TOEFL TPO 63 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 总体来说，表达清晰流畅，但有些地方可以改进。例如，可以适当减少停顿，使语速更加稳定。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 The topic development is well-done in the response. The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The man's opinion is clearly stated, and the reasons he gives for holding that opinion are well-explained with relevant examples. To improve further, consider adding more details or examples to support the points made, but overall, the topic development is strong in this response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is going to make a new degree navigator website, The university plans to create a new degree navigator website, (将going to改为plans to，使表达更自然) because it is easier for students to monitor their courses they have completed and courses they still need to complete before graduation. Besides, it can reduce the workload of the academic advisors. In the conversation, the man really liked this idea. First off, he said that students now have different classes they need to take before graduation and it is very hard for them to stay organized. For example, a friend of him once missed a course and he had to take another course during summer break and his graduation was delayed for months. Besides, he also said that the advisors are all professors and they have a lot of other work to do. So, by doing this plan, the professors can have more time to talk about serious issues with students, such as switching majors and doing internships. Because of these two reasons, the man really likes this idea.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to create a new degree navigator website, as it simplifies the process for students to monitor their completed courses and those still required before graduation. Additionally, it reduces the workload of academic advisors. In the conversation, the man expresses his enthusiasm for this plan. Firstly, he mentions that students currently struggle with organizing their required classes before graduation. He provides an example of his friend who missed a course, had to take another during summer break, and experienced a delayed graduation. Furthermore, he states that advisors are also professors with numerous responsibilities; thus, implementing this plan allows them more time to discuss serious issues with students such as changing majors or pursuing internships. Due to these reasons, the man strongly supports the idea.

6.思维导图

- Degree Navigator Website
  - Simplifies monitoring courses
  - Reduces academic advisors' workload

- Man's Opinion
  - Enthusiasm for the plan
  - Reasons:
    - Struggle with organizing required classes
      - Example: friend's delayed graduation
    - Advisors are also professors
      - More time for serious issues (changing majors, internships)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 在表达方面，你的发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现一些不必要的停顿。为了提高流利度，请尝试在练习时保持一致的语速并减少停顿。此外，注意发音准确性以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 Your response is generally coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, you could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen your argument. Additionally, try to make smoother transitions between points to enhance the overall flow of your response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: About the plan described in the article, the man thinks it will be really helpful for students. Regarding the plan mentioned in the article, the man believes it will be extremely beneficial for students. (将really helpful改为extremely beneficial，使表达更自然且词汇更高级。) First, students all have so many classes to take, and the website can help them organize their schedules. Firstly, students have numerous courses to complete, and the website can assist them in organizing their schedules. (将all have so many改为have numerous，使表达更简洁且词汇更高级。) Second, the website can help students to record what classes they have to take to graduate. Secondly, the website can aid students in tracking the required courses for graduation. (简化句子结构，使表达更自然。) He mentioned one of his friends whose graduation has been delayed because he didn't take a certain class. He mentioned a friend whose graduation was postponed due to missing a required course. (调整句子结构，使表达更自然。) Third, about the advisor, it's also a good thing. Thirdly, regarding advisors, it is also advantageous. (将it's also a good thing改为it is also advantageous，使表达更自然且词汇更高级。) The advisors, often our professors, have so much work to do, and if the website can save their time, they could spend more time on the more serious things with students, like switching majors and internships. Advisors, who are often professors, have a significant workload; if the website can save their time, they could allocate more time to address pressing issues with students, such as changing majors and pursuing internships. (调整句子结构，使表达更自然且词汇更高级。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Regarding the plan mentioned in the article, the man believes it will be extremely beneficial for students. Firstly, students have numerous courses to complete, and the website can assist them in organizing their schedules. Secondly, the website can aid students in tracking the required courses for graduation. He mentioned a friend whose graduation was postponed due to missing a required course. Thirdly, regarding advisors, it is also advantageous. Advisors, who are often professors, have a significant workload; if the website can save their time, they could allocate more time to address pressing issues with students, such as changing majors and pursuing internships.

6.思维导图

- Plan in the article
  - Man's opinion: extremely beneficial

- Reasons
  - Students
    - Numerous courses to complete
    - Organizing schedules
    - Tracking required courses for graduation
  - Advisors
    - Significant workload
    - Saving time
    - Addressing pressing issues with students
      - Changing majors
      - Pursuing internships

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 从表达方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，但有时会出现一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持语速的稳定，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. To enhance the response, try to provide more specific details from the listening passage to support the man's opinion about the plan, such as mentioning how the website can help students avoid missing required courses and how it can free up time for academic advisors to focus on more serious issues with students.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The students will be able to use the New Degree Navigator website to keep track of their requirements. Students can use the New Degree Navigator website to monitor their requirements. (简化句子结构，使其更自然) Firstly, it will be easier for students to monitor courses. First, it simplifies course monitoring for students. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) Second, it can reduce workload for academic advisors. Second, it reduces the workload of academic advisors. (改进语法和词汇选择)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Students can use the New Degree Navigator website to monitor their requirements. In the conversation, both the man and woman agree that the website is beneficial because students often have various classes to take, which can be challenging to organize. For instance, the woman is majoring in business and has numerous courses to complete. The man's friend's graduation was delayed due to missed classes, as he didn't realize he needed them until it was too late. Furthermore, they believe that academic advisors, who are usually professors with many other responsibilities, would benefit from having more time available. By using the website, professors can allocate more time to discuss significant matters with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. Overall, the New Degree Navigator website offers a practical solution for both students and academic advisors in managing course requirements and schedules.

