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TOEFL TPO 63 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

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New Degree NavigatorWeb Site Students must complete certain courses in their fields of study in order to meet the requirements for graduation. Currently, students meet with academic advisors to discuss these requirements. Soon, though, students will be able to use a new degree navigator Web site to keep track of their requirements The Web site will make it easier for students to monitor which courses they have already completed and which ones they still need to take before graduating, so they can plan their schedules accordingly Also, the Web site will help reduce the workload for academic advisors, who will not need to meet with students as often.

السؤال

The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

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نموذج مستخدم #1

الدرجة
26

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 总体来说,表达清晰流畅,但有些地方可以改进。例如,可以适当减少停顿,使语速更加稳定。此外,注意发音的准确性,以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习,提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 The topic development is well-done in the response. The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The man's opinion is clearly stated, and the reasons he gives for holding that opinion are well-explained with relevant examples. To improve further, consider adding more details or examples to support the points made, but overall, the topic development is strong in this response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is going to make a new degree navigator website, The university plans to create a new degree navigator website, (将going to改为plans to,使表达更自然) because it is easier for students to monitor their courses they have completed and courses they still need to complete before graduation. Besides, it can reduce the workload of the academic advisors. In the conversation, the man really liked this idea. First off, he said that students now have different classes they need to take before graduation and it is very hard for them to stay organized. For example, a friend of him once missed a course and he had to take another course during summer break and his graduation was delayed for months. Besides, he also said that the advisors are all professors and they have a lot of other work to do. So, by doing this plan, the professors can have more time to talk about serious issues with students, such as switching majors and doing internships. Because of these two reasons, the man really likes this idea.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to create a new degree navigator website, as it simplifies the process for students to monitor their completed courses and those still required before graduation. Additionally, it reduces the workload of academic advisors. In the conversation, the man expresses his enthusiasm for this plan. Firstly, he mentions that students currently struggle with organizing their required classes before graduation. He provides an example of his friend who missed a course, had to take another during summer break, and experienced a delayed graduation. Furthermore, he states that advisors are also professors with numerous responsibilities; thus, implementing this plan allows them more time to discuss serious issues with students such as changing majors or pursuing internships. Due to these reasons, the man strongly supports the idea.

6.思维导图


- Degree Navigator Website
  - Simplifies monitoring courses
  - Reduces academic advisors' workload

- Man's Opinion
  - Enthusiasm for the plan
  - Reasons:
    - Struggle with organizing required classes
      - Example: friend's delayed graduation
    - Advisors are also professors
      - More time for serious issues (changing majors, internships)

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
Enthusiasm/ɪnˈθuːziæzəm/NounIntense and eager enjoyment, interest, or approval热情,热忱The man showed great enthusiasm for the new degree navigator website as it simplifies course tracking.
Implement/ˈɪmplɪment/VerbPut (a decision, plan, agreement, etc.) into effect实施,执行Implementing this plan allows professors more time to discuss serious issues with students.
Organize/ˈɔːrɡənaɪz/VerbArrange systematically; order组织,安排Students currently struggle with organizing their required classes before graduation.
Responsibility/rɪˌspɒnsəˈbɪləti/NounThe state or fact of having a duty to deal with something or of having control over someone.责任,义务Advisors are also professors with numerous responsibilities.
Pursue/pərˈsuː/VerbFollow or engage in (an activity or course of action)追求,从事The new website allows advisors more time to help students pursue internships.
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نموذج مستخدم #2

