TOEFL TPO 73 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people like to send text messages when they need information. Others prefer to call people on their cell phones for the information they need. Explain which method you prefer and why.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Language Use: 3

• Topic Development: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are a few areas for improvement. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should work on maintaining a consistent pace throughout the speech and reducing occasional pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any potential spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, to further improve topic development, the speaker could provide more specific examples or personal experiences to strengthen their argument. Moreover, expanding on the reasons for their preference and addressing potential counterarguments would make the response more comprehensive and persuasive.

5. Language Use

Original:

I prefer sending text messages over making direct calls seeking information. Firstly, texting demonstrates greater and proper adequacy in communication. For instance, during busy work hours, sending messages will not abruptly interrupt others who may be in an important meeting. Secondly, text messages can convey more concise and accurate information to the recipient. For example, in text messages, you can display numbers, figures, and even images to others and this information can be stored in the phone history for an extended period.

Revised:

I prefer sending text messages over making direct calls when seeking information. Firstly, texting demonstrates greater etiquette and efficiency in communication. For instance, during busy work hours, sending messages will not abruptly interrupt others who may be in an important meeting. Secondly, text messages can convey more precise and accurate information to the recipient. For example, in text messages, you can display numbers, figures, and even images to others, and this information can be stored in the phone history for an extended period.

I prefer sending text messages over making direct calls when seeking information (revised for clarity). Firstly, texting demonstrates greater etiquette (changed "adequacy" to "etiquette" for better word choice) and efficiency (added "efficiency" for a more natural flow) in communication. For instance, during busy work hours, sending messages will not abruptly interrupt others who may be in an important meeting (smooth transition). Secondly, text messages can convey more precise (changed "concise" to "precise" for better word choice) and accurate information to the recipient. For example, in text messages, you can display numbers, figures, and even images to others (maintained natural flow), and this information can be stored in the phone history for an extended period (strong conclusion).

Corrected:

I prefer sending text messages over making direct calls when seeking information. information (revised for clarity). Firstly, texting demonstrates greater etiquette (changed "adequacy" to "etiquette" for better word choice) and proper adequacy efficiency (added "efficiency" for a more natural flow) in communication. For instance, during busy work hours, sending messages will not abruptly interrupt others who may be in an important meeting. meeting (smooth transition). Secondly, text messages can convey more concise precise (changed "concise" to "precise" for better word choice) and accurate information to the recipient. For example, in text messages, you can display numbers, figures, and even images to others (maintained natural flow), and this information can be stored in the phone history for an extended period.period (strong conclusion).

6. Display title: 6.Mind Map

- Preference/Opinion
  - Prefers text messages over direct calls

- Main Point
  - Texting demonstrates greater adequacy in communication
    - Example: Less disruptive during busy work hours
  - Text messages convey concise and accurate information
    - Example: Can display numbers, figures, and images

- Conclusion
  - Texting is a more effective and considerate method of communication

7. Display title: 7.Key Words

8. Display title: 8.Additional Examples

9. Text messages allow for better time management as the recipient can respond at their convenience.

10. Texting provides a written record of the conversation, which can be useful for future reference.

11. Text messages can be easily forwarded to multiple recipients, making it an efficient way to share information.

12. Texting allows for the use of emojis and other visual elements, which can help convey emotions and tone more effectively than voice calls.

13. Text messages can be sent and received in areas with poor signal strength, where voice calls might not be possible.

1.子项得分

• 交付(Delivery): 3

• 主题发展(Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用(Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，您的回答相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。为了提高您的发音，请注意在句子中正确地暂停，以便更自然地表达您的想法。此外，尝试保持一致的语速，以免听起来过于仓促。建议您多练习朗读和模仿母语人士的发音。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，您的回答是连贯和有组织的，但可以通过提供更多支持或例子来加强。例如，您可以分享一个关于您在紧急情况下打电话获取信息的亲身经历，以便更具说服力。同时，在解释为什么发送短信可能不是最佳选择时，可以提供更多具体细节。这将使您的回答更完整和有深度。

5. 语言使用

Original:

I prefer to call people on their cell phones for information I need, because I can get the information I want immediately on cell phone. It is especially important when I face an urgent problem, and at the same time I can explain in detail what I need to know on the cell phone. However, if I choose to send text messages, maybe I will not receive the reply on time, and it will make me lose the best opportunity to know the information and to address the problem.