6.思维导图

• New Degree Navigator website

  • Monitor requirements
  • Simplify course monitoring
  • Reduce workload for academic advisors

• Conversation

  • Man and woman's agreement
  • Challenging to organize classes
  • Example: Business major, missed classes

• Academic advisors

  • Professors with other responsibilities
  • More time for significant matters
    • Switching majors, pursuing internships

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 在表达方面，你的回答相对清晰，但有时语速不够稳定，偶尔出现停顿。为了提高这方面的表现，你可以多练习朗读和模仿地道的英语发音。此外，注意在适当的地方加入逗号和句号，以便更好地控制语速和停顿。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, you could improve by providing more specific details from the listening material to further support your points. For example, you could mention the man's opinion on how the new website would benefit both students and advisors by reducing their workload and allowing them to focus on more important issues. Additionally, try to use transition words or phrases to make your response flow more smoothly and sound more natural.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading material, it is proposed to build a new degree website for students. In the reading passage, a new degree navigator website for students is proposed. (在阅读材料中，建议为学生建立一个新的学位导航网站。) In the listening material, from the man's perspective, he agrees with this new website. In the listening passage, the man expresses his agreement with the implementation of this new website. (在听力材料中，从男子的角度来看，他同意这个新网站。)

For one reason is that it is hard to organize all the degree need to take. One reason he provides is that organizing all the required courses for a degree can be challenging. (他给出的一个原因是，组织所有学位所需的课程可能很具挑战性。) He used an example of his friend that his friend missed some classes without any conscience, and he finally delayed his graduation. He cites an example of his friend who unintentionally missed some required classes, which ultimately led to a delay in his graduation. (他举了一个例子，他的朋友在无意识地错过了一些必修课程，最终导致了毕业延期。)

Secondly, it is also good for advisors too. Additionally, this new website would be beneficial for advisors as well. (此外，这个新网站对顾问也有好处。) It can save the workload for advisors. It can help reduce the workload of advisors. (它可以帮助减轻顾问的工作负担。) And the advisor can have much more time to talk with students about some switching majors or doing some internships. As a result, advisors would have more time to discuss important issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. (因此，顾问将有更多的时间与学生讨论重要问题，如转专业或实习。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, a new degree navigator website for students is proposed. In the listening passage, the man expresses his agreement with the implementation of this new website. One reason he provides is that organizing all the required courses for a degree can be challenging. He cites an example of his friend who unintentionally missed some required classes, which ultimately led to a delay in his graduation. Additionally, this new website would be beneficial for advisors as well. It can help reduce the workload of advisors. As a result, advisors would have more time to discuss important issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - New degree navigator website proposed

- Listening Passage
  - Man's agreement
    - Challenging to organize required courses
    - Example: friend's delayed graduation
  - Benefits for advisors
    - Reduced workload
    - More time for important discussions (switching majors, internships)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现停顿。建议练习流利地说话，保持一致的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时注意准确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在某些地方可以更加明确和详细。例如，在描述学生可能面临的问题时，可以提供更具体的例子。此外，在解释为什么男生喜欢这个计划时，可以更深入地探讨其原因。总之，尝试在回答中提供更多详细信息和支持观点的例子。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, a student suggests to establish a new degree navigator website. A new degree navigator website is suggested by a student.（建议使用被动语态，使句子更自然。） Original: First off, it will make it easier for students to monitor which course they should have. Firstly, it will make it easier for students to track the courses they need to take.（使用“Firstly”替换“First off”，并调整句子结构以使其更自然。） Original: Besides, it will also help reduce the workload for academic advisors, and they do not need to meet students often. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload for academic advisors, who will not need to meet with students as frequently.（使用“Additionally”替换“Besides”，并调整句子结构以使其更自然。） Original: In the conversation, the man liked this idea. In the conversation, the man supports this idea.（使用“supports”替换“liked”，使句子更准确。） Original: First off, he thinks that the class should be hard to stay organized. Firstly, he believes that it can be difficult for students to stay organized with their classes.（调整句子结构以使其更自然。） Original: For instance, some of his classmates just miss certain courses, and they have to graduate a few months later, in this case serious illnesses. For example, some of his classmates missed required courses and had to graduate a few months later due to this oversight.（删除不相关的信息，并调整句子结构以使其更自然。） Original: Besides, he also believes that the professors, and also known as the advisors, have a lot of work to do. Moreover, he believes that professors, who also serve as advisors, have a heavy workload.（调整句子结构以使其更自然。） Original: And if the navigator begins to start, the professor will have more time to talk about the student with their internship and others. If the navigator is implemented, professors will have more time to discuss internships and other issues with students.（调整句子结构以使其更自然。） Original: Therefore, the man liked this idea. Therefore, the man is in favor of this idea.（使用“is in favor of”替换“liked”，使句子更准确。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

A new degree navigator website is suggested by a student. Firstly, it will make it easier for students to track the courses they need to take. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload for academic advisors, who will not need to meet with students as frequently. In the conversation, the man supports this idea. Firstly, he believes that it can be difficult for students to stay organized with their classes. For example, some of his classmates missed required courses and had to graduate a few months later due to this oversight. Moreover, he believes that professors, who also serve as advisors, have a heavy workload. If the navigator is implemented, professors will have more time to discuss internships and other issues with students. Therefore, the man is in favor of this idea.