الدرجة
26

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 在表达方面,你的发音大部分清晰,但有时会出现一些不必要的停顿。为了提高流利度,请尝试在练习时保持一致的语速并减少停顿。此外,注意发音准确性以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 Your response is generally coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, you could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen your argument. Additionally, try to make smoother transitions between points to enhance the overall flow of your response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: About the plan described in the article, the man thinks it will be really helpful for students. Regarding the plan mentioned in the article, the man believes it will be extremely beneficial for students. (将really helpful改为extremely beneficial,使表达更自然且词汇更高级。) First, students all have so many classes to take, and the website can help them organize their schedules. Firstly, students have numerous courses to complete, and the website can assist them in organizing their schedules. (将all have so many改为have numerous,使表达更简洁且词汇更高级。) Second, the website can help students to record what classes they have to take to graduate. Secondly, the website can aid students in tracking the required courses for graduation. (简化句子结构,使表达更自然。) He mentioned one of his friends whose graduation has been delayed because he didn't take a certain class. He mentioned a friend whose graduation was postponed due to missing a required course. (调整句子结构,使表达更自然。) Third, about the advisor, it's also a good thing. Thirdly, regarding advisors, it is also advantageous. (将it's also a good thing改为it is also advantageous,使表达更自然且词汇更高级。) The advisors, often our professors, have so much work to do, and if the website can save their time, they could spend more time on the more serious things with students, like switching majors and internships. Advisors, who are often professors, have a significant workload; if the website can save their time, they could allocate more time to address pressing issues with students, such as changing majors and pursuing internships. (调整句子结构,使表达更自然且词汇更高级。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Regarding the plan mentioned in the article, the man believes it will be extremely beneficial for students. Firstly, students have numerous courses to complete, and the website can assist them in organizing their schedules. Secondly, the website can aid students in tracking the required courses for graduation. He mentioned a friend whose graduation was postponed due to missing a required course. Thirdly, regarding advisors, it is also advantageous. Advisors, who are often professors, have a significant workload; if the website can save their time, they could allocate more time to address pressing issues with students, such as changing majors and pursuing internships.

6.思维导图


- Plan in the article
  - Man's opinion: extremely beneficial

- Reasons
  - Students
    - Numerous courses to complete
    - Organizing schedules
    - Tracking required courses for graduation
  - Advisors
    - Significant workload
    - Saving time
    - Addressing pressing issues with students
      - Changing majors
      - Pursuing internships

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
beneficial/ˌbenəˈfɪʃəl/adjectiveproducing good results or helpful effects有益的,有利的The new degree navigator website is extremely beneficial for students and advisors.
numerous/ˈnuːmərəs/adjectivemany, existing in large numbers众多的,大量的Students have numerous courses to complete, making it difficult to keep track of their progress.
significant/sɪɡˈnɪfɪkənt/adjectivelarge or important enough to have an effect or to be noticed显著的,重要的Advisors have a significant workload, so the website can save their time and help them focus on other tasks.
pressing/ˈprɛsɪŋ/adjectiveneeding immediate attention; urgent紧迫的,迫切的Addressing pressing issues like changing majors and pursuing internships is crucial for students' success.
allocate/ˈæləˌkeɪt/verbto give something, especially a share of something available, for a particular purpose分配,分派The website can help advisors allocate more time to address pressing issues with students.
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نموذج مستخدم #3

الدرجة
26

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 从表达方面来看,整体上讲得比较清楚,但有时会出现一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力,建议在练习时注意保持语速的稳定,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外,注意发音的准确性,以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. To enhance the response, try to provide more specific details from the listening passage to support the man's opinion about the plan, such as mentioning how the website can help students avoid missing required courses and how it can free up time for academic advisors to focus on more serious issues with students.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The students will be able to use the New Degree Navigator website to keep track of their requirements. Students can use the New Degree Navigator website to monitor their requirements. (简化句子结构,使其更自然) Firstly, it will be easier for students to monitor courses. First, it simplifies course monitoring for students. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) Second, it can reduce workload for academic advisors. Second, it reduces the workload of academic advisors. (改进语法和词汇选择)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Students can use the New Degree Navigator website to monitor their requirements. In the conversation, both the man and woman agree that the website is beneficial because students often have various classes to take, which can be challenging to organize. For instance, the woman is majoring in business and has numerous courses to complete. The man's friend's graduation was delayed due to missed classes, as he didn't realize he needed them until it was too late. Furthermore, they believe that academic advisors, who are usually professors with many other responsibilities, would benefit from having more time available. By using the website, professors can allocate more time to discuss significant matters with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. Overall, the New Degree Navigator website offers a practical solution for both students and academic advisors in managing course requirements and schedules.

