TOEFL TPO 67 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the Student Association's recent purchase. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there is room for improvement in pronunciation and reducing unnecessary pauses. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and focus on accurate pronunciation of words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening material to strengthen their arguments. Additionally, the speaker should ensure that they accurately represent the information from both the reading and listening materials to create a more compelling response.

5.Language Use

While the Student Association proposes plans to purchase a new sound system in the Old Lincoln Hall for movies, the man in the listening material disagrees with this idea and counters it with two arguments. First off, the man doesn't believe the Old Lincoln Hall as is the right place to purchase the system, since the Old Lincoln Hall is over 100 years old and it is too old for any improvement. Besides, the man also doesn't think movies as are the favorite activities the students have of students. Actually, students in the campus doesn't don't have anything else to do besides movies, if provided with more recreation and activities, the students may not go to movie theaters.

("proposes" changed to "plans" for a more natural-sounding verb; "as" removed and "is" added for proper grammar; "as" replaced with "are" for correct verb form; "the students have" replaced with "of students" for a smoother sentence structure; "doesn't" changed to "don't" for subject-verb agreement.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

While the Student Association plans to purchase a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall to enhance movie experiences, the man in the listening material disagrees with this decision and presents two arguments. Firstly, he argues that Old Lincoln Hall is not an appropriate venue for installing the new sound system, as the building is over 100 years old and its age may hinder any significant improvements. Secondly, the man questions whether movies are genuinely the favorite activity of students on campus. He suggests that students might have chosen movies as their preferred activity due to a lack of alternative recreational options. If more diverse activities were available, students might not prioritize going to movie theaters as much as the survey results indicate.

6.Mind Map

- Disagreement
  - Old Lincoln Hall
    - Inappropriate venue
    - Age of the building
  - Movies as favorite activity
    - Lack of alternatives
    - Diverse recreational options

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 总体而言，发言者的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。首先，可以尝试提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。此外，适当减少停顿次数，保持一致的语速，有助于使表达更流畅。建议多加练习和参加相关培训课程，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得相当不错。回答内容条理清晰、组织有序，并且在关键点上给出了足够的支持和例证。然而，在解释男子为什么认为购买新音响系统是浪费钱时，可以进一步阐述一下老林肯大厅的声学效果问题。此外，在谈到学生选择电影作为首选活动的原因时，可以尝试提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。总之，在话题发展方面还有一定的提升空间，建议多参加讨论和练习，以便更好地组织和阐述观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The man opposes the student association's decision to purchase the new sound system to attract the students to movies and to raise the ticket sales for mainly two reasons. The man opposes the Student Association's decision to purchase a new sound system for attracting students to movies and increasing ticket sales, mainly for two reasons.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

First, the man thinks that purchase of new sound system would be a totally waste of money because the auditorium is located in a building with 200 years old history, which used to be a gym. First, the man believes that purchasing a new sound system would be a complete waste of money since the auditorium is located in a 200-year-old building that was once a gym.（修改了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇，并修正了语法错误。）

So he assumes that the acoustic effect there must be very terrible and therefore he thinks the expense would be unnecessary. Thus, he assumes that the acoustics there must be terrible, making the expense unnecessary.（简化了句子结构，使其更自然。）

Second of all, he doubts whether the top option of student's choice is going to the movies because actually there's nothing else to do on the campus since there's no recreational facilities available for students. Secondly, he questions whether going to movies is truly students' top choice, as there are no other recreational facilities available on campus.（简化了句子结构，使其更自然。）

Therefore, the prerequisite for the decision is flawed. Consequently, the basis for the decision is flawed.（使用了更高级的词汇。）

修订版（140字）：

The man opposes the Student Association's decision to purchase a new sound system for attracting students to movies and increasing ticket sales, mainly for two reasons. First, the man believes that purchasing a new sound system would be a complete waste of money since the auditorium is located in a 200-year-old building that was once a gym. Thus, he assumes that the acoustics there must be terrible, making the expense unnecessary. Secondly, he questions whether going to movies is truly students' top choice, as there are no other recreational facilities available on campus. Consequently, the basis for the decision is flawed.

