TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the announcement. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion。

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The recreational services department will receive special funding from this year's budget to increase the number of exercise machines in the campus gym. The increase is in response to numerous student complaints regarding the insufficient number of machines available. Recreational services department agrees that, due to an increase in university enrolment, more students are using the gym. They, therefore, welcomed the proposal, adding that it would encourage even more students to exercise and would help to promote a healthier lifestyle among students.

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The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the announcement. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion。

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1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时不太清晰。建议发言者在练习口语时，注意控制语速，保持清晰度。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。此外，适当的停顿也有助于提高表达的清晰度。

4.话题发展从话题发展方面来看，发言者对阅读材料和听力材料进行了总结，但在陈述女生观点时存在一定的混乱。建议发言者在组织回答时，先简要概括阅读和听力材料的内容，然后明确陈述女生的观点，并给出她的理由。此外，在连接不同观点时，可以使用一些过渡词汇（如因此、然而等），以提高回答的连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: ~~I'm later at.~~ In the reading material, the university is considering requiring the Reactional Survives Department will receive special funding from this year budget to increase the number of exercise machines in the campus gym, which could encourage even more students to exercise. In the listening material, we clearly learned that the woman doesn't like the idea. One reason she gave is that there are a lot of people there, but she has never waited to use the exercise bikes, which means that the exercise machine is enough to use. Another reason is based on the fact that they have all sorts of the exercise programs. A bunch of the new machines in the gym are not got many to be used. Therefore, the woman disagrees with that opinion. So that's why she disagrees with the school's opinions for the two reasons.

(将"I'm later at."删除，因为这句话在这里没有意义。将"Reactional Survives Department"改为"Recreational Services Department"，以保持与原文一致。将"exercise machine"改为"exercise machines"以保持一致性。将"A bunch of the new machines in the gym are not got many to be used."改为"A bunch of new machines in the gym might not be used often."，使句子更通顺。)

Corrected Answer: In the reading material, the university is considering requiringthe Recreational Services Department will receive special funding from this year budget to increase the number of exercise machines in the campus gym, which could encourage even more students to exercise. In the listening material, we clearly learned that the woman doesn't like the idea. One reason she gave is that there are a lot of people there, but she has never waited to use the exercise bikes, which means that the exercise machines are enough to use. Another reason is based on the fact that they have all sorts of exercise programs. A bunch of new machines in the gym might not be used often. Therefore, the woman disagrees with that opinion. So that's why she disagrees with the school's opinions for the two reasons.

Revised Answer (140 words): In the reading material, we learn that the university plans to allocate special funding to the Recreational Services Department to increase the number of exercise machines in the campus gym, aiming to encourage more students to exercise. However, in the listening material, we find out that the woman disagrees with this plan. She provides two reasons for her disagreement: first, she mentions that despite many people using the gym, she has never had to wait for an exercise machine, indicating that there are already enough machines available. Second, she points out that various exercise programs are offered at the gym; thus, adding more machines might not be necessary as they may not be used frequently. Consequently, she believes that investing in more machines is not a wise decision for promoting a healthier lifestyle among students.

6.思维导图


- Reading Material
  - University Plan
    - Special Funding
    - Recreational Services Department
    - Increase Exercise Machines

- Listening Material
  - Woman's Opinion
    - Disagreement
      - Reason 1: Enough machines available
      - Reason 2: Various exercise programs offered

7.关键词

Word	Phonetic Symbols	Parts of Speech	English Definition	Simplified Chinese Translation	Sample Sentence
Allocate	/ˈæləˌkeɪt/	Verb	To set apart for a particular purpose; assign or allot	分配，拨给	The university decided to allocate more funding to the gym, but some students disagreed with this decision.
Recreational	/ˌrɛkriˈeɪʃənəl/	Adjective	Relating to or denoting activity done for enjoyment when one is not working	娱乐的，消遣的	The recreational facilities on campus play an essential role in promoting a healthy lifestyle among students.
Sufficient	/səˈfɪʃənt/	Adjective	Enough; adequate for a particular purpose or need	足够的，充足的	The woman believes that there are already sufficient exercise machines in the gym, so adding more is unnecessary.
Indicate	/ˈɪndɪˌkeɪt/	Verb	To point out or show; to be a sign of something, to suggest something indirectly or to imply something	表明，显示，暗示	Her experience at the gym indicates that there is no need to wait for exercise machines, which means they are enough for the current number of users.
Various	/ˈvɛriəs/	Adjective	Different from one another; of different kinds or sorts	各种各样的，不同的	The gym offers various exercise programs, so adding more machines might not be the most effective way to promote a healthier lifestyle.

