The woman disagrees with the letter because she reveals that an anonymous donor is funding most of the sculpture's cost, not the university. This means that the university's financial situation is not a valid reason to oppose the plan. Additionally, she believes that Paul's concern about space is due to his personal convenience as he and his friends play soccer on that lawn. She suggests that they can use another part of the campus for their activities. In conclusion, the woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter because they are based on incorrect assumptions about funding and personal convenience rather than genuine concerns about space and finances.

6.思维导图

- Letter
  - Arguments against sculpture
    - Financial reasons
    - Space concerns

- Woman's disagreement
  - Anonymous donor
    - University not funding sculpture
  - Personal convenience
    - Paul's soccer activities
    - Alternative campus locations

- Conclusion
  - Incorrect assumptions

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 2 总分: 5

2.预估分数

13. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。尝试练习更清晰的发音，并保持一致的语速，以便听众更容易理解。此外，适当地使用停顿可以使表达更自然。为了提高这方面的能力，可以多进行口语练习并向母语为英语的人请教。

4.话题发展 回答内容与原文不符，没有准确地回答问题。正确的回答应该是关于女士为什么不同意信中提到的原因，而不是关于图书馆借阅限制。请仔细阅读材料并确保理解问题要求。在组织回答时，请确保提供一个连贯且有条理的回应，并在回答中明确阐述与原文相关的观点和例子。建议多做类似题目的练习，以提高话题发展能力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The Reading Passage is a letter from a student saying that university should limit borrowing paper from library. But the woman in the conversation totally disagrees with the Reading Passage. First, the passage states that students don't need a whole month to read. But the woman disagrees by saying that maybe students are able to read the book in a month. But sometimes they have to hold this book as a reference. Like having a paper, over the course of a month, they have to review and use this book to go back the materials and figure out what's gonna use in the paper. Secondly, the passage states that students who need the book can wait. But the woman points out that there's another way that they can order it from another library called Inner Library Knowing. The only thing they do is just go to our library and give a form to our library and wait for another library to send the books we want. So overall, these are the reasons why the woman disagrees with the Reading Passage.

Corrected Answer: The Reading Passage is a letter from a student saying that university should limit borrowing paper from library the university should not acquire a new sculpture for campus(原文中提到的是关于校园雕塑的问题，而不是图书馆借阅限制). But the woman in the conversation totally disagrees with the Reading Passage. First, the passage states that students don't need a whole month to read the letter argues that the university cannot afford such an expensive sculpture(原文中提到的是关于雕塑费用的问题，而不是学生阅读时间). But the woman disagrees by saying that maybe students are able to read the book in a month an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university(女士提到的是关于捐赠者支付雕塑费用的事实). Secondly, the passage states that students who need the book can wait the letter claims that the sculpture will take up all the green space in front of the campus center(原文中提到的是关于雕塑占据空间的问题). But the woman points out that there's another way that they can order it from another library called Inner Library Knowing Paul and his friends will just have to use another part of the campus to play soccer(女士认为保罗和他的朋友们可以在校园其他地方踢足球). So overall, these are the reasons why the woman disagrees with the Reading Passage.

Revised Answer (140 words): The Reading Passage is a letter from a student arguing that the university should not acquire a new sculpture for campus. However, the woman in the conversation completely disagrees with this argument. Firstly, she refutes the letter's claim about the university's financial inability to afford such an expensive sculpture by revealing that an anonymous donor is actually paying for most of the sculpture, not the university. Secondly, she addresses the letter's concern about the sculpture taking up all the green space in front of the campus center by pointing out that Paul and his friends, who frequently play soccer in that area, can simply use another part of the campus for their games. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the woman disagrees with the points made in the Reading Passage.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Letter against new sculpture
  - Financial concerns
  - Space concerns

- Conversation
  - Woman disagrees with letter
    - Anonymous donor paying for sculpture
    - Paul and friends can use another part of campus

- Revised Answer
  - Woman's disagreement with financial concerns
  - Woman's disagreement with space concerns

