TOEFL TPO 1 Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain groupthink and its effects using example of the computer company.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从发音和语速方面来看，这个回答基本上是清晰的，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高发音和语言表达能力，建议多加练习，尤其是在连贯地表达观点时要注意保持语速的稳定。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言表达的流畅性。

4.话题发展 The response provides a coherent and well-organized explanation of groupthink and its effects, using the example of the computer company. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more details and elaborating on the example. To enhance topic development, consider expanding on the consequences of groupthink in the company, such as how it affected their market position and customer base. Additionally, you could discuss the role of senior management in influencing the group's decision-making process and how this contributed to the negative outcome.

6.语言使用

Original Answer: Groupthink is a business management concept which refers to an individual make decisions that conform to the group's opinion, even though he or she believes that this will jeopardize the common interests of the whole group. Groupthink is a business management concept in which individuals make decisions that conform to the group's opinion, even though they believe it may jeopardize the common interests of the entire group. (将"which refers to an individual make decisions"改为"in which individuals make decisions"，使句子结构更自然。)

Let's take the example of the computer company, the speaker. Consider the example provided by the speaker about a computer company. (将"Let's take the example of the computer company, the speaker."改为"Consider the example provided by the speaker about a computer company."，使句子更清晰。)

The speaker raised the idea of updating the design of a project, and he also showed evidence that changing the design will make more benefit. The speaker proposed updating the design of a project and provided evidence that changing the design would yield greater benefits. (将"raised"改为"proposed"，将"will make more benefit"改为"would yield greater benefits"，使句子更自然。)

But this suggestion was opposed by the senior manager of the company, so the group becomes to oppose this idea, and finally, they lose some profits from this decision. However, this suggestion was opposed by a senior manager in the company, leading to group opposition and ultimately resulting in lost profits due to this decision. (将"so the group becomes to oppose this idea"改为"leading to group opposition"，将"finally, they lose some profits from this decision."改为"ultimately resulting in lost profits due to this decision."，使句子更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): Groupthink is a business management concept in which individuals make decisions that conform to the group's opinion, even though they believe it may jeopardize the common interests of the entire group. Consider the example provided by the speaker about a computer company. The speaker proposed updating the design of a project and provided evidence that changing the design would yield greater benefits. However, this suggestion was opposed by a senior manager in the company, leading to group opposition and ultimately resulting in lost profits due to this decision. To avoid groupthink, it is essential for companies to encourage open communication and diverse opinions, as well as fostering an environment where employees feel comfortable expressing their thoughts without fear of negative consequences. This will help ensure better decision-making and ultimately lead to greater success for the organization.

7.思维导图

Groupthink
├─ Business management concept
├─ Conforming to group's opinion
│   └─ Despite jeopardizing common interests
├─ Computer company example
│   ├─ Speaker's proposal: updating design
│   ├─ Evidence: greater benefits
│   └─ Senior manager's opposition
│       └─ Result: lost profits
└─ Avoiding groupthink
    ├─ Encourage open communication
    ├─ Foster diverse opinions
    └─ Create comfortable environment for expression

8.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，这位考生的回答相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。建议考生注意在适当的地方停顿，以便更好地组织思路。此外，尽量减少发音错误，以提高整体语言质量。

4.话题发展 The speaker provided a coherent response, explaining the concept of groupthink and its effects using the example of the computer company. However, there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. The speaker could have elaborated more on the reasons behind groupthink, as mentioned in the reading passage, and connected them to the example from the listening passage. Additionally, the speaker could have emphasized the negative consequences of groupthink more explicitly, such as the loss of potential customers and profits for the company. Overall, focusing on providing more detailed explanations and making stronger connections between ideas would improve topic development in this response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Group thinking is a phenomenon that individuals within a group tend to agree with the consensus of their group. Groupthink is a process in which individuals within a group conform their opinions to the perceived group consensus. (将“Group thinking”更正为“Groupthink”，并对句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然。) An example is that the man and his co-worker wanted to update the design of their computer to make it more up-to-date and look more modern. a man and his coworker proposed updating their computer's design to make it more contemporary and visually appealing. (对原句进行了改写，使其更自然且词汇更丰富。) However, their managers say that they should focus on technology instead of the appearance. Suddenly, the supporters of the man changed their ideas to support the manager. The man and the co-worker both took a step back finally. The result is that their competitors benefit much from the change of their computer's looks, and they also win many potential audiences and buyers from the man's computer company.

