TOEFL TPO 21 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the university’s plan. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion of the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 24

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are a few instances where the pacing could be improved, and some occasional pauses could be reduced. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice maintaining a consistent pace throughout the response and work on minimizing unnecessary pauses.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen the response. The speaker should focus on incorporating more direct quotes or paraphrases from the listening passage to better support their points and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the material.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: According to a recent announcement, the university plans to send students the latest information and campus events through daily email instead of weekly newspaper. The university recently announced plans to send students up-to-date information on campus events via daily emails, replacing the weekly newspaper. (Rephrased for clarity and natural flow) They believe that doing so students can get the most updated information. This change is expected to provide students with the most current information. (Simplified sentence structure) Also, it is a sensible move since students nowadays rely on internet so much. Additionally, this decision makes sense as students increasingly rely on the internet for communication. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) The Romana Conversation thinks that this is a great idea for two reasons. The woman in the conversation believes this plan is beneficial for two main reasons. (Clarified subject and improved vocabulary) First, she says that email is just a daily reminder helping her to catch up with all the fun things. Firstly, she mentions that daily emails serve as reminders, helping her stay informed about various events. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) And even if the concert that she is going to cancel the last minute, she would know before the event through daily email. Furthermore, if an event like a concert were to be canceled at the last minute, she would be informed beforehand via the daily email. (Rephrased for clarity and natural flow) Furthermore, she says that students will definitely read the email once a day and it would be more exciting if the university could include the cafe menu in the email. She also believes that students will certainly check their emails daily, and including the cafeteria menu would make it even more appealing. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university recently announced plans to send students up-to-date information on campus events via daily emails, replacing the weekly newspaper. This change is expected to provide students with the most current information. Additionally, this decision makes sense as students increasingly rely on the internet for communication. The woman in the conversation believes this plan is beneficial for two main reasons. Firstly, she mentions that daily emails serve as reminders, helping her stay informed about various events. Furthermore, if an event like a concert were to be canceled at the last minute, she would be informed beforehand via the daily email. She also believes that students will certainly check their emails daily, and including the cafeteria menu would make it even more appealing.

6. Mind Map

- University announcement
  - Daily emails
    - Replace weekly newspaper
    - Up-to-date information

- Woman's opinion
  - Beneficial plan
    - Reasons:
      1. Daily reminders for events
      2. Last-minute cancellations notification
      3. Students check emails daily
      4. Including cafeteria menu (appealing)

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的语音清晰，流畅度较好，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括计划并阐述女生的观点及理由。但在表述时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇来增强句子之间的衔接，使回答更加连贯。此外，在描述女生观点时，可以考虑使用更多具体的例子来支持观点，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: University plans to send daily emails about campus activities to all students in the university, and Man Woman strongly agrees with this plan. Firstly, she believes that if the information is in the newspaper, students might read it on Monday and forgot forget about activities scheduled for Thursday or Friday. Additionally, she thinks that if an activity is cancelled unexpectedly, students will be informed promotedly promptly through email. Furthermore, she believes that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they don't miss any important updates.

(将“Man”改为“Woman”，因为原文中是女生表达了观点。将“forgot”改为“forget”，以保持一致的时态。将“promotedly”改为“promptly”，以表示及时地。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to send daily emails containing information about campus activities to all students, and the woman strongly supports this initiative. She asserts that receiving information through a weekly newspaper is not as effective because students may read it on Monday and forget about events scheduled later in the week, such as on Thursday or Friday. Moreover, she contends that if an event is canceled unexpectedly, students will be promptly notified via email, preventing them from wasting time attending a non-existent event. Lastly, she is confident that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they stay informed about important updates and do not miss any crucial information. By implementing this daily email system, the university can provide a more efficient and reliable method of communication for its student body.