6.思维导图

- New degree navigator website
  - Easier for students
    - Track courses needed
  - Reduced workload for academic advisors
    - Less frequent meetings with students

- Man's opinion
  - Supports the idea
    - Difficulty in staying organized with classes
      - Example: classmates missing required courses
    - Professors' heavy workload
      - More time for discussing internships and other issues

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语言流畅度，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意纠正发音错误，以免影响听众的理解。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和逻辑性方面还有待提高。建议发言者在练习时注意明确论点和论据之间的关系，确保回答内容条理清晰、逻辑严密。同时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇，使回答更加连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：In the writing material, the students plan to send the student will be able to use the new degree-elective website. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that students will soon be able to use a new degree navigator website. (原文中的表述不清晰，已修改为更准确的描述。) Because first reason is that students can use it to plan schedules more effectively and efficiently. The first reason is that it allows students to plan their schedules more effectively and efficiently. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然。) The second reason is that the website has a lot of advisors who can help the students. The second reason is that the website will help reduce the workload for academic advisors. (根据原文内容进行了修正。)

And in the listening material, we can clearly learn that the men agree with the opinion. In the listening material, we can clearly understand that the man agrees with this plan. (修改了表述，使其更自然。) Because first reason he gives is that students rarely need some classes to join. The first reason he gives is that some degree programs require many different classes, which can be difficult for students to keep track of. (根据听力内容进行了修正。) And there are a lot of students often miss the certain classes. He also mentions that many students often miss certain required courses. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然。) For example, the man's friend wants to join the history classes. For example, the man's friend had to take an extra class to complete his history degree. (根据听力内容进行了修正。) However, he missed the history classes, so he failed the exam. However, he didn't realize it was a required course until it was too late, causing a delay in his graduation. (根据听力内容进行了修正。)

And the second reason is based on the fact that it's also useful for the advisor. The second reason is that it benefits academic advisors as well. (修改了表述，使其更自然。) They call all the advisor at a professor. Most academic advisors are also professors, (修改了句子结构，使其更自然。) This way can make them talk with the student with the serious issue more time. so this website will allow them to have more time to discuss serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is mentioned that students will soon be able to use a new degree navigator website. The first reason is that it allows students to plan their schedules more effectively and efficiently. The second reason is that the website will help reduce the workload for academic advisors. In the listening material, we can clearly understand that the man agrees with this plan. The first reason he gives is that some degree programs require many different classes, which can be difficult for students to keep track of. He also mentions that many students often miss certain required courses. For example, the man's friend had to take an extra class to complete his history degree. However, he didn't realize it was a required course until it was too late, causing a delay in his graduation. The second reason is that it benefits academic advisors as well. Most academic advisors are also professors, so this website will allow them to have more time to discuss serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Degree Navigator Website
  - Benefits
    - Effective scheduling
    - Reduced workload for advisors

- Listening Material
  - Man's opinion
    - Agreement
      - Reason 1: Complex degree programs
        - Example: Friend's delayed graduation
      - Reason 2: Benefits for advisors
        - More time for serious issues (e.g., switching majors, internships)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答相对清晰，但在语速和停顿方面还有待改进。建议在练习时注意保持一致的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答较为连贯和有条理。但在提供支持和举例方面还可以加强。建议在练习时尝试更多地使用具体事例来支持观点，并确保观点之间的联系更加明确。

5.语言使用

Original: In the announcement, we learned that the college is considering that they could set up a navigator website which makes sure all the students learn what courses they haven't started. In the listening material, the men definitely agreed with it. One reason is that it can organize different courses well. He mentioned a friend of him missed a class, therefore his graduation was delayed. A second reason is that it can reduce the workload of academic advisors. Academic advisors are professors. They could now talk about more serious problems such as drafting majors or internships.

Corrected: In the announcement, we learned that the college is considering that they could setting up a navigator website which makes sure ensures all the students learn know what courses they haven't started(考虑改为“设置”，使句子更自然；将“makes sure”改为“ensures”以提高词汇水平；将“learn”改为“know”以使句子更自然 sounding). In the listening material, the man definitely agreed with it. One reason is that it can organize different courses well. He mentioned a friend of him his missed a class, therefore his graduation was delayed(将“him”改为“his”以修正语法错误). A second reason is that it can reduce the workload of academic advisors. Academic advisors are professors. They could now talk about more serious problems such as drafting choosing majors or internships(将“drafting”改为“choosing”以使句子更自然 sounding).

Revised (140 words): In the announcement, we learned that the college is considering setting up a degree navigator website to ensure all students know which courses they have yet to complete. In the listening material, the man wholeheartedly agreed with this plan. He provided two reasons for his support. Firstly, he believes the website will effectively organize and track students' required courses, preventing them from missing any crucial classes. He shared an example of his friend who missed a class and consequently had his graduation delayed. Secondly, he thinks that this website will significantly reduce the workload of academic advisors, who are also professors with numerous responsibilities. With less time spent on course planning, advisors can now focus on addressing more pressing issues such as helping students choose majors or secure internships.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - Degree navigator website
  - Ensures students know uncompleted courses

- Listening material
  - Man's opinion
    - Agrees with the plan
    - Reason 1: Organizes courses effectively
      - Example: Friend's delayed graduation
    - Reason 2: Reduces workload for academic advisors
      - Focus on more pressing issues (e.g., choosing majors, internships)

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 4

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 26

3. Delivery Your delivery is quite good, but there is still room for improvement. To enhance your speech clarity, try to focus on proper pronunciation and enunciation of words. Additionally, maintain a consistent pace throughout your response and minimize any unnecessary pauses. Practicing speaking aloud and recording yourself can help you identify areas where you need improvement.