6.思维导图

  • New Degree Navigator website

    • Monitor requirements
    • Simplify course monitoring
    • Reduce workload for academic advisors
  • Conversation

    • Man and woman's agreement
    • Challenging to organize classes
    • Example: Business major, missed classes
  • Academic advisors

    • Professors with other responsibilities
    • More time for significant matters
      • Switching majors, pursuing internships

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
beneficial/ˌbenəˈfɪʃəl/adjectiveproducing good results or helpful effects有益的The new website is beneficial for students as it simplifies course monitoring.
allocate/ˈæləˌkeɪt/verbto set apart for a particular purpose分配Professors can allocate more time to discuss significant matters with students.
pursue/pərˈsu/verbto follow in order to overtake, capture, or defeat追求Students can pursue internships with the help of academic advisors.
manage/ˈmænɪdʒ/verbto handle or direct with a degree of skill管理The New Degree Navigator website helps students manage their course requirements and schedules.
responsibilities/rɪˌspɑnsəˈbɪlətiz/nounduties or tasks that you are required to carry out责任Academic advisors, as professors, have many other responsibilities besides advising students.
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نموذج مستخدم #4

الدرجة
23

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中,发音大部分清晰,但有时会出现停顿。建议练习流利地说话,保持一致的语速,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时注意准确发音,以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的,但在某些地方可以更加明确和详细。例如,在描述学生可能面临的问题时,可以提供更具体的例子。此外,在解释为什么男生喜欢这个计划时,可以更深入地探讨其原因。总之,尝试在回答中提供更多详细信息和支持观点的例子。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, a student suggests to establish a new degree navigator website. A new degree navigator website is suggested by a student.(建议使用被动语态,使句子更自然。) Original: First off, it will make it easier for students to monitor which course they should have. Firstly, it will make it easier for students to track the courses they need to take.(使用“Firstly”替换“First off”,并调整句子结构以使其更自然。) Original: Besides, it will also help reduce the workload for academic advisors, and they do not need to meet students often. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload for academic advisors, who will not need to meet with students as frequently.(使用“Additionally”替换“Besides”,并调整句子结构以使其更自然。) Original: In the conversation, the man liked this idea. In the conversation, the man supports this idea.(使用“supports”替换“liked”,使句子更准确。) Original: First off, he thinks that the class should be hard to stay organized. Firstly, he believes that it can be difficult for students to stay organized with their classes.(调整句子结构以使其更自然。) Original: For instance, some of his classmates just miss certain courses, and they have to graduate a few months later, in this case serious illnesses. For example, some of his classmates missed required courses and had to graduate a few months later due to this oversight.(删除不相关的信息,并调整句子结构以使其更自然。) Original: Besides, he also believes that the professors, and also known as the advisors, have a lot of work to do. Moreover, he believes that professors, who also serve as advisors, have a heavy workload.(调整句子结构以使其更自然。) Original: And if the navigator begins to start, the professor will have more time to talk about the student with their internship and others. If the navigator is implemented, professors will have more time to discuss internships and other issues with students.(调整句子结构以使其更自然。) Original: Therefore, the man liked this idea. Therefore, the man is in favor of this idea.(使用“is in favor of”替换“liked”,使句子更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

A new degree navigator website is suggested by a student. Firstly, it will make it easier for students to track the courses they need to take. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload for academic advisors, who will not need to meet with students as frequently. In the conversation, the man supports this idea. Firstly, he believes that it can be difficult for students to stay organized with their classes. For example, some of his classmates missed required courses and had to graduate a few months later due to this oversight. Moreover, he believes that professors, who also serve as advisors, have a heavy workload. If the navigator is implemented, professors will have more time to discuss internships and other issues with students. Therefore, the man is in favor of this idea.