6.思维导图

• University plans

  • Daily emails
    • Campus activities

• Woman's opinion

  • Supportive
    • Reasons
      • Weekly newspaper inefficiency
        • Forget events later in the week
      • Prompt notification for cancellations
      • Daily email checking

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太恰当，导致句子的连贯性受到影响。建议发言者在练习时注意语音的连贯性和自然停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 发言者对于女生的观点和原因进行了较为充分的阐述，但在总结计划时略显简单。建议在描述计划时可以更详细地介绍一下具体内容，以使回答更加完整。同时，在组织回答时注意逻辑性和条理性，使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The university proposes to send daily news through email to every student about the campus event and activities. The university plans to send daily emails to all students about campus events and activities.（将“proposes”改为“plans”，使句子更自然；将“news through email”改为“emails”，简化表达；将“every student”改为“all students”，使表达更准确。）

And the girl in the conversation agrees with this idea because the newspaper just fails to send the most up-to-date information to students because it's a weekly newspaper. The woman in the conversation supports this plan as the weekly newspaper cannot provide the most current information to students.（将“girl”改为“woman”，使表达更恰当；简化句子结构，避免重复使用“because”。）

So for instance, when a student reads the newspaper on Monday, she'll just forget the information about conference or about film. For example, when a student reads the newspaper on Monday, they might forget about upcoming conferences or film screenings.（使用“they”代替“she”，使表达更中性；将“conference or about film”改为“upcoming conferences or film screenings”，使表达更清晰。）

However, if there's such email, then it will remind the students so that she wouldn't forget. However, with daily emails, students will be reminded of these events and won't forget them.（简化句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And even if the activities get cancelled, the students will know it immediately instead of wasting time showing up there. Moreover, if events are cancelled, students will be informed promptly, preventing them from wasting time attending.（使用“moreover”代替“and”，使表达更连贯；简化句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And the second reason is that actually students will check the newspaper every day so that if the school could include cafeteria menu in this, students will be more interested. The second reason is that students check their email daily, and if the school includes the cafeteria menu, it would increase their interest in reading these emails.（将“newspaper”改为“email”，避免混淆；简化句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And these are the two reasons why students think it's a reasonable idea. These are the two reasons why the woman believes this plan is beneficial for students.（将“students”改为“the woman”，使表达更准确；将“reasonable idea”改为“beneficial for students”，使表达更清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to send daily emails to all students about campus events and activities. The woman in the conversation supports this plan as the weekly newspaper cannot provide the most current information to students. For example, when a student reads the newspaper on Monday, they might forget about upcoming conferences or film screenings. However, with daily emails, students will be reminded of these events and won't forget them. Moreover, if events are cancelled, students will be informed promptly, preventing them from wasting time attending. The second reason is that students check their email daily, and if the school includes the cafeteria menu, it would increase their interest in reading these emails. These are the two reasons why the woman believes this plan is beneficial for students.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Daily emails
  - Campus events and activities

- Woman's Opinion
  - Supports the plan
  - Reasons
    - Weekly newspaper limitations
      - Not up-to-date
      - Easy to forget events
    - Daily email benefits
      - Reminders for events
      - Cancellations informed promptly
      - Increased interest (cafeteria menu)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在提到活动取消时，可以更详细地解释这种情况下邮件通知的优势。此外，在论述学生查看邮件的习惯时，可以提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。建议发言者在练习时尝试提供更多相关的支持和例子，以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The university is planning to send a daily email about the activities held in the university to all the students, The university plans to send daily emails about campus activities to all students, (将“is planning to”简化为“plans to”，将“held in the university”改为“campus”，使句子更简洁自然。) and the woman totally agrees with the idea. and the woman strongly agrees with this plan. (用“strongly agrees”替换“totally agrees”，使表达更地道。)

First off, she thinks that if the information was contained in the newspaper and they read about it on Monday and will forget the activities which will hold maybe Thursday or Friday. Firstly, she believes that if the information is in the newspaper, students might read it on Monday and forget about activities scheduled for Thursday or Friday. (修改时态，简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

Besides, she thinks if the activities will cancel by accident, they will find out at time when the information was sent by email. Additionally, she thinks that if an activity is canceled unexpectedly, students will be informed promptly through email. (修正语法错误，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。)