4. Topic Development Your topic development is excellent. You provided a coherent and well-organized response with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. Keep up the good work in this area! To further improve, you can consider adding more specific details or examples to strengthen your argument and make your response even more engaging.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The article described a plan about opening a new degree navigator web to help students keep track of their courses needed for graduation. The article describes a plan to launch a new degree navigator website that assists students in tracking the courses required for graduation. (Changed the verb tense and rephrased the sentence for clarity) The man thinks the plan is splendid, and it benefits not only the students but also the advisors. The man believes the plan is excellent, benefiting both students and advisors. (Simplified and rephrased the sentence) First of all, a variety of courses is needed for certain degree programs, so it can be confusing to remember all those things. Firstly, numerous courses are required for specific degree programs, making it challenging to remember them all. (Rephrased for clarity and conciseness) Additionally, students sometimes make the mistake of forgetting to take certain courses, which would postpone their graduation. Moreover, students occasionally forget to enroll in essential courses, delaying their graduation. (Rephrased for clarity) With the web, the web could remind them of their courses and avoid making mistakes. With the website, students can be reminded of their required courses and avoid such errors. (Rephrased for clarity) Secondly, most advisors are professors, and they have a lot of work to do. Secondly, since most advisors are also professors, they have numerous responsibilities. (Rephrased for clarity) With the web, professors can talk about more serious issues with students, like switching majors and discussing about internship. With the website, professors can address more critical matters with students, such as changing majors or discussing internships. (Rephrased for clarity and conciseness)

Revised Answer (140 words): The article describes a plan to launch a new degree navigator website that assists students in tracking the courses required for graduation. The man believes the plan is excellent, benefiting both students and advisors. Firstly, numerous courses are required for specific degree programs, making it challenging to remember them all. Moreover, students occasionally forget to enroll in essential courses, delaying their graduation. With the website, students can be reminded of their required courses and avoid such errors. Secondly, since most advisors are also professors, they have numerous responsibilities. With the website, professors can address more critical matters with students, such as changing majors or discussing internships. This improved system will not only help students stay organized but also allow advisors to focus on more pressing concerns.

6. Mind Map

- Plan
  - Launch degree navigator website

- Benefits
  - Students
    - Track required courses
    - Avoid graduation delays
  - Advisors (professors)
    - Reduced workload
    - Focus on critical matters (changing majors, internships)

7. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在整体表达方面，发音大部分清晰，语速适中。但有时会出现不必要的停顿，建议在练习时注意连贯性和自然的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但可以在解释男生观点时提供更多具体的例子和细节，以增强说服力。建议在练习时关注如何更充分地展开论点和提供支持。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university plans to build a degree navigation website for students to check their requirements for graduation. The university plans to create a degree navigation website that allows students to monitor their graduation requirements.（将“建立”改为“创建”，使表达更自然。同时，调整句子结构以使陈述更流畅。） In the conversation, the man totally likes it. In the conversation, the man is quite supportive of it.（将“完全喜欢它”改为“非常支持它”，使表达更自然。） First of all, he agrees that it will help students easier to check their requirements because the students usually have a lot of courses, so it's hard for them to keep organized, Firstly, he believes that it will make it easier for students to track their requirements since they often have numerous courses and find it difficult to stay organized,（调整句子结构以使陈述更流畅，同时使用更高级的词汇。） and sometimes they may not be able to realize some required courses, which will even delay their graduation. and sometimes they might overlook certain required courses, potentially delaying their graduation.（使用更高级的词汇，如“忽视”和“潜在地”，以及调整句子结构以使陈述更流畅。） And besides, he agrees that it will help to reduce the workload for academic advisors because the academic advisors are actually professors and they usually have a lot of work to do and they don't have so much time, Furthermore, he agrees that it will alleviate the workload of academic advisors, who are also professors with numerous responsibilities and limited time,（使用更高级的词汇，如“减轻”和“责任”，以及调整句子结构以使陈述更流畅。） and this will help them to have enough time to focus on more serious issues like internship or change majors or such like that. and this will enable them to devote more time to addressing serious issues such as internships or changing majors.（调整句子结构以使陈述更流畅，并使用更高级的词汇。）

修订版（140字）：

The university plans to create a degree navigation website that allows students to monitor their graduation requirements. In the conversation, the man is quite supportive of it. Firstly, he believes that it will make it easier for students to track their requirements since they often have numerous courses and find it difficult to stay organized, and sometimes they might overlook certain required courses, potentially delaying their graduation. Furthermore, he agrees that it will alleviate the workload of academic advisors, who are also professors with numerous responsibilities and limited time, and this will enable them to devote more time to addressing serious issues such as internships or changing majors.

6.思维导图

- Degree Navigation Website
  - Man's Opinion
    - Supportive
      - Easier tracking of requirements
        - Numerous courses
        - Difficulty staying organized
      - Overlooking required courses
        - Potential graduation delay
  - Benefits for Academic Advisors
    - Alleviate workload
      - Professors with numerous responsibilities
      - Limited time
    - Devote more time to serious issues
      - Internships
      - Changing majors

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要更好地控制语速和停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的一致性，以及在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步加强逻辑关系和支持细节。例如，在描述男生对计划的看法时，可以更明确地指出他是同意还是反对，并给出更具体的例子来支持观点。此外，在总结时，可以更清晰地概括男生提到的理由，以便听众更容易理解。

5.语言使用

原文：The university is planning to build a new degree navigation web. The university is planning to introduce a new degree navigator website.（将“build”改为“introduce”，将“navigation web”改为“navigator website”，使表达更自然。）
First, students can use it to monitor their courses and plan courses accordingly. First, students can use it to track their course progress and plan their schedules accordingly.（将“monitor their courses”改为“track their course progress”，将“plan courses”改为“plan their schedules”，使表达更准确。）
Second, it can share some workload of advisors. Second, it can help reduce the workload of advisors.（将“share some workload”改为“help reduce the workload”，使表达更自然。）
In the conversation, the man disagrees agrees with it.（将“disagrees”改为“agrees”，因为男生实际上是同意这个计划的。）
First, everyone needs different courses to graduate, and they can hardly stay organized without the website. Like the woman, she has to take math or economic lessons to graduate. One of the friends of the man also has to delay graduation to complete this history degree. Second, the advisors will be less busy. Most of them are professors and they have other work to do, so they cannot have enough extra time. Besides, they can talk to students about serious issues like switching majors or internship.

