TOEFL TPO 73 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people like to send text messages when they need information. Others prefer to call people on their cell phones for the information they need. Explain which method you prefer and why.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Language Use: 3

• Topic Development: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery Your delivery is generally clear, but there are some areas for improvement. Try to maintain a consistent pace throughout your speech and avoid using filler words like "well" too often. Additionally, work on your pronunciation to minimize any potential misunderstandings. Practicing speaking aloud and recording yourself can help you identify areas where you may need to improve.

4.Topic Development Your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, you could provide more specific examples or support for your preference of sending text messages over calling. For instance, you could mention a personal experience where texting was more efficient or convenient than calling. This would strengthen your argument and make your response more engaging.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: Well, personally, I prefer to send text messages when I need information. Well, I think it's the most convenient way to get the correct information that we want. For instance, while I'm texting messages with my teacher, I can organize my language and clearly ask the question and get information that I want. However, if I'm calling my teacher, I might be really nervous or teacher might misunderstand me. Therefore, texting message is more convenient. And also, we can text messages wherever we are, like on the car, on the train, on subways, while we're walking. If we need to call a person, we need to stay in a quiet space and it has higher requirements for the environment around you. Therefore, I prefer to send text messages when I need information.

Revised Answer: Personally, I prefer to send text messages when seeking information. I believe it's the most convenient method for obtaining accurate details. For example, when texting my teacher, I can carefully compose my questions and receive clear answers. In contrast, if I call my teacher, I may become nervous or be misunderstood. Thus, texting is more convenient. Furthermore, we can send texts in various locations such as in cars, trains, subways or even while walking. Calling someone requires a quiet environment and has stricter conditions for surrounding noise levels. Consequently, sending text messages is my preferred method for acquiring information.

Explanation:

• Removed repetitive "Well" at the beginning of sentences.

• Changed "texting messages" to "texting" for a more natural expression.

• Changed "texting message" to "texting" for consistency.

• Changed "on the car" to "in cars" for correct preposition usage.

• Changed "it has higher requirements" to "has stricter conditions" for clearer meaning.

Revised 110-word version with two supporting examples:

Personally, I prefer to send text messages when seeking information. I believe it's the most convenient method for obtaining accurate details. For example, when texting my teacher about a homework assignment, I can carefully compose my questions and receive clear answers without any miscommunication. In contrast, if I call my teacher during their busy schedule, I may become nervous or be misunderstood. Another example is texting a friend for directions; it allows me to easily refer back to the message later. Calling someone requires a quiet environment and has stricter conditions for surrounding noise levels. Consequently, sending text messages is my preferred method for acquiring information.

6.Mind Map

• Preference: Sending text messages
  • Main Point: Convenience
    • Supporting Example 1: Clear communication with teacher
      • Sub-point: Avoid misunderstandings
    • Supporting Example 2: Usable in various locations
      • Sub-point: No need for quiet environment
  • Conclusion: Text messages are the preferred method for acquiring information

7.Key Words

8.Additional Examples

1. Texting allows for asynchronous communication, meaning that both parties can respond at their convenience without feeling pressured to reply immediately.

2. Text messages can be easily shared with others, making it simple to disseminate information to a group of people.

3. Texting provides a written record of the conversation, which can be helpful for future reference or in situations where proof of communication is needed.

4. When discussing complex topics, texting allows for the inclusion of visual aids such as images, diagrams, or links to relevant resources.

5. Texting enables discreet communication in situations where speaking aloud might be inappropriate or disruptive, such as during a meeting or in a public space.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语言流利，语速较为稳定，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个相对连贯和有组织的回答，并在一定程度上阐述了观点。但是，可以进一步完善观点的支持和例子。建议发言者尝试提供更具体的例子和论据来支持观点，并确保各个观点之间有明确的联系。

5.语言使用

原文：For me, television is a tool that depends on people's minds, which means how we use it. In my opinion, television's influence on society depends on how people utilize it. (改进了句子结构，使其更自然。)

If we use it in a positive way, it will have some benefits. When used positively, television offers numerous benefits. (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。)

For example, if we watch TV together with our family members, we could discuss some news or topics on the TV. For instance, watching TV with family members can promote discussions about news or various topics presented on the screen. (改进了句子结构，使其更自然。)

It could promote communication. This fosters better communication among family members. (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。)

But if we use television in a negative way, it might hurt our health. However, when television is misused, it can negatively impact our health. (改进了句子结构，使其更自然。)

If we watch TV for the whole night, we would have no energy to focus on studying or working. For example, watching TV all night can lead to a lack of energy and focus for studying or working the next day. (改进了句子结构，使其更自然。)

In my opinion, television's influence on society depends on how people utilize it. When used positively, television offers numerous benefits. For instance, watching TV with family members can promote discussions about news or various topics presented on the screen. This fosters better communication among family members. However, when television is misused, it can negatively impact our health. For example, watching TV all night can lead to a lack of energy and focus for studying or working the next day. Therefore, it is crucial to use television responsibly and strike a balance between its advantages and potential drawbacks.

6.思维导图

• Preference or opinion: The impact of television on society depends on how people use it
  • Key idea: Positive use of TV brings benefits
    • Supporting example 1: watch TV with family, facilitate discussion about news and topics
    • Supporting Example 2: Improve communication among family members
  • Key idea: Negative use of television has adverse health effects
    • Supporting Example 1: Watching TV all night leads to lack of energy and inability to concentrate on study or work
  • Conclusion: Use TV wisely, balancing its advantages and potential disadvantages

7.关键词

8.补充示例

1. Sub-opinion: Television can enhance knowledge

   • Explanation: People can learn a lot of new knowledge by watching documentaries and educational programs
   • Supporting examples: For example, watching documentaries about nature and history can broaden people's horizons

2. Sub-opinion: TV can help you relax

   • Explanation: After a stressful work or study, watching a comedy or entertainment program can make people relax
   • Supporting examples: For example, watching a light-hearted movie or comedy show can help reduce stress

3. Sub-opinion: TV may cause children to become addicted

   • Explanation: Watching too much TV may make children neglect school and outdoor activities
   • Supporting examples: For example, prolonged TV viewing may lead to poor grades and lack of exercise in children

4. Sub-opinion: TV ads can mislead consumers

   • Explanation: Some TV advertisements may exaggerate the advantages of products and mislead consumers to make wrong purchase decisions
   • Supporting examples: For example, some advertisements for weight loss products may exaggerate their effects, leading consumers to have unrealistic expectations

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，流畅，节奏稳定，仅有少量停顿。但是，在某些地方可能需要更多的练习来提高发音的准确性。建议您多加练习，尤其是在一些可能导致发音不准确的单词上。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，并在回答中给出了明确的观点和足够的支持或例子。然而，可以考虑在回答中加入更多具体的例子和详细信息来进一步支持您的观点。例如，在描述为什么您更喜欢使用手机打电话时，可以提供一些实际生活中的例子来说明这种方式如何帮助您更快地获得所需信息。

5.语言使用

原文：Personally speaking, I prefer to call people on my cell phone for the information I need. First, the text message always takes me a long time to wait for the information, but the cell phone has changed our lives tremendously. It made it easier for us to search for the information. For example, whenever I have a question like how a historical event effect presents, I will use my cell phone to call my friend and have a group study, have a talk with them, and then the information I need will appear on my mind within a few minutes, which is convenient as well as time-saving. So in conclusion, I prefer to call people on my cell phone.

