TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some instances where the speaker could improve their pronunciation to avoid confusion. For example, "upload" should be "uploaded," and "it's no room" should be "there's no room." To improve delivery, the speaker should practice proper pronunciation and work on maintaining a consistent pace throughout their response.

4. Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there are some areas where the speaker could improve topic development. For instance, the speaker could provide more specific examples from the listening passage to support their points, such as mentioning the woman's desire for all books to be digitized. Additionally, the speaker should work on making smoother transitions between ideas to create a more cohesive response. Overall, practicing these skills will help improve topic development in future responses.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The university announced that they are going to remove the old books that are not borrowed from the shelves. The university announced plans to remove old, unused books from the shelves. (Simplified and clarified phrasing) This can create more space for new books and also the old books will be scanned and upload to the computer. This will create space for new books, and the old books will be scanned and uploaded to the library's website. (Corrected grammar and added specific detail) The woman agrees for the following reasons. The woman supports this plan for several reasons. (Improved phrasing) She believes that the shelves were packed with many old books and lots of people complained about it. She believes that overcrowded shelves with old books have caused complaints from many people. (Rephrased for clarity) Also there are piles of new books in the library office that are going to be loaded to the shelf but it's no room. Additionally, there are piles of new books waiting to be shelved, but there is no room for them. (Corrected grammar and improved phrasing) In addition, if students can make access to all the books online, it's much more easy since students can just sit in their dorm room and access all the books they need. Furthermore, providing online access to all books would make it easier for students, as they could access the materials they need from their dorm rooms. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced plans to remove old, unused books from the shelves. This will create space for new books, and the old books will be scanned and uploaded to the library's website. The woman supports this plan for several reasons. She believes that overcrowded shelves with old books have caused complaints from many people. Additionally, there are piles of new books waiting to be shelved, but there is no room for them. Furthermore, providing online access to all books would make it easier for students, as they could access the materials they need from their dorm rooms. By addressing these concerns and implementing the proposed changes, the university can improve the library experience for all students while ensuring that valuable resources remain accessible through digital means.

6. Mind Map

• University's plan

  • Remove old, unused books
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitize old books

• Woman's opinion

  • Supports the plan
  • Reasons:
    • Overcrowded shelves
    • Complaints from people
    • New books waiting to be shelved
    • Online access benefits

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更自然、流畅的发音和语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在解释女士持有这一观点的原因时，可以更详细地说明。例如，在提到图书馆空间不足时，可以具体描述新书如何受到影响；在谈到电子图书的便利性时，可以进一步解释为什么在线查阅对学生更有帮助。通过提供更多具体细节和例子，可以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The plan is that the school will implement the policy that the books that have not been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library and make the room for the new books and bring the old books into the Internet and students can check them at their leisure time. The plan involves the university implementing a policy to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, creating space for new books, and digitizing old books for students to access online at their convenience.（将原句拆分为多个子句，使表达更清晰。）

The women agree with the plan, there are two primary reasons. The woman agrees with the plan for two main reasons.（改进语法和表达。）

One reason is that she thinks that the shelf is pretty crowded, so piles of new books have no room to lay. One reason is that she believes the shelves are quite crowded, leaving no space for stacks of new books.（改进词汇和表达。）

Second reason is that it is easier to use the old books which are not frequently being borrowed from the library. The second reason is that it would be more convenient to access infrequently borrowed old books online.（改进语法和表达。）

We can stay in the draw room and it is easier to watch them and check them from the Internet. Students can stay in their dorm rooms and easily view and check these books on the internet.（改进词汇和表达。）

修订版（140字）：

The plan involves the university implementing a policy to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, creating space for new books, and digitizing old books for students to access online at their convenience. The woman agrees with the plan for two main reasons. One reason is that she believes the shelves are quite crowded, leaving no space for stacks of new books. The second reason is that it would be more convenient to access infrequently borrowed old books online. Students can stay in their dorm rooms and easily view and check these books on the internet.

6.思维导图

- Plan
  - University policy
  - Remove books (not borrowed in 5 years)
  - Create space for new books
  - Digitize old books

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Crowded shelves
    - Convenience of online access

- Students' benefits
  - Access from dorm rooms
  - Easy viewing and checking online

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意控制停顿的频率，以使表达更流畅。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，并在回答中明确地阐述了文章中的计划、女士对计划的看法以及她持有这一观点的原因。为了进一步提高回答质量，建议在描述女士观点时更具体地引用听力材料中的细节。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to make change to the library's book. The university plans to make changes to the library's books.（将“change”改为复数形式“changes”，将“book”改为复数形式“books”，使句子更符合语法规则。） They want to remove some of the old books that have not been used for about five years and prepare space for the new books. They plan to remove some old books that haven't been used for about five years and create space for new books.（将“want”改为“plan”，使句子更正式；将“have not”缩写为“haven't”，使句子更自然；将“prepare”改为“create”，使句子更准确。） And the remote books will be scanned and uploaded on the school's website. Additionally, the removed books will be scanned and uploaded to the school's website.（将“remote”改为“removed”，使句子更准确；用“Additionally”替换“And”，使句子更连贯。） And the woman in the conversation thinks that's a timely change. The woman in the conversation believes this is a timely change.（用“The woman in the conversation believes”替换“And the woman in the conversation thinks”，使句子更连贯；用“this is a timely change”替换“that's a timely change”，使句子更自然。） While she is working in the library, she found that the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available. While working in the library, she noticed that the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable.（将“she is”改为“she”，使句子更简洁；将“found”改为“noticed”，使句子更自然；将“the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available”改为“the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable”，使句子更连贯。） So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed. She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed.（用“She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed”替换“So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed”，使句子更连贯。） And at the same time, the scanned books are much more easier for readers to use because students do not have to go to the library and carry the book around. Simultaneously, scanned books will be much easier for readers to use since students won't have to visit the library and carry physical books around.（用“Simultaneously”替换“And at the same time”，使句子更连贯；将“are much more easier”改为“will be much easier”，使句子更自然；将“do not have to”改为“won't have to”，使句子更简洁；用“visit the library and carry physical books around”替换“go to the library and carry the book around”，使句子更准确。） They only have to do is to stay in their room and read. All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read.（用“All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read”替换“They only have to do is to stay in their room and read”，使句子更自然。） And she thinks it will be much better if all the books can be scanned or digitalized. She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized.（用“She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized”替换“And she thinks it will be much better if

6.思维导图

- University Library Changes
  - Remove old books
    - Not used for five years
    - Create space for new books
  - Digitize removed books
    - Upload to the website
  - Woman's opinion
    - Timely change
      - Shelves crowded with old books
      - New books unavailable
    - Benefits of digitization
      - Easier access for students
      - No need to visit the library and carry physical books
    - Suggestion for improvement
      - Digitize all books

7.关键词