TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: In the listening the woman expresses her opinion about posting online teacher evaluations. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答相对清晰，语速适中，但偶尔会有停顿。建议在练习时注意提高语言的流利度，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但在给出原因时可以更具体一些，提供更多支持或例子。建议在练习时关注如何更有效地组织和连接观点，并尝试提供更充分的论据来支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the announcement, the university is going to put up teachers' evaluations online for that it can motivate teachers to uphold the highest level of scholarship and professionalism in the classroom and students can learn about this teacher's teaching style and classroom expectations in advance before enrolling in the class. In addition, the woman doesn't support the change for two reasons. To begin with, she mentions that professors may feel upset about the negative information because definitely no one wants to read the negative criticism from others. In addition, she also argues that students may have no free time. If they are forced to write an evaluation, they may not take it seriously, so it may lead to an inaccurate evaluation.

Corrected: According to the announcement, the university is going to put up post teachers' evaluations online for that so that it can motivate teachers to uphold the highest level of scholarship and professionalism in the classroom(为了使老师能够在课堂上保持最高水平的学术和专业素养), and students can learn about this a teacher's teaching style and classroom expectations in advance before enrolling in the class. In addition, the woman doesn't support the change for two reasons. To begin with, she mentions that professors may feel upset about the negative information because definitely certainly no one wants to read negative criticism from others. In addition, she also argues that students may have no free time. If they are forced to write an evaluation, they may not take it seriously, so it may lead to an inaccurate evaluation.

Revised (140 words): According to the announcement, the university plans to post teachers' evaluations online so that it can motivate teachers to maintain the highest level of scholarship and professionalism in the classroom, and students can learn about a teacher's teaching style and classroom expectations before enrolling in their class. However, the woman disagrees with this change for two reasons. Firstly, she believes that professors might feel upset about negative feedback since no one enjoys reading criticism from others. Secondly, she argues that students might not have enough free time to write evaluations. If they are forced to do so, they might not take it seriously, resulting in inaccurate evaluations.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • Post teachers' evaluations online
  • Motivate teachers
  • Help students learn about teaching style and expectations

• Woman's disagreement

  • Professors upset about negative feedback
  • Students' lack of free time
    • Inaccurate evaluations

7.关键词