6.思维导图


- New degree navigator website
  - Easier for students
    - Track courses needed
  - Reduced workload for academic advisors
    - Less frequent meetings with students

- Man's opinion
  - Supports the idea
    - Difficulty in staying organized with classes
      - Example: classmates missing required courses
    - Professors' heavy workload
      - More time for discussing internships and other issues

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish DefinitionSimplified Chinese TranslationSample Sentence
oversight/ˈoʊvərˌsaɪt/nounan unintentional failure to notice or do something疏忽The student's oversight led to him missing a required course, delaying his graduation.
workload/ˈwɜrkˌloʊd/nounthe amount of work assigned to or expected from a person工作量The new degree navigator website will help reduce the workload of academic advisors.
implemented/ˈɪmplɪˌmɛnt/verbto put into effect according to a definite plan or system实施If the navigator is implemented, professors will have more time to discuss important issues.
track/træk/verbto follow the progress or development of something跟踪The website will make it easier for students to track the courses they need to take.
stay organized/steɪ ˈɔrɡəˌnaɪzd/verb phraseto maintain order and structure in one's activities保持有序The man believes that it can be difficult for students to stay organized with their classes.
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نموذج مستخدم #5

الدرجة
23

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看,发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定,但偶尔会有停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语言流畅度,减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意纠正发音错误,以免影响听众的理解。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看,发言者的回答内容基本上符合题目要求,但在组织结构和逻辑性方面还有待提高。建议发言者在练习时注意明确论点和论据之间的关系,确保回答内容条理清晰、逻辑严密。同时,可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇,使回答更加连贯。

5.语言使用

原文:In the writing material, the students plan to send the student will be able to use the new degree-elective website. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that students will soon be able to use a new degree navigator website. (原文中的表述不清晰,已修改为更准确的描述。) Because first reason is that students can use it to plan schedules more effectively and efficiently. The first reason is that it allows students to plan their schedules more effectively and efficiently. (修改了句子结构,使其更自然。) The second reason is that the website has a lot of advisors who can help the students. The second reason is that the website will help reduce the workload for academic advisors. (根据原文内容进行了修正。)

And in the listening material, we can clearly learn that the men agree with the opinion. In the listening material, we can clearly understand that the man agrees with this plan. (修改了表述,使其更自然。) Because first reason he gives is that students rarely need some classes to join. The first reason he gives is that some degree programs require many different classes, which can be difficult for students to keep track of. (根据听力内容进行了修正。) And there are a lot of students often miss the certain classes. He also mentions that many students often miss certain required courses. (修改了句子结构,使其更自然。) For example, the man's friend wants to join the history classes. For example, the man's friend had to take an extra class to complete his history degree. (根据听力内容进行了修正。) However, he missed the history classes, so he failed the exam. However, he didn't realize it was a required course until it was too late, causing a delay in his graduation. (根据听力内容进行了修正。)

And the second reason is based on the fact that it's also useful for the advisor. The second reason is that it benefits academic advisors as well. (修改了表述,使其更自然。) They call all the advisor at a professor. Most academic advisors are also professors, (修改了句子结构,使其更自然。) This way can make them talk with the student with the serious issue more time. so this website will allow them to have more time to discuss serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. (修改了句子结构,使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is mentioned that students will soon be able to use a new degree navigator website. The first reason is that it allows students to plan their schedules more effectively and efficiently. The second reason is that the website will help reduce the workload for academic advisors. In the listening material, we can clearly understand that the man agrees with this plan. The first reason he gives is that some degree programs require many different classes, which can be difficult for students to keep track of. He also mentions that many students often miss certain required courses. For example, the man's friend had to take an extra class to complete his history degree. However, he didn't realize it was a required course until it was too late, causing a delay in his graduation. The second reason is that it benefits academic advisors as well. Most academic advisors are also professors, so this website will allow them to have more time to discuss serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships.

