TOEFL TPO 1 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 2

• Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 19

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is fairly clear and fluid, but there are some areas for improvement. The pace could be more consistent, and occasional pauses should be reduced. To improve the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking with a steady pace and avoid unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on clear pronunciation will help to eliminate any potential misunderstandings.

4.Topic Development The topic development in the response could be improved. While the speaker provides some reasons for their opinion, they could provide more detailed examples and explanations to support their points. To enhance topic development, the speaker should consider providing more specific examples or personal experiences that demonstrate the positive influence of television on society. Furthermore, organizing ideas in a more coherent manner will help to create a stronger argument.

5. Language Use

Original:

I think television definitely benefits the society. First of all, with television available, people no longer need to use newspapers to get news. Meanwhile, these newspapers are really inefficient because you can only read the news about yesterday. But in TV, people can watch the latest news happen today. Meanwhile, there are some discovery channels in television, so people can broaden their horizons without actually travelling to somewhere distant. So I think having a television definitely improves the society and makes it more efficient.

Revised:

I believe that television has had a positive influence on society. One reason is that television provides a more efficient way for people to access news compared to newspapers. With television, individuals can watch the latest news as it happens, whereas newspapers only offer information about events from the previous day. This allows society to stay better informed and up-to-date with current events.

Another advantage of television is the availability of educational and discovery channels. These channels enable people to broaden their horizons and learn about different cultures, places, and scientific advancements without having to travel long distances. This exposure to new information contributes to the overall growth and development of society, making it more knowledgeable and well-rounded.

I believe that television has had a positive influence on society. One reason is that television provides a more efficient way for people to access news compared to newspapers (revised for clarity and natural flow). With television, individuals can watch the latest news as it happens (revised for proper grammar), whereas newspapers only offer information about events from the previous day (revised for natural flow). This allows society to stay better informed and up-to-date with current events (revised for smooth transition).

Another advantage of television is the availability of educational and discovery channels (revised for clarity). These channels enable people to broaden their horizons and learn about different cultures, places, and scientific advancements without having to travel long distances (revised for proper grammar). This exposure to new information contributes to the overall growth and development of society, making it more knowledgeable and well-rounded (revised for strong conclusion).

Corrected:

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6. Display title: 6.Mind Map

- Preference/Opinion
  - Television benefits society

- Main Point
  - Efficient news source
    - Replaces newspapers
    - Provides latest news
  - Educational content
    - Discovery channels
    - Broadens horizons without travel

- Supporting Examples
  - News channels provide real-time updates
  - Educational programs offer insights into various topics

- Conclusion
  - Television improves society by providing efficient news and educational content

7. Display title: 7.Key Words

8. Display title: 8.Additional Examples

9. Television provides a platform for talented individuals to showcase their skills, such as in talent shows, which can inspire others to pursue their passions.

10. Documentaries on television raise awareness about important social and environmental issues, encouraging viewers to take action and make a positive impact.

11. Television offers a wide variety of entertainment options, catering to different tastes and preferences, promoting relaxation and stress relief after a long day.

12. Televised sports events bring people together, fostering a sense of community and camaraderie among fans.

13. Educational children's programs on television can help young learners develop essential skills and knowledge in an engaging and interactive way.