修订版（140词）：

The university is planning to introduce a new degree navigator website. First, students can use it to track their course progress and plan their schedules accordingly. Second, it can help reduce the workload of advisors. In the conversation, the man agrees with the plan. He believes that it will be helpful for students because everyone needs different courses to graduate, and staying organized without the website can be challenging. For example, the woman has to take math and economics courses to graduate. The man also mentions his friend who had to delay graduation to complete his history degree. Furthermore, the man thinks that the website will make advisors less busy since most of them are professors with other responsibilities. This way, they can focus on discussing more serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Degree navigator website

- Benefits for students
  - Track course progress
  - Plan schedules

- Benefits for advisors
  - Reduced workload
  - Focus on serious issues

- Man's opinion
  - Agrees with the plan
  - Examples and reasons

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确导致了拼写错误。此外，适当的停顿也很重要，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。建议多练习发音和提高语言流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题要求的方面，但组织结构和逻辑性还有待提高。建议在回答问题时先简要概括文章计划，然后再陈述男生的观点及其原因。此外，可以使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更连贯。多做练习以提高话题发展能力。

5.语言使用

Original: The PEN established a website which lets students to check if they have learned the course or they should be learned. It's also just a warlord of advisor. The man thinks it's really helpful for students because it's hard to stay, it's hard to order countless courses. Her classmate's graduation is delayed because he missed some courses. This plan helps us avoid kind of mistakes and also be good for advisors. They will take more time for their serious issues.

Corrected: The PENuniversity has established a website which letsallows students to check if they have learnedcompleted the courserequired courses or they should be learnedif there are any remaining. It's also just a warlord of advisorbeneficial for academic advisors. The man thinks it's really helpful for students because it's hard to stay, it's hard to order countless courseskeep track of all the required courses. Her classmate's graduation is delayed because he missed some courses. His friend's graduation was delayed due to missing a required course. This plan helps us avoid kind of mistakessuch mistakes and also be good for advisors. They will have more time for their serious issuesaddressing more complex student concerns.

(原文中的"PEN"应改为"university has"，因为这里是在描述大学建立了一个网站。"lets"应改为"allows"，使语言更自然。"learned"应改为"completed"，以表示学生已经完成了所需课程。此外，还需修改一些词汇和语法错误，以提高语言使用水平。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has established a website that allows students to check if they have completed the required courses or if there are any remaining. This website is also beneficial for academic advisors. The man believes that the website is very helpful for students because it can be challenging to keep track of all the required courses. He shares an example of his friend, whose graduation was delayed due to missing a required course. This plan helps students avoid such mistakes and is also advantageous for advisors, as they will have more time to address more complex student concerns. Overall, the implementation of this website will improve the academic experience for both students and advisors by providing a convenient way to monitor course requirements and allowing advisors to focus on addressing more significant issues.

6.思维导图

- University Website
  - Check completed courses
  - Identify remaining courses

- Benefits
  - Students
    - Track course requirements
    - Avoid graduation delays
  - Academic Advisors
    - Reduced workload
    - Focus on complex student concerns

- Man's Opinion
  - Helpful for students
  - Example: Friend's delayed graduation
  - Positive impact on advisors

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

23. 3. Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow of speech. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and minimize pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details and elaborating on the reasons for the man's opinion. To enhance topic development, the speaker should focus on expanding their explanations and incorporating more examples from the listening passage to support their points.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: Well, the school announces students should use new navigator website to keep track of their requirement. The school announced that students should use the new navigator website to keep track of their requirements. (Changed tense and added articles for clarity) And in fact, the man totally agrees with the idea. In fact, the man completely agrees with this idea. (Rephrased for a more natural tone) Because he thinks students have a lot of different course to take. He believes that students have numerous courses to take, (Improved vocabulary and grammar) So it's very hard to them to organize their schedule. making it difficult for them to organize their schedules. (Smooth transition and corrected grammar) Moreover, some students would miss their certain courses. Furthermore, some students might miss specific courses, (Enhanced vocabulary and grammar) So they need to graduate late. resulting in delayed graduation. (Improved sentence structure)

Revised Answer (140 words): The school announced that students should use the new navigator website to keep track of their requirements. In fact, the man completely agrees with this idea. He believes that students have numerous courses to take, making it difficult for them to organize their schedules. Furthermore, some students might miss specific courses, resulting in delayed graduation. For example, his friend discovered too late that he missed a required course and had to delay his graduation. The man also agrees with the idea because he thinks the advisors are always busy since they are professors with many responsibilities. If the new policy is implemented, they could have more time to talk to students about more serious issues, such as questions about switching majors or doing internships, ultimately benefiting both students and advisors.

6. Mind Map

• School announcement

  • New navigator website

• Man's opinion

  • Completely agrees
    • Numerous courses
    • Difficult to organize schedules
    • Missed courses and delayed graduation
    • Example: friend's experience

• Benefits for advisors

  • Busy professors
  • More time for serious issues
    • Switching majors
    • Internships

7. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太合适，导致了标点符号的问题。此外，发言者在发音方面也存在一些不准确之处，导致了拼写错误。建议发言者在练习时注意掌握正确的停顿和发音，以提高表达的流畅性和准确性。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得较好，能够概括文章中的计划，并阐述男生对该计划的看法及其理由。然而，在提供支持或举例时，可以更加具体和详细。例如，在提到男生朋友错过历史课程的例子时，可以更详细地描述这个情况及其影响。此外，在组织结构上还有待加强，以使回答更加连贯和有条理。建议在练习时关注提供充分的支持或举例，并注意清晰地组织思路。

