TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: We'll read a short passage about a campus situation, and then listen to a talk on the same topic. You will then answer a question using information from both reading passage and the Top. After the question, you will have 30 seconds to prepare your response and 60 seconds to speak. Listen to two students discussing the article.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿不太自然。建议在练习时注意提高语言的流利度，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，能够明确地表达观点，并提供了一定的支持和例证。但在某些地方可以进一步完善，例如在提到学生乘坐公交车去市区需要花费很长时间时，可以更详细地说明这对学生的影响。此外，在论述学生无法承担购车成本时，可以提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。总体来说，在练习时要注意加强观点之间的联系，并尽量提供充足的支持或例证。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the passage, the school announces that they have collaborated with a local renting company to offer renting cars for the students. In the passage, the university announces that they have partnered with a local car rental company to offer rental cars to students.（将"school"改为"university"，"renting company"改为"car rental company"，以更准确地描述文章中的信息。同时，调整句子结构使其更自然。）

First of all, it is easier for the students to travel to town and go shopping there. Firstly, this program makes it more convenient for students to travel to town and go shopping.（使用"Firstly"代替"First of all"，并调整句子结构使其更自然。）

Besides, since the students couldn't afford one car, it will give them access to cars. Moreover, since many students cannot afford their own car, this program provides them with access to vehicles.（使用"Moreover"代替"Besides"，并调整句子结构使其更自然。）

In the conversation, the woman totally agrees with his plan. In the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this program.（将"his plan"改为"this program"，以更准确地描述对话中的内容。）

First of all, she thinks that it will take at least two hours for the students to go to the town by bus, which is quite a part of their days. Firstly, she believes that it will take students at least two hours to travel to town by bus, which consumes a significant portion of their day.（调整句子结构使其更自然。）

And if they want to go to much shops, the time will be longer. Furthermore, if they want to visit multiple shops, the time spent will be even longer.（调整句子结构使其更自然。）

So it's an easier choice to drive to town. Therefore, driving to town is a more convenient option.（调整句子结构使其更自然。）

In addition, she thinks that the students couldn't manage a car, which means it's expensive for the students to add gas and solve car problems. In addition, she believes that owning a car is unmanageable for students due to expenses such as gas and car maintenance.（调整句子结构使其更自然。）

As a result, it's an easier solution for lots of students. As a result, this program offers an easier solution for many students.（调整句子结构使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the passage, the university announces that they have partnered with a local car rental company to offer rental cars to students. Firstly, this program makes it more convenient for students to travel to town and go shopping. Moreover, since many students cannot afford their own car, this program provides them with access to vehicles. In the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this program. Firstly, she believes that it will take students at least two hours to travel to town by bus, which consumes a significant portion of their day. Furthermore, if they want to visit multiple shops, the time spent will be even longer. Therefore, driving to town is a more convenient option. In addition, she believes that owning a car is unmanageable for students due to expenses such as gas and car maintenance. As a result, this program offers an easier solution for many students.

6.思维导图

• University partnership

  • Local car rental company
  • Rental cars for students

• Benefits

  • Convenience
    • Travel to town
    • Shopping
  • Affordability
    • Access to vehicles without ownership

• Conversation agreement

  • Bus travel time-consuming
  • Multiple shops visit takes longer
  • Driving more convenient option
  • Car ownership unmanageable for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但有些地方需要改进。建议在练习发音时注意语速和停顿，以便让听众更容易理解。同时，注意一些单词的发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步改进。在提到文章和对话中的观点时，请确保更清楚地表达它们之间的联系，并提供足够的支持或例子。此外，尝试使用更多的连接词来帮助组织你的回答，使其更加流畅。

5.语言使用

原文：In the passage, the school announces that they have collaborated with a local renting company to offer renting cars for the students. In the passage, the university announced a collaboration with a local car rental company to provide rental cars for students.（学校应改为大学，renting company应改为car rental company，offer renting cars应改为provide rental cars。）

First of all, it would be easier for the students to travel to town and go shopping there. Firstly, this would make it more convenient for students to travel to town and shop there.（首先，应使用Firstly替换First of all，并使用more convenient替换easier。）

Besides, the students couldn't afford one car, so it would give them access to cars. Moreover, many students cannot afford their own car, so this program would grant them access to vehicles.（此外，应使用Moreover替换Besides，并使用cannot afford their own car替换couldn't afford one car，以及使用grant them access to vehicles替换give them access to cars。）

In the conversation, the woman told her great success plan. In the conversation, the woman expressed her satisfaction with the new program.（在对话中，应使用expressed her satisfaction with the new program替换told her great success plan。）

First off, she thinks that it would take at least two hours for the students to go to the town by taking a bus, which is quite a part of their days. Firstly, she believes that taking a bus to town would consume at least two hours, which is a significant portion of their day.（首先，应使用believes替换thinks，并使用consume替换take，以及使用a significant portion of their day替换quite a part of their days。）

And they do not have too much time to go shopping here, and it's easier for them to drive to town. As a result, they have limited time for shopping, and driving to town would be more convenient.（因此，应使用As a result替换And，并使用limited time替换do not have too much time，以及使用more convenient替换easier。）

Besides, the students couldn't manage a car, which means it's expensive for them to add gas and solve car problems. Furthermore, owning a car is costly for students due to expenses such as fuel and maintenance.（此外，应使用Furthermore替换Besides，并使用owning a car is costly for students due to expenses such as fuel and maintenance替换couldn't manage a car, which means it's expensive for them to add gas and solve car problems。）

As a result, it would be an easier solution for lots of the students. Therefore, this program offers a more accessible solution for many students.（因此，应使用Therefore替换As a result，并使用offers a more accessible solution替换would be an easier solution。）

修订版（140词）：

In the passage, the university announced a collaboration with a local car rental company to provide rental cars for students. Firstly, this would make it more convenient for students to travel to town and shop there. Moreover, many students cannot afford their own car, so this program would grant them access to vehicles. In the conversation, the woman expressed her satisfaction with the new program. Firstly, she believes that taking a bus to town would consume at least two hours, which is a significant portion of their day. As a result, they have limited time for shopping, and driving to town would be more convenient. Furthermore, owning a car is costly for students due to expenses such as fuel and maintenance. Therefore, this program offers a more accessible solution for many students.

6.思维导图

• University collaboration

  • Local car rental company
  • Rental cars for students

• Benefits

  • Convenience
    • Travel to town
    • Shopping
  • Affordability
    • Access to vehicles
    • No ownership costs

• Conversation

  • Satisfaction with the program
  • Time-saving
    • Bus vs. driving
  • Costly car ownership
    • Fuel and maintenance expenses

7.关键词