TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article.Briefly summarize the plan.Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语音清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意以下几点：1）在练习时尝试减少不必要的停顿，让语言更流畅；2）注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误；3）在练习时多关注语调和语速的变化，使表达更自然。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement. To enhance topic development, the speaker should consider the following suggestions: 1) Focus on providing more specific details or examples to support the main points; 2) Ensure that all aspects of the question are addressed in the response; 3) Practice organizing thoughts and ideas more effectively to create a more cohesive response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university proposes that a snack event will be held for the students and the woman in the conversation totally agrees for two reasons. The university plans to hold a snack event for students, and the woman in the conversation strongly agrees for two reasons. (将"proposes"改为"plans"，将"totally agrees"改为"strongly agrees")

Firstly, it will be helpful for students to be familiar with various of food because they don't have money to try out a lot of foods they may dislike so that the campus offers them an opportunity to try some new things without using a lot of money and also without going off the campus. First, it will help students become familiar with various types of food since they lack the funds to try many dishes they might not like; thus, the event offers them a chance to sample new items without spending much money or leaving campus. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰；替换了一些词汇，使其更准确)

Secondly, it will provide them a good opportunity to meet some students they have never met because they can only access the students who are on the class so that they can just meet a few friends and on this campus they can meet a lot of friends from a lot of different companies which is good for them to socialize and relax themselves. Second, it offers an excellent opportunity for them to meet new students whom they haven't encountered before since their interactions are limited to classmates; this event allows them to make friends from various departments, promoting socialization and relaxation. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰；替换了一些词汇，使其更准确)

For these students, the man totally agrees with the university. The man also strongly agrees with the university's plan for these reasons. (将"totally agrees"改为"strongly agrees"，使表达更自然)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to hold a snack event for students, and the woman in the conversation strongly agrees for two reasons. First, it will help students become familiar with various types of food since they lack the funds to try many dishes they might not like; thus, the event offers them a chance to sample new items without spending much money or leaving campus. Second, it offers an excellent opportunity for them to meet new students whom they haven't encountered before since their interactions are limited to classmates; this event allows them to make friends from various departments, promoting socialization and relaxation. The man also strongly agrees with the university's plan for these reasons.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Snack event for students

- Woman's Opinion
  - Strongly agrees
  - Reasons
    - Familiarity with various types of food
      - Limited funds to try dishes
      - Chance to sample new items without spending much money or leaving campus
    - Meeting new students
      - Interactions limited to classmates
      - Make friends from various departments
      - Promote socialization and relaxation

- Man's Opinion
  - Strongly agrees with the university's plan for the same reasons

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。例如，可以减少一些不必要的停顿，以使语言更流畅。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。练习朗读和听力可以帮助提高这方面的技能。

4.话题发展 The speaker provided a coherent and well-organized response, summarizing the plan and stating the woman's opinion about it. However, there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. The speaker could have focused more on the reasons the woman gives for her opinion, such as the opportunity to try new dishes from different countries and her increased likelihood of using the kitchen in her dorm. Additionally, it would be helpful to use more transitional phrases to connect ideas and provide a smoother flow throughout the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The plan described in the article is that the university will allow students to submit their favorite homemade recipes to the school website and the school cafeteria will make a few of those recipes every month. The article describes a plan in which the university allows students to submit their favorite homemade recipes to the school website, and the school cafeteria prepares a few of these recipes each month. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅)

In addition, students can access the school website and find a list of the recipes for the different foodstuffs. Furthermore, students can access a list of these recipes on the school website. (简化了句子结构，去掉了不必要的细节)

The woman believes that this is a very great idea and she likes it a lot. The woman thinks this is an excellent idea and is very enthusiastic about it. (使用了更高级的词汇)

She believes that this could be great because and she wants to submit her favorite recipe of her father's first. She believes this could be beneficial and plans to submit her father's favorite recipe first. (修正了语法错误和句子结构)

Now she believes that this is a great idea because she thinks that the recipes at the school dining hall is too limited and is the same selections every day and if it was not for the fact that her classes were so near, she would never go to the dining hall. She believes this is a great idea because she finds the current dining hall menu too limited, with the same selections every day. If her classes were not so close, she would not visit the dining hall. (简化了句子结构，使其更自然流畅)

She believes that the new this plan could change things. She believes that this new plan could bring positive changes. (修正了语法错误和词汇使用)

In addition, she believes that they can taste dishes from all around the world even places from like Ethiopia and Malaysia and she believes that is great as well. Additionally, she thinks they can taste dishes from various countries, such as Ethiopia and Malaysia, which she finds exciting. (简化了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇)

In addition, she believes that finding stuff to cook on the school website can let her use the kitchen more. Moreover, she believes that discovering new recipes on the school website will encourage her to use the dorm kitchen more often. (修正了语法错误和词汇使用)

Revised Answer (140 words): The article describes a plan in which the university allows students to submit their favorite homemade recipes to the school website, and the school cafeteria prepares a few of these recipes each month. Furthermore, students can access a list of these recipes on the school website. The woman thinks this is an excellent idea and is very enthusiastic about it. She believes this could be beneficial and plans to submit her father's favorite recipe first. She believes this is a great idea because she finds the current dining hall menu too limited, with the same selections every day. If her classes were not so close, she would not visit the dining hall. She believes that this new plan could bring positive changes. Additionally, she thinks they can taste dishes from various countries, such as Ethiopia and Malaysia, which she finds exciting. Moreover, she believes that discovering new recipes on the school website will encourage her to use the dorm kitchen more often.

