TOEFL TPO 44 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people believe that primary schools should no longer teach children how to write by hand, and instead should spend time teaching them how to type on a computer. Other people believe that it is still important for schools to teach children to have good handwriting. Which point of view do you agree with? Explain why.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• TOEFL iBT Speaking Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some areas for improvement. There are occasional pauses that could be reduced to create a more consistent pace. Additionally, the speaker should work on their pronunciation to avoid any spelling errors that may arise from inaccurate pronunciation. Overall, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and confidently to improve their delivery.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could further develop their argument by providing more specific examples or personal experiences that relate to the importance of good handwriting. Additionally, the speaker could address the opposing viewpoint (teaching typing instead of handwriting) and explain why they believe handwriting is still important despite advancements in technology. This would make the response more balanced and persuasive.

5. Language Use

Original:

believe it is still important to teach children to have good handwriting. First, a good handwriting can help people to give others a better impression. For example, when we see a person with a nice and decent handwriting, we tend to see this person as a well-educated and knowledgeable person so that we are more willing to believe his or her words. Second, in my country, China, most several formal exams such as university entrance examinations still require students to complete in handwriting. So a beautiful handwriting can help students to get a better score. In addition, according to my experience, even though university students take notes by typing, it is still important for learning to reorganize and write down the notes in another form. So a beautiful handwriting can help students to understand their notes.

Revised:

I firmly believe that it is crucial to continue teaching children good handwriting in primary schools. Firstly, possessing neat and legible handwriting can create a positive impression on others. For instance, when we encounter an individual with elegant penmanship, we often perceive them as well-educated and knowledgeable, making us more inclined to trust their words. Secondly, in countries like China, numerous formal exams, such as university entrance examinations, still necessitate handwritten responses. Thus, having beautiful handwriting can potentially improve a student's performance. Furthermore, based on my experience, even though university students may take notes by typing, it remains essential for learning to reorganize and transcribe these notes in an alternate format. Consequently, refined handwriting can facilitate a better understanding of one's notes.

I firmly believe (revised for a stronger statement) that it is crucial (advanced vocabulary) to continue teaching children good handwriting in primary schools. Firstly (proper grammar), possessing neat and legible (advanced vocabulary) handwriting can create a positive impression on others. For instance (smooth transition), when we encounter an individual with elegant penmanship (advanced vocabulary), we often perceive them as well-educated and knowledgeable, making us more inclined (advanced vocabulary) to trust their words. Secondly (proper grammar), in countries like China, numerous formal exams (more specific example), such as university entrance examinations, still necessitate handwritten responses (clearer explanation). Thus (smooth transition), having beautiful handwriting can potentially improve a student's performance. Furthermore (proper grammar), based on my experience (more personal connection), even though university students may take notes by typing, it remains essential for learning to reorganize and transcribe these notes in an alternate format (clearer explanation). Consequently (smooth transition), refined handwriting can facilitate a better understanding of one's notes.

Corrected:

I firmly believe (revised for a stronger statement) that it is still important crucial (advanced vocabulary) to teach continue teaching children to have good handwriting. First, a good handwriting in primary schools. Firstly (proper grammar), possessing neat and legible (advanced vocabulary) handwriting can help people to give others a better impression. create a positive impression on others. For example, instance (smooth transition), when we see a person encounter an individual with a nice and decent handwriting, elegant penmanship (advanced vocabulary), we tend to see this person often perceive them as a well-educated and knowledgeable person so that we are knowledgeable, making us more willing inclined (advanced vocabulary) to believe his or her trust their words. Second, Secondly (proper grammar), in my country, countries like China, most several numerous formal exams (more specific example), such as university entrance examinations examinations, still require students to complete in handwriting. So a necessitate handwritten responses (clearer explanation). Thus (smooth transition), having beautiful handwriting can help students to get a better score. In addition, according to potentially improve a student's performance. Furthermore (proper grammar), based on my experience, experience (more personal connection), even though university students may take notes by typing, it is still important remains essential for learning to reorganize and write down the transcribe these notes in another form. So a beautiful an alternate format (clearer explanation). Consequently (smooth transition), refined handwriting can help students to understand their notes.facilitate a better understanding of one's notes.

6. Display title: 6.Mind Map

Mind Map
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|-- Preference/Opinion: Importance of good handwriting
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|   |-- Main Point: Good handwriting gives a better impression
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|   |   |-- Supporting Example: Well-educated and knowledgeable perception
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|   |-- Main Point: Handwriting is still required in formal exams
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|   |   |-- Supporting Example: University entrance examinations in China
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|   |-- Main Point: Handwriting helps in learning and understanding notes
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|       |-- Supporting Example: Reorganizing and writing down notes for better understanding
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|-- Conclusion: Good handwriting remains important for various reasons, including giving a better impression, being required in formal exams, and aiding in learning.