Revised Answer (140 words):

Groupthink is a process in which individuals within a group conform their opinions to the perceived group consensus. A prime example occurred when a man and his coworker proposed updating their computer's design to make it more contemporary and visually appealing. However, their managers insisted on prioritizing technology over aesthetics. Consequently, several supporters of the design change shifted their stance to align with management's viewpoint. Feeling pressured by this shift, both the man and his coworker eventually withdrew their proposal. Ultimately, this decision proved detrimental to the company, as their competitors capitalized on the opportunity to attract customers with a more visually appealing design. This led to a loss of potential clients and revenue for the man's computer company, demonstrating the negative consequences of groupthink.

6.思维导图

• Groupthink

  • Definition
  • Reasons

• Example

  • Computer company
    • Design proposal
    • Managers' opposition
    • Supporters change stance
    • Withdrawal of proposal
    • Negative consequences

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Language Use: 2 Topic Development: 1

2.预估分数

15. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答有一些问题。首先，语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。其次，发音方面也有一些错误，导致拼写出现问题。建议同学在练习口语时，注意提高语速的流畅性，并多加练习发音，以便在考试中能够更准确地表达自己的观点。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答并没有很好地涵盖文章和听力中的关键信息。回答中提到的实验和猴子与题目要求的计算机公司例子无关。建议同学在准备答案时，确保充分理解题目要求，并将文章和听力中的关键信息结合起来进行组织和阐述。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The article said experimenter may affect their result, so they may not get accurate result. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that groupthink can lead to irrational decisions in a group. (原文中提到的是群体思维，而不是实验者对结果的影响。) In this lecture, the man said there are two groups of monkeys, the experimenter trains them to pick up ball and throw into the box, and they were told one group is highly intelligent, the other one is the least intelligent, actually there are no difference, but they don't know. In the listening part, the professor shares his experience with groupthink in a computer company where he used to work. He and his coworker suggested giving their computers a design makeover to attract more customers. However, due to groupthink, they ended up not changing the design, which later cost them potential customers and profit. (听力部分讲述的是教授在计算机公司的群体思维经历，而不是关于猴子的实验。) Number four.

Revised Answer (140 words): In the reading passage, it is mentioned that groupthink can lead to irrational decisions in a group. In the listening part, the professor shares his experience with groupthink in a computer company where he used to work. He and his coworker suggested giving their computers a design makeover to attract more customers since market research showed that new customers would be more interested if the computers looked cooler. Initially, more than half of the group supported the idea, but some senior managers opposed it, stating that their focus had always been on technology and changing the design would be an unnecessary cost. Due to groupthink, many supporters changed their minds, and eventually, everyone voted against the design change. This decision cost the company potential customers and profit when a competitor released a new design that attracted customers.

6.思维导图

• Groupthink

  • Irrational decisions
  • Desire to conform

• Computer company example

  • Design makeover suggestion
  • Market research
  • Senior managers' opposition
  • Groupthink effects
    • Supporters changing minds
    • Unanimous decision against change
    • Loss of potential customers and profit

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Language Use: 3

• Topic Development: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice maintaining a consistent pace throughout the response and work on reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4. Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully explaining the concept of groupthink and its effects on the computer company. The speaker should elaborate more on how groupthink led to the company's decision not to change the design and the negative consequences that followed. Providing more context and details will strengthen the topic development and create a more compelling response.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: Group thinking means that individual members of groups may attempt to confront group's opinion even though the result may be negative. Groupthink occurs when individual members of a group conform to the perceived consensus, even if it leads to negative outcomes. (Changed "group thinking" to "groupthink" and rephrased the sentence for clarity) The speaker used his experience as example. The speaker provided a personal example to illustrate this concept. (Rephrased for better flow) At that time, he worked at a computer company, and he and his co-worker decided to change the exterior of their product. At first, many co-workers agreed with their proposal. However, after senior manager did not agree with this proposal, lots of their co-workers started to change their mind. And the reason why they do this is because they did not want to make bad imagination for senior manager, which may affect their chance of promotion. So that is group thinking.