5.语言使用

In the reading, the article talks about the university students have to talk to their advisor to meet what certain course they have to learn. In the reading, the article discusses how university students must consult with their advisors to determine which specific courses they need to take.（在这里，建议使用"discusses"替换"talks about"，以提高词汇的复杂性。同时，调整句子结构以使其更自然。）

But now they can use the new degree navigator on website, However, they can now utilize the new degree navigator website,（使用"However"替换"But now"，并将"on website"改为"website"以提高语言的自然度。）

which is easier for them to know what they have learned before graduation. which makes it easier for them to track their completed courses before graduation.（调整句子结构以使其更自然，并使用更高级的词汇。）

Therefore, they can plan the schedule, As a result, they can plan their schedules,（使用"As a result"替换"Therefore"，并将"the schedule"改为"their schedules"以提高语言的自然度。）

Besides, it can reduce the work imposed on the advisor. Additionally, it can reduce the workload for advisors.（使用"Additionally"替换"Besides"，并调整句子结构以使其更自然。）

In the listening, the man gave his opinions to suggest the advice above. In the listening, the man expresses his opinion in support of the plan mentioned above.（调整句子结构以使其更自然。）

He needs it because many of the courses they have to learn cause some students miss some classes. He believes it is necessary because many required courses can lead to students missing some classes.（调整句子结构以使其更自然，并使用更高级的词汇。）

For instance, his friend, Mike, during the summer break, he missed his history class and graduated after a month because he forgot about the course he had to learn to avoid the questions. For instance, his friend Mike missed a history class during the summer break and had to graduate a month later because he forgot about the required course.（调整句子结构以使其更自然。）

Besides, the advisor is too busy because they have other work to do. Moreover, advisors are often busy due to their additional responsibilities.（使用"Moreover"替换"Besides"，并调整句子结构以使其更自然。）

Therefore, they can talk with the students about the more important things. Thus, they can discuss more important matters with students.（使用"Thus"替换"Therefore"，并调整句子结构以使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading, the article discusses how university students must consult with their advisors to determine which specific courses they need to take. However, they can now utilize the new degree navigator website, which makes it easier for them to track their completed courses before graduation. As a result, they can plan their schedules, and additionally, it can reduce the workload for advisors. In the listening, the man expresses his opinion in support of the plan mentioned above. He believes it is necessary because many required courses can lead to students missing some classes. For instance, his friend Mike missed a history class during the summer break and had to graduate a month later because he forgot about the required course. Moreover, advisors are often busy due to their additional responsibilities. Thus, they can discuss more important matters with students.

6.思维导图

- Reading
  - University students
  - Advisors
  - Degree navigator website

- Listening
  - Man's opinion
  - Support for the plan
  - Reasons
    - Required courses
    - Missed classes example (Mike)
    - Busy advisors
    - Discuss important matters

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores Estimated Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow of speech. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and work on reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, the speaker should focus on accurate pronunciation to avoid any potential spelling errors.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details and examples to further support the main points. The speaker should also work on refining their transitions between ideas to create a smoother flow in their response.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The university plans to make students use new degree navigator web to keep track of their course requirement, so as to make students easier to monitor their courses and also to reduce the advisor's workload. The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website for students to keep track of their course requirements, making it easier for them to monitor their progress and reducing the workload for advisors. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)

The man in the conversation agrees for the several reasons. The man in the conversation agrees for several reasons. (Removed unnecessary "the")

For example, the man's friends need to stay up to date in the summer to complete his history courses to get his degree. For example, the man's friend needed to stay on campus during the summer to complete a required history course for his degree. (Clarified example and corrected tense)

Another reason is that the faculties are very busy since they are professors. Another reason is that faculty members are very busy because they are also professors. (Improved clarity and word choice)

So if their workload are reduced by the new invention, then they have more time to discuss the important issues such as which measures and internship with students. Therefore, if their workload is reduced by this new tool, they will have more time to discuss important issues, such as major selection and internships, with students. (Corrected grammar and improved clarity)

This is more productive, so the invention of the new navigator web is very good. This would be more productive, making the new navigator website a valuable resource. (Improved sentence structure and conclusion)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website for students to keep track of their course requirements, making it easier for them to monitor their progress and reducing the workload for advisors. The man in the conversation agrees for several reasons. First, he believes that this tool can help students stay organized with their various courses. For example, the man's friend needed to stay on campus during the summer to complete a required history course for his degree. Another reason is that faculty members are very busy because they are also professors. Therefore, if their workload is reduced by this new tool, they will have more time to discuss important issues, such as major selection and internships, with students. This would be more productive, making the new navigator website a valuable resource.

6. Mind Map

• University Plan

  • Implement new degree navigator website
  • Monitor course requirements
  • Reduce advisor workload

• Man's Opinion

  • Agreement
  • Reasons
    • Organization for students
      • Example: friend's summer course
    • Faculty workload reduction
      • More time for important discussions (major selection, internships)

7. Key Words

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and avoid unnecessary pauses. Additionally, the speaker should work on pronunciation to minimize spelling errors caused by inaccurate pronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, but there is room for improvement in connecting ideas and providing sufficient support or examples. The speaker should focus on clearly summarizing the plan and stating the man's opinion, as well as providing more detailed reasons for his opinion. This will help create a more cohesive response that effectively addresses the task requirements.

5.Language Use

According to the reading passage article, there is a new Green Degree Navigator website for students. It is very great for two reasons. First, it is easier for students to maintain track their courses. They can know which course is completed and which course they need to take. The other is it can reduce the workload for advisors. The boy and girls girl agree with this for two reasons. First is there are many programs they need to do. One of the boy's friends missed some courses he needed to do. So his graduation is delayed. It can help to avoid this. In other, the advisors can have more time to talk with students with more important issues like choose their major.