Revised:

I prefer to call people on their cell phones for information I need, as it allows me to obtain the information I want immediately. This is particularly crucial when dealing with urgent matters, as I can explain in detail what I need to know over the phone. One example of this is when I faced a medical emergency and needed advice from a friend who is a doctor. Calling them directly allowed me to receive immediate guidance on how to handle the situation.

On the other hand, if I choose to send text messages, there's a chance that I may not receive a timely reply, which could cause me to miss out on vital information or opportunities. For instance, when trying to secure concert tickets for a popular event, calling a friend who had access to tickets ensured that I was able to reserve them before they sold out. In contrast, sending a text message might have resulted in a delayed response and missed opportunity.

I prefer to call people on their cell phones for information I need (revised for clarity), as it allows me to obtain the information I want immediately (revised for natural flow). This is particularly crucial when dealing with urgent matters (revised for smooth transition), as I can explain in detail what I need to know over the phone (revised for proper grammar). One example of this is when I faced a medical emergency and needed advice from a friend who is a doctor (added supporting example). Calling them directly allowed me to receive immediate guidance on how to handle the situation (reason and explanation).

On the other hand, if I choose to send text messages (smooth transition), there's a chance that I may not receive a timely reply (revised for natural flow), which could cause me to miss out on vital information or opportunities (revised for proper grammar). For instance, when trying to secure concert tickets for a popular event (added supporting example), calling a friend who had access to tickets ensured that I was able to reserve them before they sold out (reason and explanation). In contrast, sending a text message might have resulted in a delayed response and missed opportunity (strong conclusion).

Corrected:

I prefer to call people on their cell phones for information I need, because I can get need (revised for clarity), as it allows me to obtain the information I want immediately on cell phone. It (revised for natural flow). This is especially important particularly crucial when I face an dealing with urgent problem, and at the same time matters (revised for smooth transition), as I can explain in detail what I need to know over the phone (revised for proper grammar). One example of this is when I faced a medical emergency and needed advice from a friend who is a doctor (added supporting example). Calling them directly allowed me to receive immediate guidance on the cell phone. However, how to handle the situation (reason and explanation).

On the other hand, if I choose to send text messages, maybe I will messages (smooth transition), there's a chance that I may not receive the a timely reply (revised for natural flow), which could cause me to miss out on time, and it will make me lose the best vital information or opportunities (revised for proper grammar). For instance, when trying to secure concert tickets for a popular event (added supporting example), calling a friend who had access to tickets ensured that I was able to reserve them before they sold out (reason and explanation). In contrast, sending a text message might have resulted in a delayed response and missed opportunity to know the information and to address the problem.(strong conclusion).

6. Display title: 6.思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Prefer calling people on cell phones

- Main Point
  - Immediate information
  - Important for urgent problems

- Supporting Examples
  - Detailed explanation on the phone
  - Text messages may not receive timely replies

- Conclusion
  - Calling on cell phones helps to get information quickly and address problems efficiently

7. Display title: 7.关键词

8. Display title: 8.补充示例

9. When planning a surprise party, calling friends on their cell phones ensures that everyone is informed and can keep the secret.

10. In case of an emergency, such as a car breakdown, calling for help on a cell phone allows for immediate assistance and clear communication of the situation.

11. When coordinating a group project, calling team members on their cell phones enables efficient decision-making and real-time updates on progress.

12. During business negotiations, calling partners on their cell phones can help clarify misunderstandings and reach agreements more quickly.

13. When traveling and needing directions, calling a local friend on their cell phone provides accurate information and personalized guidance.

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 2.5

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

• 19

3.表达 从发音和语速方面来看，这个回答有一定的问题。虽然大部分单词发音正确，但有些地方存在拼写错误，可能是由于发音不准确导致的。此外，回答中存在一些不恰当的停顿。建议练习更清晰、流利的发音，并注意在合适的地方停顿。

4.话题发展 回答在话题发展方面做得相对较好，提供了一个清晰的观点，并通过一个例子来支持观点。但是，这个例子可能不足以充分说明直接打电话比发送短信更好。建议在回答中提供更多相关的例子或论据来增强观点的说服力。

5. 语言使用

Original:

From my perspective, I prefer to call people on their cell phones for the information I need. Because compared to the text messages, directly calling people can reduce the risk that other people miss the message and it can have a more timely response to get the information I need. For example, last year when a friend of mine and I are doing the same work for the same class and he text me when is the deadline for that assignment and I missed that message and he missed the deadline. So if he can call me directly, I can tell him the message and there's no problem.