Revised Answer (140 words): Groupthink occurs when individual members of a group conform to the perceived consensus, even if it leads to negative outcomes. The speaker provided a personal example to illustrate this concept. While working at a computer company, the speaker and a co-worker proposed changing the exterior design of their product. Initially, many colleagues supported the idea. However, when a senior manager expressed disagreement, several team members changed their stance. They did so because they feared creating a negative impression on the senior manager, which could potentially hinder their chances for promotion. This behavior exemplifies groupthink, as individuals prioritized conformity over their initial beliefs, ultimately leading to an unfavorable decision for the company.

6. Mind Map

• Groupthink

  • Definition
  • Negative outcomes

• Personal example

  • Computer company
  • Exterior design proposal
  • Initial support
  • Senior manager's disagreement
  • Team members' conformity
  • Unfavorable decision

7. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整。例如，可以考虑使用更丰富的词汇和表达方式来使回答更具说服力。此外，注意在适当的地方加入停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。建议多加练习，提高发音准确度和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。然而，在解释“群体思维”现象时，可以尝试提供更详细的信息和例子来支持观点。例如，在描述教授在计算机公司的经历时，可以详细说明为什么他和他的同事最后改变了主意，并强调这种现象对公司造成的负面影响。建议在准备过程中多关注细节，并确保在回答中提供充分的支持和例证。

5.语言使用

Original: Groupthink is a phenomenon that people in a group usually think the same. In the professor's example, he says that when he worked in a computer company, he and his co-workers decided to design an up-to-date design to attract new customers. But the senior workers were disappointed. Finally, the professor and his co-workers changed their ideas and did not use the up-to-date design.

Corrected: Groupthink is a phenomenon that people in a group usually think the same. Groupthink is a process where individuals in a group conform their opinions to what they perceive as the group consensus, even if it leads to negative outcomes. (用更准确的定义来描述群体思维现象) In the professor's example, he says mentioned (使用更自然的动词) that when he worked in a computer company, he and his co-workers decided to design proposed an innovative (使用更高级的词汇) design to attract new customers. But the senior workers were disappointed. Finally, the professor and his co-workers changed their ideas and did not use the up-to-date design.

Revised (140 words): Groupthink is a process where individuals in a group conform their opinions to what they perceive as the group consensus, even if it leads to negative outcomes. In the professor's example, he mentioned that while working at a computer company, he and his colleagues proposed an innovative design for their computers to attract new customers. Initially, more than half of the group supported the idea. However, some senior managers opposed the change, arguing that it would incur unnecessary costs. As a result, many supporters, including the professor's coworker, changed their stance due to fear of jeopardizing their career prospects. Eventually, even the professor voted against his own proposal, succumbing to the pressure to conform. Consequently, the company missed an opportunity to attract new customers and lost market share to a competitor with a more appealing design.