6.思维导图

• Main Idea: Opposition to sound system purchase
  • Reason 1: Waste of money
    • Auditorium location: 200-year-old building
    • Previous function: Gym
    • Acoustics: Terrible
  • Reason 2: Doubt about students' preferences
    • Lack of recreational facilities on campus
    • Basis for decision: Flawed

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语言表达较为清晰，但仍有一些不流畅的地方。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，避免过快或过慢。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。在练习时，可以多加强对于词汇和短语的发音练习。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题要求的信息，但在组织结构和连接词方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意使用恰当的连接词来使句子更加连贯，并确保每个观点都有足够的支持或例证。同时，可以尝试使用更多不同类型的句子结构来丰富表达。

5.语言使用

原文：The school is going to purchase new sound system for the old Lincoln Hall Auditorium to attract students and increase the ticket sales. The school plans to purchase a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium to attract more students and boost ticket sales.（将“is going to”改为“plans to”，使句子更自然；在“old Lincoln Hall Auditorium”前加上定冠词“the”；将“increase”改为“boost”，丰富词汇。）

And students disagree with the policy and think it's a waste of money. However, some students disagree with this decision, believing it is a waste of money.（将“And”改为“However”，使句子更连贯；将“policy”改为“decision”，更符合语境；使用“believing”代替“think”，使句子更自然。）

It has two main reasons. There are two main reasons for their disagreement.（使用“There are two main reasons for their disagreement.”代替“It has two main reasons.”，使句子更自然。）

Firstly, he thinks the old Lincoln Hall Auditorium is too old that it was built nearly 200 years ago. Firstly, they argue that the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, being nearly 200 years old, is not suitable for such an investment.（使用“they argue that”代替“he thinks”，使句子更自然；调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

So it's not wise to spend money on it. Therefore, they believe spending money on it is unwise.（使用“they believe”代替“it's”，使句子更自然；将“spend”改为“spending”，使句子结构更准确。）

Secondly, he thinks it's because the students have not much to do in school. Secondly, they feel that the lack of recreational activities on campus is the main reason for students' preference for movies.（调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

So he decides to see the movies. As a result, students choose to watch movies as their primary form of entertainment.（调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

And what the school really needs is to add the new social activities. They suggest that the school should focus on providing more diverse social activities instead.（使用“They suggest that”代替“And”，使句子更连贯；调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school plans to purchase a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium to attract more students and boost ticket sales. However, some students disagree with this decision, believing it is a waste of money. There are two main reasons for their disagreement. Firstly, they argue that the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, being nearly 200 years old, is not suitable for such an investment. Therefore, they believe spending money on it is unwise. Secondly, they feel that the lack of recreational activities on campus is the main reason for students' preference for movies. As a result, students choose to watch movies as their primary form of entertainment. They suggest that the school should focus on providing more diverse social activities instead.

6.思维导图

- School's decision
  - Purchase new sound system
  - Attract students and boost ticket sales

- Students' disagreement
  - Waste of money
  - Reasons for disagreement
    - Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium
      - Nearly 200 years old
      - Unsuitable for investment
    - Lack of recreational activities on campus
      - Main reason for movie preference
      - Students choose movies as primary entertainment

- Suggestion
  - Focus on providing diverse social activities instead

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但在某些地方存在不适当的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流利度。此外，发言者需要注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to support their points, such as mentioning the specific issues with the acoustics in Old Lincoln Hall or suggesting alternative social activities that students might prefer over going to the movies. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on providing more evidence to support their claims and elaborating on their ideas.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The reading says the student association have purchased a new sound system for Old Lincoln House to give a better environment for students to watch a movie. But the listening have an opposite idea with it. The speaker thinks that the student association is just wasting money to purchase the sound system first. The Old Lincoln House is like 200 years ago and it used to be a gym. So the sound environment over there is very terrible. The new sound system won't improve anything. And moreover, the students have other social activities besides watching movie. They got better choice and most of them won't choose to watch the movie.

Corrected Answer: The reading states that the student association has purchased a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall to provide a better environment for students to watch movies. However, the listening presents an opposing view. The speaker believes that the student association is wasting money on purchasing the sound system. Old Lincoln Hall, which is around 200 years old and used to be a gym, has terrible acoustics. Therefore, the new sound system will not improve anything. Furthermore, students have other social activities besides watching movies, offering better choices, and most of them would not choose to watch movies. (将have改为has，House改为Hall，listening后加presents，with it改为view，first去掉，ago去掉，over there改为in that place，watching movie改为watching movies，got改为offering，watch the movie改为watch movies)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage states that Northfield College's student association has purchased a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall in order to enhance the movie-watching experience for students on campus. However, the listening passage presents an opposing view, with the speaker arguing that this investment is a waste of money. The speaker points out that Old Lincoln Hall, a 200-year-old building that was once a gym, has poor acoustics, rendering the new sound system ineffective. Additionally, the speaker contends that students have alternative social activities available to them besides watching movies. These other options may be more appealing to students, leading them to choose activities other than movie-watching. In conclusion, the speaker believes that the student association's decision to purchase a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall is misguided and will not yield the desired results.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall

- Listening Passage
  - Opposing view
  - Wasting money
  - Poor acoustics
  - Alternative social activities

- Revised Answer
  - Reading vs. Listening views
  - Old Lincoln Hall's issues
  - Other social activities for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答者的语言流利度和语速较为一致，但偶尔存在停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议回答者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答者的回答内容较为连贯和有条理，但在解释男生观点的原因时可以更具体一些。建议回答者在解释原因时提供更多细节和例子，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the reading passage, we know that the student association have has(因为主语是单数，所以应该使用has) purchased a new sound system for improve improving(应该使用动名词形式) the sound system in the old Lincoln Hall, and they wish that will attract more students to watching movie and raise the sales of ticket. The man in the conversation thinks it will be a bad idea, because the old Lincoln Hall is too old to perform as a cinema, and use the money to improve the sound system will be a waste of money. Furthermore, he doubt that watching movie is the first choice if students have alternative choice like recreation and other social activities.

Revised (140 words): According to the reading passage, we know that the student association has purchased a new sound system for improving the audio quality in Old Lincoln Hall, hoping to attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales. However, the man in the conversation believes this decision is unwise because Old Lincoln Hall's antiquated structure makes it unsuitable for use as a cinema, rendering any investment in its sound system wasteful. Additionally, he questions whether watching movies would remain students' top choice for entertainment if they had access to alternative options such as recreational facilities or other social activities.

6.思维导图

- Reading passage
  - Student association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall

- Man's opinion
  - Unwise decision
  - Antiquated structure
  - Wasteful investment

- Alternative options
  - Recreational facilities
  - Social activities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但仍有部分地方需要改进。首先，在语音方面，可以尝试提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。此外，在语速和停顿方面，可以适当调整，使之更加自然流畅。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了所需的信息，并对男生的观点和理由进行了解释。然而，在组织结构上还有待加强。可以尝试使用更清晰的连接词和过渡句子来组织回答，使其更具条理性。同时，在给出理由时，可以尝试提供更具体的例子或细节来支持观点。通过这些改进，话题发展将更加完善。

5.语言使用

Original: The Student Association purchased a new sound system for the O. Lincoln Hall Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium which is used to play movies. (原文中的“O. Lincoln Hall”应改为“Old Lincoln Hall”。) The Student Association believes that this is correct since in the survey, students think that watching movies in the hall is the first choice for entertainment, so that the Student Association thinks that this purchase will make a lot of profit for the school.

Corrected: The Student Association purchased a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, which is used to play movies. According to a survey, students consider watching movies in the hall as their top choice for entertainment. Therefore, the Student Association believes that this investment will significantly increase ticket sales and generate substantial revenue for the school.

Original: The man in the listening disagrees with this idea because he thinks it is a waste of money. Since the O. Lincoln Hall Auditorium is 200 years old and the acoustics there is terrible, this will not make the movies better.

Corrected: The man in the conversation disagrees with this decision because he believes it's a waste of money. He argues that since Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium is 200 years old and has poor acoustics, investing in a new sound system will not improve the movie-watching experience.

Original: Secondly, he thinks that it is not the first choice for social activities since there are not much things for students to do on campus, so that the only thing they can do is to watch a movie.

Corrected: Furthermore, he contends that watching movies may not be students' top choice for social activities if more options were available on campus. The lack of alternative recreational activities may have skewed survey results in favor of movie-watching.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The Student Association purchased a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, which is used to play movies. According to a survey, students consider watching movies in the hall as their top choice for entertainment. Therefore, the Student Association believes that this investment will significantly increase ticket sales and generate substantial revenue for the school. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision because he believes it's a waste of money. He argues that since Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium is 200 years old and has poor acoustics, investing in a new sound system will not improve the movie-watching experience. Furthermore, he contends that watching movies may not be students' top choice for social activities if more options were available on campus. The lack of alternative recreational activities may have skewed survey results in favor of movie-watching.

6.思维导图

- Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium
  - Survey results
    - Top choice for entertainment
    - Increased ticket sales and revenue

- Man's disagreement
  - Waste of money
    - Poor acoustics in old auditorium
  - Not the first choice for social activities
    - Lack of alternative recreational options on campus

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper pauses and work on accurate pronunciation of certain words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen the argument. Additionally, the speaker could work on paraphrasing the information from the reading passage more effectively to avoid repetition. Overall, focusing on these aspects will help improve topic development in future responses.