6.思维导图

- Plan
  - University
  - Submit recipes
  - School website
  - Cafeteria prepares recipes

- Access
  - List of recipes
  - School website

- Woman's opinion
  - Excellent idea
  - Enthusiastic

- Reasons for opinion
  - Limited dining hall menu
  - Tasting dishes from various countries
  - Encourages dorm kitchen use

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语言流利，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者练习更自然、连贯的语音节奏，并注意在适当的地方停顿。此外，注意准确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent response and covers the main points from the listening passage. However, there is room for improvement in organizing the ideas more effectively and providing more specific examples or details to support the points made. To enhance topic development, it is recommended that the speaker practice outlining their response before speaking and focus on providing clear connections between ideas, as well as elaborating on examples or details to better support their points.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is going to hold a snack break to help students get to know each other and be familiar with the food on campus. The university plans to hold a snack break event, allowing students to socialize and become acquainted with local food options on campus. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅) And the woman in the listening part likes this idea. Because firstly she says that this activity is quite helpful since students don't have much money to try every item on the menu to figure out which one is their favorite. And through this activity they would be able to figure it out and stick to a type of food and never change it. This event allows them to sample various dishes without spending money, helping them discover their preferences. (简化了句子结构，提高了表达的准确性) Secondly she thinks that this activity provides an opportunity for students to get to know with their roommates and students in their class more easily. And they would also know... Additionally, it fosters connections among classmates and roommates. (简化了句子结构，使表达更清晰)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to hold a snack break event, allowing students to socialize and become acquainted with local food options on campus. The woman in the listening passage supports this idea for two main reasons. Firstly, she believes that the event is beneficial for students who have limited budgets, as it enables them to sample various dishes without spending money, helping them discover their preferences. Secondly, she thinks that this activity provides an excellent opportunity for students to establish connections with their classmates and roommates, fostering a sense of community and promoting interaction among students from different departments. By attending the snack break event, students can not only explore diverse food options but also expand their social circles, making the most of their university experience.

6.思维导图

• University Snack Break Event

  • Socialize
  • Acquaint with local food options

• Woman's Opinion

  • Supports the idea
    • Beneficial for students with limited budgets
      • Sample various dishes without spending money
      • Discover preferences
    • Fosters connections among classmates and roommates
      • Sense of community
      • Interaction among students from different departments

7.关键词

1.子项得分

Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

Estimated Score: 20

3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不恰当的停顿。建议发言者注意语速，保持稳定的节奏，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，发言者在发音方面也需要改进，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展

The speaker provides a coherent response, summarizing the plan and stating the woman's opinion on it. However, the organization could be improved by clearly stating the reasons for her opinion in separate sentences and providing more specific examples from the listening passage. Additionally, it would be helpful to use transition words or phrases to connect ideas more smoothly. For example, "Firstly, the woman believes that the intense rehearsal schedule is a major reason for low student participation..."

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is planning to discontinue the jazz tour currently because there are no more participating students in this tour and there are other tours that can be a replacement. The university plans to discontinue the jazz choir due to the lack of student participation, and suggests that other choirs could serve as alternatives. (将 "jazz tour" 改为 "jazz choir"，简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。) The women disagree this plan because of the following reasons. The woman disagrees with this plan for several reasons. (改进语法和句子结构。) First, they are so consuming time so other students don't want to participate in it. First, the choir's time-consuming schedule discourages students from participating. (简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。) It has three days a week. It meets three days a week. (改进句子结构。) If it changes into once a week, there might be more students to attend in it. If it were changed to once a week, more students might be able to attend. (改进语法和句子结构。) And second, it's alternately different from other music. Second, the jazz choir's music is distinct from other genres. (简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。) The students' tour in school is classical music rather than jazz. The alternative choir at the university focuses on classical music instead of jazz. (改进句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。) It's not different. It's not the same. This difference in musical styles may not appeal to all students. (简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to discontinue the jazz choir due to the lack of student participation, and suggests that other choirs could serve as alternatives. The woman disagrees with this plan for several reasons. First, the choir's time-consuming schedule discourages students from participating. It meets three days a week, and if it were changed to once a week, more students might be able to attend. Second, the jazz choir's music is distinct from other genres. The alternative choir at the university focuses on classical music instead of jazz. This difference in musical styles may not appeal to all students, making it an unsatisfactory replacement for those who prefer jazz. Overall, the woman believes that by adjusting the rehearsal schedule and considering students' musical preferences, the university could maintain the jazz choir and attract more participants.

