TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article.Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体而言，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现尚可，但仍有改进空间。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注重逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加紧密。此外，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试给出更具体的信息，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The passage discussed the summer study abroad in Peru is cancelled because it's low enrollment due to its lack of resources and funding, and also the option for the other Spanish Peru summer. The man in the conversation didn't think it's a great idea. Firstly, he believed that it still leaves time to recruit more applicants. Furthermore, the high requirements prevent these applicants, including the three recommendations and high grades. Secondly, it's not enough to just take their language course. It should be enjoyed in the culture, which to make it a real plan.

Corrected Answer: The passage discussed the that summer study abroad in Peru is cancelled canceled because it's of its low enrollment due to its lack of resources and funding, and also the option for the other Spanish Peru language summer programs. The man in the conversation didn't think it'sit was a great idea.(原文中的“the”应改为“that”，因为这里是引述句子。此外，将“cancelled”改为美式拼写“canceled”。将“it's”改为“of its”，使句子更通顺。将“Peru”改为“language”，以避免重复。最后，将“it's”改为过去时态的“it was”。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The passage discussed that the summer study abroad program in Peru was canceled due to its low enrollment, which resulted from a lack of resources and funding. Additionally, the university offered other Spanish language summer programs as alternatives. The man in the conversation disagreed with the decision to cancel the program. He believed that there was still time to recruit more applicants by relaxing the stringent requirements, such as obtaining three recommendation letters and maintaining high grades. Moreover, he argued that merely participating in a language course was insufficient; students should also immerse themselves in the local culture to make the experience truly worthwhile. He expressed his interest in Peru's unique history and culture, which could not be found in other Spanish-speaking countries, making the cancellation particularly disappointing for him.

6.思维导图

• Cancellation

  • Low enrollment
  • Lack of resources and funding

• Alternative Spanish language programs

• Man's disagreement

  • Time to recruit more applicants
  • Relaxing requirements
    • Recommendation letters
    • High grades
  • Cultural immersion
    • Interest in Peru's history and culture

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得较好，能够概括文章中的计划并阐述男生对该计划的看法及原因。但是，在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡词，使回答更加连贯和有逻辑性。同时，可以尝试提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, in the reading, we know that the university has decided to use the new DegreeNavigate website to keep track of students' requirements. Because first off, it's easier for students to plan their schedules. Moreover, it will reduce the workload for school's advisors. In the reading, we learn that the university plans to implement a new Degree Navigator website to help students monitor their course requirements. This will make it easier for them to plan their schedules and reduce the workload for academic advisors. (在原文中，我们可以看到“因为首先”这个短语的使用不太自然，建议改为“This will”，使句子更加连贯。同时，注意使用更准确的词汇，如“implement”和“academic advisors”。)

The main conversation seems is a great idea for students. The man in the conversation believes this is a great idea for students. (原句中的表述较为混乱，建议重新组织语言以清晰表达男生的观点。)

First off, some students will actually miss some courses. Firstly, some students might unintentionally miss required courses. (在这里，“will”改为“might”更符合语境，同时使用“unintentionally”使句子更加自然。)

For example, his friend must delay his graduation because he misses some courses that he need to take before graduation. For instance, his friend had to postpone his graduation because he missed a required course that he needed to complete before graduating. (注意使用更准确的词汇，如“postpone”和“required course”，同时注意保持一致的时态。)

Moreover, most of advisors are professors, they don't have much time and very busy. Furthermore, since most advisors are also professors, they have limited time and are quite busy. (在这里，建议使用“since”引导原因状语从句，并注意使用更自然的表达方式。)

Thanks to this plan, they can talk about more important things with students like internship and switching to majors. With this plan in place, they can discuss more important matters with students, such as internships and changing majors. (注意使用更自然的表达方式，并在列举时使用逗号分隔。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading, we learn that the university plans to implement a new Degree Navigator website to help students monitor their course requirements. This will make it easier for them to plan their schedules and reduce the workload for academic advisors. The man in the conversation believes this is a great idea for students. Firstly, some students might unintentionally miss required courses. For instance, his friend had to postpone his graduation because he missed a required course that he needed to complete before graduating. Furthermore, since most advisors are also professors, they have limited time and are quite busy. With this plan in place, they can discuss more important matters with students, such as internships and changing majors.