6.思维导图


- Reading Passage
  - Degree Navigator Website
  - Benefits
    - Effective scheduling
    - Reduced workload for advisors

- Listening Material
  - Man's opinion
    - Agreement
      - Reason 1: Complex degree programs
        - Example: Friend's delayed graduation
      - Reason 2: Benefits for advisors
        - More time for serious issues (e.g., switching majors, internships)

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
navigator/ˈnævɪˌɡeɪtər/nouna person or tool that helps plan a route or path导航员,导航工具The degree navigator website is an excellent tool for students to plan their academic path effectively.
workload/ˈwɜrkˌloʊd/nounthe amount of work assigned to a person or group工作量Reducing the workload for academic advisors will allow them to focus on more important tasks.
efficiently/ɪˈfɪʃəntli/adverbin a way that achieves maximum productivity高效地The new website will help students plan their schedules more efficiently.
internship/ˈɪntərnˌʃɪp/nouna temporary position with an emphasis on training实习With more time available, academic advisors can better guide students in finding suitable internships.
prerequisite/priˈrɛkwəzɪt/nouna requirement that must be met before something先决条件Students should be aware of the prerequisites for their desired courses to avoid missing any required classes.
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نموذج مستخدم #6

الدرجة
23

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面,你的回答相对清晰,但仍有改进的空间。注意保持语速一致,避免不必要的停顿。此外,注意正确发音单词以避免拼写错误。练习朗读和听力可以帮助你提高这方面的能力。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面,你的回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而,你可以更清晰地表达一些观点和细节。例如,在描述学生对计划的看法时,可以更明确地指出他们认为这个网站有助于避免错过课程和减轻顾问的工作负担。此外,在提供支持或例子时,尝试使用更具体和详细的信息。多做练习并参考范文可以帮助你在这方面取得进步。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the announcement, the school is going to build a new degree register website. According to the announcement, the school plans to create a new degree navigator website. (将“build”改为“create”,将“register”改为“navigator”,使表达更准确) First, this is because it will make it much more easier for students to know whether the course he is taking or not. The main reason is that it will make it much easier for students to track their course progress and requirements. (简化句子结构,使表达更清晰) Another reason is that it will reduce the workload of the advisor. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload of academic advisors. (添加“academic”以明确指代)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the announcement, the school plans to create a new degree navigator website. The main reason is that it will make it much easier for students to track their course progress and requirements. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload of academic advisors. The students think this is a great idea for two reasons. First, they believe that different students have various degree programs with specific courses, making it challenging to stay organized. This website would help them avoid missing essential classes and prevent delayed graduation. Second, they mention that academic advisors are often busy as they are also professors. The website would allow them more time to discuss serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. Overall, the students support the plan as it would streamline the process of tracking degree requirements and provide additional support from academic advisors.

6.思维导图


- Announcement
  - New degree navigator website

- Main Reasons
  - Easier for students to track courses and requirements
  - Reduce workload of academic advisors

- Students' Opinions
  - Avoid missing essential classes
    - Prevent delayed graduation
  - More time for advisors to discuss serious issues
    - Switching majors, pursuing internships

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish DefinitionSimplified Chinese TranslationSample Sentence
streamline/ˈstriːmlaɪn/verbto make a system, process, or organization more efficient by simplifying or reorganizing it简化,使效率更高The new degree navigator website will streamline the process of tracking course requirements and help students graduate on time.
essential/ɪˈsenʃəl/adjectiveabsolutely necessary; extremely important必要的,极其重要的It is essential for students to complete all required courses in their degree programs to graduate successfully.
workload/ˈwɜːrkloʊd/nounthe amount of work that a person or organization has to do工作量The degree navigator website will help reduce the workload of academic advisors, allowing them more time for other tasks.
pursue/pərˈsuː/verbto follow or engage in (an activity, interest, etc.)追求,从事Many students seek advice from academic advisors when they want to pursue internships related to their field of study.
implementation/ɪmˌplɛmənˈteɪʃən/nounthe process of putting a decision, plan, or agreement into effect实施,执行The implementation of the degree navigator website will greatly benefit both students and academic advisors in the long run.
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نموذج مستخدم #7