Besides, she thinks that all the students will check up the email once a day so they won't ignore the information. Furthermore, she believes that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they don't miss any important updates. (避免重复使用“besides”，改为“furthermore”，并简化句子结构。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to send daily emails about campus activities to all students, and the woman strongly agrees with this plan. Firstly, she believes that if the information is in the newspaper, students might read it on Monday and forget about activities scheduled for Thursday or Friday. Additionally, she thinks that if an activity is canceled unexpectedly, students will be informed promptly through email. Furthermore, she believes that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they don't miss any important updates. By receiving daily emails, students can stay up-to-date with campus events and make better use of available opportunities. The woman also suggests including the cafeteria menu in the emails to encourage more students to read them. Overall, she is confident that this new plan will greatly benefit the university community.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Daily emails
  • Campus activities

• Woman's Opinion

  • Strongly agrees
  • Reasons
    • Newspaper limitations
    • Prompt updates
    • Daily email checking
  • Additional suggestion
    • Include cafeteria menu

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得较好，能够清楚地总结计划并陈述女生的观点及理由。但在表述过程中，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇，使得回答更加连贯和有条理。此外，可以适当举例或提供更多细节来支持观点，使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman holds a very positive attitude towards the plan. She thinks it is very necessary to switch the media from newspaper to email. There are two reasons for this. First of all, students can get the exact detail for everything daily and it will be a good reminder so that they won't forget the daily schedule and they can show up at the exact time when an event happens. And secondly, every student checks on their email at least once a day so it will be a

Corrected Answer: The woman has a very positive attitude towards the plan. She believes it is essential to switch from newspapers to emails as a medium for information dissemination. There are two main reasons for this. Firstly, students can receive accurate details about daily events, which serve as helpful reminders, ensuring they don't miss any activities and arrive on time. Secondly, since every student checks their email at least once a day, this method will be more effective. (将部分词汇替换为更高级的词汇，改善句子结构，使语言更自然流畅。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman has a very positive attitude towards the university's plan to send daily emails containing information about campus events and activities instead of using the campus newspaper. She believes that switching from newspapers to emails as a medium for information dissemination is essential for two main reasons. Firstly, students can receive accurate details about daily events through emails, which serve as helpful reminders, ensuring they don't miss any activities and arrive on time for each event. Secondly, since every student checks their email at least once a day, this method of communication will be more effective in reaching them and keeping them informed about campus happenings. By adopting this approach, the university can ensure that students are always up-to-date with the latest events and activities, leading to better engagement and participation in campus life.

6.思维导图

- Positive attitude
  - Switch from newspapers to emails
    - Essential
      - Two main reasons
        - Accurate details and reminders
          - Don't miss activities
          - Arrive on time
        - Effective communication method
          - Students check email daily
          - Better engagement and participation

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

24. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音准确度，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答较为完整，能够简要概括计划，并阐述女生对计划的看法及原因。但在组织结构上还有待加强，建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，使回答更加有条理和连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：The school proposed an idea that the compass events should be sent to students on a daily basis rather than once a week and keep the students up to date. The university proposed a plan to send campus events information to students daily instead of weekly, keeping them up-to-date.（将“school”改为“university”，将“compass events”改为“campus events information”，将“on a daily basis”改为“daily”，使句子更简洁。）

In this way, the woman has a positive attitude towards these ideas. The woman has a positive opinion about this plan.（将“in this way”删除，将“towards these ideas”改为“about this plan”，使句子更简洁。）

First, she thinks that she always forgot about information on Wednesdays or Thursdays because she usually tends to read the information on Monday. First, she believes that she often forgets about events happening on Wednesdays or Thursdays since she usually reads the information on Mondays.（将“thinks”改为“believes”，将“forgot”改为“forgets”，使句子更自然。）

So the daily notifications serve as a reminder. Thus, daily notifications will serve as reminders.（将“So”改为“Thus”，使句子更自然。）

So if something is cancelled, she would not waste any time on these things. Therefore, if an event is cancelled, she will not waste time on it.（将“on these things”改为“on it”，使句子更简洁。）