6.思维导图

- Degree Navigator website
  - Monitor course requirements
  - Easier schedule planning
  - Reduced workload for academic advisors

- Man's opinion
  - Great idea for students
    - Avoid missing required courses
      - Example: friend's postponed graduation
    - Advisors' limited time and busy schedules
      - Focus on important matters
        - Internships and changing majors

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确度，避免因发音不准确而导致的拼写错误。同时，尽量减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得较好，能够清晰地概括文章内容并阐述男生的观点及理由。但在某些地方，发言者可以进一步完善论述逻辑和衔接。例如，在提到男生朋友因为没选到课程而延误毕业的例子时，可以更明确地指出这个例子是用来支持网站对学生有帮助的观点。此外，在谈到教授们很忙时，可以更具体地说明网站如何帮助他们减轻工作负担。总之，在练习时注意加强论述逻辑和衔接，并尝试提供更多具体细节以支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, in the reading, we know that the university has decided to ask students to use the Moon Degree Navigator website because, first of all, it will be easier for them to monitor their courses and also this can help reduce the work for academic advisors. Well, in the reading, we learn that the university has decided to introduce the Degree Navigator website for students because it will make it easier for them to track their courses and also help reduce the workload of academic advisors.（将“ask”改为“introduce”，使语言更自然；将“Moon Degree Navigator”改为“Degree Navigator”，纠正拼写错误；将“monitor”改为“track”，使词汇更准确；将“reduce the work”改为“reduce the workload”，使表达更准确。）

The main conversation phase is a great idea because, The man thinks it's a great idea because,（将“The main conversation phase”改为“The man”，使表达更清晰。）

first of all, the website can be very helpful since students have a lot of different classes they need to take for graduation and it's hard for them to stay organized. firstly, the website can be very helpful as students have numerous classes they need to complete for graduation, and it's challenging for them to stay organized.（将“first of all”改为“firstly”，使语言更自然；将“a lot of different classes”改为“numerous classes”，提高词汇水平；将“hard”改为“challenging”，提高词汇水平。）

If students miss a course, there will be trouble. If students miss a required course, they may face difficulties.（将“there will be trouble”改为“they may face difficulties”，使表达更准确。）

For example, his friend had to stay on campus to take a class to get a degree and his graduation was delayed. For instance, his friend had to remain on campus to complete a class for his degree, resulting in a delayed graduation.（将“stay”改为“remain”，提高词汇水平；将“to get a degree”改为“for his degree”，使表达更清晰；将“and”改为“resulting in”，使句子结构更复杂。）

So, this website may help them avoid this kind of mistake. Thus, this website could help them avoid such mistakes.（将“So”改为“Thus”，提高词汇水平；将“this kind of mistake”改为“such mistakes”，使语言更自然。）

And also, the academic advisors are very busy and they are basically professors and they do not really have extra time to do this kind of job. Additionally, academic advisors, who are essentially professors, do not have much spare time for these tasks.（将“And also”改为“Additionally”，提高词汇水平；简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

So, if the website can help them do that, they will have more time to help students to advise serious issues like switching majors or doing internships. Therefore, if the website can assist them in this regard, they will have more time to guide students on significant issues such as changing majors or pursuing internships.（将“help them do that”改为“assist them in this regard”，提高词汇水平；将“advise”改为“guide”，使词汇更准确；将“serious issues”改为“significant issues”，提高词汇水平。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

Well, in the reading, we learn that the university has decided to introduce the Degree Navigator website for students because it will make it easier for them to track their courses and also help reduce the workload of academic advisors. The man thinks it's a great idea because, firstly, the website can be very helpful as students have numerous classes they need to complete for graduation, and it's