6.思维导图

• Discontinuing Jazz Choir

  • Lack of student participation
  • Alternative choirs available

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Reasons for disagreement
    • Time-consuming schedule
      • Three days a week
      • Suggestion: once a week
    • Different music genres
      • Jazz vs. Classical music
      • Unsatisfactory replacement

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

• Estimated Score: 24

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，但偶尔出现了不恰当的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言的连贯性。此外，还需注意正确发音，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in the summary of the plan. The speaker should mention that the event is called "Beginning of Semester Snack Break" and it will be held at the Student Center with local restaurants providing free food samples. This will help to provide a clearer context for the listener. Additionally, try to use more varied sentence structures and vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school plans events about snacks for students, and the women in the conversation strongly agrees for two reasons. The university plans a snack event for students, and the woman in the conversation strongly agrees with it for two reasons. (将“学校”改为“大学”，使语境更明确；将“关于零食的活动”改为“零食活动”，使表达更简洁；将“女人”改为“女性”，使表达更自然。)

Firstly, it helps students to be familiar with different foods, First, it enables students to become familiar with various food options, (将“首先”改为“首先”，使表达更自然；将“帮助学生熟悉不同的食物”改为“使学生熟悉各种食物选择”，使表达更准确。)

because many students are lack of money to try out different food they may dislike, as many students lack the funds to experiment with different dishes they might not enjoy, (将“因为许多学生缺乏尝试他们可能不喜欢的不同食物的钱”改为“因为许多学生缺乏尝试他们可能不喜欢的不同菜肴的资金”，使表达更准确。)

so that the campus offers them a good way to try some new things without using a lot of money and going off the campus. thus the event provides a cost-effective opportunity for them to explore new options without leaving campus. (将“因此校园为他们提供了一种不用花很多钱就可以尝试一些新事物的好方法，并且不用离开校园。”改为“因此，这个活动为他们提供了一种在不离开校园的情况下探索新选择的经济有效的机会。”，使表达更准确。)

Secondly, it provides students an excellent way to socialize, Second, it offers students an excellent opportunity to socialize, (将“其次，它为学生提供了一个很好的社交方式”改为“其次，它为学生提供了一个很好的社交机会”，使表达更自然。)

because many students just have access to friends in class, as many students only interact with classmates, (将“因为许多学生只能在课堂上结交朋友”改为“因为许多学生只与同学互动”，使表达更自然。)

so that they have a small circle of friends. resulting in a limited circle of friends. (将“因此他们有一个小圈子的朋友”改为“导致朋友圈有限”，使表达更准确。)

But on these events, they can meet a lot of friends from a lot of different departments, However, during such events, they can meet numerous peers from various departments, (将“但在这些活动上，他们可以结识来自许多不同部门的许多朋友”改为“然而，在这样的活动中，他们可以结识来自各个部门的许多同龄人”，使表达更自然。)

so that they can meet a lot of new friends, which can help them to relax and enhance their socializability. expanding their social network and improving their social skills. (将“因此他们可以结识很多新朋友，这可以帮助他们放松并提高他们的社交能力。”改为“扩

6.思维导图

• University Snack Event
  • Woman's Opinion
    • Reason 1: Familiarity with food options
      • Limited funds
      • Cost-effective opportunity
    • Reason 2: Socialization
      • Interaction with classmates only
      • Expanding social network

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的发音清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在句子之间保持流畅的语速，避免过多的停顿。同时，注意准确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于文章中的计划进行了概括，并表达了女生对计划的看法及原因。但在组织结构上可以更加清晰。建议在回答问题时先简要概括计划，然后明确指出女生的观点，并逐一解释她提到的原因。这样可以使回答更加条理清晰，便于理解。

5.语言使用

原文：The plan is called Recipes from Home. The plan, called Recipes from Home,（将从句与主句连接，使句子更自然）This way, the students can get a variety of food from the cafeteria and possibly some favorite ones. allows students to enjoy a diverse range of dishes in the cafeteria, including some of their favorites.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式）The students can also recreate these courses by finding them on the school website. Students can also recreate these dishes by accessing them on the university's website.（使用更准确的词汇和表达方式）The woman liked this idea. The woman is fond of this idea.（使用更高级的词汇）

Right now, the cafeteria serves a limited number of courses. Currently, the cafeteria offers a limited selection of dishes.（使用更准确的词汇和表达方式）If the school uses this method, it can actually help the students to get more recipes, some of which might be really good. By implementing this method, the university can provide students with more recipes, some of which may be quite delicious.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式）