And secondly, she pointed out that actually every student will check the email box once a day. Secondly, she points out that students typically check their email at least once a day.（将“pointed out”改为“points out”，将“email box”改为“email”，使句子更自然。）

So the student will definitely read these informations. Thus, students will certainly read this information.（将“informations”改为“information”，使句子更自然。）

If the cafeteria checklist is posted, it will be more interesting. If the cafeteria menu is included, it will be even more appealing.（将“cafeteria checklist”改为“cafeteria menu”，将“interesting”改为“appealing”，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The university proposed a plan to send campus events information to students daily instead of weekly, keeping them up-to-date. The woman has a positive opinion about this plan. First, she believes that she often forgets about events happening on Wednesdays or Thursdays since she usually reads the information on Mondays. Thus, daily notifications will serve as reminders. Therefore, if an event is cancelled, she will not waste time on it. Secondly, she points out that students typically check their email at least once a day. Thus, students will certainly read this information. If the cafeteria menu is included, it will be even more appealing.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Daily emails
  • Campus events information

• Woman's Opinion

  • Positive
  • Reasons
    • Reminder for events
    • Avoid wasting time on cancelled events
    • Students check email daily
    • Inclusion of cafeteria menu

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方还是有些停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持一致。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。加强发音练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方还可以进一步完善。例如，在提到女生对每日邮件的看法时，可以更详细地解释她为什么认为这个计划有益。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出女生的观点和理由。多做练习，加强对话题发展的把握和组织能力。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the newspaper announcement(报纸应改为公告，因为这是关于公告的讨论), the school is going to send students a daily email about the campus events and activities. The woman is fully agree in agreement(应使用in agreement表示同意) of this new plan. To begin with, he she(应使用she，因为是指代女生) pointed out that the newspaper which used to send to students once a week is really out of date and sometimes it can't remind students of the newest and latest information about schools school events(应改为school events，更具体地表示学校活动). She also noted that the daily email really helps those events which cancel at the last minute and besides, she also said that it is a usual habit for students to check their email once a day and she also recommends them to put the cafeteria menu into the daily email information.

Revised (140 words): According to the announcement, the university plans to send students daily emails about campus events and activities. The woman is in full agreement with this new plan. Firstly, she points out that the weekly newspaper is outdated and sometimes fails to remind students of the most recent information about school events. She also notes that daily emails are beneficial for last-minute event cancellations, ensuring students are well-informed. Additionally, she mentions that it's a common habit for students to check their emails daily, making this an effective communication method. Lastly, she suggests including the cafeteria menu in the daily emails, which would further encourage students to read the emails and stay informed about campus activities. This revised answer demonstrates a more natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and a strong conclusion, aiming for a score of 30.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - Daily emails
    - Campus events and activities

- Woman's opinion
  - In agreement
    - Reasons
      - Outdated weekly newspaper
      - Last-minute cancellations
      - Common habit of checking emails daily
      - Suggestion: Include cafeteria menu

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

22. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语音较为清晰，语速基本稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流畅度。同时，注意准确发音，避免因发音不准确而导致的拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在连接思路和提供足够的支持或例子方面还有待加强。建议发言者在回答问题时更加注重逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加明确，并提供充分的支持或例子来支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the university will not send students a daily email containing information about campus events or activities. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the university will now send students a daily email containing information about campus events and activities.（将“not”改为“now”，因为原文中提到大学将每天发送包含活动信息的邮件。）

The first reason for this is that it does always provide up-to-date information. The first reason for this is that it provides up-to-date information.（删除“does always”，使句子更自然。）

And the second is that this change will benefit everyone. The second reason is that this change will benefit everyone.（将“And”改为“The second reason”，使句子更清晰。）

And from the conversation, the first reason is that news are not always giving the most up-to-date information. From the conversation, the woman believes that newspapers do not always provide the most up-to-date information.（修改句子结构，使其更自然。）

Facts come from once a week as a problem. The fact that newspapers come out once a week is a problem.（修改句子结构，使其更清晰。）