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1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意语速和发音的准确性，以便更清晰地表达观点。此外，尝试在句子之间加入适当的连接词，使得表达更为流畅。

4.话题发展从话题发展方面来看，发言者对计划进行了简要概述，并提到了女性对计划的看法。然而，在解释女性观点的原因时，内容较为混乱，缺乏明确的支持和例证。建议在练习时关注提供更具体的细节和例子来支持观点，并确保内容条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original: The university is going to have some activities in the psychological department about those graduate students' lecture series. They can talk about the topics they are doing the research and it can not only benefit those graduate students for they can gain experience speaking in the public and explain their research to a general audience, but also can benefit those undergraduate students with the opportunity to contact with the graduate students. The women firmly agree with this opinion that Shifing firstly they can spend time to, they always spend time to professors different from the public audience and it is benefit for their future. They may teach the classes and secondly for the undergraduate students they can contact with those graduate students which can gather connection and know what they are doing.

Corrected: The university is going to have some activities in the ~~psychological~~ psychology department about ~~those~~ the graduate students' lecture series. They can talk about the topics they are ~~doing~~ researching, and it can not only benefit ~~those~~ the graduate students, as they can gain experience speaking in public and explaining their research to a general audience, but also benefit undergraduate students by providing them with the opportunity to ~~contact with~~ interact with graduate students. The woman firmly agrees with this plan, stating that, firstly, graduate students can spend time presenting to a public audience, which is beneficial for their future as they may teach classes. Secondly, undergraduate students can ~~contact with~~ connect with graduate students, ~~which can gather connection~~ building relationships and learning about their research.

(将“psychological”改为“psychology”，因为这里应该使用名词而非形容词。将“those”改为“the”，使语言更自然。将“doing”改为“researching”，以更准确地描述研究活动。将“contact with”改为“interact with”和“connect with”，以更自然地描述与研究生的互动。将“which can gather connection”改为“building relationships”，以更清晰地表达建立关系的意义。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to hold a graduate student lecture series in the psychology department. Graduate students will present their research topics, benefiting both themselves and undergraduate attendees. The graduate students will gain public speaking experience and practice explaining their research to a general audience. Meanwhile, undergraduate students will have the opportunity to interact with graduate students, helping them decide whether to pursue a graduate degree. The woman strongly agrees with this plan, as it provides valuable experience for graduate students who may teach classes in the future. Additionally, it allows undergraduate students to connect with graduate students, building relationships and learning about their research. Overall, this lecture series offers significant advantages for both graduate and undergraduate students in the psychology department.

6.思维导图


- University Plan
  - Graduate Student Lecture Series
    - Psychology Department

- Benefits
  - Graduate Students
    - Public Speaking Experience
    - Explaining Research to General Audience
  - Undergraduate Students
    - Interaction with Graduate Students
    - Exposure to Research Topics

- Woman's Opinion
  - Strong Agreement
  - Reasons
    - Valuable Experience for Future Teaching Opportunities
    - Relationship Building and Learning for Undergraduates

7.关键词

Word	Phonetic Symbols	Parts of Speech	English Definition	Simplified Chinese Translation	Sample Sentence
lecture series	/ˈlɛkʧər ˈsɪriz/	noun	a series of lectures on a particular subject	系列讲座	The graduate student lecture series offers an opportunity for students to learn about various research topics in psychology.
interact	/ˌɪntərˈækt/	verb	to communicate or be involved directly	互动	Attending the lecture series allows undergraduate students to interact with graduate students and gain insights into their research.
exposure	/ɪkˈspoʊʒər/	noun	the fact of experiencing something or being affected by it because of being in a particular situation	接触	The exposure to graduate-level research during the lecture series can help undergraduate students decide if they want to pursue a graduate degree in psychology.
valuable	/ˈvæljuəbəl/	adjective	worth a lot of money or very important or useful	有价值的	The woman believes that the lecture series provides valuable experience for graduate students who may teach classes in the future.
relationship	/rɪˈleɪʃənʃɪp/	noun	the way in which two things are connected	关系	By attending the lecture series, undergraduate students can build relationships with graduate students and learn about their research.