TOEFL TPO 58 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 4

• Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不太自然的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的连贯性，避免在不必要的地方停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以减少拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容组织得很好，观点之间的联系清晰，举例充足。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original: In the letter, the student suggests Kemper's the bookstore should sell snacks and drinks. This is because there should have chairs and tables available for students to sit while deciding what to buy, and it is convenient for hungry students between classes. However, the woman opposes this. First, she points out that the drinks are easily spent spilled on an expensive book by accident, so the book will be ruined. Moreover, she argues that there is already a convenience store in the student center selling same goods, which is much closer to academic building. However, bookstores are all the way in the other part of the campus. As a result, it is not convenient for students between classes to grab food.

(将“Kemper's”改为“the”，因为这里不需要特指某个书店。将“spent”改为“spilled”，因为这里表示的是饮料容易洒在书上。)

Revised (140 words): In the letter, the student suggests that the campus bookstore should sell snacks and drinks. The proposal aims to provide chairs and tables for students to sit while browsing books and offer convenience for hungry students between classes. However, the woman disagrees with this idea. Firstly, she highlights that drinks can be easily spilled on expensive books accidentally, causing damage to them. Furthermore, she argues that a convenience store already exists in the student center selling similar items and is much closer to academic buildings than the bookstore located on the other side of campus. Consequently, it would not be convenient for students between classes to grab food from the bookstore.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
    - Campus bookstore
    - Sell snacks and drinks
    - Chairs and tables
    - Convenience for hungry students

- Woman's disagreement
    - Drinks easily spilled on books
        - Damage to expensive books
    - Convenience store in student center
        - Closer to academic buildings
        - Similar items sold
    - Bookstore location inconvenient
        - Other side of campus

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确，导致了拼写错误。此外，适当的停顿也很重要。建议多加练习，提高发音准确度和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论述方面还有待加强。首先，在总结提案时，请注意使用正确的性别代词。其次，在解释女生观点时，可以更清晰地表达她的担忧，并给出更具体的例子。最后，在总结时，请注意使用正确的地点描述。建议在练习中关注这些方面，以便更好地组织和发展话题。

5.语言使用

Original: In the readings in newspapersnewspaper reading(报纸阅读，而不是报纸中的阅读), they said the compasscampus(发音错误，应为campus) bookstore should sell snacks and drinks. But the girlwoman(用woman更正式) doesn't think so. HeShe(性别代词错误，应为she) doesn't think it will work very well. First, heshe(性别代词错误，应为she) thinks if we eat snacks and drink some beverage, it will be easy to ruin the expensive book. Second, it's not convenient enough to buy snacks and drinks in the bookstore because the bookstore is always outside the campuson the other side of campus(地点描述错误，应为校园另一边). And they have already some closer stores in the campus, so they don't have to sell snacks and drinks in the bookstore.

Revised (140 words): In the newspaper reading, it was suggested that the campus bookstore should sell snacks and drinks. However, the woman disagrees with this idea, as she believes it would not work effectively. Her first concern is that consuming snacks and beverages near books could easily lead to accidental spills, damaging expensive books. Secondly, she argues that purchasing snacks and drinks at the bookstore is not convenient due to its location on the other side of campus. She points out that there are already closer stores within the campus, making it unnecessary for the bookstore to sell snacks and drinks.

6.思维导图

- Campus Bookstore
  - Sell snacks and drinks
  - Woman's opinion
    - Disagrees
      - Reason 1: Accidental spills
        - Damage expensive books
      - Reason 2: Inconvenient location
        - Other side of campus
        - Closer stores available

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的语速和发音大部分都很清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，能够清楚地表达女士对提议的看法及其理由。但在描述便利店位置时，可以更明确地说明学生中心距离教学楼更近，而书店则相对较远。此外，在总结时可以再次强调女士反对提议的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The latter The letter (改为letter，因为这里是指信件，而不是后者) proposes that campus bookstores should sell snacks and drinks for the students who are hungry between classes, and students can also have a snack when they are buying books. However, the woman disagrees with this proposal. First of all, she thinks that it is easy for students to spill something on the books accidentally. Therefore, the books will be ruined. Some of the books are very expensive, so it is not good to do so. Additionally, the campus has a convenient store at the student center which sells snacks, and it is much closer to the buildings where students have classes, so students can purchase snacks there, and the campus bookstore is much further.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The letter proposes that campus bookstores should sell snacks and drinks for students who are hungry between classes, providing a place for them to enjoy refreshments while browsing books. However, the woman disagrees with this proposal for two main reasons. Firstly, she believes that having food and drinks in the bookstore increases the risk of accidental spills on books, potentially damaging or ruining expensive textbooks. Secondly, she points out that there is already a convenience store located in the student center which sells snacks and is much closer to academic buildings than the bookstore. This makes it more accessible for students to grab a quick snack between classes. In conclusion, due to concerns about potential damage to books and existing alternatives for purchasing snacks on campus, the woman does not support the proposal.

6.思维导图

- Letter Proposal
  - Campus bookstores sell snacks and drinks
  - Convenience for students between classes

- Woman's Disagreement
  - Accidental spills on books
    - Damaging expensive textbooks
  - Convenience store in student center
    - Closer to academic buildings
    - Existing alternative for snacks

- Conclusion
  - Concerns about book damage
  - Availability of other snack options on campus

7.关键词