For instance, the woman is going to post her borscht recipe from her dad, which she thinks is really good. For example, the woman plans to submit her father's borscht recipe, which she believes is excellent.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式）And the second part, she also liked it, because she always wanted to try something good that was made from her hands. Additionally, she appreciates the second aspect of the plan as it allows her to try making delicious dishes herself.（使用更准确的词汇和表达方式）

And she will cook it if she likes it, but she will not if she doesn't like it. She would be more inclined to cook a dish if she has already tasted and enjoyed it.（使用更自然的表达方式）So that's why she doesn't often use the stove all the time. That's why she doesn't frequently use the kitchen in her dorm.（使用更准确的词汇和表达方式）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The plan, called Recipes from Home, allows students to enjoy a diverse range of dishes in the cafeteria, including some of their favorites. Students can also recreate these dishes by accessing them on the university's website. The woman is fond of this idea. Currently, the cafeteria offers a limited selection of dishes. By implementing this method, the university can provide students with more recipes, some of which may be quite delicious. For example, the woman plans to submit her father's borscht recipe, which she believes is excellent. Additionally, she appreciates the second aspect of the plan as it allows her to try making delicious dishes herself. She would be more inclined to cook a dish if she has already tasted and enjoyed it. That's why she doesn't frequently use the kitchen in her dorm.

6.思维导图

- Recipes from Home
  - Diverse range of dishes
  - Accessible on university's website

- Woman's opinion
  - Fond of the idea
    - Limited selection in cafeteria
    - Opportunity to try delicious dishes
  - Appreciates second aspect
    - Making dishes herself
    - Inclined to cook if tasted before

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 在交付方面，您的回答相对清晰，但有时语速不稳定。为了提高这一方面的得分，请尝试保持一致的语速和自然的停顿。此外，注意正确发音单词以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，您的回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，您可以更详细地解释女士对计划的看法及其原因。例如，您可以提到她认为这个计划有助于学生在不花钱的情况下尝试不同的餐馆，并且这个活动可以让学生跳出日常生活，结识来自其他专业的同学。为了提高这一方面的得分，请确保充分支持您的观点并提供更多具体细节。

5.语言使用

原文：There will be a snack break next week. Next week, there will be a snack break.（将“下周”放在句首，使句子更自然）
It provides fresh free food for all the students, especially for those freshmen to have a try of food of every restaurant. It offers free food samples to all students, particularly for freshmen to try dishes from various local restaurants.（使用更高级的词汇和更清晰的表达）
Second, they can meet other students and socialize. Additionally, it allows students to meet and interact with peers from different departments.（使用更高级的词汇和更清晰的表达）
The woman said she's so glad that, first off, it's so helpful for students. The woman expresses her satisfaction with the plan because it is beneficial for students in several ways.（使用更自然的语言风格和更清晰的表达）
Students, you know, we don't have much money to try all the food we're interested in. As students often have limited budgets, they cannot afford to try all the food they are interested in.（使用更自然的语言风格和更清晰的表达）
And now we can find what we like without even spending a penny. This event enables students to discover their preferences without spending any money.（使用更高级的词汇和更清晰的表达）
Second, it provides an opportunity to help students jump out of their daily routine and meet other students from other departments. Furthermore, it offers a chance for students to break away from their daily routines and connect with peers from various fields.（使用更高级的词汇和更清晰的表达）
Just like the man said, he only knows his classmates. As the man mentioned, he is only familiar with his classmates.（使用更自然的语言风格和更清晰的表达）
So yeah, that's really good. Thus, this event is indeed beneficial for students.（使用更自然的语言风格和更清晰的表达）

修订版（140字）：

Next week, there will be a snack break. It offers free food samples to all students, particularly for freshmen to try dishes from various local restaurants. Additionally, it allows students to meet and interact with peers from different departments. The woman expresses her satisfaction with the plan because it is beneficial for students in several ways. As students often have limited budgets, they cannot afford to try all the food they are interested in. This event enables students to discover their preferences without spending any money. Furthermore, it offers a chance for students to break away from their daily routines and connect with peers from various fields. As the man mentioned, he is only familiar with his classmates. Thus, this event is indeed beneficial for students.

6.思维导图

• Snack break

  • Free food samples
    • Freshmen
    • Local restaurants
  • Socializing
    • Interact with peers
    • Different departments

• Woman's opinion

  • Beneficial for students
    • Limited budgets
    • Discover preferences
  • Break away from routines
    • Connect with various fields