الدرجة
23

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看,这位考生的回答相对清晰,但在某些地方存在一些不必要的重复。为了提高语言流利度,建议考生在练习时注意避免重复相同的内容,并确保在回答问题时保持一致的语速和适当的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看,考生基本上回答了问题,但在总结计划时存在重复。为了使回答更加连贯和有条理,建议考生在练习时注意组织好自己的思路,并确保在回答问题时提供足够的支持或例子。同时,避免在回答中重复相同的内容。

5.语言使用

原文:In the reading, a new degree navigator website to keep track of the requirements for graduation will be established to benefit both students and advisors. In the reading, a new degree navigator website to keep track of the requirements for graduation will be established to benefit both students and advisors. In the reading, a new degree navigator website to keep track of the requirements for graduation will be established to benefit both students and advisors.

修改后:The reading introduces a new degree navigator website designed to help students monitor their progress towards graduation and reduce the workload for academic advisors.(删除了重复的内容,使句子更简洁。)

修改建议及解释:在原回答中,考生重复了相同的内容,这会导致语言使用上的问题。为了提高语言使用得分,建议考生在练习时注意避免重复,并尝试使用更多不同的词汇和表达方式来描述同一件事情。同时,确保在回答问题时使用恰当的语法和自然的语言风格。

根据修改建议,以下是一个140字左右的改进后的回答:

The reading introduces a new degree navigator website designed to help students monitor their progress towards graduation and reduce the workload for academic advisors. The man in the conversation supports this plan, as he believes it will be helpful for students in staying organized and avoiding mistakes like missing required courses. He shares an example of his friend who had to delay his graduation due to an overlooked course requirement. The man also thinks that this website will benefit academic advisors, who are often busy with other responsibilities like teaching. With the help of the website, advisors can focus on addressing more serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships.

6.思维导图


- Degree Navigator Website
  - Monitor progress
  - Graduation requirements
  - Benefits
    - Students
      - Stay organized
      - Avoid mistakes (missing courses)
    - Academic advisors
      - Reduced workload
      - Focus on serious issues (switching majors, internships)

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
navigator/ˈnævɪˌɡeɪtər/nounA person or device that helps to find the way to a destination导航员,导航设备The degree navigator website serves as a useful tool for students to find their way towards graduation.
monitor/ˈmɒnɪtər/verbTo watch and check something over a period of time监控,监测Students can monitor their progress and ensure they are meeting graduation requirements using the website.
workload/ˈwɜrkˌloʊd/nounThe amount of work that a person or organization has to do工作量The new website will help reduce the workload for academic advisors.
internship/ˈɪntɜrnˌʃɪp/nounA temporary position with an emphasis on on-the-job training实习With more time available, advisors can guide students in finding suitable internships related to their majors.
overlooked/ˌoʊvərˈlʊkt/adjectiveNot noticed or considered被忽视的The man mentioned his friend who had to delay graduation due to an overlooked course requirement.
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نموذج مستخدم #8

الدرجة
23

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分

  • 交付 (Delivery): 3

  • 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3

  • 语言使用 (Language Use): 2.5

2.预估分数: 23

3.表达 总体来说,发言者的表达较为清晰,但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性,建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外,发言者在发音方面也需要加强练习,以避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在回答问题时基本上涵盖了所需的信息,但在组织和连接观点方面还有待提高。建议发言者在准备答案时先列出要点,然后按照逻辑顺序进行组织。此外,在提供支持或举例时,尽量确保内容与主题紧密相关,以增强论述的说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: encouraged the school plans to make a new degree navigator website. The school plans to introduce a new degree navigator website.(建议使用更自然的表达方式)

The man really agreed with that, he thinks he really need it because he has many programs and subjects such as math, economics, all these subjects really need it very much. The man strongly agrees with this plan, as he believes it is necessary due to the numerous courses and subjects, like math and economics, that require proper organization.(改进了句子结构和词汇)

And his friends want to get the extra degree this term but the degree is delayed because he didn't realize that some subjects need to be subject so now you can see them on the website. His friend wanted to graduate this term, but the graduation was delayed because he didn't realize that some required courses were missing. Now, these can be seen on the website.(改进了句子结构和语法)