Revised:

From my perspective, I prefer to call people on their cell phones for the information I need. This is because, compared to text messages, directly calling people can reduce the risk of missed messages and provide a more timely response. For example, last year, a friend of mine and I were working on the same assignment for a class. He texted me to ask about the deadline, but I missed his message, and as a result, he missed the deadline. If he had called me directly, I could have given him the information immediately, preventing any issues.

Another reason I prefer calling is that it allows for better clarification and understanding. When texting, it's easy for misunderstandings to occur due to the lack of tone and context. However, when speaking on the phone, we can ask questions and clarify points instantly. For instance, when discussing a complex project with a colleague, it's much more efficient to call and discuss the details verbally rather than trying to explain everything through text messages.

From my perspective, I prefer to call people on their cell phones for the information I need (I revised this sentence to make it sound more natural). This is because (I added "This is" for better flow), compared to text messages (I changed "the text messages" to "text messages" for better grammar), directly calling people can reduce the risk of missed messages (I changed "other people miss the message" to "missed messages" for clarity) and provide a more timely response (I changed "it can have a more timely response" to "provide a more timely response" for better grammar). For example, last year (I added a comma here), a friend of mine and I were working on the same assignment for a class (I changed "doing the same work for the same class" to "working on the same assignment for a class" for better clarity). He texted me to ask about the deadline (I changed "he text me when is the deadline" to "he texted me to ask about the deadline" for better grammar), but I missed his message, and as a result, he missed the deadline (I changed "and I missed that message and he missed the deadline" to "but I missed his message, and as a result, he missed the deadline" for better flow). If he had called me directly (I changed "So if he can call me directly" to "If he had called me directly" for better grammar), I could have given him the information immediately (I changed "I can tell him the message" to "I could have given him the information immediately" for better clarity), preventing any issues (I added this phrase for a stronger conclusion).

Another reason I prefer calling is that it allows for better clarification and understanding (I added this sentence as a second supporting example). When texting, it's easy for misunderstandings to occur due to the lack of tone and context (I added this sentence to explain why calling is better than texting in terms of understanding). However, when speaking on the phone, we can ask questions and clarify points instantly (I added this sentence to show how calling can lead to better understanding). For instance, when discussing a complex project with a colleague, it's much more efficient to call and discuss the details verbally rather than trying to explain everything through text messages (I added this example to strengthen my argument).

Corrected:

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Another reason I prefer calling is that it allows for better clarification and understanding (I added this sentence as a second supporting example). When texting, it's easy for misunderstandings to occur due to the lack of tone and context (I added this sentence to explain why calling is better than texting in terms of understanding). However, when speaking on the phone, we can ask questions and clarify points instantly (I added this sentence to show how calling can lead to better understanding). For instance, when discussing a complex project with a colleague, it's much more efficient to call and discuss the details verbally rather than trying to explain everything through text messages (I added this example to strengthen my argument).

6. 思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Calling people on cell phones

- Main Point
  - Timely response
  - Reduced risk of missed messages

- Supporting Examples
  - Missed text message about assignment deadline
  - Friend missed the deadline due to missed message

- Conclusion
  - Calling directly can prevent miscommunication and ensure timely information exchange

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Calling allows for clarification Explanation: You can ask questions and get immediate answers Supporting example: When discussing project details, calling ensures everyone is on the same page.

10. Sub-opinion: Calling is more personal Explanation: Hearing someone's voice creates a stronger connection Supporting example: Wishing someone a happy birthday through a call feels more sincere than a text message.

11. Sub-opinion: Calling is better for urgent matters Explanation: People are more likely to answer a call for urgent information Supporting example: In an emergency, calling someone is more effective than sending a text message.

12. Sub-opinion: Calling helps avoid misunderstandings Explanation: Tone and context can be better understood through voice Supporting example: A joke or sarcasm can be easily misunderstood in a text message, but not in a call.

13. Sub-opinion: Calling saves time Explanation: Information can be exchanged more quickly through calls Supporting example: Discussing complex issues over the phone can save time compared to lengthy text messages.