TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答相对清晰，流畅度尚可，但偶尔有停顿。为了提高发音准确性，请注意纠正发音错误。此外，请注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言表达的连贯性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，可以尝试更清晰地阐述观点，并在解释原因时提供更多详细信息。为了提高话题发展水平，请注意在回答中明确表达观点，并确保在解释原因时提供充分的支持或例子。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading, a student proposes that the university should let students borrow cameras from the course. In the reading passage, a student proposes that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras from the art department. (原文中提到的是让所有学生从艺术系借相机，而不仅仅是从课程中借相机。) In this way, students can advance their photograph skills, By doing so, students can enhance their photography skills, (使用“enhance”更自然，同时注意将“photograph”改为“photography”。) and if the learning time is shortened, many students can access the cameras. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. Firstly, most of the cameras are technologically sophisticated, so it is not easy for all students to use it without receiving any training before. And secondly, the students who take part in the photograph class have to take a lot of time to finish the assignment, and it's almost impossible for them to finish the assignment in such a shortened time. They have to go off-campus and shoot at different locations, which is not convenient to use the cameras.

Revised Answer (140 words): In the reading passage, a student proposes that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras from the art department. By doing so, students can enhance their photography skills, and if the loan time is reduced, more students could have access to these cameras. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this proposal for two main reasons. First, most of these cameras are technologically advanced, making it difficult for students without prior training to use them effectively. Second, photography students need a significant amount of time to complete their assignments, and it would be nearly impossible for them to finish within a shortened time frame. These assignments often require off-campus shooting at various locations, making the proposed camera usage inconvenient.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Proposal: Allow all students to borrow cameras
  • Benefits: Enhance photography skills, more students access cameras

• Conversation

  • Man's disagreement
    • Reason 1: Technologically advanced cameras, difficult without training
    • Reason 2: Photography students need more time for assignments, shortened time frame not feasible

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

由于回答中没有任何内容，无法评估发音、语速和停顿等方面的问题。建议重新录制回答，并确保提供完整的信息。

4.话题发展 回答没有提供关于提案的总结，也没有说明男子对提案的看法以及他给出的理由。请重新组织回答，确保包含所有要求的信息。

5.语言使用

原回答：🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨 无回答（原回答没有提供任何内容，因此无法评估语言使用方面的问题。请重新录制回答，并确保提供完整的信息。）

修订后的回答（满分30分）：

In the proposal, Mary suggests that all university students should be allowed to borrow the high-quality professional cameras owned by the art department, instead of just those enrolled in photography courses. She believes that this would give more students the opportunity to advance their photography skills. To accommodate this change, she proposes shortening the loan time from a full day to a couple of hours.

However, the man disagrees with Mary's proposal for two main reasons. First, he believes that most people would not benefit much from using these sophisticated cameras without extensive training, as they have many settings and adjustments. Second, he argues that the assignments for photography students are time-consuming and often require going off-campus to shoot in various locations. If everyone had access to the cameras as Mary suggests, it would be nearly impossible for photography students to complete their assignments within the shortened loan time.

总结：请确保在回答中使用高级词汇、正确的语法、自然的陈述流程、平滑的过渡和有力的结论。同时，请注意使用自然 sounding 的语言风格。

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • All university students borrow cameras
  • Shorten loan time

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Sophisticated technology
    • Extensive training needed
  • Time-consuming assignments
    • Off-campus locations
    • Impossible to complete within shortened loan time

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：0

• 主题发展：0

• 语言使用：0

2.预估分数

• 总分：0

3.表达 由于回答与问题无关，无法评估表达方面的得分。请重新回答问题，并确保内容与问题相关。

4.话题发展 回答没有涉及到问题的主题，因此无法评估话题发展方面的得分。请重新回答问题，并确保内容与问题相关。

5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. (原回答与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

修正后的回答：The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. He believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn and can use the existing walkways instead. He also thinks that the dirt path looks more natural and beautiful than a concrete sidewalk would.

根据审阅建议修改后的完整回答（140词）：

The proposal in Patty Greene's letter suggests paving a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to prevent muddy shoes and improve the lawn's appearance. However, the man disagrees with this proposal for two reasons. First, he believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn as there are already nice walkways around that area. He thinks students can avoid getting their shoes dirty by taking an extra minute or two to walk around using these existing paths. Second, he finds the dirt path more natural and beautiful compared to a concrete sidewalk. In his opinion, covering the path with concrete would ruin its natural beauty. Therefore, he believes that the lawn should remain as it is without any changes.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Pave sidewalk
  • Main lawn on campus

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees
  • Reasons
    • Existing walkways
    • Natural beauty

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的语言流利度和语速基本上是一致的，偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意提高发音准确性，尤其是在一些单词的发音上。此外，适当减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间也有明确的联系。但在论述原因时可以更具体一些，给出更充分的支持或例子。建议在练习时注意提高论述深度和完整性，以便更好地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the students think that the university should pave a dirty path with concrete. First of all, they think that by doing so, the students won't get mud in their foot. And besides, they think that it will just make the route more attractive. And the man in the conversation doesn't like his idea. First of all, he thinks that the students don't have the motive to do it. I mean, he said that there's already a road, so they don't have to walk through this dirty path. They just can spend an extra minute to walk through the road. And also, he thinks that this road will just make them look natural. I mean, if you create concrete, the students think that you will just ruin it. And he didn't like concrete.