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，你的发音大部分清晰，但有时候需要更加流利和自然。为了提高这方面的能力，可以多练习朗读和模仿地道的英语发音。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is generally coherent and well-organized. However, you could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to support your points. For example, you could mention that the woman believes the letter writer's opposition is mainly due to his personal convenience rather than genuine concerns about the sculpture's impact on campus life. Additionally, try to make clearer connections between ideas to enhance the overall flow of your response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman disagrees the letter in three aspects. The woman disagrees with the letter for three reasons. (把“disagrees the”改为“disagrees with”，并将“aspects”改为“reasons”使句子更自然。) Firstly, she thinks that this sculpture could add some color on the art side, on the aesthetic side of this whole campus, so it is good for everyone. First, she believes that the sculpture will enhance the artistic and aesthetic appeal of the campus, benefiting everyone. (用更简洁的表达方式描述女士的观点。) Secondly, there is a donor paying for this sculpture. Second, an anonymous donor is funding the sculpture, (具体说明捐赠者是匿名的。) Therefore, there is no tuition or housing fee increased due to the sculpture, which is falsely suggested in the letter. Thirdly, the space of the sculpture is actually formerly occupied by the one who wrote this letter, Third, the space where the sculpture will be placed was previously used by the letter writer, (用更自然的表达方式描述空间问题。) but this space is actually a public space and it's open to everyone. Therefore, it actually doesn't occupy other people's public spaces. Only the person who writes objects and this is why the man who writes objects and this is why the woman thinks the writer is not right and she's for this sculpture.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the letter for three reasons. First, she believes that the sculpture will enhance the artistic and aesthetic appeal of the campus, benefiting everyone. Second, an anonymous donor is funding the sculpture, so there will be no increase in tuition or housing fees due to its installation, contrary to what the letter suggests. Third, the space where the sculpture will be placed was previously used by the letter writer for playing soccer. However, this space is a public area open to everyone, so it doesn't infringe on other people's rights to use it. The woman thinks that the writer's opposition stems from his personal inconvenience rather than genuine concerns about the sculpture's impact on campus life, which is why she supports its installation.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Enhance artistic appeal
  - Anonymous donor funding
  - Public space usage
    - Personal inconvenience
    - Genuine concerns

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大致清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯流畅的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了听力材料中提到的观点，但在组织结构和论据方面还有待加强。建议在准备过程中更加关注听力材料的细节，确保在回答中提供充分的支持和例证。同时，注意保持回答内容的连贯性和条理性，使得整个回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：There are several reasons that women disagree with the poster, because firstly, we are a donator who pays the bill for the new sculpture. There are several reasons why the woman disagrees with the author of the letter. Firstly, there is a donor who is paying for the new sculpture.（将“women”改为“the woman”，将“we are a donator”改为“there is a donor”，使句子更符合语境。）
It would be a huge art achievement in the campus which arouses the interest of students. This would be a significant artistic addition to the campus, which would spark students' interest.（使用更自然的表达方式，使句子更通顺。）
So it should not be a warrant for the university to waste money on the sculpture. Therefore, it should not be considered a waste of money for the university to acquire this sculpture.（调整句子结构，使其更符合英语表达习惯。）
And secondly, the woman thinks that maybe the person who attacks the setting of the sculpture is only worried about moving the sculpture, which would cost a lot of energy and time to make the move. Secondly, the woman believes that perhaps the person criticizing the placement of the sculpture is only concerned about relocating it, which would require considerable effort and time.（调整句子结构，使其更通顺，同时使用更高级的词汇。）

根据修改建议，重新编写的回答（140词）：

There are several reasons why the woman disagrees with the author of the letter. Firstly, there is a donor who is paying for the new sculpture. This would be a significant artistic addition to the campus, which would spark students' interest. Therefore, it should not be considered a waste of money for the university to acquire this sculpture. Secondly, the woman believes that perhaps the person criticizing the placement of the sculpture is only concerned about relocating it, which would require considerable effort and time. In conclusion, the woman disagrees with the letter's author mainly because of the financial support from a donor and the personal inconvenience that might be experienced by those opposing the sculpture's placement.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement Reasons
  - Donor-funded sculpture
    - Significant artistic addition
    - Spark students' interest
  - Personal inconvenience
    - Criticizing placement
    - Relocating effort and time

- Conclusion
  - Financial support from donor
  - Personal inconvenience for opponents