For example, the woman always reads the newspaper on the Monday and forgets counsel on Wednesday or Thursday. For example, the woman reads the newspaper on Mondays and forgets about events happening on Wednesday or Thursday.（修改句子结构，使其更自然。）

And the second reason is that students can know it if an event cancels at the last minute. The second reason is that students can be informed if an event is canceled at the last minute.（修改句子结构，使其更清晰。）

Moreover, everyone will read their email once a day. Moreover, everyone checks their email at least once a day.（将“will read”改为“checks”，使句子更自然。）

If they have a cafeteria menu, students will absolutely read this. If the cafeteria menu is included in the email, students will definitely read it.（修改句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the university will now send students a daily email containing information about campus events and activities. The first reason for this is that it provides up-to-date information. The second reason is that this change will benefit everyone. From the conversation, the woman believes that newspapers do not always provide the most up-to-date information. The fact that newspapers come out once a week is a problem. For example, the woman reads the newspaper on Mondays and forgets about events happening on Wednesday or Thursday. The second reason is that students can be informed if an event is canceled at the last minute. Moreover, everyone checks their email at least once a day. If the cafeteria menu is included in the email, students will definitely read it.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Daily email
  • Up-to-date information
  • Benefits everyone

• Conversation

  • Woman's opinion
    • Newspapers not always up-to-date
    • Weekly issue problematic
    • Forgetting events
  • Advantages of daily email
    • Last-minute cancellations
    • Everyone checks email daily
    • Cafeteria menu inclusion

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议在练习发音时注意语速和停顿，以便更自然地表达。同时，尽量减少不必要的停顿，以提高整体流畅度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以在解释原因时提供更多详细信息。例如，在谈到电子邮件的便利性时，可以进一步讨论为什么这对学生来说更实用。此外，在总结时可以再次强调女士对这个计划的看法，使回答更加完整。

5.语言使用

Original: The university plans to use the daily email instead of the newspaper to inform students about the events. The university plans to send daily emails, replacing the newspaper, to inform students about campus events. (将“使用日常电子邮件而不是报纸”修改为“发送日常电子邮件，取代报纸”，使表达更自然。)

Original: The woman totally agrees with this idea because of two reasons. The woman strongly agrees with this plan for two main reasons. (将“完全同意”修改为“强烈同意”，使表达更自然；将“这个想法”修改为“这个计划”，以保持一致性。)

Original: First off, she thinks that newspapers update their information once a week, and thus students are too forgetful to remember all the events happened next week, Firstly, she believes that since newspapers update their information weekly, students tend to forget about upcoming events, (将“首先”修改为“首先”，使表达更自然；简化句子结构，使其更清晰。)

Original: and therefore they may be wasting time to show up on certain events and find nobody there. resulting in wasted time when they attend events only to find no one there. (简化句子结构，使其更清晰。)

Original: And the second reason is that everyone will check their email to get their information, The second reason is that students frequently check their emails for information, (将“每个人”修改为“学生”，使表达更具体。)

Original: so there will be no trouble for them to check the email and be informed. so it would be convenient for them to stay informed through emails. (将“没有麻烦”修改为“方便”，使表达更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to send daily emails, replacing the newspaper, to inform students about campus events. The woman strongly agrees with this plan for two main reasons. Firstly, she believes that since newspapers update their information weekly, students tend to forget about upcoming events, resulting in wasted time when they attend events only to find no one there. The second reason is that students frequently check their emails for information, so it would be convenient for them to stay informed through emails. By receiving daily updates on campus activities, students can better plan their schedules and avoid missing out on important events. Furthermore, last-minute changes or cancellations can be communicated more effectively through emails, ensuring that students are always up-to-date with the latest information. Overall, the woman believes that this plan will greatly benefit the student community.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Daily emails
    - Replacing newspaper
    - Inform students about campus events

- Woman's Opinion
  - Strongly agrees
  - Two main reasons
    - Newspapers' weekly updates
      - Students forget upcoming events
      - Wasted time attending empty events
    - Students frequently check emails
      - Convenient for staying informed
      - Better planning and participation in events

7.关键词