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的语言流利度较好，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和连接词方面还有待提高。建议在练习时注意使用恰当的连接词来连接观点，使回答更加连贯。另外，在提供支持或例子时，尽量确保它们与主题紧密相关，以增强论据的说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading, the university planned to hold a snack break on the campus. In the reading passage, the university plans to hold a snack break on campus.（将过去时改为现在时，使句子更自然。） In the conversation, the woman agreed with this plan. In the conversation, the woman expresses her agreement with this plan.（使用更自然的表达方式。） First, she thinks it's very helpful for students. Firstly, she believes it will be beneficial for students.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。） They say because students don't have much money to eat outside the campus, so they could cost less money to try many restaurants. She says that since students don't have much money to dine off-campus, this event allows them to sample various restaurants at a lower cost.（改善句子结构和词汇，使句子更连贯。） She thinks they could try many new food without cost so much money. She thinks they can try various new dishes without spending too much money.（使用更自然的表达方式和词汇。） Besides, she thinks this is a nice opportunity for students. Moreover, she considers this event as a great opportunity for students.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。） They say because they usually take class and go to a club, so they have very less chance to meet a new friend or a new professor. She says that since students usually attend classes and clubs, they have limited chances to meet new friends or professors.（改善句子结构和词汇，使句子更连贯。） So in this break, they can meet friends and professors from other departments. Thus, during this snack break, they can interact with friends and professors from different departments.（使用更自然的表达方式。）

修订版（140字）：

In the reading passage, the university plans to hold a snack break on campus. In the conversation, the woman expresses her agreement with this plan. Firstly, she believes it will be beneficial for students. She says that since students don't have much money to dine off-campus, this event allows them to sample various restaurants at a lower cost. She thinks they can try various new dishes without spending too much money. Moreover, she considers this event as a great opportunity for students. She says that since students usually attend classes and clubs, they have limited chances to meet new friends or professors. Thus, during this snack break, they can interact with friends and professors from different departments.

6.思维导图

• Reading passage

  • University plans
  • Snack break on campus

• Conversation

  • Woman's agreement
    • Beneficial for students
      • Limited budget
      • Sample various restaurants
    • Great opportunity
      • Limited chances to meet new people
      • Interact with different departments

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3.5

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分：27

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议在练习时注意正确的发音，以及在适当的地方稍作停顿，以提高整体的表达效果。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在一些地方加强连接词的使用，使思路更加清晰。同时，在解释原因时可以尝试提供更多具体的例子，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：Next week, there will be a snack break. Next week, a snack break is scheduled. (改为被动语态，使句子更自然) It offers The event offers (明确主语，使句子更清晰) free food samples to all students, particularly for freshmen to try dishes from various local restaurants. Additionally, it allows students to meet and interact with peers from different departments. The woman expresses her satisfaction with the plan because it is beneficial for students in several ways. As students often have limited budgets, they can't afford to try all the food they are interested in. This event enables students to discover their preferences without spending any money. Furthermore, it offers a chance for students to break away from their daily routines and connect with peers from various fields. As the man mentioned, he is only familiar with his classmates. Thus, this event is indeed beneficial for students.

修订版（140词）：

Next week, a snack break is scheduled at the Student Center. The event offers free food samples to all students, especially first-year students, allowing them to try dishes from various local restaurants. Moreover, it provides an opportunity for students to meet and interact with peers from different departments. The woman expresses her satisfaction with the plan as it benefits students in multiple ways. Given that students often have limited budgets, they cannot afford to try all the food they are interested in. This event enables them to explore their preferences without spending any money. Furthermore, it allows them to break away from their daily routines and connect with peers from diverse fields. As the man mentioned, he is mostly acquainted with his classmates. Therefore, this event proves to be advantageous for students.

6.思维导图

• Snack break

  • Scheduled
  • Free food samples
  • Local restaurants

• Benefits

  • Limited budgets
  • Discover preferences
  • No spending

• Socializing

  • Break from routine
  • Connect with peers
  • Diverse fields

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，从表达方面来看，这个回答的语言流利度和连贯性还有待提高。建议在练习时注意发音的准确性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，可以多做一些口语练习，提高自己的语言表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答基本上涵盖了问题所要求的内容，但在组织结构和论述上还有待加强。建议在准备过程中多加练习，尝试使用更清晰的逻辑结构来组织自己的观点和论据。同时，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试使用更具说服力和详实性的内容。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The plan states that the school should dismiss jazz choir. The plan states that the university will discontinue the jazz choir. (改为“大学将停止爵士合唱团”，更符合原文表述) This is because the students have low interest in the jazz choir, and the students will have more opportunity to participate in other singing groups. This is due to low student interest in the jazz choir, and students will have opportunities to join other singing groups. (简化句子结构，避免重复) However, the woman doesn't agree with this perspective. She thinks that the real problem was because of the intense rehearse schedule. The woman disagrees with this perspective, believing that the real problem lies in the intense rehearsal schedule. (改进句子结构，使其更自然流畅) The rehearse schedule was too much for the students, and if the schools reduced it, then it could be better for students, and therefore more students would attend that jazz choir. The rehearsal schedule is overwhelming for students; if it were reduced, more students might participate in the jazz choir. (简化句子，使其更清晰易懂) Besides, the music could be way different in terms of other singing groups, because other singing groups play classical music, which the woman doesn't like at all. Additionally, the music in other singing groups differs significantly, as they perform classical music, which the woman does not enjoy. (改进句子结构，使用更高级词汇) Therefore, there will be less students participating in the group because they don't like classical music. Consequently, fewer students may participate in the group due to their dislike of classical music. (使用更准确的词汇和语法)