修订后：(在此处，我们将修改一些句子结构和词汇以使其更自然。)

Personally speaking, I prefer to call people on my cell phone when seeking information. Firstly, text messages often require a long waiting time for responses, whereas cell phones have significantly improved our lives by providing instant access to information. For instance, whenever I have questions about how historical events impact the present, I can quickly call friends for a group discussion and obtain the necessary information within minutes. This method is not only convenient but also time-saving. In conclusion, calling people on my cell phone is my preferred method of obtaining information.

修订说明：

1. "the text message always takes me" -> "text messages often require"(改为复数形式，并使用“require”使句子更自然。)

2. "how a historical event effect presents" -> "how historical events impact the present"(修改语法和词汇以使句子更清晰。)

3. "have a group study, have a talk with them" -> "call friends for a group discussion"(简化表达，使其更自然。)

根据审阅建议，这是一个110字的修订版本，以达到30分的评分：

Personally speaking, I prefer to call people on my cell phone when seeking information. Firstly, text messages often require a long waiting time for responses, whereas cell phones have significantly improved our lives by providing instant access to information. For instance, when I need to understand complex scientific theories or analyze historical events' impacts on the present, I can quickly call friends or experts for in-depth discussions and obtain the necessary information within minutes. This method is not only convenient but also time-saving. In conclusion, calling people on my cell phone is my preferred method of obtaining information.

6.思维导图

• 偏好或观点：使用手机打电话获取信息
  • 主要原因：便捷和节省时间
    • 支持例子1：历史事件对现在的影响
      • 小组讨论
    • 支持例子2：理解复杂的科学理论
      • 与专家深入讨论
  • 结论：打电话是首选的获取信息方式

7.关键词

8.补充示例

1. 当我需要了解不同文化背景下的习俗时，我可以通过电话与来自不同国家的朋友交流，以便更全面地了解各种传统。

2. 如果我想获取关于某个产品的详细信息，打电话给销售人员可以让我立即获得所需信息并解决疑问。

3. 当我遇到技术问题时，打电话给技术支持团队可以帮助我快速诊断问题并找到解决方案。

4. 在紧急情况下，拨打求助电话可以立即获得援助和指导，而不是等待短信回复。

5. 当我需要就某个话题与同事进行头脑风暴时，通过电话会议可以迅速收集大家的意见和建议。

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 2

• Topic Development: 2

• Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 15

3.Delivery The speaker's response is understandable, but there are some issues with the flow of speech and pauses. To improve, try practicing speaking more fluidly and maintaining a consistent pace. Additionally, work on proper pronunciation to avoid spelling errors that may arise from inaccurate pronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response addresses the question but lacks coherence and organization. To improve, try providing a clear introduction that states your preference and then develop your ideas with well-organized supporting points. Use transitional phrases to connect your ideas and provide sufficient examples or reasons to support your preference.

5. Language Use

Original:

I Prefer to send text messages when I need information from others Firstly, I think it is more polite To send messages rather than just Directly calling others. I think every person Has their own stuffs to do if If you are calling in the wrong time it would Interrupt them Secondly, I think Messages gave me more time to correct my language so it would be better if I require something from others

Revised:

I prefer to send text messages when I need information from others. Firstly, I believe it is more courteous to send messages rather than directly calling others. I think every person has their own tasks to handle, and if you call at an inopportune time, it could interrupt them. One example of this is when someone is in a meeting or attending a class; a text message allows them to respond at a more convenient time. Secondly, I feel that messages give me more time to refine my language, which is beneficial when requesting something from others. For instance, when asking for help with a project or seeking advice, carefully crafting a text message ensures clear communication and prevents misunderstandings.

I prefer to send text messages when I need information from others. Firstly, I believe it is more courteous (revised "polite" for advanced vocabulary) to send messages rather than directly calling (corrected "just Directly calling" for proper grammar) others. I think every person has their own tasks (revised "stuffs" for proper grammar) to handle, and if you call at an inopportune (revised "wrong" for advanced vocabulary) time, it could interrupt them. One example of this is when someone is in a meeting or attending a class; a text message allows them to respond at a more convenient time (added example for strengthening the argument).

Secondly, I feel that messages give me more time to refine (revised "correct" for advanced vocabulary) my language, which is beneficial when requesting something from others (smooth transition). For instance, when asking for help with a project or seeking advice, carefully crafting a text message ensures clear communication and prevents misunderstandings (added example for strengthening the argument and strong conclusion).

Corrected:

I Prefer prefer to send text messages when I need information from others others. Firstly, I think believe it is more polite To courteous (revised "polite" for advanced vocabulary) to send messages rather than just directly calling (corrected "just Directly calling calling" for proper grammar) others. I think every person Has has their own stuffs tasks (revised "stuffs" for proper grammar) to do handle, and if If you are calling call at an inopportune (revised "wrong" for advanced vocabulary) time, it could interrupt them. One example of this is when someone is in a meeting or attending a class; a text message allows them to respond at a more convenient time (added example for strengthening the wrong time it would Interrupt them argument).

Secondly, I think Messages gave feel that messages give me more time to correct refine (revised "correct" for advanced vocabulary) my language so it would be better if I require language, which is beneficial when requesting something from othersothers (smooth transition). For instance, when asking for help with a project or seeking advice, carefully crafting a text message ensures clear communication and prevents misunderstandings (added example for strengthening the argument and strong conclusion).

6. Mind Map

- Preference/Opinion: Text messages
  - Main Point: Politeness and convenience
    - Supporting Example: Avoid interrupting others
    - Supporting Example: Time to correct language
  - Conclusion: Text messages are a better choice for requesting information

7. Key Words

8. Additional Examples

1. Sub-opinion: Text messages allow for multitasking.

   • Explanation: People can respond to text messages while doing other tasks.
   • Supporting Example: If someone is in a meeting, they can still reply to a text message without disrupting the meeting.

2. Sub-opinion: Text messages create a written record.

   • Explanation: Having a written record of the conversation can be helpful for future reference.
   • Supporting Example: If you need to recall specific details from a conversation, you can easily refer back to the text messages.

3. Sub-opinion: Text messages are less intrusive.

   • Explanation: People can choose when to respond to a text message, unlike phone calls that demand immediate attention.
   • Supporting Example: If someone is busy or not in the mood for a conversation, they can still read and respond to a text message at their convenience.

4. Sub-opinion: Text messages are more efficient.

   • Explanation: Text messages allow for concise communication, making it easier to get straight to the point.
   • Supporting Example: When requesting information, you can simply ask your question in a text message without engaging in small talk.

