TOEFL TPO 73 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the letter writer's proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本清晰，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更流畅、自然的语言表达，减少不必要的停顿。同时注意发音准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和连接词方面还有待加强。建议在回答中使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇，使得回答更加连贯和有条理。同时，在提供理由时可以尝试给出更具体的例子或细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

The woman disagrees with the proposal to invite Jay's band to play concerts on campus. The woman disagrees with the proposal to invite the jazz band to play concerts on campus.（将“Jay's band”改为“the jazz band”，以保持与原文一致。）

She gives two reasons for supporting this opinion. She provides two reasons for her opinion.（将“支持这个观点”改为“她的观点”，使表达更自然。）

First, the woman changes the student's proposal that the concerts should take place in the afternoon. First, the woman challenges the suggestion that the concerts should take place in the afternoon.（将“changes”改为“challenges”，以表示女士对提议的质疑。）

According to her, this is a problem. It's not a bad time. According to her, this is problematic because it is not an ideal time.（将“这是一个问题。这不是一个坏时间。”改为“这是有问题的，因为这不是一个理想的时间。”，使表达更自然。）

In fact, students don't have time during the day due to their other commitments like studying and reading. In fact, students are busy during the day with their other commitments, such as studying and reading.（将句子结构进行调整，使表达更自然。）

The concerts will be noisy. The concerts would create noise.（将“音乐会会很吵。”改为“音乐会会产生噪音。”，使表达更自然。）

Evening is a better time and students can get relaxed. The evening would be a better time, allowing students to relax.（将句子结构进行调整，使表达更自然。）

Second, according to the woman, indoors is a better choice. Second, the woman believes that an indoor venue would be a better choice.（将句子结构进行调整，使表达更自然。）

The open law area looks nice now, but the situation will change. The open lawn area looks nice now, but that could change.（将“law”改为“lawn”，以保持与原文一致。将“情况会改变”改为“那可能会改变”，使表达更自然。）

If there are people working there, they will get crowded. If people gather there, it would become crowded.（将句子结构进行调整，使表达更自然。）

The grass will be trampled and died. The grass would be trampled and die.（将“将被践踏和死亡”改为“将被践踏并死去”，使表达更自然。）

The lawn will get into mud. The lawn would turn into mud.（将“草坪会变成泥巴。”改为“草坪会变成泥巴。”，使表达更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman disagrees with the proposal to invite the jazz band to play concerts on campus. She provides two reasons for her opinion. First, the woman challenges the suggestion that the concerts should take place in the afternoon. According to her, this is problematic because it is not an ideal time. In fact, students are busy during the day with their other commitments, such as studying and reading. The concerts would create noise. The evening would be a better time, allowing students to relax. Second, the woman believes that an indoor venue would be a better choice. The open lawn area looks nice

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Jazz band concerts on campus

- Reasons
  - Afternoon concerts
    - Problematic
    - Not an ideal time
    - Students busy with commitments
  - Indoor venue
    - Better choice
    - Open lawn area issues
      - Crowded
      - Grass trampled and dying
      - Turning into mud

7.关键词