Revised Answer (140 words): The plan states that the university will discontinue the jazz choir due to low student interest and opportunities for students to join other singing groups. However, the woman disagrees with this perspective, believing that the real problem lies in the intense rehearsal schedule. The rehearsal schedule is overwhelming for students; if it were reduced, more students might participate in the jazz choir. Additionally, the music in other singing groups differs significantly, as they perform classical music, which the woman does not enjoy. Consequently, fewer students may participate in the group due to their dislike of classical music.

6.思维导图

- Discontinue Jazz Choir
  - Low student interest
  - Opportunities in other singing groups

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Real problem: intense rehearsal schedule
    - Overwhelming for students
    - Reducing schedule might increase participation
  - Music differences
    - Other groups perform classical music
    - Woman does not enjoy classical music
    - Fewer students may participate due to dislike of classical music

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但偶尔有停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语言流利度，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答较为连贯和有组织。但在解释女士对计划的看法时，可以更详细地说明她的观点和理由。建议在练习时关注提供更充分的支持和例证，以便使回答更加完整。

5.语言使用

Original: In the university news, the university proposed that the graduate students will be able to reserve a private study booth on a semester-by-semester basis. And in the listening, the women, which is the graduate students, really like these suggestions. Firstly, because they are really convenient for graduate students who are doing research paper and require to use books from the library. So they don't need to bring the library back to their home and back to the school. Secondly, it's very good that because they are doing individual work and they really need a very quiet and no disruption environment. And it's different from undergrad students that it's good for them to use a big table and discuss it with it. So it's very good.

Corrected: In the university news, the university proposed that graduate students will be able to reserve private study booths on a semester-by-semester basis. In the listening, the woman, who is a graduate student, really likes this suggestion. Firstly, because it is very convenient for graduate students who are working on research papers and need to use books from the library. So they don't need to bring their materials back and forth between home and school. Secondly, it's beneficial because they are doing individual work and need a quiet environment without disruptions. This is different from undergraduate students who benefit from using large tables for group discussions and collaborative projects.

(建议使用逗号来分隔句子中的不同部分，以提高语言的流畅性。同时，注意使用正确的代词和时态。)

Revised (140 words): In the university news, the university proposed that graduate students will be able to reserve private study booths on a semester-by-semester basis. In the listening, the woman, who is a graduate student, really likes this suggestion. Firstly, it is very convenient for graduate students who are working on research papers and need to use books from the library. They won't have to carry their materials back and forth between home and school, making their lives easier. Secondly, it's beneficial because they are doing individual work and need a quiet environment without disruptions. This is different from undergraduate students who benefit from using large tables for group discussions and collaborative projects. Overall, the woman believes that the plan will greatly improve the study experience for graduate students by providing a secure and quiet space for them to focus on their research.

6.思维导图

- University News
  - Proposal
    - Graduate students
      - Reserve private study booths
      - Semester-by-semester basis

- Woman's Opinion
  - Likes the suggestion
    - Reasons
      - Convenience
        - Research papers
        - Library materials
      - Quiet environment
        - Individual work
        - No disruptions
  - Different from undergraduate students
    - Large tables for group discussions and collaborative projects

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本清晰，但在某些地方存在适当的停顿。为了提高发音，请注意在句子中适当地使用停顿，并注意发音的准确性。此外，注意单词的大小写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释原因时提供更多详细信息。例如，在解释为什么女孩认为这个计划是个好主意时，可以提到她期待尝试来自不同国家的食物，以及她对于尝试新食谱的犹豫。为了提高话题发展，请确保在回答中提供充足的支持和例子。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading, the university decided to allow students to take recipes from home. In the reading, the university introduced a plan for students to submit their favorite family recipes.（将“允许学生带来家庭食谱”修改为“学生提交他们最喜欢的家庭食谱”，使表述更准确。） Firstly, students wish a lot of variety of food. Firstly, students desire a wider variety of food options.（将“学生希望很多种类的食物”修改为“学生期望更多样化的食物选择”，使表述更自然。） Secondly, the recipe will maintain in the website. Secondly, an archive of selected recipes will be maintained on the website.（将“食谱将保留在网站上”修改为“选定的食谱将在网站上保留档案”，使表述更清晰。） The woman thinks this is a cool idea. The woman expresses her positive opinion about the plan.（将“女人认为这是个酷主意”修改为“女人对这个计划表示积极的看法”，使表述更正式。） Her father has a really good recipe about the soup called Bost, Her father has a delicious recipe for a soup called Borsch,（将“她的父亲有一个关于叫做Bost的汤的很好的食谱”修改为“她的父亲有一个关于叫做Borsch的汤的美味食谱”，使表述更自然。） But because of this approach, she can use the kitchen because the food he has known. But with this approach, she would be more likely to use the kitchen since she would already know whether she likes the food.（将“但是因为这种方法，她可以使用厨房，因为他已经知道这种食物”修改为“但是通过这种方法，她更有可能使用厨房，因为她已经知道是否喜欢这种食物”，使表述更清晰。）