5. Sub-opinion: Text messages are less likely to be misunderstood.

   • Explanation: With text messages, people have time to think about their response and ensure they understand the question or statement before replying.
   • Supporting Example: If someone is unsure about what information you need, they can take their time to comprehend your request and provide an accurate response.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 2

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 2

2.预估分数

• 总分: 19

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。此外，发言者在发音方面也存在一些问题，导致了拼写错误。建议发言者多加练习，提高口语表达的流利度和准确性。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言表达的连贯性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对于自己选择发送短信这一方式的原因进行了较为清晰的阐述，并给出了两个支持观点。但在组织结构上还有待加强，建议在回答问题时先简要陈述自己的观点，然后再逐一解释原因。此外，在解释原因时可以尝试举例说明，以使回答更具说服力。

5. 语言使用

Original:

I think I prefer to use a text message when I need information. Firstly, I think by sending others a text message can give them plenty of time to think about what to reply, like if I just suddenly give a call and the other one will not think about any information to give me. And the second point is by sending text messages can help, can avoid suddenly disrupt the other side's activity, like if the other one is giving a class and I call it, then that will be erupted.

Revised:

I prefer to use text messages when I need information for two main reasons. Firstly, sending a text message allows the recipient ample time to think about their response. For example, if I were to call someone unexpectedly, they might not have the necessary information readily available. On the other hand, a text message gives them the opportunity to gather their thoughts and provide a well-informed answer. Secondly, text messages help avoid interrupting the recipient's activities. For instance, if someone is in the middle of teaching a class and I call them, it would be disruptive. However, a text message allows them to respond at their convenience without causing any disturbance.

I prefer to use text messages when I need information for two main reasons. Firstly (added "for two main reasons" to clarify that there are two supporting examples), sending a text message allows the recipient ample time (changed "plenty of" to "ample" for more natural language) to think about their response. For example (added "For example" for smooth transition), if I were to call someone unexpectedly, they might not have the necessary information readily available (rephrased for clarity). On the other hand (added "On the other hand" for smooth transition), a text message gives them the opportunity to gather their thoughts and provide a well-informed answer (rephrased for clarity). Secondly (added "Secondly" for better structure), text messages help avoid interrupting the recipient's activities (corrected grammar). For instance (added "For instance" for smooth transition), if someone is in the middle of teaching a class and I call them, it would be disruptive (corrected grammar). However, a text message allows them to respond at their convenience without causing any disturbance (rephrased for clarity).

Corrected:

I think

I prefer to use text messages when I need information for two main reasons. Firstly (added "for two main reasons" to clarify that there are two supporting examples), sending a text message when I need information. Firstly, I think by sending others a text message can give them plenty of allows the recipient ample time (changed "plenty of" to "ample" for more natural language) to think about what to reply, like their response. For example (added "For example" for smooth transition), if I just suddenly give a were to call someone unexpectedly, they might not have the necessary information readily available (rephrased for clarity). On the other hand (added "On the other hand" for smooth transition), a text message gives them the opportunity to gather their thoughts and the other one will not think about any information to give me. And the second point provide a well-informed answer (rephrased for clarity). Secondly (added "Secondly" for better structure), text messages help avoid interrupting the recipient's activities (corrected grammar). For instance (added "For instance" for smooth transition), if someone is by sending text messages can help, can avoid suddenly disrupt the other side's activity, like if the other one is giving in the middle of teaching a class and I call it, then that will them, it would be erupted.disruptive (corrected grammar). However, a text message allows them to respond at their convenience without causing any disturbance (rephrased for clarity).

6. 思维导图

• Preference or Opinion

  • Prefers text messages

• Main Point

  • Time to think about the reply
  • Avoid disrupting the other person's activity

• Supporting Examples

  • Sudden calls can be disruptive
  • Text messages allow for more thoughtful responses

• Conclusion

  • Text messages are a more considerate and effective way to get information

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Text messages are less intrusive.

   • Explanation: They can be checked and responded to at the recipient's convenience.
   • Supporting example: If someone is in a meeting, they can read and reply to a text message during a break without interrupting the meeting.

10. Sub-opinion: Text messages provide a written record.

    • Explanation: They can be easily referred back to for clarification or confirmation.
    • Supporting example: If you receive important information via text, you can easily find it later without having to remember the details from a phone call.

11. Sub-opinion: Text messages are more efficient.

    • Explanation: They allow for quick and concise communication.
    • Supporting example: Instead of engaging in a lengthy phone conversation, you can simply send a text message with the necessary information.

12. Sub-opinion: Text messages allow for multitasking.

    • Explanation: You can send and receive texts while doing other tasks.
    • Supporting example: If you're working on a project, you can continue working while exchanging text messages without having to pause for a phone call.

13. Sub-opinion: Text messages are less likely to be misunderstood.

    • Explanation: Written communication allows for clearer expression of ideas.
    • Supporting example: In a text message, you can carefully choose your words and phrasing to ensure your point is understood, whereas in a phone call, you might accidentally say something unclear or confusing.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但有时会出现停顿。建议练习更流畅地表达，减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以进一步完善。建议在解释为什么选择打电话而不是发短信时，提供更多具体的例子和支持论点的细节。此外，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加连贯。

5. 语言使用

Original:

I preferred to directly call other people when I need information. This is because of several reasons. The first reason is, I think, making a call instead of texting messages can bring you and your friend more closely together. Your interactions is going to be more intimidating because you are going to hear each other's voices. I think this kind of act opens the other's heart, and they are willing to give you more information you need. Another reason is, calling is more efficient than texting messages. We use hands to text messages, but we speak when we are calling. We can transmit information more clearly, understandable, and more efficiently and effectively during a call than text messages.

Revised:

I prefer to directly call people when I need information, for a couple of reasons. Firstly, making a call, rather than sending text messages, can foster a closer connection between you and the person you are contacting. This is because hearing each other's voices creates a more intimate interaction, which may encourage the other person to be more open and willing to provide the information you need. Secondly, calling is generally more efficient than texting. While texting requires manual input, speaking during a call allows for clearer and more understandable communication. As a result, information can be transmitted more effectively and efficiently through a phone call compared to text messages.

I prefer to directly call people when I need information, for a couple of reasons (revised for clarity and conciseness). Firstly, making a call, rather than sending text messages (corrected grammar), can foster a closer connection between you and the person you are contacting (rephrased for better flow). This is because hearing each other's voices creates a more intimate interaction (simplified phrasing), which may encourage the other person to be more open and willing to provide the information you need (rephrased for clarity). Secondly, calling is generally more efficient than texting (simplified phrasing). While texting requires manual input (clarified meaning), speaking during a call allows for clearer and more understandable communication (rephrased for better flow). As a result, information can be transmitted more effectively and efficiently through a phone call compared to text messages (rephrased for stronger conclusion).

Corrected:

I preferred prefer to directly call other people when I need information. information, for a couple of reasons (revised for clarity and conciseness). Firstly, making a call, rather than sending text messages (corrected grammar), can foster a closer connection between you and the person you are contacting (rephrased for better flow). This is because of several reasons. The first reason is, I think, making hearing each other's voices creates a call instead of texting messages can bring you and your friend more closely together. Your interactions is going intimate interaction (simplified phrasing), which may encourage the other person to be more intimidating because you are going to hear each other's voices. I think this kind of act opens the other's heart, open and they are willing to give you more provide the information you need. Another reason is, need (rephrased for clarity). Secondly, calling is generally more efficient than texting messages. We use hands to text messages, but we speak when we are calling. We can transmit information more clearly, understandable, and more efficiently and effectively (simplified phrasing). While texting requires manual input (clarified meaning), speaking during a call than allows for clearer and more understandable communication (rephrased for better flow). As a result, information can be transmitted more effectively and efficiently through a phone call compared to text messages.messages (rephrased for stronger conclusion).