6.思维导图

- Groupthink
  - Definition
  - Negative outcomes

- Professor's example
  - Computer company
  - Innovative design proposal
  - Senior managers' opposition
  - Pressure to conform
  - Lost opportunity and market share

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在回答中，发言者的表达大致清晰，但在某些地方可能需要更流畅的语言。为了提高发言的清晰度和流畅度，请注意正确发音单词，并确保在适当的地方暂停。此外，尝试保持一致的语速，以便听众更容易理解您的观点。

4.话题发展 The speaker's response is generally coherent and well-organized, but there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. To enhance the response, the speaker should focus on providing more specific details from both the reading and listening passages to support their explanation of groupthink and its effects on the computer company. Additionally, the speaker could work on creating clearer connections between ideas to ensure a more cohesive response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Groupthink is a situation that people tend to think the same for various reasons. Groupthink occurs when people in a group tend to have similar opinions for various reasons. (原句表达不够自然，修改后更符合英语表达习惯) In the example of the computer company, the teller's own experience says that he was working at a computer company and the outfit of their computer is not up to date. In the computer company example, the speaker's experience shows that they worked at a company where the computers' design was outdated. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰易懂) So he advised to change the looking of the computer to attract more customers. Therefore, he suggested updating the computers' appearance to attract more customers. (修正了动词和词汇的使用，使句子更自然) But on the meeting, the senior manager said no to this idea because it will cost much. However, during the meeting, the senior manager rejected this idea due to its high cost. (改进了句子结构和词汇选择) Then his colleagues turned out to agree with the senior manager because they don't want to give bad expression to the manager. Subsequently, his colleagues agreed with the senior manager because they didn't want to leave a negative impression on them. (修正了时态和表达方式，使句子更自然)

Revised Answer (140 words): Groupthink occurs when people in a group tend to have similar opinions for various reasons. In the computer company example, the speaker's experience shows that they worked at a company where the computers' design was outdated. Therefore, he suggested updating the computers' appearance to attract more customers. However, during the meeting, the senior manager rejected this idea due to its high cost. Subsequently, his colleagues agreed with the senior manager because they didn't want to leave a negative impression on them. This led to a unanimous decision to maintain the old design, which ultimately cost the company potential customers and profits. The example illustrates how groupthink can negatively impact decision-making, as individuals may prioritize conformity over their own opinions and ideas, resulting in suboptimal outcomes for the group as a whole.

6.思维导图

- Groupthink
  - Definition
  - Reasons for occurrence

- Computer company example
  - Outdated design
  - Suggestion to update appearance
  - Senior manager's rejection
    - High cost
  - Colleagues' agreement with senior manager
    - Fear of negative impression
  - Unanimous decision to maintain old design
  - Negative impact on company
    - Lost customers and profits

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Language Use: 3

• Topic Development: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow of speech. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reduce unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4. Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of fully explaining the concept of groupthink and its effects on the computer company example. The speaker should focus on providing more detailed explanations and linking the example more explicitly to the concept of groupthink to create a stronger response.

5. Language Use

Original: So the professor talked about his experience working in a computer company, where once him and his co-workers were talking about a new design makeover to make the product look more up-to-date, cooler, and not old-fashioned. And when they delivered this idea to other people, most people support this idea. However, one senior manager disagrees and says that functionality overs the looks. And immediately, all the people turn to the side of the higher manager, even the co-worker did. And the reason that they gave is that disagreeing with the senior manager will make their chance of getting promotion lower, not look like a team player. So in turn, the professor became the only one who voted against the decision. And that just explains what groupthink is, is where everybody was prone to one where most people vote for it, and actually it turns out to be not accurate.

Corrected: So the professor talked discussed his experience working in a computer company, where once him he and his co-workers were talking about a new design makeover to make the product look more up-to-date, cooler, and not old-fashioned. And when they delivered presented this idea to other people, most people support supported this idea. However, one senior manager disagrees disagreed and says that functionality overs takes precedence over the looks. And immediately, all the people turn turned to the side of the higher manager, even the co-worker did. And the reason that they gave is that disagreeing with the senior manager will make their chance of getting promotion a promotion lower, not look like a team player. So in turn, the professor became the only one who voted against the decision. And that just explains what groupthink is, is where which occurs when everybody was prone to one where most people vote for it, and actually it turns out to be not accurate.