修订版（140词）：

In the reading, the university introduced a plan for students to submit their favorite family recipes. Firstly, students desire a wider variety of food options. Secondly, an archive of selected recipes will be maintained on the website. The woman expresses her positive opinion about the plan. Firstly, there are too limited variety of food in the cafeteria and they always have the same selection. Her father has a delicious recipe for a soup called Borsch, and different people from different countries will submit various recipes, so they can enjoy a lot of variety of food. Secondly, it will encourage her to use the kitchen more often. In the past, she didn't like to cook something that she didn't know. But with this approach, she would be more likely to use the kitchen since she would already know whether she likes the food.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Submit family recipes
  • Wider variety of food options
  • Archive on website

• Woman's Opinion

  • Positive
  • Limited cafeteria variety
  • Diverse recipes from different countries

• Encouragement to use kitchen

  • Past hesitation to cook unknown recipes
  • Familiarity with food through the plan

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速和发音大致清晰，但仍有一些不太自然的停顿。建议发言者练习更流畅、自然的语言表达，避免不必要的停顿。同时，注意准确发音，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent response and covers the main points of the plan and the woman's opinion. However, the response could be better organized by clearly stating the summary of the plan and then discussing the woman's opinion and reasons separately. Additionally, it would be helpful to provide more specific examples or details from the conversation to support the reasons given for her opinion. To improve, focus on organizing your response more effectively and providing stronger support for your points.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school proposes that students can submit their favorite family recipes on the school website, and the woman in the conversation totally agrees for two reasons. The university plans to allow students to submit their favorite family recipes on its website, and the woman in the conversation strongly supports this idea for two reasons. (将“学校”改为“大学”，使语言更具体；将“完全同意”改为“强烈支持”，使表达更自然；调整句子结构，使语言更流畅。)

Firstly, it will give students more choices about the food, because the selections in the dining hall is so limited, and there are all the same selections every day. First, it will provide students with a wider variety of food options since the current offerings in the dining hall are limited and repetitive. (简化句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，如“提供”和“选择”。)

Students are all tired of it. Many students have grown tired of this situation. (使用更自然的表达方式描述学生的感受。)

And if the new recipes can be added, more students will be more enjoyable, By adding new recipes, students' dining experience will become more enjoyable, (调整句子结构，使语言更自然。)

and they can try out something new from different countries, so that they will have a new experience. allowing them to try diverse dishes from various countries and gain new culinary experiences. (使用更高级的词汇，如“多样化”和“烹饪经验”。)

Secondly, students can access the recipes ahead of time, so that they can select their favorite recipe, Second, students will be able to access the recipes beforehand, enabling them to choose their preferred dishes, (调整句子结构，使语言更流畅；使用更高级的词汇，如“首选”。)

because you may try something you don't like so that you will hate the recipes. as it helps them avoid trying dishes they might not enjoy. (简化句子结构，使表达更自然。)

If you can know before you go into the dining hall, you will choose the favorite recipe you like, so that you can enjoy your eating process. Knowing their options in advance allows students to make informed choices and enhances their overall dining experience. (调整句子结构，使语言更自然；使用更高级的词汇，如“知情选择”和“整体用餐体验”。)

For these reasons, the man strongly agrees with the school. Due to these reasons, the woman wholeheartedly supports the university's plan. (将“男人”改为“女人”，纠正错误；使用更自然的表达方式。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to allow students to submit their favorite family recipes on its website, and the woman in the conversation strongly supports this idea for two reasons. First, it will provide students with a wider variety of food options since the current offerings in the dining hall are limited and repetitive. Many students have grown tired of this situation. By adding new recipes, students' dining experience will become more enjoyable, allowing them to try diverse dishes from various countries and gain new culinary experiences. Second, students will be able to access the recipes beforehand, enabling them to choose their preferred dishes, as it helps them avoid trying dishes they might not enjoy. Knowing their options in advance allows students to make informed choices and enhances their overall dining experience. Due to these reasons, the woman whole

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Submit family recipes
  - Woman's support
    - Reason 1: Wider variety of food options
      - Limited and repetitive current offerings
      - More enjoyable dining experience
      - Diverse dishes and culinary experiences
    - Reason 2: Access recipes beforehand
      - Choose preferred dishes
      - Avoid trying disliked dishes
      - Enhanced overall dining experience

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, working on pronunciation will help to eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from inaccurate pronunciation.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to better support their points. Additionally, focusing on a more concise summary of the plan described in the article would help to create a stronger response overall.

