TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍微放慢速度以提高清晰度。此外，适当的停顿可以帮助提高语言流畅性。建议多加练习，关注发音和停顿的准确性。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在总结计划和女士观点时，有些地方表述不够清楚。建议在准备过程中更加关注文章和听力材料的关键信息，并确保在回答中明确表达这些信息。同时，注意保持回答的连贯性和组织结构。

5.语言使用

原文：The university aimed to change infrequently used books because it can create space for new books and students can view books easily on computer. The university plans to remove infrequently used books from the library shelves to create space for new books, allowing students to access these books easily on their computers.（修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

The woman doesn't like this idea. The woman supports this plan.（根据听力内容，女士是支持这个计划的。）

She thinks that firstly, shelf books are crowded last year, so piles of books were stacked on the shelves. She believes that due to overcrowded shelves last year, piles of books were stacked on them.（修改了句子结构和时态，使表达更准确。）

In addition, as a result, new shelves or books have no room to placed in and they have to placed in shelves. Consequently, there was no room for new shelves or books, and they had to be placed on the existing shelves.（修改了句子结构和语法错误，使表达更清晰。）

Another reason is that students will be easier to use books on the internet. Another reason is that it will be easier for students to access books online.（修改了句子结构，使表达更自然。）

There is no need to go to a library and students can sit in dormitory and read books online. Students can read books online without going to the library, even from their dormitories.（修改了句子结构，使表达更自然。）

In addition, the woman even wishes that all books can be digitalized and students can read them online. Furthermore, the woman wishes that all books could be digitized, allowing students to read them online.（修改了句子结构和时态，使表达更准确。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to remove infrequently used books from the library shelves to create space for new books, allowing students to access these books easily on their computers. The woman supports this plan. She believes that due to overcrowded shelves last year, piles of books were stacked on them. Consequently, there was no room for new shelves or books, and they had to be placed on the existing shelves. Another reason is that it will be easier for students to access books online. Students can read books online without going to the library, even from their dormitories. Furthermore, the woman wishes that all books could be digitized, allowing students to read them online.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Remove infrequently used books
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitize removed books

• Woman's Opinion

  • Supports the plan
  • Reasons
    • Overcrowded shelves last year
    • Easier access to books online
    • Convenience of reading from dormitories
    • Wishes all books could be digitized

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any potential spelling errors.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to further support their points. To improve topic development, the speaker should consider elaborating on the benefits of digitizing books and how it would impact students' access to resources.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The reading passage announces a change on campus. However, the books which haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library bookshelf. The reading passage announces a change on campus: books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. (Removed "However" and combined sentences for a smoother flow) Also, these books will be scanned into electronic books. Additionally, these books will be digitized. (Rephrased for clarity and conciseness) The woman in the conversation is in favor of this idea. She starts off by saying that she is also a librarian who works here. She had already found out that a lot of books which have been borrowed is very old and it's a shame that there's no place for other new books to come into the library. She thinks that it's a good idea to scan these books electronic because people don't need to go to libraries and just read these books in their classroom and houses. She believes that digitizing these books is beneficial as it allows people to access them without visiting the library, enabling them to read from their classrooms or homes. (Rephrased for clarity and improved sentence structure) She also suggests that it's a good idea to scan all these books into electronic. Furthermore, she suggests digitizing all the books in the library. (Rephrased for conciseness and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage announces a change on campus: books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. Additionally, these books will be digitized. The woman in the conversation is in favor of this idea. She starts off by saying that she is also a librarian who works there. She had already found out that many of the borrowed books are very old, and it's a shame that there's no space for new books to be added to the library. She believes that digitizing these books is beneficial as it allows people to access them without visiting the library, enabling them to read from their classrooms or homes. Furthermore, she suggests digitizing all the books in the library.

6. Mind Map

- Change on campus
  - Removal of infrequently borrowed books
  - Digitization of removed books

- Woman's opinion
  - In favor of the idea
  - Reasons:
    - Librarian perspective
    - Old books taking up space
    - Accessibility without visiting the library
    - Reading from classrooms or homes
  - Suggestion:
    - Digitize all library books

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微提高流利度。建议练习更自然地连接单词和短语，以提高口语的连贯性。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以避免句子之间的混乱。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释女士观点时提供更多细节。例如，在提到女士认为在线访问是个好主意时，可以进一步解释她为什么觉得这样做对学生更方便。此外，在总结时，可以更明确地指出女士对计划的看法及其原因。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the reading passage announces that the university library is going to remove the books which haven't been borrowed for about 5 years. The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years.（将 "announces" 改为 "states"，使语气更加中立；将 "is going to" 改为 "plans to"，使句子更加简洁；将 "for about 5 years" 改为 "for approximately five years"，使表达更加准确。）

And it is because it can create the space for new books, and the old books have already been scanned into digital way, and the students can easily access the books on the computer in their dormitory. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories.（将原句中的多个 "and" 删除，以提高连贯性；将 "scanned into digital way" 改为 "digitized"，使表达更加简洁。）

And in the conversation, the woman agrees with the announcement, and it is because she has already been the librarian, and she knows that it is so crowded for the piles of books stacked in the office, including new shipments of books that the university has bought. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university.（将 "announcement" 改为 "plan"，使表达更加准确；将 "it is because she has already been the librarian" 改为 "as she has experience as a librarian"，使表达更加自然。）

Secondly, she thinks it is a great idea to use online access because the students don't have to go to the library or carry the books around, and it can be easy for them to read the books. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.（将 "Secondly" 改为 "Furthermore"，使句子更加连贯；将 "it is a great idea to use online access" 改为 "utilizing online access is beneficial"，使表达更加简洁。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • University library
  • Remove books (not borrowed for ~5 years)
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitization of old books

• Conversation

  • Woman's opinion
    • Agrees with the plan
    • Reasons:
      • Experience as a librarian
      • Crowded office with stacks of books
      • Online access benefits students

7.关键词