(Corrected "reading passage" to "article" for consistency; Corrected "Green" to "Degree" as it was a mispronunciation; Changed "maintain" to "track" for better word choice; Changed "girls" to "girl" as there was only one girl mentioned; Added explanations in blue for each correction.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the article, there is a new Degree Navigator website for students, which offers two main benefits. Firstly, it makes it easier for students to track their course progress, allowing them to see which courses they have completed and which ones they still need to take. Secondly, it reduces the workload for academic advisors by streamlining the process of monitoring student progress.

The male student agrees with this plan because he believes that it will help students stay organized and avoid missing crucial courses, as his friend experienced when his graduation was delayed. Additionally, the female student agrees that the website will be beneficial for academic advisors, as it will free up more time for them to discuss important issues with students, such as choosing a major or pursuing internships.

6.Mind Map

- Degree Navigator Website
  - Easier for students
    - Track course progress
    - Completed courses
    - Courses still needed
  - Reduces workload for advisors

- Male student's opinion
  - Agree with the plan
    - Helps students stay organized
    - Avoid missing crucial courses
      - Friend's graduation delayed

- Female student's opinion
  - Agree with the plan
    - Benefits academic advisors
      - More time for important discussions
        - Choosing a major
        - Pursuing internships

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，你的回答相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。注意保持语速一致，避免不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音单词以避免拼写错误。练习朗读和听力可以帮助你提高这方面的能力。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，你的回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，你可以更清晰地表达一些观点和细节。例如，在描述学生对计划的看法时，可以更明确地指出他们认为这个网站有助于避免错过课程和减轻顾问的工作负担。此外，在提供支持或例子时，尝试使用更具体和详细的信息。多做练习并参考范文可以帮助你在这方面取得进步。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the announcement, the school is going to build a new degree register website. According to the announcement, the school plans to create a new degree navigator website. (将“build”改为“create”，将“register”改为“navigator”，使表达更准确) First, this is because it will make it much more easier for students to know whether the course he is taking or not. The main reason is that it will make it much easier for students to track their course progress and requirements. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰) Another reason is that it will reduce the workload of the advisor. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload of academic advisors. (添加“academic”以明确指代)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the announcement, the school plans to create a new degree navigator website. The main reason is that it will make it much easier for students to track their course progress and requirements. Additionally, it will help reduce the workload of academic advisors. The students think this is a great idea for two reasons. First, they believe that different students have various degree programs with specific courses, making it challenging to stay organized. This website would help them avoid missing essential classes and prevent delayed graduation. Second, they mention that academic advisors are often busy as they are also professors. The website would allow them more time to discuss serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships. Overall, the students support the plan as it would streamline the process of tracking degree requirements and provide additional support from academic advisors.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - New degree navigator website

- Main Reasons
  - Easier for students to track courses and requirements
  - Reduce workload of academic advisors

- Students' Opinions
  - Avoid missing essential classes
    - Prevent delayed graduation
  - More time for advisors to discuss serious issues
    - Switching majors, pursuing internships

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位考生的回答相对清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的重复。为了提高语言流利度，建议考生在练习时注意避免重复相同的内容，并确保在回答问题时保持一致的语速和适当的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，考生基本上回答了问题，但在总结计划时存在重复。为了使回答更加连贯和有条理，建议考生在练习时注意组织好自己的思路，并确保在回答问题时提供足够的支持或例子。同时，避免在回答中重复相同的内容。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading, a new degree navigator website to keep track of the requirements for graduation will be established to benefit both students and advisors. In the reading, a new degree navigator website to keep track of the requirements for graduation will be established to benefit both students and advisors. In the reading, a new degree navigator website to keep track of the requirements for graduation will be established to benefit both students and advisors.

修改后：The reading introduces a new degree navigator website designed to help students monitor their progress towards graduation and reduce the workload for academic advisors.（删除了重复的内容，使句子更简洁。）

修改建议及解释：在原回答中，考生重复了相同的内容，这会导致语言使用上的问题。为了提高语言使用得分，建议考生在练习时注意避免重复，并尝试使用更多不同的词汇和表达方式来描述同一件事情。同时，确保在回答问题时使用恰当的语法和自然的语言风格。

根据修改建议，以下是一个140字左右的改进后的回答：

The reading introduces a new degree navigator website designed to help students monitor their progress towards graduation and reduce the workload for academic advisors. The man in the conversation supports this plan, as he believes it will be helpful for students in staying organized and avoiding mistakes like missing required courses. He shares an example of his friend who had to delay his graduation due to an overlooked course requirement. The man also thinks that this website will benefit academic advisors, who are often busy with other responsibilities like teaching. With the help of the website, advisors can focus on addressing more serious issues with students, such as switching majors or pursuing internships.

6.思维导图

- Degree Navigator Website
  - Monitor progress
  - Graduation requirements
  - Benefits
    - Students
      - Stay organized
      - Avoid mistakes (missing courses)
    - Academic advisors
      - Reduced workload
      - Focus on serious issues (switching majors, internships)

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 2.5

2.预估分数: 23

3.表达 总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性，建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，发言者在发音方面也需要加强练习，以避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在回答问题时基本上涵盖了所需的信息，但在组织和连接观点方面还有待提高。建议发言者在准备答案时先列出要点，然后按照逻辑顺序进行组织。此外，在提供支持或举例时，尽量确保内容与主题紧密相关，以增强论述的说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: encouraged the school plans to make a new degree navigator website. The school plans to introduce a new degree navigator website.（建议使用更自然的表达方式）