6. Language Use

Original Answer: Well, the announcement suggests that there will be a snack break on Thursday from 7 to 9 and inviting the local restaurant to provide samples for students to eat. The announcement states that there will be a snack break on Thursday from 7 to 9, with local restaurants providing samples for students to try. (Changed phrasing for clarity and natural flow) And also, it can provide the first-year students with opportunities to meet and socialize. Additionally, it offers first-year students a chance to meet and socialize. (Simplified sentence structure) In the conversation, we can see that students are glad to hear that, firstly, because it costs no money. For students, they have little money to try out different things of school. Students are pleased because it is free of charge, as they often have limited funds to explore various options on campus. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) They can just taste it for free so that they don't need to stick on one thing they like. And they can have alternative tries. This allows them to sample different foods without committing to a single choice and explore alternatives. (Clarified meaning and improved vocabulary) And secondly, the opportunity is very important because students are easily caught up during the daily routines. They may only meet in the classes and clubs, and they cannot meet students in other departments. So this event may create good opportunities for them to meet students from other clubs. Furthermore, this event is valuable as it helps students break away from their daily routines and enables them to interact with peers from different departments and clubs. (Enhanced sentence structure and vocabulary)

Revised Answer (140 words): The announcement states that there will be a snack break on Thursday from 7 to 9, with local restaurants providing samples for students to try. Additionally, it offers first-year students a chance to meet and socialize. In the conversation, we can see that students are pleased because it is free of charge, as they often have limited funds to explore various options on campus. This allows them to sample different foods without committing to a single choice and explore alternatives. Furthermore, this event is valuable as it helps students break away from their daily routines and enables them to interact with peers from different departments and clubs. By attending the snack break, students can not only discover new food options but also expand their social circles beyond their immediate classes and clubs, ultimately enriching their overall college experience.

7. Mind Map

- Announcement
  - Snack break
    - Thursday, 7-9
    - Local restaurants providing samples
  - Benefits
    - First-year students
      - Meet and socialize
    - Free of charge
      - Limited funds for exploration
    - Sample variety of foods
      - No commitment to a single choice
      - Explore alternatives
    - Break from daily routines
      - Interact with peers from different departments and clubs

8. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在回答中，发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，并尽量避免不必要的停顿。此外，注意准确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response provides a summary of the plan and the woman's opinion, but it could be better organized and more coherent. It is important to clearly state the woman's opinion and her reasons for holding that opinion. Additionally, there are some inaccuracies in the response, such as referring to the woman as "he" and mentioning that she wants to submit a recipe from her father. To improve, focus on providing a clear and accurate summary of the plan and the woman's opinion, as well as her reasons for holding that opinion. Make sure to use appropriate transitions and maintain coherence throughout the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The reading materials propose that the dining hall will provide a variety of food. Firstly, it will provide more food choices for students. Secondly, it can give more chance to students to access the recipes. The woman agreed with the idea. Firstly, the choices were very limited before. But now, he wants to submit a recipe from his father from Eastern Europe. So he can try many more recipes from other students, such as from Malaysia. And he can try it by himself. Secondly, for her, he didn't want to cook the recipe which he never cooked. But now, he knows which recipe is very good for her.

Corrected Answer: The reading passage suggests that the dining hall will offer a variety of food options. First, it will provide more diverse choices for students. Second, it allows students greater access to different recipes. The woman agrees with this plan. Initially, she mentions that the choices were quite limited before. However, now she wants to submit a recipe from her father who is from Eastern Europe. As a result, she can try numerous recipes from other students, such as those from Malaysia, and even prepare them herself. Furthermore, she previously hesitated to cook unfamiliar recipes but now feels more confident knowing which ones are enjoyable. (将句子结构、词汇和语法进行了修改，使语言更自然流畅。注意使用正确的代词和一致的时态。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage suggests that the university's dining hall plans to diversify its menu by allowing students to submit their favorite family recipes online. Each month, selected recipes will be prepared and served in the dining hall while also being archived on the university's website for students to access. The woman in the conversation agrees with this plan, stating that it will not only provide a wider variety of food options but also give students the opportunity to try and prepare dishes from different countries. She shares her excitement about submitting her father's Eastern European recipe and trying recipes from other students, such as those from Malaysia. Additionally, she mentions that she used to hesitate when cooking unfamiliar recipes, but with this new plan, she will feel more confident knowing which dishes she enjoys before attempting to prepare them herself.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Diversify menu
  - Submit family recipes
  - Monthly selection
  - Archive on website

- Woman's Opinion
  - Agrees with plan
  - Limited choices before
  - Excited to submit father's recipe
  - Opportunity to try international dishes
  - Increased confidence in cooking unfamiliar recipes

7.关键词