TOEFL TPO 1 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people believe that television has had a positive influence on society. Others believe it has had a negative influence on society. Which do you agree with and why? Use details and examples to explain your opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 2

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 2

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 2

2.预估分数

• 总分：18

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语速较慢，有些停顿。建议在练习中注意语速的控制，尽量保持流利且连贯。同时，注意正确的发音和语调，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对电视对社会的影响进行了简单讨论，但论述较为简单且缺乏具体例子。建议在回答问题时，明确表达自己的观点，并给出具体的例子或事实来支持观点。同时，注意组织结构的清晰性和逻辑性，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：I believe that television is a tool, which means how we use it. I believe that television is a versatile tool, and its impact on society depends on how we utilize it.（电视是一个多功能的工具，对社会的影响取决于我们如何使用它。）

原文：If we use it in a positive way, it might offer some benefits. When used positively, television can provide numerous benefits.（当积极使用电视时，它可以提供许多好处。）

原文：If we use it in a negative way, it might have some disadvantages. On the other hand, when used negatively, television can have detrimental effects.（另一方面，当负面使用电视时，它可能会产生不良影响。）

原文：For example, if we watch TV with our family members, we could discuss about news or topics on TV, so we could promote our relationship. For instance, watching TV with family members allows us to discuss news and various topics, thereby strengthening our relationships.（例如，与家人一起看电视使我们能够讨论新闻和各种话题，从而加强我们的关系。）

原文：But if we stay up late to watch TV, it might hurt our health. However, staying up late to watch TV can negatively impact our health.（然而，熬夜看电视可能会对我们的健康产生负面影响。）

In conclusion, I believe that television is a versatile tool, and its impact on society depends on how we utilize it. When used positively, television can provide numerous benefits. For instance, watching TV with family members allows us to discuss news and various topics, thereby strengthening our relationships. Educational programs can also enhance our knowledge and broaden our horizons. On the other hand, when used negatively, television can have detrimental effects. Excessive exposure to violent or inappropriate content may lead to negative behaviors and attitudes. Moreover, staying up late to watch TV can negatively impact our health. Therefore, it is essential to use television responsibly and make the most of its positive aspects while minimizing its negative effects.

6.思维导图

• Preference or opinion: TV is a multifunctional tool, impact depends on how it is used

  • Positive usage
    • Supporting Example 1: Watching TV with family members, discussing news and topics, strengthening relationships
    • Supporting Example 2: watching educational programs to improve knowledge and broaden horizons
  • Negative usage
    • Supporting Example 1: Excessive exposure to violent or inappropriate content leading to negative behaviors and attitudes
    • Supporting example 2: Staying up late watching TV has negative health effects

• Conclusion: Use TV wisely to make the most of its positive aspects and reduce the negative

7.关键词

8.补充示例

1. Sub-opinion: TV can broadcast important information and emergency notifications Explanation: The TV station will broadcast major news events and emergencies in a timely manner Supporting example: When a natural disaster occurs, TV can quickly inform the public to take measures

2. Sub-opinion: TV can help people relax Description: Watching a comedy show or movie can provide relaxation in a busy life Supporting example: After get off work, watching a light-hearted comedy can relieve the fatigue of the day

3. Sub-opinion: TV advertising can lead to consumerism and materialism Explanation: Too many advertisements may make viewers have unrealistic consumption desires Supporting example: Brand-name clothing and cosmetics in TV commercials may induce materialistic pursuits among young people

4. Sub-opinion: Television programs may affect children's values ​​and behavior Description: Children are easily influenced by characters in television programs and imitate their behavior Supporting example: Violent or immoral television programs may lead children to imitate bad behavior

5. Sub-opinion: Television can foster cultural exchange and understanding Explanation: By watching international news and documentaries, people can learn about the culture of other countries