Also, furthermore, as an advantage for the professors, they really have a lot of work to do so they don't need to spend too much time to talk with the students about the syllabus and they can do some internship or the other works so they have more time. Additionally, this will benefit professors who have a heavy workload. They won't need to spend as much time discussing course requirements with students and can focus on other tasks like internships or research projects.(改进了句子结构和词汇)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school plans to introduce a new degree navigator website. The man strongly agrees with this plan, as he believes it is necessary due to the numerous courses and subjects, like math and economics, that require proper organization. His friend wanted to graduate this term, but the graduation was delayed because he didn't realize that some required courses were missing. Now, these can be seen on the website. Additionally, this will benefit professors who have a heavy workload. They won't need to spend as much time discussing course requirements with students and can focus on other tasks like internships or research projects. This way, they could have more time to talk to students about more serious issues where students might really need advice, such as questions about switching majors or doing an internship.

6.思维导图


- School Plan
  - New Degree Navigator Website

- Man's Opinion
  - Strongly Agrees
  - Reasons
    - Numerous courses and subjects
    - Proper organization needed

- Friend's Experience
  - Graduation delayed
  - Missing required courses

- Benefits for Professors
  - Reduced workload
  - Focus on other tasks
    - Internships
    - Research projects

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
Navigator/ˈnævɪˌɡeɪtər/NounA person or device that helps in navigation导航员,导航仪The degree navigator website will be a useful tool for students to plan their academic journey.
Organization/ˌɔrɡənəˈzeɪʃən/NounThe act of organizing; a structured system组织,安排Proper organization is crucial for students to complete their degree requirements on time.
Workload/ˈwɜrkˌloʊd/NounThe amount of work assigned to a person工作量Reducing the workload of academic advisors will allow them to focus on more important tasks.
Internship/ˈɪntɚrnʃɪp/NounA temporary position for training purposes实习Students can benefit from internships to gain practical experience in their field of study.
Graduation/ˌɡrædʒuˈeɪʃən/NounThe act of receiving a degree or diploma毕业My friend's graduation was delayed because he didn't realize he was missing a required course for his degree.
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نموذج مستخدم #9

الدرجة
0

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

这个回答完全没有回答问题,而且使用了不恰当的词汇。建议重新审阅题目并认真准备一个合适的回答。在发言时,请确保语速适中,发音清晰,并尽量避免使用不礼貌的词汇。

4.话题发展 这个回答没有涉及到题目要求的内容,因此无法评价话题发展。请仔细阅读题目要求,并根据所给信息组织一个有条理、内容充实的回答。

5.语言使用

原回答:Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck. 这个回答不适合。(这个回答使用了不恰当的词汇,完全没有回答问题。请重新审阅题目并认真准备一个合适的回答。)

修正后的回答:

The plan mentioned in the article is about a new degree navigator Web site that will help students keep track of their course requirements for graduation. The man believes that this plan is beneficial as it will make it easier for students to stay organized and avoid missing any required courses. He supports his opinion by sharing an example of his friend who had to delay his graduation because he missed a necessary course. Additionally, the man thinks that the Web site will reduce the workload for academic advisors, allowing them to focus on more serious issues with students.

根据审阅建议修改后的回答(满分30分):

文章中提到的计划是关于一个新的学位导航网站,该网站将帮助学生跟踪他们为毕业所需完成的课程要求。男士认为这个计划是有益的,因为它将使学生更容易保持组织和避免错过任何必修课程。他通过分享一个关于他朋友不得不推迟毕业,因为他错过了一门必要课程的例子来支持他的观点。此外,男士认为这个网站将减轻学术顾问的工作负担,使他们能够更专注于与学生讨论更严重的问题。

6.思维导图

  • Plan

    • Degree navigator Web site
  • Man's opinion

    • Beneficial
  • Reasons

    • Easier for students to stay organized
    • Avoid missing required courses
    • Example: friend's delayed graduation
    • Reduced workload for academic advisors