6. 思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Directly call others for information

- Main Point
  - Closer connection
  - Efficiency and effectiveness

- Supporting Examples
  - Intimate interactions through voice
  - Clear and understandable communication

- Conclusion
  - Calling is better than texting for obtaining information

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Direct calls show more sincerity. Explanation: Hearing someone's voice can convey emotions better. Supporting example: When discussing important matters, a call can express the seriousness of the situation.

10. Sub-opinion: Calls allow for immediate clarification. Explanation: Any misunderstandings can be resolved on the spot. Supporting example: During a call, both parties can ask questions and get answers instantly, avoiding confusion.

11. Sub-opinion: Calls save time in urgent situations. Explanation: Immediate response and faster communication. Supporting example: In emergencies, a call can provide necessary information quickly and efficiently.

12. Sub-opinion: Calls help build stronger relationships. Explanation: More personal and engaging communication. Supporting example: Regular calls with friends or family members can strengthen bonds and maintain connections.

13. Sub-opinion: Calls are more suitable for complex discussions. Explanation: Easier to explain intricate details verbally. Supporting example: When planning an event or project, a call allows for better coordination and understanding of tasks.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some instances where the speaker could improve their delivery. For example, the phrase "just to call others is not an employed thing" could be rephrased to "calling others might not be appropriate." Additionally, the speaker should work on using more natural transitions between ideas and avoiding repetition of phrases like "Well, for the first reason" and "Well, for another reason." Overall, the speaker should focus on refining their speech to sound more natural and fluent.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response with clear connections between ideas. They also provide sufficient support for their preference of sending text messages over calling people on their cell phones. However, the speaker could improve their topic development by providing more specific examples or personal experiences to support their points. For instance, they could mention a situation where sending a text message was more convenient or efficient than making a phone call. By incorporating more detailed examples, the speaker's response would be even stronger and more convincing.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to send text messages when I need information. Well, for the first reason, I think it will avoid disturbing others. As you know, just to call others is not an employed thing when they are in some situations like when they are having a meet. Well, for another reason, I think that will also benefit me when I need to take down those notes. Because in this way, I can express my requirements clearly and make others learn about my needs.

Corrected Answer: As far as I'm concerned, I prefer to send text messages when I need information. Well, for the first reason, I think it will avoid disturbing others. As you know, just to call calling others is not an employed thing appropriate action when they are in some situations like when they are having a meet meeting. Well, for another reason, I think that will also benefit me when I need to take down those notes. Because in this way, I can express my requirements clearly and make others learn about my needs. (Changed "to call" to "calling" for better verb form; replaced "employed thing" with "appropriate action" for clarity; changed "meet" to "meeting" for correct vocabulary usage.)

Revised Answer (110 words): In my opinion, sending text messages is the preferable method of obtaining information. Firstly, it helps avoid disturbing others since making phone calls might not be appropriate in certain situations like during meetings. For instance, sending a text message allows the recipient to respond at their convenience without interrupting their current activity. Secondly, text messages provide a written record of the information, making it easier to take notes and refer back to later. For example, when planning a trip, having all the details in text form ensures that I can easily access the information whenever needed. In conclusion, I believe that text messaging is a more considerate and efficient way of gathering information compared to phone calls.

6.Mind Map

• Preference: Sending text messages

  • Main Point 1: Avoid disturbing others
    • Supporting Example: Recipient can respond at their convenience
  • Main Point 2: Written record of information
    • Supporting Example: Easy access to information for trip planning

• Conclusion: Text messaging is more considerate and efficient

7.Key Words

8.Additional Examples

1. Text messages allow for multitasking, enabling individuals to respond while attending to other tasks without losing focus.

2. In noisy environments, text messages are more effective as they can be easily read and understood, unlike phone calls where the audio might be unclear.

3. Text messages provide a platform for sharing multimedia content, such as images or documents, which can be useful when exchanging information.

4. With text messages, there is no need to worry about time zones or calling at an inconvenient time, as the recipient can view and respond when it suits them.

5. Texting allows for easy group communication, enabling multiple people to receive and share information simultaneously without the need for a conference call.

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语言流利度，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音准确度，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容较为连贯和有组织。但是，可以尝试在回答中提供更多具体的例子和支持观点的论据，以使回答更加充实和有说服力。同时，注意保持回答紧扣题目要求，确保内容与题目相关。

5. 语言使用

Original:

I personally prefer to call people on their cell phones. Firstly, I think texting messages is not as efficient as calling people on phones, because I think that texting messages may not convey all the details and information of the situation that I need to tell. Let's say if I'm facing an extremely pressing emergency, like I'm feeling very unwell and needing to go home immediately, then I might choose to call people on phones, because if I chose to text messages, then probably if I text messages to my mom, she may be preoccupied with her work, and then I'll respond immediately. But if I call her on phone, then I can explain my situation well, then it would ensure that she could understand my emergency.

Revised:

I personally prefer to call people on their cell phones for obtaining information. Firstly, I believe that texting is not as efficient as making phone calls, because texting may not convey all the necessary details and information of a situation. For example, if I am facing an urgent emergency, such as feeling extremely unwell and needing to go home immediately, I would choose to call someone for assistance. This is because if I were to text my mom, she might be preoccupied with her work and not respond promptly. However, if I call her on the phone, I can clearly explain my situation, ensuring that she fully understands the urgency of my needs.

Secondly, phone calls allow for immediate clarification and follow-up questions, which can save time and prevent misunderstandings. For instance, when discussing complex topics or making important decisions, it is crucial to have clear communication. A phone call allows both parties to ask questions and clarify points in real-time, leading to a more efficient exchange of information. In contrast, texting can result in delayed responses and potential misinterpretations due to the lack of tone and context.

I personally prefer to call people on their cell phones for obtaining information. Firstly, I believe that texting (revised for clarity) is not as efficient as making phone calls (revised for natural flow), because texting may not convey all the necessary details and information of a situation (revised for advanced vocabulary). For example (added transition), if I am facing an urgent emergency (revised for proper grammar), such as feeling extremely unwell and needing to go home immediately (revised for natural flow), I would choose to call someone for assistance (revised for clarity). This is because if I were to text my mom (revised for natural flow), she might be preoccupied with her work and not respond promptly (revised for proper grammar). However, if I call her on the phone (revised for natural flow), I can clearly explain my situation (revised for clarity), ensuring that she fully understands the urgency of my needs (revised for strong conclusion).

Secondly (added transition), phone calls allow for immediate clarification and follow-up questions (revised for advanced vocabulary), which can save time and prevent misunderstandings (revised for proper grammar). For instance (added transition), when discussing complex topics or making important decisions (revised for advanced vocabulary), it is crucial to have clear communication (revised for natural flow). A phone call allows both parties to ask questions and clarify points in real-time (revised for advanced vocabulary), leading to a more efficient exchange of information (revised for strong conclusion). In contrast, texting can result in delayed responses and potential misinterpretations due to the lack of tone and context (revised for smooth transitions and proper grammar).