5.Language Use

The university announces that they are going to install a new sound system in the old Lincoln Hall. This is because this can attract more students to watch the movie, and also they know that watching movie is the best recreational activities in the school. However, the man disagrees for the following reasons. First, he thinks it's a waste of money since the Lincoln Hall was too old and acoustic technique there was very bad and there is no way to improve it. In addition, there are much to do on the campus, like recreational and social activities, so the man thinks students won't think the watching movie is best if there are more other activities.

The university announces announced(change to past tense for consistency) that they are going to install a new sound system in the old Lincoln Hall. This is because this can it could(use a more natural-sounding phrase) attract more students to watch the movies,(plural form for consistency) and also they know that watching movie movies(plural form for consistency) is the best recreational activities in the school. However, the man disagrees for the following reasons. First, he thinks it's a waste of money since the Lincoln Hall was too old and acoustic technique there was very bad the acoustics were terrible,(use a more natural-sounding phrase) and there is no way to improve it. In addition, there are muchto do on more to do around(use a more natural-sounding phrase) the campus, like recreational and social activities, so the man thinks students won't think the watching movie watching movies(use a more natural-sounding phrase) is best if there are more other activities.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced that they were going to install a new sound system in the old Lincoln Hall. They believed it could attract more students to watch movies and knew that watching movies was one of the best recreational activities at the school. However, the man disagreed for several reasons. First, he thought it was a waste of money since Lincoln Hall was too old and the acoustics were terrible, with no way to improve them. Additionally, he believed there was much more to do around campus, such as recreational and social activities. Therefore, the man argued that students wouldn't consider watching movies as their top choice if there were other engaging activities available on campus.

6.Mind Map

• University announcement

  • New sound system
  • Old Lincoln Hall

• Attract more students

  • Watching movies
  • Recreational activities

• Man's disagreement

  • Waste of money
  • Old hall and poor acoustics

• Other campus activities

  • Recreational and social options
  • Students' preferences

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了听力材料中提到的观点，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在练习时尝试使用更清晰的逻辑结构，如首先陈述男生的观点，然后分别解释他给出的两个理由。此外，在解释理由时可以尝试提供更多细节或例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university wants to install a new movie theater in the school. Actually, the university plans to upgrade the sound system in the existing movie theater. (原文中的描述与阅读材料不符，应改为升级现有电影院的音响系统。) First off, the university wants to do a survey and attract more students and improve the movie tick sales. Initially, the university conducted a survey to determine students' preferred entertainment options and aimed to attract more students and increase ticket sales. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰，并纠正了“tick sales”为“ticket sales”。)

But in the conversation, the man strongly disagrees with this idea, because he thinks that first of all, it's a waste of money, because the movie will be played on the old building, However, in the conversation, the man strongly disagrees with this plan, arguing that it's a waste of money since movies will be shown in an old building, (重新组织句子，使其更自然。) and it may be a terrible experience for students. which might result in a poor experience for students. (修改表述，使其更准确。)

Besides, he thinks that many students will not choose movie as a first choice as a recreation activity. Furthermore, he believes that if there were more recreational activities on campus, many students would not choose movies as their first choice. (调整句子结构，使其更清晰。) So, it's not a good idea for the man to let the university build a new movie theater in the old house. Therefore, he thinks it's not a wise decision for the university to invest in upgrading the sound system in the old auditorium. (修改描述，使其与阅读材料一致。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Actually, the university plans to upgrade the sound system in the existing movie theater. Initially, the university conducted a survey to determine students' preferred entertainment options and aimed to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man strongly disagrees with this plan, arguing that it's a waste of money since movies will be shown in an old building, which might result in a poor experience for students. Furthermore, he believes that if there were more recreational activities on campus, many students would not choose movies as their first choice. Therefore, he thinks it's not a wise decision for the university to invest in upgrading the sound system in the old auditorium.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Upgrade sound system
  • Conducted survey
  • Attract students and increase ticket sales

• Man's Disagreement

  • Waste of money
    • Old building
    • Poor experience for students
  • Other recreational activities
    • Students' first choice