7. Display title: 7.Key Words

8. Display title: 8.Additional Examples

9. Good handwriting can improve one's self-confidence, as they feel proud of their writing abilities and are more likely to share their thoughts with others.

10. In professional settings, good handwriting can be crucial for clear communication, especially when sharing written notes or instructions with colleagues.

11. Handwriting is a form of self-expression, and having good handwriting allows individuals to showcase their unique style and personality through their writing.

12. Practicing good handwriting can improve fine motor skills and hand-eye coordination, which are essential for various daily tasks and activities.

13. In certain situations, such as power outages or lack of technology access, having good handwriting is necessary for effective communication and documentation.

1.子项得分

• 交付：2

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：22

3.表达 从交付方面来看，这个回答有一些问题。首先，句子之间的连接不够流畅，有时会出现不恰当的停顿。此外，发音也需要改进，以避免拼写错误。建议练习更清晰、流畅的发音，并注意保持一致的语速和适当的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，可以提供更多具体的例子和支持来增强观点。例如，可以讨论一下手写在某些情况下可能仍然有用，但在现代社会中，计算机打字技能更为关键。此外，在解释为什么计算机打字对学术表现和职业发展很重要时，可以给出更详细的解释。

5. 语言使用

Original:

Honestly, I think I agree that the primary school should teach children how to type on the computer instead of teaching them how to write by hand. First of all, I think computer typing is really important in the academic performance, since nowadays we often have to deal with the homework using the computers, like writing the passage and doing other works. Besides, I think it's also important because computer typing is really common in the work, so if students get training in the primary school of how to type on the computer, they can have a better career in the future.

Revised:

In my opinion, primary schools should prioritize teaching children how to type on a computer rather than focusing on handwriting. Firstly, computer literacy is crucial for academic success in today's world, as students frequently need to complete assignments using computers, such as writing essays and conducting research. Secondly, proficiency in computer typing is highly valued in the workforce, and by introducing this skill at an early age, students will be better prepared for their future careers.

In my opinion, primary schools should prioritize (revised for a more formal tone) teaching children how to type on a computer rather than focusing on (revised for clarity) handwriting. Firstly (revised for advanced vocabulary), computer literacy (added to emphasize the importance of typing skills) is crucial for academic success in today's world (revised for a more natural flow), as students frequently need to complete assignments using computers (revised for clarity), such as writing essays and conducting research (added examples to strengthen the argument). Secondly (revised for advanced vocabulary), proficiency in computer typing is highly valued in the workforce (revised for clarity), and by introducing this skill at an early age (revised for a more natural flow), students will be better prepared for their future careers (revised for a strong conclusion).

Corrected:

Honestly, I think I agree that the

In my opinion, primary school schools should teach prioritize (revised for a more formal tone) teaching children how to type on a computer rather than focusing on (revised for clarity) handwriting. Firstly (revised for advanced vocabulary), computer literacy (added to emphasize the computer instead importance of teaching them how typing skills) is crucial for academic success in today's world (revised for a more natural flow), as students frequently need to write by hand. First of all, I think complete assignments using computers (revised for clarity), such as writing essays and conducting research (added examples to strengthen the argument). Secondly (revised for advanced vocabulary), proficiency in computer typing is really important highly valued in the academic performance, since nowadays we often have to deal with the homework using the computers, like writing the passage workforce (revised for clarity), and doing other works. Besides, I think it's also important because computer typing is really common in the work, so if by introducing this skill at an early age (revised for a more natural flow), students get training in the primary school of how to type on the computer, they can have will be better prepared for their future careers (revised for a better career in the future.strong conclusion).

6. 思维导图

- Preference/Opinion
  - Agree with teaching typing instead of handwriting

- Main Point
  - Importance of computer typing in academics and work

- Supporting Examples
  - Homework often requires computer use
  - Typing skills can lead to better career opportunities

- Conclusion
  - Primary schools should focus on teaching typing skills for future success

7. 关键词

8. 补充示例

9. Sub-opinion: Typing is faster than handwriting. Explanation: Typing allows students to complete assignments more quickly and efficiently. Supporting Example: Students who type their essays can finish them in half the time it takes to handwrite them.

10. Sub-opinion: Typing is more legible than handwriting. Explanation: Typed text is easier to read and understand than handwritten text. Supporting Example: Teachers can grade typed assignments more accurately because they can clearly read the students' work.

11. Sub-opinion: Typing skills are essential for using modern technology. Explanation: Most devices and software require typing skills for effective use. Supporting Example: Students who know how to type can easily navigate and use computers, tablets, and smartphones.

12. Sub-opinion: Typing encourages collaboration. Explanation: Digital documents can be easily shared and edited by multiple people. Supporting Example: Students can work together on group projects by sharing and editing documents online.