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0 Total: 4

2.预估分数

4. 3.表达

由于回答中没有提供任何内容，无法评估发言者的发音、语速和停顿。请提供完整的回答以便进行评估和提供建议。

4.话题发展 The answer provided does not address the question or provide any relevant information from the listening passage. To improve, the speaker should clearly explain why the woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter, using details from both the reading and listening passages to support their response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Corrected Answer: . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter because she believes that the author's assumptions about the sculpture's funding and its impact on campus space are incorrect. She points out that an anonymous donor, not the university, is paying for most of the sculpture, which contradicts the author's concern about the university's financial situation. Additionally, she thinks that the author is primarily concerned about his own convenience since he and his friends use the lawn where the sculpture will be placed for playing soccer. They can still play elsewhere on campus, so she sees no reason to oppose the sculpture. (原回答没有提供任何内容，因此我们提供了一个全新的回答，详细解释了女士为什么不同意信中的观点，并使用了阅读和听力材料中的细节来支持回答。这个修改后的回答使用了自然 sounding 的语言风格，结构清晰，语法正确，词汇丰富。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter for two main reasons. Firstly, she argues that the author's concern about the university's financial situation is unfounded because an anonymous donor is covering most of the sculpture's cost, not the university itself. This fact directly contradicts the author's assumption that purchasing the sculpture would strain the university's budget. Secondly, she believes that the author's complaint about the sculpture taking up valuable green space on campus is primarily driven by his personal convenience. The author and his friends frequently use the lawn where the sculpture will be placed for playing soccer, but they can easily find another location on campus for their activities. Therefore, she thinks that the author's arguments against the sculpture are not convincing and should not be taken as valid reasons to oppose its installation.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Funding
    - Anonymous donor
    - University's financial situation
  - Campus space
    - Personal convenience
    - Alternative locations for activities

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation problems that result in inappropriate pauses. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and work on their pronunciation to avoid spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples from both the reading and listening passages. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the passages to strengthen the argument. The speaker should also work on paraphrasing the information from the passages more effectively to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: In the reading passage the university is planning to implement a change where they build new sculpture for the campus. In the reading passage, the university plans to introduce a new sculpture on campus. (Corrected for sentence structure and natural flow) But in the reading passage there is stated that the university has not enough financial position to do that expensive sculpture. However, the reading passage states that the university lacks sufficient funds for such an expensive sculpture. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) However, in the listening passage the woman is not in favour of this idea and she says that this idea is unconvincing. In contrast, in the listening passage, the woman disagrees with this notion, stating it is unconvincing. (Enhanced sentence structure and vocabulary) And the university student polls reasons are not enough. She believes that the reasons provided by the university student are insufficient. (Clarified meaning and improved sentence structure) But in the listening the woman says that the donor is paying for the sculpture, not the university. The woman explains that a donor, not the university, is funding the sculpture. (Simplified sentence structure and improved clarity) And she continues to say that Paul and his friends were kicking soccer in that place, now they have to move. She adds that Paul and his friends, who used to play soccer in that area, will now have to relocate. (Enhanced sentence structure and vocabulary)

Revised Answer (140 words): In the reading passage, the university plans to introduce a new sculpture on campus. However, the reading passage states that the university lacks sufficient funds for such an expensive sculpture. In contrast, in the listening passage, the woman disagrees with this notion, stating it is unconvincing. She believes that the reasons provided by the university student are insufficient. The woman explains that a donor, not the university, is funding the sculpture. This clarification refutes the argument about the university's financial position being a concern. Furthermore, she adds that Paul and his friends, who used to play soccer in that area, will now have to relocate. This suggests that personal convenience might be influencing Paul's opposition to the sculpture rather than genuine concern for campus aesthetics or finances.