Revised (140 words): The professor discussed his experience working in a computer company, where he and his co-workers proposed a new design makeover to make their products more modern and appealing. When they presented this idea, most people supported it. However, one senior manager disagreed, arguing that functionality should take precedence over appearance. Immediately, others sided with the senior manager, including the co-worker who initially supported the idea. They believed that disagreeing with the senior manager could harm their chances of promotion and make them appear less like team players. Consequently, the professor became the only one who voted against the decision. This example illustrates groupthink, which occurs when individuals conform to a perceived majority opinion, even if it may not be accurate or beneficial.

6. Mind Map

- Groupthink
  - Definition
  - Reasons
    - Desire to be liked
    - Fear of losing job/promotion
    - Avoiding conflict
  - Example
    - Computer company
      - Design makeover proposal
      - Initial support
      - Senior manager's disagreement
      - Shift in support
      - Negative outcome (lost customers)

7. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议练习更多的口语练习，加强发音准确性和语言连贯性。同时注意在适当的地方停顿，以增加表达的清晰度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回应，并在例子中明确地说明了团队思维及其影响。为了进一步提高话题发展能力，可以尝试在回答中加入更多细节和论据，使观点更加充分和有说服力。同时注意保持回答结构清晰，以便更好地传达观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The group theme refers to a psychological phenomenon when a team tends to make bad or irrational decisions because the individuals are afraid of being disliked, losing his job, or being the only one who delayed the team decision. While in the lecture, the professor illustrates this idea by giving an example when he is working in a computer company, when he and another worker tend to give the computer a makeover in order to sell them to more customers. However, the senior manager in the team denied this plan. He thinks it's necessary because the computer only focuses on technology. And the supporters, co-workers, and even the author himself feel really doubtful. And finally, they give up the plan because they are afraid of losing their promotion opportunity. And finally, this decision is very costly because their competitor beat them with a new design.

Corrected: The group theme term "groupthink" (原文中的“group theme”应为“groupthink”) refers to a psychological phenomenon when a team tends to make bad or irrational decisions because the individuals individuals within it (为了使句子更自然，可以将“the individuals”改为“individuals within it”) are afraid of being disliked, losing his their (将“his”改为“their”，以保持一致性) job, or being the only one who delayed the team decision. In the lecture, the professor illustrates this idea by giving an example from his experience working at a computer company, where he and another worker tend to proposed to (将“tend to”改为“proposed to”，以更准确地描述他们的行为) give the computer a makeover in order to sell them to more customers. However, the senior manager in the team denied rejected (将“denied”改为“rejected”，以更准确地描述经理的反应) this plan. He thinks thought (将“thinks”改为“thought”，以保持时态一致性) it's necessary because the computer only focuses on technology. The supporters, co-workers, and even the author himself felt really doubtful. Finally, they gave up the plan because they were afraid of losing their promotion opportunity. This decision ended up being very costly because their competitor beat them with a new design.

Revised (140 words): The term "groupthink" refers to a psychological phenomenon when a team tends to make bad or irrational decisions because individuals within it are afraid of being disliked, losing their job, or being the only one who delayed the team decision. In the lecture, the professor illustrates this idea by giving an example from his experience working at a computer company, where he and another worker proposed to give the computer a makeover in order to sell them to more customers. However, the senior manager in the team rejected this plan, thinking it was unnecessary because the computer only focused on technology. The supporters, co-workers, and even the author himself felt doubtful. Finally, they gave up the plan because they were afraid of losing their promotion opportunity. This decision ended up being very costly because their competitor beat them with a new design.

