TOEFL TPO 40 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the university's plan. Briefly summarize the plan then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议练习更自然、流畅的发音和语调，以便在实际考试中更好地表达自己的观点。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以在解释原因时提供更多具体的例子。例如，在谈到共享信息时，可以进一步说明这对通勤学生有哪些具体好处。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出这个计划对通勤学生的积极影响。

5.语言使用

原文：The university is going to create a lounge for commuter students, The university plans to create a lounge specifically for commuter students, (更自然的表达) and the woman in the listening part likes this idea, and the woman in the conversation supports this plan, (更简洁明了的表达) because firstly she says that students could spend a lot of time watching TV, meeting friends, and doing schoolwork in their dormitory, but commuter students don't have this chance to do this, so it's a good idea to create a lounge for commuter students. Secondly, she thinks that lounge is a great place for commuter students to share information, so they are able to take same taxi when they have same destination, so in this way, they are able to save money.

修订版（140字）：

The university plans to create a lounge specifically for commuter students, and the woman in the conversation supports this plan. She believes that having a lounge will provide these students with opportunities similar to those living in dormitories, such as socializing, relaxing, and collaborating on schoolwork. Additionally, she thinks that the lounge will serve as an excellent platform for sharing information among commuter students. For instance, they can coordinate ride-sharing arrangements to save money on transportation costs. Overall, the woman is optimistic about the positive impact of the proposed lounge on the lives of commuter students.

6.思维导图

• University plan

  • Create a lounge
  • Commuter students

• Woman's opinion

  • Supports the plan
  • Reasons
    • Socializing and collaboration
    • Information sharing
      • Ride-sharing arrangements

7.关键词