6.Mind Map

- Reading Passage
  - University plans
    - New sculpture on campus
  - Financial concerns
    - Expensive sculpture

- Listening Passage
  - Woman's disagreement
    - Unconvincing reasons
  - Donor funding sculpture
    - Not the university's responsibility
  - Personal convenience
    - Paul and friends' soccer games affected

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 1

2.预估分数

11. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。尝试练习更清晰、流利的发音，并保持一致的语速。在回答过程中，适当地使用停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。同时，注意纠正发音错误，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答没有很好地涵盖听力和阅读材料中的关键信息。要确保在回答问题时，明确提到女生为什么不同意信中的观点。例如，可以提到捐赠者支付雕塑费用的事实，而不是学校。此外，关于空间问题，应该强调信中作者的个人利益和便利性。请尝试组织一个更连贯、有条理的回答，并提供足够的支持或例子。

5.语言使用

Original: The letter suggests that the school should prohibit the students playing sports on the land, and then they also advise the students to the gym to do some exercise or do some farm. The letter argues that the university should not acquire the new sculpture due to financial and space concerns. (原文没有明确提到信中的观点，改正后的句子更准确地概括了信中的内容。)

Original: But the man thinks that is not a great idea, because there are two reasons. However, the woman disagrees with these reasons. (原文没有准确描述女生的观点，改正后的句子更清晰地表达了女生的反驳。)

Original: First, the race roads on the grass will be the central road to the other classroom, so if the students want to do some class, they must go around this, go across this road. Firstly, an anonymous donor is covering most of the sculpture's cost, not the university. (原文没有涉及听力材料中的关键信息，改正后的句子提到了捐赠者支付雕塑费用的事实。)

Original: And then, so the traffic on this road is very heavy, so that the students will not to obey the rules. Secondly, the author of the letter is more concerned about personal convenience than the sculpture itself. (原文没有明确提到信中作者的个人利益，改正后的句子更清楚地表达了这一点。)

Original: And then, the gym is far away from students, want to do some little farm for 15 minutes to go to there, because the students may think that it will be a little bit of tires for them to go to the gym to do some exercise, so it's not convenient for students. The author and his friends will have to find another place on campus to play soccer, which they find inconvenient. (原文没有准确描述信中作者的便利性问题，改正后的句子更清晰地表达了这一点。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The letter argues that the university should not acquire the new sculpture due to financial and space concerns. However, the woman disagrees with these reasons. Firstly, an anonymous donor is covering most of the sculpture's cost, not the university. This means that the school's financial situation is not a valid argument against acquiring the sculpture. Secondly, the author of the letter is more concerned about personal convenience than the sculpture itself. The author and his friends will have to find another place on campus to play soccer, which they find inconvenient. The woman believes that this personal inconvenience should not be a reason to oppose the plan for a new sculpture on campus. Overall, she thinks that having a beautiful piece of art on campus is more important than catering to individual preferences.

6.思维导图

• Letter's Argument

  • Financial concerns
  • Space concerns

• Woman's Disagreement

  • Anonymous donor
  • Personal convenience

• Conclusion

  • Art on campus
  • Individual preferences

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 1

2.预估分数 总分：15

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速需要改进。请注意正确的发音和适当的停顿。在练习时，可以尝试慢慢地说出每个单词，以确保清晰度。此外，尝试保持一致的语速，避免过快或过慢地说话。

4.话题发展 回答没有明确地解释女人为什么不同意信中表达的观点。请务必仔细阅读任务说明，并确保回答与任务相关。在这种情况下，应该讨论女人如何反驳信中关于雕塑费用和占用空间的观点。为了提高话题发展，请务必提供足够的支持和例子来解释女人为什么不同意信中的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The suggestion said universities should pay running trails because there are two reasons. In the letter, the author argues against the university purchasing a new sculpture for two reasons. (原文与任务无关，改为与任务相关的内容)
First of all, it may increase the safety because the road is mud and it's slippery. Firstly, he believes that the university is in a poor financial condition and cannot afford such an expensive sculpture. (修改为与任务相关的原因)
And the second reason is it will look nicer and attract students to use them. Secondly, he thinks that the sculpture will take up all the green space in front of the campus center, which should be reserved for students to use. (修改为与任务相关的原因)
But in the conversation, the man doesn't agree with the idea. However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with these reasons. (更正为女人不同意这些观点)
First of all, because a hard surface trail may damage the body and the soft surface may be good for the body. Firstly, she reveals that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university. (修改为与任务相关的反驳)
Second, if they pave the running trail, it looks like normal sidewalk. Secondly, she thinks that Paul's concern about the space is due to his personal convenience since he and his friends play soccer on the lawn where the sculpture will be placed. (修改为与任务相关的反驳)
In response to this question, you will read a short passage on an academic subject and then listen. It looks like a normal sidewalk. Now you can breathe and feel the nature in the trail. (删除与任务无关的内容)

修订版（140词）：

In the letter, the author argues against the university purchasing a new sculpture for two reasons. Firstly, he believes that the university is in a poor financial condition and cannot afford such an expensive sculpture. Secondly, he thinks that the sculpture will take up all the green space in front of the campus center, which should be reserved for students to use. However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with these reasons. Firstly, she reveals that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, not the university. Secondly, she thinks that Paul's concern about the space is due to his personal convenience since he and his friends play soccer on the lawn where the sculpture will be placed.

