TOEFL TPO 62 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people think that modern technology has made people's lives simpler. Others believe it has made people's lives more complicated. Which point of view do you agree with? Explain why.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 2

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 2

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 2

2.预估分数

• 总分: 19

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语速较快，间歇较多。建议发言者在练习时注意语速和停顿，以便更清晰地表达观点。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提到了两个原因来支持观点，但例子和解释不够充分。建议在练习时尝试提供更详细的例子和解释，以便更好地支持观点。同时，注意保持回答与题目的一致性，例如在这个回答中，“高科技”与“现代技术”并不完全等同。

5. 语言使用

Original:

In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement. There are two main reasons. For the first, we can use the high technology to communicate with others. For example, by taxi. Nowadays there is an app called Uber. We can call the taxi on the Uber without using gesture to call taxi. This is really convenient. Secondly, high technology also provides good condition for our health. Nowadays there is a machine for cooking for us. And we can eat meal without going to the kitchen to cook. That means we can absorb less carbon dioxide by burning.

Revised:

In my opinion, I firmly believe that modern technology has simplified people's lives. There are two main reasons for this. Firstly, advanced technology has improved our communication methods. For example, with ride-sharing apps like Uber, we can easily request a taxi without the need for physical gestures or hailing one on the street. This convenience has undoubtedly made our lives simpler.

Secondly, modern technology has enhanced our living conditions and overall health. Nowadays, there are innovative cooking appliances that can prepare meals for us, eliminating the need to spend time in the kitchen. As a result, we are exposed to less carbon dioxide from burning fuel during cooking, which contributes to a healthier lifestyle. In conclusion, I believe that modern technology has indeed made our lives simpler and more efficient through improved communication and healthier living conditions.

In my opinion, I firmly believe (revised for stronger emphasis) that modern technology has simplified people's lives. There are two main reasons for this. Firstly, advanced technology (revised for more precise vocabulary) has improved our communication methods. For example, with ride-sharing apps (clarified the type of app) like Uber, we can easily request a taxi without the need for physical gestures or hailing one on the street (rephrased for clarity). This convenience has undoubtedly made our lives simpler.

Secondly, modern technology has enhanced (revised for better vocabulary) our living conditions and overall health. Nowadays, there are innovative cooking appliances (clarified the type of machine) that can prepare meals for us, eliminating the need to spend time in the kitchen (rephrased for clarity). As a result, we are exposed to less carbon dioxide from burning fuel during cooking (explained the connection to carbon dioxide), which contributes to a healthier lifestyle. In conclusion, I believe that modern technology has indeed made our lives simpler and more efficient through improved communication and healthier living conditions (summarized the main points for a strong conclusion).

Corrected:

In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement. firmly believe (revised for stronger emphasis) that modern technology has simplified people's lives. There are two main reasons. reasons for this. Firstly, advanced technology (revised for more precise vocabulary) has improved our communication methods. For the first, example, with ride-sharing apps (clarified the type of app) like Uber, we can use the high technology to communicate with others. For example, by taxi. Nowadays easily request a taxi without the need for physical gestures or hailing one on the street (rephrased for clarity). This convenience has undoubtedly made our lives simpler.

Secondly, modern technology has enhanced (revised for better vocabulary) our living conditions and overall health. Nowadays, there is an app called Uber. We are innovative cooking appliances (clarified the type of machine) that can call the taxi on the Uber without using gesture to call taxi. This is really convenient. Secondly, high technology also provides good condition for our health. Nowadays there is a machine for cooking for us. And prepare meals for us, eliminating the need to spend time in the kitchen (rephrased for clarity). As a result, we can eat meal without going to the kitchen to cook. That means we can absorb are exposed to less carbon dioxide by burning.from burning fuel during cooking (explained the connection to carbon dioxide), which contributes to a healthier lifestyle. In conclusion, I believe that modern technology has indeed made our lives simpler and more efficient through improved communication and healthier living conditions (summarized the main points for a strong conclusion).

6. 思维导图

- Preference/Opinion
  - Totally agree with the statement

- Main Point 1
  - High technology for communication
    - Example: Uber app for calling taxis

- Main Point 2
  - High technology for health
    - Example: Cooking machines for convenient meals

- Conclusion
  - High technology improves our lives by making communication and daily tasks easier and healthier.

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. High technology has made online shopping more accessible, allowing people to purchase items from the comfort of their homes.

10. Advanced medical technology has led to the development of new treatments and therapies, improving the quality of life for many patients.

11. High technology has enabled remote work, allowing employees to work from home and maintain a better work-life balance.

12. The use of high technology in education has made learning more interactive and engaging for students, leading to better academic outcomes.

13. High technology has improved transportation systems, making it easier and more efficient for people to travel both locally and internationally.