Corrected:

I personally prefer to call people on their cell phones. phones for obtaining information. Firstly, I think believe that texting messages (revised for clarity) is not as efficient as calling people on phones, making phone calls (revised for natural flow), because I think that texting messages may not convey all the necessary details and information of the a situation that I need to tell. Let's say (revised for advanced vocabulary). For example (added transition), if I'm I am facing an urgent emergency (revised for proper grammar), such as feeling extremely pressing emergency, like I'm feeling very unwell and needing to go home immediately, then I might immediately (revised for natural flow), I would choose to call people on phones, someone for assistance (revised for clarity). This is because if I chose were to text messages, then probably if I text messages to my mom, mom (revised for natural flow), she may might be preoccupied with her work, and then I'll work and not respond immediately. But promptly (revised for proper grammar). However, if I call her on phone, then the phone (revised for natural flow), I can clearly explain my situation well, then it would ensure (revised for clarity), ensuring that she could understand fully understands the urgency of my emergency.needs (revised for strong conclusion).

Secondly (added transition), phone calls allow for immediate clarification and follow-up questions (revised for advanced vocabulary), which can save time and prevent misunderstandings (revised for proper grammar). For instance (added transition), when discussing complex topics or making important decisions (revised for advanced vocabulary), it is crucial to have clear communication (revised for natural flow). A phone call allows both parties to ask questions and clarify points in real-time (revised for advanced vocabulary), leading to a more efficient exchange of information (revised for strong conclusion). In contrast, texting can result in delayed responses and potential misinterpretations due to the lack of tone and context (revised for smooth transitions and proper grammar).

6. 思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Prefer calling people on cell phones

- Main Point
  - Calling is more efficient than texting

- Supporting Examples
  - Emergencies require immediate attention
  - Texting may not convey all details
  - People may not respond to texts quickly

- Conclusion
  - Calling ensures better understanding and quicker response in urgent situations

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Calling allows for better emotional connection. Explanation: Hearing someone's voice can convey emotions more effectively than text. Supporting Example: When sharing exciting news, a phone call can express the joy and enthusiasm better than a text message.

10. Sub-opinion: Phone calls are more suitable for complex discussions. Explanation: Lengthy or complicated topics can be discussed more easily through a call. Supporting Example: Planning a trip with friends is easier through a phone call, as everyone can share their ideas and preferences in real-time.

11. Sub-opinion: Calling ensures immediate clarification of misunderstandings. Explanation: Misinterpretations in text messages can be quickly resolved through a phone call. Supporting Example: If a friend misinterprets a text message as offensive, calling them can help clear up the confusion and prevent further misunderstandings.

12. Sub-opinion: Phone calls are more personal and engaging. Explanation: Speaking directly to someone creates a stronger connection and fosters better relationships. Supporting Example: Wishing someone a happy birthday through a phone call feels more heartfelt and genuine than sending a text message.

13. Sub-opinion: Calling is more reliable in situations with poor internet connectivity. Explanation: Phone calls do not rely on internet access, making them more dependable in certain situations. Supporting Example: When traveling in remote areas with limited internet access, calling is the most reliable way to communicate with friends and family.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，语速适中，只有偶尔的停顿。但是，有一些标点问题可能是由于不恰当的停顿造成的。此外，拼写错误可能是发音不准确的结果。建议同学在练习口语时注意掌握正确的发音，并在表达过程中尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，观点之间关系明确，并给出了足够的支持和例子。但是，在解释为什么更喜欢打电话而不是发短信时，可以尝试提供更具体和生动的例子来支持观点。此外，可以考虑在回答中加入一些转折词或连接词以增强说理逻辑。

5. 语言使用

Original:

Personally, I prefer to call people on their cellphones for two following reasons. First of all, I think using cellphones can always be more effectively and convenient. Say, if you have some problems and if you want to call your friends, cellphones can always tackle the issues within 10 minutes. However, if you choose to send text messages to your friends, it may take several hours or even a day for your friends to call back to you and reveal the messages. So that's not very efficient, I think. Secondly, I think cellphones is beneficial for building a strong bond with you and your friends because you can hear the voice from your friends through cellphones and that's very good for your friendship.

Revised:

Personally, I prefer to call people on their cellphones for information for two main reasons. First of all, I believe that making phone calls is more efficient and convenient. For example, if you have a problem and need assistance from a friend, a phone call can resolve the issue within minutes. On the other hand, if you choose to send a text message, it may take several hours or even a day for your friend to respond and provide the necessary information, which is not very efficient. Secondly, I think making phone calls helps build stronger bonds with friends because you can hear their voice and have a more personal interaction, which is beneficial for maintaining close relationships.

Personally, I prefer to call people on their cellphones for information (revised for clarity) for two main reasons. First of all, I believe that making phone calls is more efficient and convenient (revised for better word choice). For example, if you have a problem and need assistance from a friend (added specific example), a phone call can resolve the issue within minutes (explained further). On the other hand, if you choose to send a text message, it may take several hours or even a day for your friend to respond and provide the necessary information (added comparison), which is not very efficient (repeated point for emphasis). Secondly, I think making phone calls helps build stronger bonds with friends (revised for clarity) because you can hear their voice and have a more personal interaction (added detail), which is beneficial for maintaining close relationships (connected point to overall argument).

Corrected:

Personally, I prefer to call people on their cellphones for information (revised for clarity) for two following main reasons. First of all, I think using cellphones can always be believe that making phone calls is more effectively efficient and convenient. Say, convenient (revised for better word choice). For example, if you have some problems a problem and if you want to need assistance from a friend (added specific example), a phone call your friends, cellphones can always tackle resolve the issues issue within 10 minutes. However, minutes (explained further). On the other hand, if you choose to send a text messages to your friends, message, it may take several hours or even a day for your friends friend to call back to you respond and reveal provide the messages. So that's necessary information (added comparison), which is not very efficient, I think. efficient (repeated point for emphasis). Secondly, I think cellphones is beneficial making phone calls helps build stronger bonds with friends (revised for building a strong bond with you and your friends clarity) because you can hear the their voice from your friends through cellphones and that's very good have a more personal interaction (added detail), which is beneficial for your friendship.maintaining close relationships (connected point to overall argument).

6. 思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Prefer calling people on cellphones

- Main Point
  - Effectiveness and convenience
  - Building strong bonds

- Supporting Examples
  - Tackling issues within 10 minutes
  - Taking hours or a day for text messages response
  - Hearing friends' voices

- Conclusion
  - Calling on cellphones is more efficient and beneficial for friendships

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Calling on cellphones allows for immediate feedback. Explanation: You can ask questions and get answers right away. Supporting example: Discussing a project with a colleague over the phone can lead to faster decision-making.

10. Sub-opinion: Calling on cellphones is more personal. Explanation: Hearing someone's voice creates a more intimate connection. Supporting example: Wishing a friend happy birthday over the phone feels more heartfelt than sending a text message.

11. Sub-opinion: Calling on cellphones can help avoid misunderstandings. Explanation: Tone of voice and inflection provide important context. Supporting example: Sarcasm or humor can be easily misunderstood in text messages but is clearer when spoken.