6.思维导图

- Letter
  - Against sculpture
    - Poor financial condition
    - Takes up green space

- Conversation
  - Woman disagrees
    - Anonymous donor pays
    - Personal convenience of Paul

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 15

3.表达 在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时会出现不恰当的停顿，导致标点问题。建议练习更清晰、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。在练习过程中，可以尝试朗读并录音，以便了解自己的发音和语速问题。

4.话题发展 The response does not accurately capture the main points of disagreement between the woman and the letter. The response should focus on the woman's disagreement with the letter's assumption about who is paying for the sculpture and her belief that Paul's opposition is based on personal convenience rather than genuine concern for the campus. To improve topic development, make sure to clearly state the main points of disagreement and provide relevant examples or details from the listening passage to support your explanation.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading passage, the school wants to take an expensive sculpture into the campus. In the reading passage, the school plans to bring an expensive sculpture onto the campus. (在阅读段落中，学校计划将一件昂贵的雕塑带到校园里。) But in the reading passage, we found that the woman was totally disagree about the opinion that students want to make a sculpture in the campus. However, in the listening passage, we find that the woman completely disagrees with the opinion expressed in the letter regarding placing a sculpture on campus. (然而，在听力段落中，我们发现女士完全不同意信中关于在校园放置雕塑的观点。)

Corrected Answer: In the reading passage, the school plans to bring an expensive sculpture onto the campus. However, in the listening passage, we find that the woman completely disagrees with the opinion expressed in the letter regarding placing a sculpture on campus. The first reason is that she believes Paul's assumption about who is paying for it is wrong since an anonymous donor is covering most of its cost. Secondly, she thinks Paul's opposition is based on personal convenience rather than genuine concern for preserving green space on campus. She mentions that Paul and his friends will have to find another place to play soccer due to the sculpture's placement. In conclusion, the woman disagrees with Paul's reasons because of his incorrect assumption about funding and his focus on personal convenience.

Revised 140-word Answer: In the reading passage, the school plans to bring an expensive sculpture onto the campus. However, in the listening passage, the woman completely disagrees with the opinion expressed in the letter. The first reason for her disagreement is that she believes Paul's assumption about who is paying for the sculpture is incorrect, as an anonymous donor is covering most of its cost. Secondly, she thinks Paul's opposition is based on personal convenience rather than genuine concern for preserving green space on campus. She mentions that Paul and his friends will have to find another place to play soccer due to the sculpture's placement. In conclusion, the woman disagrees with Paul's reasons because of his incorrect assumption about funding and his focus on personal convenience, rather than considering the overall benefits of having art on campus.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Expensive sculpture
  - Campus plan

- Listening Passage
  - Woman's disagreement
    - Incorrect assumption about funding
      - Anonymous donor
    - Personal convenience vs. genuine concern
      - Paul and friends playing soccer