The man really agreed with that, he thinks he really need it because he has many programs and subjects such as math, economics, all these subjects really need it very much. The man strongly agrees with this plan, as he believes it is necessary due to the numerous courses and subjects, like math and economics, that require proper organization.（改进了句子结构和词汇）

And his friends want to get the extra degree this term but the degree is delayed because he didn't realize that some subjects need to be subject so now you can see them on the website. His friend wanted to graduate this term, but the graduation was delayed because he didn't realize that some required courses were missing. Now, these can be seen on the website.（改进了句子结构和语法）

Also, furthermore, as an advantage for the professors, they really have a lot of work to do so they don't need to spend too much time to talk with the students about the syllabus and they can do some internship or the other works so they have more time. Additionally, this will benefit professors who have a heavy workload. They won't need to spend as much time discussing course requirements with students and can focus on other tasks like internships or research projects.（改进了句子结构和词汇）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school plans to introduce a new degree navigator website. The man strongly agrees with this plan, as he believes it is necessary due to the numerous courses and subjects, like math and economics, that require proper organization. His friend wanted to graduate this term, but the graduation was delayed because he didn't realize that some required courses were missing. Now, these can be seen on the website. Additionally, this will benefit professors who have a heavy workload. They won't need to spend as much time discussing course requirements with students and can focus on other tasks like internships or research projects. This way, they could have more time to talk to students about more serious issues where students might really need advice, such as questions about switching majors or doing an internship.

6.思维导图

- School Plan
  - New Degree Navigator Website

- Man's Opinion
  - Strongly Agrees
  - Reasons
    - Numerous courses and subjects
    - Proper organization needed

- Friend's Experience
  - Graduation delayed
  - Missing required courses

- Benefits for Professors
  - Reduced workload
  - Focus on other tasks
    - Internships
    - Research projects

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

这个回答完全没有回答问题，而且使用了不恰当的词汇。建议重新审阅题目并认真准备一个合适的回答。在发言时，请确保语速适中，发音清晰，并尽量避免使用不礼貌的词汇。

4.话题发展 这个回答没有涉及到题目要求的内容，因此无法评价话题发展。请仔细阅读题目要求，并根据所给信息组织一个有条理、内容充实的回答。

5.语言使用

原回答：Fuck, fuck, fuck, fuck. 这个回答不适合。（这个回答使用了不恰当的词汇，完全没有回答问题。请重新审阅题目并认真准备一个合适的回答。）

修正后的回答：

The plan mentioned in the article is about a new degree navigator Web site that will help students keep track of their course requirements for graduation. The man believes that this plan is beneficial as it will make it easier for students to stay organized and avoid missing any required courses. He supports his opinion by sharing an example of his friend who had to delay his graduation because he missed a necessary course. Additionally, the man thinks that the Web site will reduce the workload for academic advisors, allowing them to focus on more serious issues with students.

根据审阅建议修改后的回答（满分30分）：

文章中提到的计划是关于一个新的学位导航网站，该网站将帮助学生跟踪他们为毕业所需完成的课程要求。男士认为这个计划是有益的，因为它将使学生更容易保持组织和避免错过任何必修课程。他通过分享一个关于他朋友不得不推迟毕业，因为他错过了一门必要课程的例子来支持他的观点。此外，男士认为这个网站将减轻学术顾问的工作负担，使他们能够更专注于与学生讨论更严重的问题。

6.思维导图

• Plan

  • Degree navigator Web site

• Man's opinion

  • Beneficial

• Reasons

  • Easier for students to stay organized
  • Avoid missing required courses
  • Example: friend's delayed graduation
  • Reduced workload for academic advisors

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔有停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意提高连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容较为完整，能够清晰地表达出文章中的计划以及男生对计划的看法和理由。但在组织结构上还有提升空间。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，使回答更加有层次感。

5.语言使用

原文：The university has decided to use a new degree navigation website. The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website.（将decided改为plans，使句子更自然。）
The reason includes helping students monitor course easily and reducing the workload for academic advisors. The reasons include assisting students in easily monitoring their courses and alleviating the workload for academic advisors.（将reason改为reasons，将monitor course easily改为easily monitoring their courses，将reducing改为alleviating，使句子更自然。）
The boy helped further strengthen the proposal. The man provided additional support for the proposal.（将boy改为man，将helped further strengthen改为provided additional support，使句子更自然。）
They will miss certain classes. Students might miss some required classes.（将They改为Students，将will miss改为might miss，使句子更自然。）
For example, his friend doesn't know he has to learn the history class so he graduated late. For instance, his friend was unaware that he needed to take a history class, which led to delayed graduation.（将doesn't know he has to learn改为was unaware that he needed to take，使句子更自然。）
It's also beneficial for the academic advisor because the academic advisor is a professor. This is also advantageous for academic advisors, as they are also professors.（将beneficial改为advantageous，使句子更自然。）
If they have time to learn about students, they also... If they have more time to understand students' needs, they can also...（将learn about students改为understand students' needs，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to implement a new degree navigator website. The reasons include assisting students in easily monitoring their courses and alleviating the workload for academic advisors. The man provided additional support for the proposal, stating that it's helpful for students because they have different classes and it's hard to stay organized. Students might miss some required classes, leading to delayed graduation. For instance, his friend was unaware that he needed to take a history class, which led to delayed graduation. This is also advantageous for academic advisors, as they are also professors with many responsibilities. If they have more time to understand students' needs, they can focus on addressing more serious issues such as major changes or internships.

6.思维导图

- Degree Navigator Website
  - Assisting students
    - Easily monitoring courses
    - Staying organized
  - Alleviating workload for academic advisors
    - Professors with many responsibilities
    - Focus on addressing serious issues
      - Major changes
      - Internships
  - Man's opinion
    - Support for the proposal
    - Example: Friend's delayed graduation due to missed history class

7.关键词