6.思维导图

• Introduction

  • Reading summary
  • Man's opinion

• Reasons for the man's opinion

  • Helpful for students
    • Numerous classes
    • Challenging to stay organized
    • Avoid mistakes (example: delayed graduation)
  • Benefits for academic advisors
    • Busy professors
    • Limited spare time
    • Focus on significant issues (examples: changing majors, pursuing internships)

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方可以进一步加强。例如，在总结计划时，可以更清楚地说明这个计划是为了让更多的新生能够参加远离校园的入学培训。此外，在解释男生对计划的看法时，可以更详细地描述他因为没有参加入学培训而错过了工作机会。总体来说，建议在练习时关注提高回答的条理性和完整性。

5.语言使用

原文：The plan states a proposal of off-campus orientation sessions. The plan proposes off-campus orientation sessions.（将“states a proposal of”更改为“proposes”，使句子更简洁。） This way, more students could attend the orientation, and the students can access to more information. In this way, more students would be able to attend the orientation and gain access to valuable information.（使用“would be able to”代替“could”，使句子更自然；将“can access to”更改为“gain access to”，使表达更准确。） The man thought this was a good idea, because during the first year of his study course, he didn't attend these orientation sessions since he couldn't afford the plane tickets and wanted to get him to the sessions. The man believes this is a good idea because he couldn't attend the orientation sessions during his first year due to the high cost of plane tickets.（简化句子，使其更清晰。） And several of his classmates or friends didn't go to the sessions as well, and it would be cheaper if the university used this plan. Additionally, many of his classmates and friends also missed the sessions, so implementing this plan would make it more affordable for them.（使用“Additionally”代替“And”，使句子更连贯；将“it would be cheaper if”更改为“implementing this plan would make it more affordable”，使表达更准确。） And the student also got the handbook ahead of time, and eventually some roommates found jobs at these sessions. The student received the handbook in advance, and some of his roommates secured jobs through these sessions.（使用“in advance”代替“ahead of time”，使句子更自然；将“found jobs at”更改为“secured jobs through”，使表达更准确。） They already heard and applied, and all of them filled out the sessions, but since he was in the East Coast, he did not receive these sort of sessions, therefore, he did not get information about these jobs. They had already heard about and applied for the jobs, but since he was on the East Coast, he missed out on such opportunities and lacked information about these positions.（使用“on the East Coast”代替“in the East Coast”，使句子更自然；将“did not receive these sort of sessions”更改为“missed out on such opportunities”，使表达更准确。） However, with this new opportunity, it's different. Nevertheless, with this new plan in place, things would be different.（使用“Nevertheless”代替“However”，使句子更连贯；将“it's different”更改为“things would be different”，使表达更准确。）

修订版（140词）：

The plan proposes off-campus orientation sessions. In this way, more students would be able to attend the orientation and gain access to valuable information. The man believes this is a good idea because he couldn't attend the orientation sessions during his first year due to the high cost of plane tickets. Additionally, many of his classmates and friends also missed the sessions, so implementing this plan would make it more affordable for them. The student received the handbook in advance, and some of his roommates secured jobs through these sessions. They had already heard about and applied for the jobs, but since he was on the East Coast, he missed out on such opportunities and lacked information about these positions. Nevertheless, with this new plan in place, things would be different.

6.思维导图

- Plan
  - Off-campus orientation sessions

- Benefits
  - More students attend
  - Access to valuable information

- Man's opinion
  - Positive
  - Personal experience
    - High cost of plane tickets
    - Missed job opportunities

- New plan's impact
  - More affordable
  - Increased access to resources and opportunities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流畅度。此外，发言者需要注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent response, summarizing the plan and stating the man's opinion about it. However, the response could be better organized by clearly distinguishing between the positive and negative aspects of the plan, as well as providing more specific examples from the listening passage to support the man's opinion. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on creating a more structured response and incorporating more details from the listening passage.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The plan proposes that the university will use solar energy panels on campus, this way it can reduce the cost for the campus, and there will be no inconvenience for the students. The plan involves installing solar energy panels on the university campus to reduce energy costs, without causing inconvenience to students. (建议使用更自然的语言表达，同时保持句子结构的简洁。)