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：25

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整。例如，可以减少一些不必要的停顿，以保持语速的一致性。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，能够明确表达男生对购买新音响系统的看法及其原因。然而，在解释原因时可以更具体一些，例如提供更多关于老建筑声学问题的细节。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出这些原因如何影响到购买音响系统的决策。建议在练习时尝试提供更多具体细节和例子，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：A student proposed purchasing a new sound system to provide more entertainment for students, which could also increase ticket sales. The reading passage mentions that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. (原文中提到的是学生会购买了新音响系统，而不是学生提议购买。这里需要更正描述。) However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this perspective for two main reasons. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision for two main reasons. (这里的“perspective”应改为“decision”，以便更准确地描述男生的观点。) First, he believes that the old hall building is almost 200 years old with poor acoustics, so the new sound system would hardly make any improvement in the overall movie-watching experience. Second, he thinks that if students have additional social activities available on campus, they might not choose to watch movies as their first choice for entertainment. Therefore, the man believes that investing a new sound system might not be the best decision for attracting more students and increasing ticket sales. Considering the building limitations, a student poses an interest in other social activities.

修订版（140词）：

The reading passage mentions that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision for two main reasons. First, he argues that the old hall building is almost 200 years old and has poor acoustics, which would make the new sound system ineffective in improving the overall movie-watching experience. Second, he believes that if there were more social activities available on campus, students might not prioritize watching movies as their primary form of entertainment. Consequently, the man thinks that investing in a new sound system may not be the most effective strategy for attracting more students and increasing ticket sales. He suggests considering the building's limitations and exploring alternative social activities to better cater to students' interests.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Attract more students
  - Increase ticket sales

- Conversation
  - Man's disagreement
    - Old hall building
      - Poor acoustics
    - Alternative social activities
      - Students' preferences

- Revised Answer
  - Man's opinion
  - Reasons for disagreement
    - Ineffective sound system in old building
    - More social activities needed on campus
  - Suggestion for improvement
    - Explore alternative social activities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

17. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答有一些语法错误和不清晰的表达。建议在发音和语法方面进行更多的练习，以提高口语表达的准确性和流利度。同时，注意适当地使用标点符号，以避免不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答没有很好地组织和连接观点。建议在回答问题时，先简要陈述男生的观点，然后详细解释他给出的理由。此外，在解释理由时，尽量使用恰当的例子或证据来支持观点。最后，注意保持回答内容与问题紧密相关，并确保内容条理清晰。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading material, the school is considerably requiring the students that the place where the movies are on the campus are certainly shown. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the school has installed a new sound system in the auditorium where movies are shown on campus.（将原句中的不清晰表达修改为更准确的描述。）

Because the first reason is that student association hopes that the more students will see the movie, and they want that increase the ticket sales. The first reason is that the Student Association hopes to attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales.（修改了语法错误和不自然的表达。）

The second reason is that in the rank of the school, most students love to watch movies. The second reason is that according to a survey conducted by the school, most students prefer watching movies as their favorite entertainment activity.（将原句中的不清晰表达修改为更准确的描述。）

And in the listening material, we can clearly learn that the man don't think it's a good idea. In the listening passage, we can clearly understand that the man disagrees with this decision.（修改了语法错误和不自然的表达。）

Because the first reason is that it's just a waste of money. Because the building which the school center is too old and there is no improvement. His first reason is that it's a waste of money since the building where the auditorium is located is too old and has poor acoustics, making no significant improvement.（将原句中的不清晰表达修改为更准确的描述。）

And the second reason is that he thinks there is not so most students think the watching movie is the best. Because there isn't any other fun activities student can do without watching movie. If there is any activities, they couldn't go to school. The second reason is that he believes not many students would consider watching movies as their top choice if there were other recreational activities available on campus.（修改了语法错误和不自然的表达。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the school has installed a new sound system in the auditorium where movies are shown on campus. The first reason is that the Student Association hopes to attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales. The second reason is that according to a survey conducted by the school, most students prefer watching movies as their favorite entertainment activity.

In the listening passage, we can clearly understand that the man disagrees with this decision. His first reason is that it's a waste of money since the building where the auditorium is located is too old and has poor acoustics, making no significant improvement. The second reason is that he believes not many students would consider watching movies as their top choice if there were other recreational activities available on campus.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - New sound system
  - Auditorium
  - Increase ticket sales
  - Survey: students prefer movies

- Listening Passage
  - Man disagrees
    - Waste of money
      - Old building
      - Poor acoustics
    - Other recreational activities
      - Movies not top choice

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达还算清晰，但在某些地方存在不太自然的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持连贯流畅。此外，发言者需要注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is generally coherent and well-organized, but there are some issues with the content. The speaker incorrectly refers to the "Square Association" and "Square Auditorium" instead of the "Student Association" and "Old Lincoln Hall auditorium." Additionally, the response could benefit from more specific examples or details from the listening passage to support the man's opinion. To improve, focus on accurately incorporating information from both the reading and listening passages and providing clear connections between ideas.