- Conclusion
  - Woman disagrees with Paul's reasons

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性，建议发言者在练习时注意适当的停顿和发音准确性。此外，尽量避免在不恰当的地方停顿，以免影响整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent response that addresses the main points from both the reading and listening passages. However, there is room for improvement in organizing the ideas more effectively and providing clearer connections between them. To enhance the response, the speaker could focus on elaborating more on the woman's disagreement with the reasons expressed in the letter, such as mentioning that an anonymous donor is paying for most of the sculpture, and that Paul's inconvenience is not a valid reason to oppose the plan. Providing more specific examples or support from the passages would also strengthen the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The board opposed to the plan that the school is going to build a new sculpture for campus. The woman disagrees with the letter's opposition to the plan of building a new sculpture on campus. (原句表述不清，修改为更自然的表达方式) Firstly, the school is poor in finance, and 15% of the tuition fee increases in this semester, The school faced financial difficulties and increased tuition fees by 15% this semester, (修改语法和词汇用法) and the sculpture is 60-foot long, so it's too large for them to be put on campus. but the size of the sculpture is not a concern for her. (简化句子结构并提供更明确的信息)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman disagrees with the letter's opposition to the plan of building a new sculpture on campus. She believes that having nice art on campus is a positive addition. The letter argues that the school is in a poor financial situation and cannot afford such an expensive sculpture. However, she points out that an anonymous donor is funding most of the sculpture's cost, not the university. The letter also mentions that the 60-foot long sculpture will take up too much space on campus. The woman disagrees with this point as well, stating that Paul's inconvenience of having to find another place to play soccer is not a valid reason to oppose the plan. Overall, the woman believes that the reasons expressed in the letter are unconvincing and that the sculpture will be a valuable addition to the campus.

6.思维导图

• Woman's Disagreement

  • Nice art on campus
  • Anonymous donor
    • Funding most of the sculpture's cost
  • Paul's inconvenience
    • Not a valid reason to oppose the plan

• Revised Answer

  • Positive addition to campus
  • Financial situation addressed by donor
  • Space concern dismissed

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 15

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议发言者注意控制语速，保持一致的节奏，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，发言者在发音方面也需要加强练习，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 Regarding topic development, the speaker's response is not well-organized and lacks clear connections between ideas. To improve, the speaker should focus on providing a more coherent response by clearly stating the woman's disagreement with the letter and supporting it with examples from the listening passage. Additionally, the speaker should avoid introducing irrelevant information, such as the cost of donuts in the dining hall, which was not mentioned in the listening passage. Instead, focus on accurately presenting the information from both the reading and listening passages to support the main points.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The women disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter for two reasons. First, it is said in the letter, now it's a bad financial position to purchase such an expensive sculpture. But the women think the writer have made a mistake on who will pay for this. It is paid by the fee that cost on donuts in dining hall rather than the housing or tuition. The second reason for this, the second reason these women are disagree is that she thinks the writer is just one don't want to move the place because he finds it is convenient to play soccer ball on this place rather than move another.

Corrected Answer: The woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter for two reasons. First, it is stated in the letter that it's a bad financial decision to purchase such an expensive sculpture. However, the woman believes that the writer has made a mistake regarding who will pay for this. It is funded by an anonymous donor, not by housing or tuition fees. The second reason she disagrees is that she thinks the writer just doesn't want to move from his convenient spot for playing soccer, rather than finding another location. (原文中的错误包括：将“woman”误写为“women”，将“it's”误写为“now it's”，以及在描述捐赠者的部分提到了与原文无关的内容。在修改后的回答中，我们纠正了这些错误，并使用了更自然的语言表达。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter for two main reasons. Firstly, the letter states that purchasing such an expensive sculpture would be a poor financial decision due to the university's current financial situation. However, the woman points out that the writer is mistaken about who will be funding the sculpture, as it is actually being paid for by an anonymous donor, not through housing or tuition fees. Secondly, she believes that the writer's opposition to the sculpture is primarily due to his personal convenience, as he enjoys playing soccer in the area where the sculpture will be placed. The woman suggests that the writer should simply find another location to play soccer instead of opposing the installation of the artwork. This revised answer provides a clearer and more coherent response to the question, which would likely achieve a higher score.

6.思维导图

- Woman's disagreement
  - Reason 1
    - Letter's financial concern
    - Anonymous donor funding
  - Reason 2
    - Writer's personal convenience
    - Soccer playing spot
    - Finding another location

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言的连贯性。此外，发言者需要注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The speaker provided a coherent and well-organized response, addressing the main points of disagreement between the woman and the letter. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details or examples to support the points made. To enhance topic development, the speaker could elaborate on how the anonymous donor's contribution affects the university's financial situation or provide more information about alternative green spaces on campus for students to use.

5.语言使用

Original: The student proposed that the university should not acquire a new sculpture in the campus because the university has a terrible financial situation, and the sculpture is large and would take up all the green spaces in front of the campus center. In the conversation, the woman thinks that all the reasons pointed by the letter is unconvincing. Her first reason is that the sculpture was donated by the missed donor, so that there is not any connection between the sculpture and the university financial. The second reason is that the green space was mostly used to play soccer, so the student can also use the other part of the campus to do that.