The mayor had mixed feelings about this perspective. The man has mixed feelings about this plan. (将“市长”更正为“男子”，因为原文中提到的是两名学生在讨论。)

The campus had the right weather and the right locations, so it seems pretty practical to set up a couple of solar energy panels on the roof. The campus has suitable weather conditions and locations, making it practical to install solar panels on the roof. (使用更准确的词汇和语法结构来表达观点。)

Right now, the school spends a lot of money on the A.C., which can burn a lot of money. Currently, the school spends a significant amount on air conditioning, resulting in high expenses. (使用更恰当的词汇和语法结构来表达观点。)

However, the mayor wasn't so sure about the inconvenience. However, the man is uncertain about potential inconveniences. (将“市长”更正为“男子”，并使用更自然的语言表达。)

The whole point of that house is that in the evening, students can get out and enjoy there. The main purpose of the outdoor seating area is for students to relax and enjoy the evening atmosphere. (使用更准确的词汇和语法结构来表达观点。)

However, when there's a roof, most students couldn't do so. However, with the installation of solar panels, students may lose this opportunity. (使用更自然的语言表达，并保持句子结构的简洁。)

Overall, the mayor had mixed feelings about this perspective, but in the end, the plan seems a good idea. In conclusion, the man has mixed feelings about the plan but ultimately believes it is a good idea. (将“市长”更正为“男子”，并使用更自然的语言表达。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The plan involves installing solar energy panels on the university campus to reduce energy costs, without causing inconvenience to students. The man has mixed feelings about this plan. The campus has suitable weather conditions and locations, making it practical to install solar panels on the roof. Currently, the school spends a significant amount on air conditioning, resulting in high expenses. However, the man is uncertain about potential inconveniences. The main purpose of the outdoor seating area is for students to relax and enjoy the evening atmosphere. However, with the installation of solar panels, students may lose this opportunity. In conclusion, the man has mixed feelings about the plan but ultimately believes it is a good idea.

6.思维导图

• Plan

  • Solar energy panels
  • Reduce energy costs
  • No inconvenience to students

• Man's Opinion

  • Mixed feelings
    • Positive aspects
      • Suitable weather conditions
      • Practical installation on roof
      • High expenses on air conditioning
    • Negative aspects
      • Uncertainty about inconveniences
      • Loss of outdoor seating area for relaxation and enjoyment

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 主题发展（Topic Development）：3

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习口语时，注意保持连贯性和一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在表达观点时可以更加明确和有力。建议在练习时，尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇来使观点更加清晰。同时，在给出理由时，可以提供更具体的例子或详细说明，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The article suggests that students should limit time of student in working. The article suggests that the university should limit the working hours of students. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰) With that, students could focus on study and there will be more job available for more students. As a result, students can concentrate on their studies, and more job opportunities will be available for a larger number of students. (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的语言表达)

However, the man disagreed with this article with two reasons. However, the man disagreed with this policy for two reasons. (修正了用词，使表达更准确) First, this will be enough for students having less time in studying. First, this policy may result in students having less time to study. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰) That's because students who want earn money will still do job off campus instead of on the university. This is because students who want to earn money will still seek off-campus jobs instead of on-campus ones. (使用了更自然的语言表达和正确的介词)

And it will be easy for students working in library because there are less time going from the dormitory to the library. Moreover, it is more convenient for students working in the library as they spend less time commuting from their dormitories. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰) Second, the man stressed that instead of having more job in the campus, it's already hard for people to find students working in the university like students working in library to put books back to the shelves. Second, the man emphasized that rather than creating more jobs on campus, it is already difficult to find students willing to work in positions such as returning books to shelves in the library. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰，并使用了更高级的词汇)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The article suggests that the university should limit the working hours of students. As a result, students can concentrate on their studies, and more job opportunities will be available for a larger number of students. However, the man disagreed with this policy for two reasons. First, this policy may result in students having less time to study. This is because students who want to earn money will still seek off-campus jobs instead of on-campus ones. Moreover, it is more convenient for students working in the library as they spend less time commuting from their dormitories. Second, the man emphasized that rather than creating more jobs on campus, it is already difficult to find students willing to work in positions such as returning books to shelves in the library.