6.思维导图

Groupthink
├─ Definition
│   └─ Psychological phenomenon
├─ Reasons
│   ├─ Fear of being disliked
│   ├─ Losing job
│   └─ Delaying team decision
├─ Lecture Example
│   ├─ Computer company
│   ├─ Proposed design makeover
│   ├─ Senior manager's rejection
│   └─ Consequences of groupthink
└─ Conclusion

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答的语言流利，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议在发音方面加强练习，注意正确的语调和重音。此外，可以适当增加一些连接词，使句子更连贯。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上符合题目要求，结构清晰，观点明确。但是，在举例子时可以更具体一些，以便更好地支持观点。同时，在总结时可以再次强调groupthink的影响，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The lecture focuses mainly on the term groupthink, which refers to the process in which group members made bad and irrational decisions. To better illustrate this term, the professor gives a very vivid example of himself. When he was working for a computer company, someone suggested that they should have a design makeover because their computer was already very technologically advanced. If they looked better, they could sell better. At first, nearly half of the employees supported this idea. However, some senior managers thought this was an unnecessary change, and soon most of the supporters changed their mind because they don't want to leave a bad impression on the senior managers, thus jeopardizing their chance of promotion. In the end, even the author gave up his mind, but the company ended up losing a lot of money because their competitor employed a new design, drawing a lot of customers from them.

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Revised (140 words): The lecture focuses mainly on the term Groupthink, which refers to the process in which group members make poor and irrational decisions. To better illustrate this concept, the professor shares a vivid example from his own experience at a computer company. A colleague suggested a design makeover for their computers, as their technology was already advanced, and an improved appearance could boost sales. Initially, nearly half of the employees supported this idea. However, some senior managers considered it an unnecessary change, causing most supporters to change their minds to avoid leaving a bad impression and jeopardizing their chances for promotion. Eventually, even the professor abandoned his idea, resulting in the company losing a significant amount of money when their competitor launched a new design that attracted many customers.

6.思维导图

Groupthink
├─ Definition
│   └─ Poor and irrational decisions
├─ Professor's Example
│   ├─ Computer company
│   ├─ Design makeover suggestion
│   ├─ Initial support from employees
│   └─ Senior managers' opposition
└─ Effects
    ├─ Supporters changing minds
    ├─ Professor abandoning idea
    └─ Company losing money to competitor's new design

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Language Use: 2 Topic Development: 2

2.预估分数

17. 3.表达

在回答中，发言者的表达不够清晰流畅，语速不一致，且有时会出现停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意语速的控制，尽量保持一致，并减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答中虽然提到了关于计算机公司的例子，但并没有很好地解释团队思维及其影响。建议发言者在组织回答时更加关注话题的发展，明确阐述团队思维的定义，并使用计算机公司的例子来说明其影响。同时，注意保持回答内容的连贯性和条理性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The group scene refers to the progress that a group made a bad or irrational decision. Groupthink refers to the process in which a group makes a bad or irrational decision. (将"group scene"改为"groupthink"，并调整句子结构使其更自然。原句中的"group scene"不符合题目要求，应为"groupthink"。) The professor at least made some thought about himself to sign this one. The professor shared his personal experience with groupthink in a computer company. (删除原句并用更清晰的表述来描述教授的经历。) Whilst the professor was having a hard time with the company and then decided to quit. However, the professor faced challenges within the company due to groupthink. (调整句子结构以更好地描述教授在公司中遇到的困难。) Some people think that the design of computer is out of time and want to change it. But some disagree with it. They think they should focus on just the technology. And even the manager said this one. So some people have changed their mind. In the last days, things have been a little bit different. It's been a long time since it's been like that.

Revised Answer (140 words): Groupthink refers to the process in which a group makes a bad or irrational decision. The professor shared his personal experience with groupthink in a computer company. However, the professor faced challenges within the company due to groupthink. Some employees believed that the computer design was outdated and needed a change, while others disagreed, thinking that the focus should be solely on technology. Even the manager expressed this opinion, causing some people to change their minds. As more people sided with senior management, the professor started to feel like he was the only one holding up the vote. Eventually, he voted against his own idea, and the company decided to stick with the old design. This decision ended up costing the company a lot of money when their competitor released a new design that attracted customers and prevented them from profiting on potential new customers.

6.思维导图

Groupthink
├─ Definition
├─ Professor's experience
│   ├─ Computer company
│   ├─ Design change proposal
│   ├─ Disagreement and conformity
│   └─ Final decision and consequences
└─ Revised Answer

7.关键词