TOEFL TPO 73 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the letter writer's proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

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4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response does mention the woman's opinion and some reasons she gives for holding that opinion, but it could be more coherent and well-organized. Make sure to clearly summarize the proposal first, then state the woman's opinion, and finally explain her reasons in a logical order. Also, try to provide more accurate details from the listening passage to support your response. For example, mention that the woman thinks the concerts would be distracting for students studying in the afternoon and that having concerts on the lawn could damage the grass due to people walking on it.

5.语言使用

Original: The woman expresses her opinion against the writer's proposal. The woman disagrees with the writer's proposal. (原句表达较为复杂，修改后更简洁明了) Firstly, the writer's proposal is to hold the concert in the afternoon, because they think that in the afternoon, students do not have classes. First, the writer suggests holding concerts in the afternoon when students are free from classes. (修改后的句子结构更清晰，表达更准确) But the woman thinks that in the afternoon, students really want to sit around to read and study, just to have a quiet environment. However, the woman believes that students prefer a quiet environment for studying and reading during this time. (修改后的句子更简洁，语法更准确) And maybe in the evening it's better, because students can relax after a long day of work. She suggests that evening concerts might be more suitable as students can unwind after a long day. (修改后的句子结构和表达更自然) And secondly, the writer thinks that there are many people in the open lawn, and it's good to have open concerts. Second, the writer believes that the open lawn is an ideal location for concerts due to its popularity. (修改后的句子更简洁，表达更准确) But the woman thinks that some people are nice, but some people may be angry, because they do not want to listen to the concerts in the open lawn. However, the woman argues that not everyone might appreciate outdoor concerts, as they may have other preferences. (修改后的句子更简洁，语法更准确) They want to do other things. People might prefer engaging in different activities. (修改后的表达更自然)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the writer's proposal. First, the writer suggests holding concerts in the afternoon when students are free from classes. However, the woman believes that students prefer a quiet environment for studying and reading during this time. She suggests that evening concerts might be more suitable as students can unwind after a long day. Second, the writer believes that the open lawn is an ideal location for concerts due to its popularity. However, the woman argues that not everyone might appreciate outdoor concerts, as they may have other preferences. People might prefer engaging in different activities.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Afternoon concerts
    - Quiet environment for studying
    - Evening concerts (alternative)
  - Open lawn location
    - Popularity
    - Different preferences
    - Engaging in other activities

7.关键词