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
beneficial/ˌbenəˈfɪʃəl/adjectiveproducing good results or helpful effects有益的The new degree navigator Web site is beneficial for students and advisors alike.
requirements/rɪˈkwaɪərmənts/nounsomething that is needed or demanded要求Students must complete certain course requirements to graduate.
workload/ˈwɜrkˌloʊd/nounthe amount of work that a person or organization has to do工作量The Web site will help reduce the workload for academic advisors.
organized/ˈɔrɡəˌnaɪzd/adjectivearranged in a structured or orderly way有组织的The degree navigator Web site will help students stay organized with their courses.
academic advisor/əˈkædəmɪk ædˈvaɪzər/nouna person who helps students make decisions about their education, career, etc.学术顾问Academic advisors play a crucial role in guiding students through their studies.
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نموذج مستخدم #10

الدرجة
23

نتيجة التقييم

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看,发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定,但偶尔有停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意提高连贯性,减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意发音的准确性,以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看,发言者的回答内容较为完整,能够清晰地表达出文章中的计划以及男生对计划的看法和理由。但在组织结构上还有提升空间。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性,使回答更加有层次感。

5.语言使用

原文:The university has decided to use a new degree navigation website. The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website.(将decided改为plans,使句子更自然。)
The reason includes helping students monitor course easily and reducing the workload for academic advisors. The reasons include assisting students in easily monitoring their courses and alleviating the workload for academic advisors.(将reason改为reasons,将monitor course easily改为easily monitoring their courses,将reducing改为alleviating,使句子更自然。)
The boy helped further strengthen the proposal. The man provided additional support for the proposal.(将boy改为man,将helped further strengthen改为provided additional support,使句子更自然。)
They will miss certain classes. Students might miss some required classes.(将They改为Students,将will miss改为might miss,使句子更自然。)
For example, his friend doesn't know he has to learn the history class so he graduated late. For instance, his friend was unaware that he needed to take a history class, which led to delayed graduation.(将doesn't know he has to learn改为was unaware that he needed to take,使句子更自然。)
It's also beneficial for the academic advisor because the academic advisor is a professor. This is also advantageous for academic advisors, as they are also professors.(将beneficial改为advantageous,使句子更自然。)
If they have time to learn about students, they also... If they have more time to understand students' needs, they can also...(将learn about students改为understand students' needs,使句子更自然。)

修订版(140词):

The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website. The reasons include assisting students in easily monitoring their courses and alleviating the workload for academic advisors. The man provided additional support for the proposal, stating that it's helpful for students because they have different classes and it's hard to stay organized. Students might miss some required classes, leading to delayed graduation. For instance, his friend was unaware that he needed to take a history class, which led to delayed graduation. This is also advantageous for academic advisors, as they are also professors with many responsibilities. If they have more time to understand students' needs, they can focus on addressing more serious issues such as major changes or internships.

6.思维导图


- Degree Navigator Website
  - Assisting students
    - Easily monitoring courses
    - Staying organized
  - Alleviating workload for academic advisors
    - Professors with many responsibilities
    - Focus on addressing serious issues
      - Major changes
      - Internships
  - Man's opinion
    - Support for the proposal
    - Example: Friend's delayed graduation due to missed history class

7.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolsParts of SpeechEnglish definitionsSimplified Chinese translationsSample sentences
implement/ɪmˈplɛmənt/verbto put a plan or system into operation实施,执行The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website to assist students and academic advisors.
alleviate/əˈliːviˌeɪt/verbto make something less severe or intense减轻,缓解The new website will alleviate the workload for academic advisors, allowing them to focus on other tasks.
advantageous/ˌædvənˈteɪdʒəs/adjectiveproviding an advantage; beneficial有利的,有益的Implementing the degree navigator website is advantageous for both students and academic advisors.
responsibilities/rɪˌspɒnsəˈbɪlɪti/nounduties or tasks that one is required to do责任,职责Academic advisors, as professors, have many responsibilities beyond advising students.
internships/ˈɪntɜrnˌʃɪp/nouna temporary position with an emphasis on training and gaining experience实习With more time available, academic advisors can help students explore internships related to their majors.
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