TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分是清晰和流畅的，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议练习更自然地进行口头表达，减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在解释女生观点的原因时可以更加详细。例如，在提到图书馆空间不足时，可以进一步解释为什么这个计划有助于解决这个问题。此外，在谈到电子书方便性时，可以给出更多具体例子来支持观点。总体来说，为了提高话题发展得分，建议在解释原因和提供支持时更加详细和具体。

5.语言使用

原文：According to the announcement, In the reading passage, (将“announcement”改为“reading passage”，使表达更准确) in the next semester, starting from next semester, (将“in the next semester”改为“starting from next semester”，使表达更自然) the books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the shelves, which creates more space for new books, and the removed books will be recorded electrically and provide students an easier way to check them up. In the conversation, the woman agrees with the announcement. Firstly, she points out that she had worked in the library last year, and the shelves were pretty crowded. The staff always complained about it. There were piles of new books bought by the university stacked in the offices. However, there was no space, so it is regrettable that no one could use them. Secondly, it is really easier to check the books. They won't go to the library. They can just sit in the dorm and read.

修订版（140词）：

In the reading passage, starting from next semester, books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from library shelves to create more space for new books. The removed books will be digitized and made available online for students to access easily. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan. She first mentions her experience working at the library last year when she noticed that shelves were overcrowded and staff constantly complained about it. Piles of new books purchased by the university were left unused in offices due to lack of space. Secondly, she believes that digitizing books will make it more convenient for students to access them, as they won't need to visit the library and can simply read from their dorm rooms.

6.思维导图

• Reading passage

  • Next semester
  • Removal of infrequently borrowed books
  • Space for new books
  • Digitization and online access

• Conversation

  • Woman's agreement
    • Overcrowded shelves (past experience)
    • Unused new books (lack of space)
    • Convenience of digitized books (access from dorm rooms)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在描述女生观点时可以更具体地说明她为什么认为这个计划是个好主意。另外，在提供原因时尽量使用恰当的连接词，使得回答更加流畅。练习时可以多关注这些方面以提高话题发展水平。

5.语言使用

Original: The university has a proposal that the books which are not being borrowed in the past five years should be removed from the shelves. The university has proposed that books not borrowed in the past five years be removed from the shelves.（将句子结构简化，使其更自然。）

Original: Firstly, it could create spaces for new books. First, this would create space for new books.（使用“First”而不是“Firstly”，并改用“this would”使句子更自然。）

Original: Secondly, the old books will be scanned to become electronic books. Second, the old books will be digitized and turned into electronic books.（使用“Second”而不是“Secondly”，并使用“digitized and turned into”使句子更准确。）

Original: And the woman thinks that it is a great idea. The woman believes that this plan is excellent.（使用“believes”和“excellent”使句子更自然。）

Original: Firstly, she said that it is worked last year. First, she mentioned that it worked well last year.（使用“First”而不是“Firstly”，并改用“mentioned that it worked well”使句子更自然。）

Original: And the shelf in the library is really crowded. She also pointed out that the library shelves are quite crowded.（使用“also pointed out”使句子更自然。）

Original: And there are a lot of books the offices have bought. Many books have been purchased by the offices.（简化句子结构，使其更自然。）

Original: And there are no rooms for them to places. However, there is no space to place them.（改用“However, there is no space”使句子更自然。）

Original: And so many people want to watch them. Many people are interested in accessing these books.（使用“interested in accessing”使句子更准确。）

Original: And none of people want to watch other books. Few people are interested in the less popular books.（使用“Few people are interested in”使句子更自然。）

Original: Secondly, the online book is really great. Second, having access to electronic books is highly beneficial.（使用“having access to electronic books is highly beneficial”使句子更准确。）

Original: Because it is easier to use, students needn't go to the library. This is because they are more convenient, allowing students to access them without visiting the library.（改用“more convenient, allowing students to access them without visiting the library”使句子更自然。）

Original: They only need to live in the dormitory and could get all the books. Students can simply access these books from their dormitories.（简化句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has proposed that books not borrowed in the past five years be removed from the shelves. First, this would create space for new books. Second, the old books will be digitized and turned into electronic books. The woman believes that this plan is excellent. First, she mentioned that it worked well last year. She also pointed out that the library shelves are quite crowded. Many books have been purchased by the offices, but there is no space to place them. Many people are interested in accessing these books, while few people are interested in the less popular ones. Second, having access to electronic books is highly beneficial. This is because they are more convenient, allowing students to access them without visiting the library.

6.思维导图

- University Proposal
  - Remove books not borrowed in past 5 years
  - Create space for new books
  - Digitize old books into electronic books

- Woman's Opinion
  - Excellent plan
    - Worked well last year
    - Library shelves crowded
    - Many books purchased by offices, no space to place them
    - Interest in accessing new books, less interest in unpopular ones
  - Benefits of electronic books
    - Convenient access without visiting library
    - Accessible from dormitories

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议在练习发音时，注意保持语速一致，避免不必要的停顿。此外，在说话时尽量保持自然的语调，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在描述女生对计划的看法时，可以更详细地解释她为什么认为这个计划很好。此外，在提供原因时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词，使回答更加流畅。

5.语言使用

原文：In the passage, it talks about the notice that the university library plan to make change. The passage discusses the university library's plan to make changes. (将句子改为更自然的表达方式) Firstly, they plan to remove the books which have not been borrowed in the past five years to create spaces for new books. First, they intend to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years to create space for new books. (使用更自然的连接词和表达方式) The removed books can also be scanned and digitalized on the school website so students can access them. The removed books will be scanned and digitized on the school website, allowing students to access them. (改进句子结构和动词形式) The woman thinks this idea is great. She said when she worked in the library last year, the shelves of the library were crowded. There are no rooms for new books and she also thinks the online books which can access to the students is very convenient. The students can find the books easier and they can stay at the room to read the books rather than go to the library. Students can find books more easily and read them in their rooms instead of going to the library. (使用更自然的表达方式和语法结构)

修订版（140词）：

The passage discusses the university library's plan to make changes. First, they intend to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years to create space for new books. The removed books will be scanned and digitized on the school website, allowing students to access them. The woman thinks this idea is great because when she worked in the library last year, she noticed that the shelves were crowded and there was no room for new books. She also believes that having online access to these books is very convenient for students. Students can find books more easily and read them in their rooms instead of going to the library, making the whole process more efficient and user-friendly.

6.思维导图

• University library's plan

  • Remove books
    • Not borrowed in the past five years
    • Create space for new books
  • Digitization
    • Scanned and digitized on the school website
    • Accessible to students

• Woman's opinion

  • Great idea
    • Crowded shelves
    • No room for new books
  • Convenience of online access
    • Easier to find books
    • Read in their rooms instead of going to the library

7.关键词