Corrected Answer: Well, some students believe that the university should pave a dirt path with concrete. Firstly, they argue that by doing so, students won't get mud on their shoes. Additionally, they believe that it would make the path more attractive. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this idea. He believes that students don't have a valid reason for taking this shortcut since there's already a paved walkway nearby; they could simply take an extra minute to use it instead of walking through the dirt path. Furthermore, he thinks that leaving the path as is preserves its natural appearance and beauty; paving it with concrete would only ruin its charm. (修改了一些词汇和句子结构，使语言更自然、连贯。同时，对一些表达进行了调整，使其更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Some students believe that the university should pave a dirt path with concrete for two main reasons. Firstly, they argue that paving the path would prevent students from getting mud on their shoes during rainy days. Additionally, they believe that a paved path would be more visually appealing. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. He believes that students don't have a valid reason for taking this shortcut since there's already a paved walkway nearby; they could simply take an extra minute to use it instead of walking through the dirt path. Furthermore, he thinks that leaving the path as is preserves its natural appearance and beauty; paving it with concrete would only ruin its charm. In conclusion, the man opposes the idea of paving the dirt path due to its unnecessary nature and potential negative impact on the environment.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Pave dirt path with concrete
    - Reasons
      - Prevent mud on shoes
      - More visually appealing

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with proposal
    - Reasons
      - No valid reason for shortcut
        - Paved walkway nearby
      - Preserve natural appearance and beauty
        - Concrete would ruin charm

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

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5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The proposal suggests creating a bicycle-borrowing program at State University.（原文与题目无关，已修改为与题目相关的回答。）

修改后的回答： The proposal suggests creating a bicycle-borrowing program at State University. The man supports the proposal because he believes it would help reduce car traffic on campus and encourage students to get more exercise. He explains that the campus is large, and many students drive to get around, causing traffic congestion. If more students used bicycles, traffic would improve. Additionally, the man mentions that he is busy with classes and part-time jobs, so he doesn't have time for regular exercise. Using the bicycle-borrowing program would allow him to incorporate exercise into his daily routine without setting aside extra time.

根据审阅建议修改后的回答（140字）： The proposal suggests creating a bicycle-borrowing program at State University. The man supports the proposal as it would help reduce car traffic on campus and encourage students to exercise more. He explains that the large campus causes many students to drive, leading to traffic congestion. If more students used bicycles, traffic would improve. Additionally, he mentions his busy schedule with classes and part-time jobs leaves no time for regular exercise. Using the bicycle-borrowing program would allow him to incorporate exercise into his daily routine without setting aside extra time.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Bicycle-borrowing program
  - State University

- Man's opinion
  - Supports proposal
  - Reasons
    - Reduce car traffic
      - Large campus
      - Traffic congestion
    - Encourage exercise
      - Busy schedule
      - Incorporate into daily routine

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 24

3.表达 整体而言，你的发言表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅度，请注意在句子之间保持连贯，并尽量减少不自然的停顿。此外，在发音方面，需要注意一些单词的准确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 你的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，能够明确地表达出男生对提议的看法及其原因。但在描述提议时，建议将“students proposed the university”修改为“Joanne Grant proposed to the university”，以更准确地反映阅读材料中的信息。此外，在解释男生同意提议的原因时，可以尝试使用更多连接词（如“因此”、“然后”等），以使回答更加流畅和有条理。

5.语言使用

原文：In the lecture, the students proposed the university to create a bicycle borrowing program. In the reading passage, Joanne Grant proposes that the university create a bicycle-borrowing program. (将“students proposed the university”修改为“Joanne Grant proposes that the university”，以更准确地反映阅读材料中的信息。) Firstly, it could substitute driving, and secondly, it could also encourage students to get more exercise. First, it would reduce car traffic on campus, and second, it would promote physical activity among students. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。) And the students totally agree with the point for following reasons. Firstly, it's actually a big campus, First, since the campus is quite large, (使用更自然的表达方式。) so many people try to drive to the class by the car, and it will always make the road crowded and stressful. However, there is a better option to solve the problem. They could just ride a bicycle to the class. And secondly, students are always busy with their education and part-time job, so as a consequence, they have little time to take an exercise. So as a consequence, they could add an exercise during the commute by riding the bicycle.

修订版（140词）：

In the reading passage, Joanne Grant proposes that the university create a bicycle-borrowing program. First, it would reduce car traffic on campus, and second, it would promote physical activity among students. The man in the conversation agrees with this proposal for the following reasons. First, since the campus is quite large, many people drive to class, causing traffic congestion and stress. By using bicycles instead of cars, students can alleviate this issue. Second, students often have busy schedules due to their academic commitments and part-time jobs, leaving them with limited time for exercise. By incorporating cycling into their daily commute, they can effortlessly integrate physical activity into their routine, benefiting their overall health.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Joanne Grant's proposal
    - Bicycle-borrowing program
      - Reduce car traffic
      - Promote physical activity

- Conversation
  - Man's opinion
    - Agrees with the proposal
      - Reason 1: Large campus
        - Traffic congestion and stress
        - Solution: Use bicycles instead of cars
      - Reason 2: Busy schedules
        - Limited time for exercise
        - Solution: Incorporate cycling into daily commute

7.关键词