13. Sub-opinion: Typing reduces the need for paper and is environmentally friendly. Explanation: Digital documents save paper and reduce waste. Supporting Example: Schools that prioritize typing over handwriting can reduce their paper consumption and contribute to a greener environment.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 2

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 2

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 2

2.预估分数

• 总分: 17

3.表达 从交付方面来看，这个回答有一些问题。首先，发言者的语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。此外，发言者在某些地方使用了错误的词汇，如“momentous”和“indispensable”，这可能会让听众产生困惑。建议发言者提高语速，并注意在表达时使用恰当的词汇。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答虽然提到了两个观点，但是论述不够充分。例如，在谈到学习打字对学生很重要时，发言者只提到了托福考试是在计算机上进行的，并没有给出其他具体的例子。此外，回答最后一句话与主题无关，建议删除。为了改进这个回答，建议发言者在论述观点时提供更多具体的例子和证据，并确保整个回答紧扣主题。

5. 语言使用

Original:

Personally speaking, I believe that primary school should no longer teach students how to write by hand, and instead should spend time teaching them how to type on a computer. First, it can catch up with times and with the development of technology. Second, typing is an important, computer plays an important role, and typing is a momentous and indispensable skill for students to catch up with the development of technology. For example, the TOEFL test is on computer, and I should learn how to type quickly. So I think teaching students how to type on a computer is very important. Be careful, don't eat all the medicine on your clothes.

Revised:

In my opinion, primary schools should shift their focus from teaching children how to write by hand to teaching them how to type on a computer. Firstly, this change would align with the rapid advancement of technology in today's world. Secondly, typing has become an essential skill due to the significant role computers play in various aspects of life.

One supporting example is the TOEFL test, which is now administered on computers. To perform well on this exam, students must learn to type quickly and efficiently. Another example is the increasing reliance on digital communication in both personal and professional settings. Good typing skills enable individuals to communicate more effectively and efficiently through emails, instant messaging, and social media platforms.

By prioritizing typing over handwriting in primary education, we can better prepare students for success in a technology-driven world.

In my opinion, primary schools should shift their focus from teaching children how to write by hand (revised for clarity) to teaching them how to type on a computer (revised for clarity). Firstly, this change would align with the rapid advancement of technology (revised for natural flow) in today's world. Secondly, typing has become an essential skill (revised for natural flow) due to the significant role computers play in various aspects of life (revised for natural flow).

One supporting example is the TOEFL test (revised for clarity), which is now administered on computers. To perform well on this exam, students must learn to type quickly and efficiently (revised for natural flow). Another example is the increasing reliance on digital communication in both personal and professional settings (revised for clarity). Good typing skills enable individuals to communicate more effectively and efficiently through emails, instant messaging, and social media platforms (revised for natural flow).

By prioritizing typing over handwriting in primary education (revised for clarity), we can better prepare students for success in a technology-driven world (revised for strong conclusion).

Corrected:

Personally speaking, I believe that

In my opinion, primary school schools should no longer teach students shift their focus from teaching children how to write by hand, and instead should spend time hand (revised for clarity) to teaching them how to type on a computer. First, it can catch up computer (revised for clarity). Firstly, this change would align with times and with the development the rapid advancement of technology. Second, technology (revised for natural flow) in today's world. Secondly, typing has become an essential skill (revised for natural flow) due to the significant role computers play in various aspects of life (revised for natural flow).

One supporting example is an important, computer plays an important role, and typing is a momentous and indispensable skill for students to catch up with the development of technology. For example, the TOEFL test (revised for clarity), which is on computer, and I should now administered on computers. To perform well on this exam, students must learn how to type quickly. So I think teaching quickly and efficiently (revised for natural flow). Another example is the increasing reliance on digital communication in both personal and professional settings (revised for clarity). Good typing skills enable individuals to communicate more effectively and efficiently through emails, instant messaging, and social media platforms (revised for natural flow).

By prioritizing typing over handwriting in primary education (revised for clarity), we can better prepare students how to type on for success in a computer is very important. Be careful, don't eat all the medicine on your clothes.technology-driven world (revised for strong conclusion).

6. Display title: 6.思维导图

- Preference/Opinion
  - Primary schools should teach typing instead of handwriting

- Main Point
  - Catch up with technology development
  - Importance of typing skills

- Supporting Examples
  - TOEFL test on computer
  - Typing is an indispensable skill for students

- Conclusion
  - Teaching students how to type is crucial for their future success

7. Display title: 7.关键词

8. Display title: 8.补充示例

9. Typing allows for faster communication, which is essential in today's fast-paced world.

10. Handwriting can still be taught as an elective course, allowing students to learn it if they are interested.

11. Typing reduces the chances of errors and makes editing easier, leading to improved overall work quality.

12. Students who learn typing early on will have an advantage when entering higher education or the workforce.

13. Teaching typing can also help students become more familiar with various software programs, increasing their computer literacy.