6.思维导图

- University Policy
  - Limit working hours
  - Focus on studies
  - More job opportunities

- Man's Disagreement
  - Less time to study
    - Off-campus jobs
    - Convenience of on-campus jobs
  - Difficulty finding students for jobs
    - Library example

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔出现停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意以下几点：适当减少不必要的停顿，保持语速的稳定性；在发音方面，需要注意一些单词的准确发音，以避免拼写错误。总体来说，发言者的表达能力较好，但仍有提升空间。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, summarizing the plan and stating the man's opinion about it. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific examples from the listening passage to support the man's opinion, such as mentioning the library job example. Additionally, the speaker should ensure that all ideas are connected clearly and logically to make the response more cohesive.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is going to reduce the maximum number of hours that students are allowed to work at on-campus job. But the man in listening part doesn't like this idea. Because, firstly, he presents an opposing view that students will have less time to do everything. As a student, they don't have much money, so they have to do some part-time jobs to make money. Therefore, if they cannot get enough payment from their on-campus jobs, they might have to find off-campus jobs, which undoubtedly will spend them more time commuting. Secondly, he thinks that he never heard about anyone's complaint that it's really hard to find an on-campus job. And in the library, there are...

Corrected Answer: The university is going to reduce the maximum number of hours that students are allowed to work at on-campus job on-campus jobs(因为是复数形式). But the man in listening part the listening passage(更自然的表达) doesn't like this idea. Because, firstly, he presents an opposing view that students will have less time to do everything. As a student(建议使用复数形式), they don't have much money, so they have to do some part-time jobs to make money. Therefore, if they cannot get enough payment from their on-campus jobs, they might have to find off-campus jobs, which undoubtedly will spend them more time commuting require more time for commuting(更自然的表达). Secondly, he thinks that he never heard about anyone's complaint that it's really hard to find an on-campus job. And in the library, there are...

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to reduce the maximum number of hours that students are allowed to work at on-campus jobs. However, the man in the listening passage disagrees with this idea. He argues that students will have less time for other activities because they will need to find off-campus jobs to make up for the reduced income. This will require more time for commuting, leaving them with less time for their studies. Furthermore, he believes that finding an on-campus job is not difficult, as he has never heard anyone complain about it being hard to find one. He also mentions that there are available positions in the library, indicating that there are enough on-campus job opportunities for students who want them. Overall, the man thinks the new policy will have unintended negative consequences for students' time management and job availability.

6.思维导图

- University plan
  - Reduce maximum hours for on-campus jobs

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons:
    - Less time for other activities
      - Need to find off-campus jobs
      - More time for commuting
    - Finding on-campus jobs not difficult
      - No complaints heard
      - Library job example