5.语言使用

Original: So the Square Association Student Association wants to portray the new sound system to improve the experience of watching movies in the Square Auditorium Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. However, the board disagrees with this proposal for too many reasons. (原因不够明确，建议使用更具体的表述) First, he thinks it is truly a waste of money as the building itself is truly old, so there will be no improvement in the experience of watching movies in this building. And the second reason is that he casts doubt on the result that watching movies tops the list in the student's wish list because he thinks that there isn't any other available activity for students to choose when they were doing the questionnaire. So the school should provide more activities such as some society activities or recreation for them to choose. And going to a movie is not their true willing.

Corrected: So the Square Association Student Association wants to implement a new sound system to enhance movie-watching experiences in the Square Auditorium Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. However, the man disagrees with this decision for several reasons. (更具体的表述) First, he believes it is a waste of money since the building itself is quite old, and thus, there will be no significant improvement in movie-watching experiences. Secondly, he questions whether watching movies truly ranks first on students' wish lists, as there are limited activities available on campus for students to choose from during their free time. He suggests that the school should offer more diverse activities, such as social events or recreational options, for students to engage in. Consequently, going to the movies may not be their genuine preference.

Revised Answer (140 words): The Student Association plans to implement a new sound system to enhance movie-watching experiences in the Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. However, the man disagrees with this decision for several reasons. First, he believes it is a waste of money since the building itself is quite old, and thus, there will be no significant improvement in movie-watching experiences. Secondly, he questions whether watching movies truly ranks first on students' wish lists, as there are limited activities available on campus for students to choose from during their free time. He suggests that the school should offer more diverse activities, such as social events or recreational options, for students to engage in. Consequently, going to the movies may not be their genuine preference.

6.思维导图

- Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall auditorium

- Man's disagreement
  - Waste of money
    - Old building
    - No significant improvement
  - Questioning students' preferences
    - Limited activities on campus
    - Genuine preference for movies?

- Suggestion
  - Offer diverse activities
    - Social events
    - Recreational options

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation issues that result from inappropriate pauses. To improve, the speaker should work on their pausing and phrasing to ensure a smoother flow of speech. Additionally, some spelling errors indicate inaccurate pronunciation, which should be addressed for better clarity.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully addressing the man's opinion and reasons for holding that opinion. To enhance topic development, the speaker should focus on providing more detailed explanations of the man's concerns about the sound system's effectiveness in the old building and his doubts about movies being the top choice for entertainment if other options were available on campus.

5.Language Use

According to a recent announcement, the Student Association has just purchased and installed a new sound system at the Arlington Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium where movies are played. This decision is based on a survey where students rank movies as the best option for entertainment. So by installing the new sound system, the university hopes that it will attract more students and increase tiki ticket sales. However, the men man in the conversation disagreed with this decision. First, he said that it is such a waste of money because the Arlington Old Lincoln Hall is about 200 years old and it used to be a gem gym, making the acoustic effect very terrible. So this new sound system is not going to improve much. He said that the reason why movies are the best option is because there is nothing to do on campus. If there were other forms of entertainment or recreation, no one would be interested in going to the movies.

(Arlington was changed to Old Lincoln because it was mentioned in both reading and listening passages. Tiki was corrected to ticket as it refers to ticket sales. Men was changed to man as only one person expressed their opinion. Arlington was again corrected to Old Lincoln for consistency. Gem was changed to gym as it refers to the building's previous use.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to a recent announcement, the Student Association has purchased and installed a new sound system at the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, where movies are shown on campus. This decision was based on a survey in which students ranked movies as their top entertainment choice. The university hopes that the new sound system will attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision. He argues that it is a waste of money because Old Lincoln Hall, being around 200 years old and a former gym, has poor acoustics. Therefore, the new sound system will not significantly improve the movie experience. Additionally, he believes that if there were other forms of entertainment or recreational activities on campus, students would not prioritize going to the movies.

6.Mind Map

• Announcement

  • New sound system
  • Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium
  • Survey results

• University's hopes

  • Attract students
  • Increase ticket sales

• Man's disagreement

  • Waste of money
  • Poor acoustics
  • Limited campus activities

7.Key Words