12. Sub-opinion: Calling on cellphones is better for urgent situations. Explanation: People are more likely to answer a call immediately than respond to a text message. Supporting example: In case of an emergency, calling someone ensures they receive the information quickly.

13. Sub-opinion: Calling on cellphones helps improve communication skills. Explanation: Speaking directly with others helps develop better conversational abilities. Supporting example: Regular phone calls with friends and family can help build confidence in speaking and listening skills.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 2

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 2

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 2

2.预估分数

• 总分: 19

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不恰当的停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意语速和停顿的控制，以便更清晰、流畅地表达观点。此外，尝试提高发音准确性，以减少拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对于问题的回答较为简单，缺乏足够的支持和例子。建议发言者在回答问题时尽量提供更多具体的例子和详细的解释，以增强观点的说服力。同时，注意避免重复相同的观点，以保持回答内容的连贯性和组织性。

5. 语言使用

Original:

From my perspective, I usually like to send text message when I need information. Because the first reason is that sending the text message is such a time saver. In this fast-paced society, we all do our utmost to keep up with time. With the time message saved for us, we can do various meaningful things, thus make the precious time which explains our second. Secondly, it's convenient and it's such a time saver. In this fast-paced society, the sending text message could save a lot of time. If we call people or their cell phone on information we need, then the people will not call us, then it will waste our time. So I prefer to send text message.

Revised:

In my opinion, I prefer to send text messages when I need information. One reason is that text messaging is a time saver. In today's fast-paced society, we all strive to make the most of our time. By using text messages, we can save time and focus on other meaningful tasks. Another advantage of texting is its convenience. Unlike making phone calls, which may not be answered immediately and can waste our time, text messages allow us to communicate efficiently and receive the information we need without any delays. Therefore, I find sending text messages to be the better option.

In my opinion, I prefer to send text messages when I need information. One reason (I chose "One reason" instead of "Because the first reason" for a smoother transition) is that text messaging is a time saver (I rephrased "sending the text message is such a time saver" for better clarity). In today's fast-paced society (I changed "In this fast-paced society" to "In today's fast-paced society" for a more natural tone), we all strive to make the most of our time (I rephrased "we all do our utmost to keep up with time" for better clarity). By using text messages, we can save time and focus on other meaningful tasks (I rephrased "With the time message saved for us, we can do various meaningful things" for better clarity and flow). Another advantage of texting is its convenience (I added this sentence to introduce the second supporting example). Unlike making phone calls, which may not be answered immediately and can waste our time (I rephrased "If we call people or their cell phone on information we need, then the people will not call us, then it will waste our time" for better clarity), text messages allow us to communicate efficiently and receive the information we need without any delays (I added this sentence to explain the convenience of texting). Therefore, I find sending text messages to be the better option (I added this sentence to provide a strong conclusion).Corrected:

From

In my perspective, I usually like opinion, I prefer to send text message messages when I need information. Because One reason (I chose "One reason" instead of "Because the first reason reason" for a smoother transition) is that sending text messaging is a time saver (I rephrased "sending the text message is such a time saver. saver" for better clarity). In this today's fast-paced society, we society (I changed "In this fast-paced society" to "In today's fast-paced society" for a more natural tone), we all strive to make the most of our time (I rephrased "we all do our utmost to keep up with time. With time" for better clarity). By using text messages, we can save time and focus on other meaningful tasks (I rephrased "With the time message saved for us, we can do various meaningful things, thus make the precious time things" for better clarity and flow). Another advantage of texting is its convenience (I added this sentence to introduce the second supporting example). Unlike making phone calls, which explains our second. Secondly, it's convenient and it's such a time saver. In this fast-paced society, the sending text message could save a lot of time. If may not be answered immediately and can waste our time (I rephrased "If we call people or their cell phone on information we need, then the people will not call us, then it will waste our time. So I prefer to send text message.time" for better clarity), text messages allow us to communicate efficiently and receive the information we need without any delays (I added this sentence to explain the convenience of texting). Therefore, I find sending text messages to be the better option (I added this sentence to provide a strong conclusion).

6. 思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Prefer sending text messages

- Main Point
  - Time-saving
  - Convenience

- Supporting Examples
  - Fast-paced society
  - Avoiding phone calls

- Conclusion
  - Text messages are efficient and practical

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Text messages allow for multitasking, enabling us to communicate while doing other tasks, increasing productivity.

10. Text messages provide a written record of conversations, which can be useful for future reference or clarification.

11. Text messages can be less intrusive than phone calls, allowing the recipient to respond at their convenience without interrupting their current activities.

12. Text messages can be more discreet than phone calls, allowing for private communication in public settings or situations where speaking aloud may not be appropriate.

13. Text messages can be easily forwarded or shared with multiple recipients, making it simple to disseminate information quickly and efficiently.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 作为一名托福老师，从交付方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰、流畅的，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。但在某些地方还可以改进，例如在一些句子之间加入适当的连接词，使表达更加连贯。此外，注意发音的准确性，以免出现拼写错误。建议多练习发音和朗读，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答结构清晰，观点明确，并且给出了合理的例子来支持观点。但是，在内容上还可以进一步丰富和深入。例如，在解释为什么发送短信更方便时，可以再举一个具体的例子来说明。同时，在论述过程中尽量使用多样化的词汇和表达方式，使回答更具说服力。建议多参考托福口语范文和相关资料，提高话题发展能力。

5. 语言使用

Original:

Well, I'm the kind of person who will send text messages when I need information. First off, sending text messages allows us to seek help from others without disturbing them. For instance, if someone is taking an important course or attending a significant conference, sending a text will avoid disturbing them and they can give a response after the event. On top of that, sending text messages invites others to convey information in a more convenient and abundant way because they can copy some words or send a file to explain the whole thing more clearly.

Revised:

In my opinion, I prefer sending text messages when I need information. Firstly, texting enables us to seek assistance from others without causing any disturbance. For example, if someone is attending an important lecture or a significant conference, sending a text allows them to respond at their convenience without being interrupted. Secondly, text messages offer a more efficient and comprehensive means of communication, as individuals can easily copy relevant text or attach files to provide a clearer explanation of the subject matter.

In my opinion, I prefer sending text messages when I need information (revised for clarity and formality). Firstly, texting enables us to seek assistance from others without causing any disturbance (revised for better word choice and flow). For example, if someone is attending an important lecture or a significant conference (changed "course" to "lecture" for better context), sending a text allows them to respond at their convenience without being interrupted (revised for smoother flow). Secondly, text messages offer a more efficient and comprehensive means of communication (revised for advanced vocabulary), as individuals can easily copy relevant text or attach files to provide a clearer explanation of the subject matter (rephrased for better flow and clarity).

Corrected:

Well, I'm the kind of person who will send

In my opinion, I prefer sending text messages when I need information. First off, sending text messages allows information (revised for clarity and formality). Firstly, texting enables us to seek help assistance from others without disturbing them. causing any disturbance (revised for better word choice and flow). For instance, example, if someone is taking attending an important course lecture or attending a significant conference, conference (changed "course" to "lecture" for better context), sending a text will avoid disturbing allows them and they can give a response after the event. On top of that, sending to respond at their convenience without being interrupted (revised for smoother flow). Secondly, text messages invites others to convey information in offer a more convenient efficient and abundant way because they comprehensive means of communication (revised for advanced vocabulary), as individuals can easily copy some words relevant text or send attach files to provide a file to explain clearer explanation of the whole thing more clearly.subject matter (rephrased for better flow and clarity).