Corrected: The student proposed argued (建议使用"argued"，因为这个词在描述辩论或争论时更自然) that the university should not acquire a new sculpture in on (在描述校园内的事物时，使用"on"更自然) campus because of its terrible financial situation dire financial state (使用"dire financial state"，这个词组更准确地描述了严重的财务状况), and because the sculpture is large and would take up all the green spaces in front of the campus center. In the conversation, the woman thinks believes (使用"believes"，这个词在描述观点时更自然) that all the reasons pointed mentioned (使用"mentioned"，这个词在描述谈话中提到的事物时更自然) by the letter are unconvincing. Her first reason is that the sculpture was donated by the missed anonymous (使用"anonymous"，这个词更准确地描述了不愿透露姓名的捐赠者) donor, so there is no connection between the sculpture and the university's financial finances (使用"finances"，这个词在描述财务状况时更自然). The second reason is that the green space was mostly used for playing soccer, so students can use other parts of the campus for this purpose.

Revised (140 words): The student argued that the university should not acquire a new sculpture on campus due to its dire financial state and because the sculpture's large size would occupy all the green spaces in front of the campus center. In contrast, the woman believes that all reasons mentioned in the letter are unconvincing. Firstly, she points out that an anonymous donor provided the sculpture, eliminating any connection between the artwork and the university's finances. Secondly, she explains that although students primarily use the green space for playing soccer, they can easily utilize other areas on campus for this activity. Thus, she disagrees with the letter's arguments and supports having the new sculpture on campus.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student's argument
    - Dire financial state
    - Large sculpture occupying green spaces

- Woman's disagreement
  - Unconvincing reasons
    - Anonymous donor
      - No connection to university finances
    - Green space usage
      - Alternative areas for soccer on campus

- Revised answer
  - Woman's points of disagreement
  - Support for new sculpture on campus

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor pronunciation issues that need to be addressed. To improve, the speaker should practice pronouncing words more accurately and work on maintaining a smooth flow throughout the response.

4.Topic Development

The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively explains why the woman disagrees with the reasons expressed in the letter. No major improvements are needed in this aspect, as the speaker has done an excellent job of developing the topic.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: A student proposes against the establishment of sculptors on campus, first because of the university's poor financial condition. A student argues against installing a sculpture on campus, primarily due to the university's poor financial situation. (Changed "proposes" to "argues" and "establishment of sculptors" to "installing a sculpture" for clarity and natural language use) The lady disagrees with this idea as it was actually donated by an anonymous donor, therefore not paid by the campus. The woman disagrees, pointing out that an anonymous donor provided the funds, so the university is not paying for it. (Rephrased for clarity and natural language use) The lady is also happy that there is finally some nice art on campus. She is also pleased to have appealing artwork on campus. (Rephrased for natural language use)

Original Answer: Secondly, the student proposal claimed that it would take up green space that should be well utilized by the students. Secondly, the student's argument states that the sculpture would occupy valuable green space meant for students' use. (Rephrased for clarity and natural language use) The lady disagrees with this idea as the student who proposes this idea actually likes to play soccer in the green area with his friends. The woman counters this point, noting that the student who made this argument enjoys playing soccer in that area with his friends. (Rephrased for clarity and natural language use) They simply have to move to another area to do the same. They can easily find another location on campus for their games. (Rephrased for natural language use)

Revised Answer (140 words):

A student argues against installing a sculpture on campus, primarily due to the university's poor financial situation. The woman disagrees, pointing out that an anonymous donor provided the funds, so the university is not paying for it. She is also pleased to have appealing artwork on campus. Secondly, the student's argument states that the sculpture would occupy valuable green space meant for students' use. The woman counters this point, noting that the student who made this argument enjoys playing soccer in that area with his friends. They can easily find another location on campus for their games.

6.Mind Map

• Student's argument

  • Poor financial situation
  • Occupying green space

• Woman's disagreement

  • Anonymous donor
  • Appealing artwork
  • Soccer-playing student
  • Alternative locations

7.Key Words