- Conclusion
  - Man believes policy will have negative consequences

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意以下几点：1. 在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言连贯性；2. 注意发音准确性，避免拼写错误。加强练习，相信你会取得更好的成绩。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, summarizing the plan and stating the man's opinion about it. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. To enhance the response, the speaker should focus on providing more specific details and examples from the listening passage to support the man's opinion. This will help to create a stronger connection between ideas and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the university is planning to close the vegetable garden due to the lack of care to the garden. The university plans to close the vegetable garden because it has not been well-maintained. (将句子结构进行了优化，使表达更清晰) But in the conversation, the man disagrees with this plan. However, the man in the conversation opposes this decision. (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) First, he thinks the reason why there are many grass in the garden is because many students lack of the knowledge of how to plant these vegetables. Firstly, he believes that the overgrowth of weeds is due to students' lack of knowledge about planting vegetables. (改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表达更准确) The university gave up too soon. They should provide some instructions about this. He thinks that the university is giving up prematurely and should offer guidance on gardening techniques. (优化了句子结构，使表达更连贯) And second, he thinks it is not a space for students to study because there is no shade in this area. Secondly, he argues that it's not an ideal study space for students due to the lack of shade in the area. (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) On the contrary, because it is sunny, it is suitable for vegetables to grow. On the other hand, the sunny conditions make it suitable for growing vegetables. (简化了句子结构，使表达更清晰)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to close the vegetable garden because it has not been well-maintained. However, the man in the conversation opposes this decision. Firstly, he believes that the overgrowth of weeds is due to students' lack of knowledge about planting vegetables. He thinks that the university is giving up prematurely and should offer guidance on gardening techniques. Secondly, he argues that it's not an ideal study space for students due to the lack of shade in the area. On the other hand, the sunny conditions make it suitable for growing vegetables. By providing more specific details and examples from the listening passage, as well as using advanced vocabulary and proper grammar, this revised answer demonstrates a natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and a strong conclusion, which would likely achieve a score of 30.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Close vegetable garden
  • Lack of maintenance

• Man's Opinion

  • Opposes decision
  • Reasons
    • Students' lack of knowledge
      • Need guidance on gardening techniques
    • Not ideal study space
      • Lack of shade
    • Suitable for growing vegetables

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上说得还算清楚，但有些地方可能需要稍微调整一下语速和停顿。为了提高发音的准确性，请注意一些拼写错误可能是由于发音不准确导致的。建议多加练习，提高发音和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在解释原因时可以再详细一些。例如，在谈到专业指导的重要性时，可以举例说明如何帮助学生更好地利用菜园。此外，在谈到阳光问题时，可以进一步解释为什么树荫对学生更有吸引力。总之，尝试在回答中提供更多具体的支持或例子来增强论点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is going to close the student vegetable garden since most students didn't utilize this garden. The university plans to close the student vegetable garden because most students have not been utilizing it. (将didn't改为have not been，使句子更自然。)

But the man in the listening part doesn't like this idea. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this plan. (将listening part改为conversation，使句子更准确。)

Because, firstly, he says that it's really difficult for students to get started to use utilize this garden. Firstly, he states that it is challenging for students to begin using the garden effectively. (删除重复的词汇，简化句子结构。)

Because there are a lot of requirements for them to follow. This is due to various requirements they need to adhere to. (使用更高级的词汇。)

So they just need some professional guidance to help them utilize this garden completely. Therefore, they require expert guidance to fully utilize the garden. (使用更高级的词汇。)

Secondly, he thinks that this garden is lack of shade where students would be able to read or get relaxed. Secondly, he believes that the garden lacks shaded areas for students to read or relax. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)

Since the weather is really hot and nobody wanna read under a hot sun. As the weather is quite hot, no one wants to read under the scorching sun. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to close the student vegetable garden because most students have not been utilizing it. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this plan. Firstly, he states that it is challenging for students to begin using the garden effectively. This is due to various requirements they need to adhere to, such as different water and space requirements for different plants. Therefore, they require expert guidance, like a professor-led workshop, to fully utilize the garden. Secondly, he believes that the garden lacks shaded areas for students to read or relax. As the weather is quite hot, no one wants to read under the scorching sun. He suggests that there are already many comfortable spots on campus with shade and trees, making it unnecessary to convert the garden into another study area.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Close student vegetable garden
  - Lack of utilization

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons:
    1. Challenging for students to use the garden effectively
       - Various requirements to adhere to
       - Need expert guidance (e.g., professor-led workshop)
    2. Garden lacks shaded areas for relaxation
       - Hot weather, uncomfortable to read under the sun
       - Existing comfortable spots on campus with shade and trees

7.关键词