6. 思维导图

- Preference/Opinion
  - Sending text messages

- Main Point
  - Less disturbing
  - Convenient and abundant information

- Supporting Examples
  - Important course or conference
  - Copying words or sending files

- Conclusion
  - Text messages are a preferred method for seeking information

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Text messages are time-efficient. Explanation: People can read and respond to texts at their own pace. Supporting Example: When someone is busy, they can quickly glance at a text and reply later.

10. Sub-opinion: Text messages provide a written record. Explanation: It's easier to refer back to the information exchanged. Supporting Example: If someone forgets a detail, they can simply check the text history.

11. Sub-opinion: Text messages allow for multitasking. Explanation: People can engage in other activities while texting. Supporting Example: A person can cook dinner and still respond to a text without stopping their task.

12. Sub-opinion: Text messages reduce miscommunication. Explanation: Written words are often clearer than spoken ones. Supporting Example: There is less chance of misunderstanding when reading a text compared to listening to a phone call.

13. Sub-opinion: Text messages are less intrusive. Explanation: People can choose when to read and respond without feeling pressured. Supporting Example: A person can finish their work before replying to a text, avoiding interruptions in their workflow.

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

• Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 作为一名托福老师，在表达方面，我认为你的回答已经相当不错。但是，你可以在以下几个方面进行改进：首先，注意语速的控制，尽量保持稳定；其次，适当地运用停顿，以使听众更容易理解你的观点；最后，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。加油！

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, you could improve by providing more specific examples or reasons to support your preference for calling over texting. Additionally, try to expand on your points by explaining the benefits of your chosen method in various situations, which will make your response more persuasive and comprehensive.

5. 语言使用

Original:

I prefer to ask for information on cell phone to call on the people, because first, I think it's a convenient way, because you can just talk and you don't need to text and message, and it's like a kind of waste of time. Also, if you are in an emergency situation, you really need that information. Calling other people can be as quick as possible, and you can get your information that you need at once.

Revised:

I prefer to obtain information by calling people on their cell phones rather than sending text messages. Firstly, I believe it's a more convenient method, as you can directly communicate without the need to type out messages, which can be time-consuming. Secondly, in emergency situations where information is urgently needed, calling others allows for a quicker response and enables you to receive the necessary details immediately.

I prefer to obtain information by calling people on their cell phones (revised for clarity) rather than sending text messages (added for comparison). Firstly, I believe it's a more convenient method (rephrased for better flow), as you can directly communicate (revised for conciseness) without the need to type out messages (rephrased for clarity), which can be time-consuming (added explanation). Secondly, in emergency situations where information is urgently needed (rephrased for emphasis), calling others allows for a quicker response (revised for better flow) and enables you to receive the necessary details immediately (rephrased for stronger conclusion).

Corrected:

I prefer to ask obtain information by calling people on their cell phones (revised for information on cell phone to call on the people, because first, clarity) rather than sending text messages (added for comparison). Firstly, I think believe it's a more convenient way, because method (rephrased for better flow), as you can just talk and you don't directly communicate (revised for conciseness) without the need to text and message, and it's like a kind of waste of time. Also, if you are in an emergency situation, you really need that information. Calling other people type out messages (rephrased for clarity), which can be as quick as possible, time-consuming (added explanation). Secondly, in emergency situations where information is urgently needed (rephrased for emphasis), calling others allows for a quicker response (revised for better flow) and enables you can get your information that you need at once.to receive the necessary details immediately (rephrased for stronger conclusion).

6. 思维导图

- Preference: Calling on cell phone
  - Convenience
    - Faster communication
    - No need to text or message
  - Emergency situations
    - Quick response
    - Immediate information

- Conclusion: Calling is more efficient and suitable for urgent needs

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Calling allows for better understanding.

   • Explanation: Tone of voice and intonation can convey emotions and nuances.
   • Supporting example: When discussing sensitive topics, calling can prevent misunderstandings.

10. Sub-opinion: Calling saves time.

    • Explanation: Direct conversation eliminates waiting for responses.
    • Supporting example: When coordinating plans with friends, calling ensures everyone is on the same page quickly.

11. Sub-opinion: Calling is more personal.

    • Explanation: Hearing someone's voice creates a stronger connection.
    • Supporting example: When wishing someone a happy birthday, a call feels more heartfelt than a text message.

12. Sub-opinion: Calling allows for multitasking.

    • Explanation: You can talk on the phone while performing other tasks.
    • Supporting example: While driving, using hands-free calling is safer than texting.

13. Sub-opinion: Calling provides immediate feedback.

    • Explanation: You can ask questions and receive answers in real-time.
    • Supporting example: When seeking advice, calling allows for a more interactive and helpful conversation.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some areas that could be improved. The speaker should work on using more natural pauses and intonation to make the speech sound more conversational. Additionally, the speaker should focus on accurate pronunciation to avoid any confusion or misunderstandings.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent response with clear connections between ideas. However, the response could be better organized and include more specific examples to support the preference for sending text messages. The speaker should also consider expanding on the reasons for preferring text messages over phone calls, such as convenience or efficiency.

5. Language Use

Original:

I prefer to send text message when I need information. There are some reasons for that. Firstly, I'm really an introvert, so I feel more comfortable with texting message instead of calling someone and say about this topic online. Secondly, sending text message allow me to think more about what I need and send the text message with much more details about the information that I need. For example, I always need to ask my PI about the information that I need, so I would like to text him.

Revised:

I prefer to send text messages when I need information for a couple of reasons. First, as an introvert, I feel more comfortable communicating through text rather than making a phone call. Texting allows me to express my thoughts without the pressure of an immediate response. Second, sending text messages gives me the opportunity to think more about what I need and provide more detailed information in my request. For example, when I need to ask my principal investigator (PI) for information, I prefer texting them because it allows me to carefully compose my message and ensure that I include all necessary details.

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6. Display title: 6.Mind Map

• Preference/Opinion
  • Prefers text messaging
    • Reasons
      • Introverted personality
      • More comfortable with texting
      • Time to think and provide details
    • Supporting Examples
      • Asking PI for information
        • Texting allows for detailed requests

7. Display title: 7.Key Words

8. Display title: 8.Additional Examples

9. Example: Making plans with friends

   • Sub-opinion: Texting allows for easy coordination
   • Explanation: Can discuss multiple options and preferences
   • Supporting example: Group chat for deciding on a movie night

10. Example: Asking for help with homework

    • Sub-opinion: Texting provides a written record of the conversation
    • Explanation: Can refer back to the information later
    • Supporting example: Texting a classmate for clarification on an assignment

11. Example: Communicating with coworkers

    • Sub-opinion: Texting is less intrusive than calling
    • Explanation: Allows the recipient to respond when they have time
    • Supporting example: Messaging a coworker about a project deadline

12. Example: Making appointments or reservations

    • Sub-opinion: Texting allows for clear communication of details
    • Explanation: Can provide specific dates, times, and preferences
    • Supporting example: Booking a haircut appointment through text

13. Example: Sharing news or updates with family members

    • Sub-opinion: Texting enables easy sharing of information with multiple people
    • Explanation: Can send a group message to keep everyone informed
    • Supporting example: Updating family members on travel plans via text

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从发音和语速方面来看，整体表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在不适当的停顿。建议在练习口语时，注意保持语速的稳定性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, it could be improved by providing more specific examples or personal experiences to support the preference for text messages over phone calls. Additionally, the introduction could be more engaging by directly addressing the question and stating the preference right away.

5. 语言使用

Original:

Well, in my opinion, I prefer signed text message with seeking information as it offers a written record that can be referred to later. One supporting example is when making appointment with friends, it is common for people to forget exact time and place of meeting, but with the text message, they can easily check the detail and remember them. Another advantage of text messages is that they allow more thoughtful communication, which caused someone we might not always have the right words or ideas as some figure taps. However, with the text messages, we can take our time to compose a clear and conscious message, ensuring that the information is excellent and easy to understand.

Revised:

In my opinion, I prefer sending text messages when seeking information, as it offers a written record that can be referred to later. One supporting example is when making appointments with friends; it is common for people to forget the exact time and place of the meeting, but with a text message, they can easily check the details and remember them. Another advantage of text messages is that they allow for more thoughtful communication. Sometimes, we might not always have the right words or ideas at our fingertips. However, with text messages, we can take our time to compose a clear and concise message, ensuring that the information is accurate and easy to understand.

In my opinion, I prefer sending text messages when seeking information, as it offers a written record that can be referred to later (revised for clarity and natural flow). One supporting example is when making appointments with friends; it is common for people to forget the exact time and place of the meeting (corrected grammar), but with a text message, they can easily check the details and remember them (smooth transition). Another advantage of text messages is that they allow for more thoughtful communication (revised for clarity). Sometimes, we might not always have the right words or ideas at our fingertips (corrected grammar). However, with text messages, we can take our time to compose a clear and concise message (revised for natural flow), ensuring that the information is accurate and easy to understand (strong conclusion).

Corrected:

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6. Display title: 6.思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Signed text message with seeking information

- Main Point
  - Offers a written record
  - Allows more thoughtful communication

- Supporting Examples
  - Making appointments with friends
  - Composing clear and concise messages

- Conclusion
  - Text messages are more reliable and effective for communication

7. Display title: 7.关键词

8. Display title: 8.补充示例

9. Text messages provide a way to communicate without interrupting someone's day, allowing them to respond at their convenience.

10. In professional settings, text messages can serve as a record of agreements and decisions, reducing misunderstandings and miscommunications.

11. Text messages can be easily shared with multiple recipients, making it an efficient way to disseminate information to a group.

12. With text messages, people can use emojis and other visual elements to convey emotions and tone, enhancing the clarity of the message.

13. Text messages can be saved and archived for future reference, ensuring that important information is not lost or forgotten.

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

• Estimated Score: 22

3.表达 从表达方面来看，你的回答基本上是清晰的，但有时候可能会有些停顿。为了提高这方面的表现，我建议你在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, you could improve by providing more specific examples or personal experiences to support your preference for calling people on the cell phone for information. This would make your response more engaging and persuasive. Additionally, try to avoid repeating phrases like "because" and vary your sentence structures to enhance the overall flow of your response.

5. 语言使用

Original:

I prefer to call people on my cell phone for the information I need. First, because it can help me avoid misunderstanding. Because if I explain what I need in words, it may cause some others misunderstanding and didn't know what I really want. Secondly, it can save time. Because if I need to text my messages on my cell phone, it may take me a lot of time. But speak to each other can save time and explain what I need clearly. So I prefer to call people on my cell phone for the information I need.

Revised:

I prefer to call people on my cell phone for the information I need, primarily due to two reasons. First, calling helps me avoid misunderstandings that may arise from texting. Verbal communication allows me to convey my needs more effectively, reducing the chances of misinterpretation. Second, calling saves time compared to texting. Speaking directly with someone enables a quicker exchange of information and ensures that my needs are understood clearly. Therefore, I find calling on my cell phone to be the most efficient method for obtaining the information I require.

I prefer to call people on my cell phone for the information I need, primarily due to two reasons (revised for clarity and conciseness). First, calling helps me avoid misunderstandings that may arise from texting (corrected grammar and rephrased for better flow). Verbal communication allows me to convey my needs more effectively (rephrased for natural tone), reducing the chances of misinterpretation (corrected grammar). Second, calling saves time compared to texting (rephrased for better flow). Speaking directly with someone enables a quicker exchange of information (rephrased for natural tone) and ensures that my needs are understood clearly (corrected grammar). Therefore, I find calling on my cell phone to be the most efficient method for obtaining the information I require (strong conclusion added).

Corrected:

I prefer to call people on my cell phone for the information I need. need, primarily due to two reasons (revised for clarity and conciseness). First, because it can help calling helps me avoid misunderstanding. Because if misunderstandings that may arise from texting (corrected grammar and rephrased for better flow). Verbal communication allows me to convey my needs more effectively (rephrased for natural tone), reducing the chances of misinterpretation (corrected grammar). Second, calling saves time compared to texting (rephrased for better flow). Speaking directly with someone enables a quicker exchange of information (rephrased for natural tone) and ensures that my needs are understood clearly (corrected grammar). Therefore, I explain what I need in words, it may cause some others misunderstanding and didn't know what I really want. Secondly, it can save time. Because if I need to text my messages on my cell phone, it may take me a lot of time. But speak to each other can save time and explain what I need clearly. So I prefer to call people find calling on my cell phone to be the most efficient method for obtaining the information I need.require (strong conclusion added).

6. 思维导图

• Preference or Opinion

  • Prefer calling people on cell phone

• Main Point

  • Avoid misunderstanding
  • Save time

• Supporting Examples

  • Explaining in words may cause confusion
  • Texting takes longer than speaking

• Conclusion

  • Calling is more efficient and clear for obtaining information

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Calling allows for immediate feedback. Explanation: When calling, you can get instant responses and clarify doubts immediately. Supporting example: If I have a question about a project, calling my colleague helps me get the answer faster.

10. Sub-opinion: Calling helps build personal connections. Explanation: Hearing someone's voice can create a stronger bond than just texting. Supporting example: When I call my friends to catch up, it feels more personal and engaging.

11. Sub-opinion: Calling is more suitable for urgent matters. Explanation: In urgent situations, calling ensures that the message is received and understood quickly. Supporting example: If there's an emergency at home, I would call my family instead of texting them.

12. Sub-opinion: Calling can convey emotions better. Explanation: Tone of voice and intonation can express feelings more accurately than text. Supporting example: When discussing sensitive topics, calling helps to convey empathy and understanding.

13. Sub-opinion: Calling reduces the risk of misinterpretation. Explanation: Text messages can be easily misinterpreted due to the lack of tone and context. Supporting example: When discussing complex issues, calling helps to ensure that everyone is on the same page.