TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍微放慢速度以提高清晰度。此外，适当的停顿可以帮助提高语言流畅性。建议多加练习，关注发音和停顿的准确性。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在总结计划和女士观点时，有些地方表述不够清楚。建议在准备过程中更加关注文章和听力材料的关键信息，并确保在回答中明确表达这些信息。同时，注意保持回答的连贯性和组织结构。

5.语言使用

原文：The university aimed to change infrequently used books because it can create space for new books and students can view books easily on computer. The university plans to remove infrequently used books from the library shelves to create space for new books, allowing students to access these books easily on their computers.（修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

The woman doesn't like this idea. The woman supports this plan.（根据听力内容，女士是支持这个计划的。）

She thinks that firstly, shelf books are crowded last year, so piles of books were stacked on the shelves. She believes that due to overcrowded shelves last year, piles of books were stacked on them.（修改了句子结构和时态，使表达更准确。）

In addition, as a result, new shelves or books have no room to placed in and they have to placed in shelves. Consequently, there was no room for new shelves or books, and they had to be placed on the existing shelves.（修改了句子结构和语法错误，使表达更清晰。）

Another reason is that students will be easier to use books on the internet. Another reason is that it will be easier for students to access books online.（修改了句子结构，使表达更自然。）

There is no need to go to a library and students can sit in dormitory and read books online. Students can read books online without going to the library, even from their dormitories.（修改了句子结构，使表达更自然。）

In addition, the woman even wishes that all books can be digitalized and students can read them online. Furthermore, the woman wishes that all books could be digitized, allowing students to read them online.（修改了句子结构和时态，使表达更准确。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to remove infrequently used books from the library shelves to create space for new books, allowing students to access these books easily on their computers. The woman supports this plan. She believes that due to overcrowded shelves last year, piles of books were stacked on them. Consequently, there was no room for new shelves or books, and they had to be placed on the existing shelves. Another reason is that it will be easier for students to access books online. Students can read books online without going to the library, even from their dormitories. Furthermore, the woman wishes that all books could be digitized, allowing students to read them online.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Remove infrequently used books
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitize removed books

• Woman's Opinion

  • Supports the plan
  • Reasons
    • Overcrowded shelves last year
    • Easier access to books online
    • Convenience of reading from dormitories
    • Wishes all books could be digitized

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any potential spelling errors.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to further support their points. To improve topic development, the speaker should consider elaborating on the benefits of digitizing books and how it would impact students' access to resources.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The reading passage announces a change on campus. However, the books which haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library bookshelf. The reading passage announces a change on campus: books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. (Removed "However" and combined sentences for a smoother flow) Also, these books will be scanned into electronic books. Additionally, these books will be digitized. (Rephrased for clarity and conciseness) The woman in the conversation is in favor of this idea. She starts off by saying that she is also a librarian who works here. She had already found out that a lot of books which have been borrowed is very old and it's a shame that there's no place for other new books to come into the library. She thinks that it's a good idea to scan these books electronic because people don't need to go to libraries and just read these books in their classroom and houses. She believes that digitizing these books is beneficial as it allows people to access them without visiting the library, enabling them to read from their classrooms or homes. (Rephrased for clarity and improved sentence structure) She also suggests that it's a good idea to scan all these books into electronic. Furthermore, she suggests digitizing all the books in the library. (Rephrased for conciseness and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage announces a change on campus: books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. Additionally, these books will be digitized. The woman in the conversation is in favor of this idea. She starts off by saying that she is also a librarian who works there. She had already found out that many of the borrowed books are very old, and it's a shame that there's no space for new books to be added to the library. She believes that digitizing these books is beneficial as it allows people to access them without visiting the library, enabling them to read from their classrooms or homes. Furthermore, she suggests digitizing all the books in the library.

6. Mind Map

- Change on campus
  - Removal of infrequently borrowed books
  - Digitization of removed books

- Woman's opinion
  - In favor of the idea
  - Reasons:
    - Librarian perspective
    - Old books taking up space
    - Accessibility without visiting the library
    - Reading from classrooms or homes
  - Suggestion:
    - Digitize all library books

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微提高流利度。建议练习更自然地连接单词和短语，以提高口语的连贯性。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以避免句子之间的混乱。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释女士观点时提供更多细节。例如，在提到女士认为在线访问是个好主意时，可以进一步解释她为什么觉得这样做对学生更方便。此外，在总结时，可以更明确地指出女士对计划的看法及其原因。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the reading passage announces that the university library is going to remove the books which haven't been borrowed for about 5 years. The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years.（将 "announces" 改为 "states"，使语气更加中立；将 "is going to" 改为 "plans to"，使句子更加简洁；将 "for about 5 years" 改为 "for approximately five years"，使表达更加准确。）

And it is because it can create the space for new books, and the old books have already been scanned into digital way, and the students can easily access the books on the computer in their dormitory. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories.（将原句中的多个 "and" 删除，以提高连贯性；将 "scanned into digital way" 改为 "digitized"，使表达更加简洁。）

And in the conversation, the woman agrees with the announcement, and it is because she has already been the librarian, and she knows that it is so crowded for the piles of books stacked in the office, including new shipments of books that the university has bought. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university.（将 "announcement" 改为 "plan"，使表达更加准确；将 "it is because she has already been the librarian" 改为 "as she has experience as a librarian"，使表达更加自然。）

Secondly, she thinks it is a great idea to use online access because the students don't have to go to the library or carry the books around, and it can be easy for them to read the books. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.（将 "Secondly" 改为 "Furthermore"，使句子更加连贯；将 "it is a great idea to use online access" 改为 "utilizing online access is beneficial"，使表达更加简洁。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • University library
  • Remove books (not borrowed for ~5 years)
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitization of old books

• Conversation

  • Woman's opinion
    • Agrees with the plan
    • Reasons:
      • Experience as a librarian
      • Crowded office with stacks of books
      • Online access benefits students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语言流畅度较好，但仍有部分不太自然的表达。建议在练习时注意提高发音准确性，同时注意适当的停顿和语速。此外，尽量避免使用重复词汇，以增加语言的丰富性。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论据方面还有待加强。建议在准备过程中先梳理好思路，确保论点之间的连贯性。同时，在解释原因时尽量提供更具体的例子或细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The university library announced that books that have not been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves. The university library has announced that books not borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the shelves.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

The girl agreed with the statement. The woman agrees with the plan.（将“statement”改为“plan”，使表达更准确。）

On one hand, she thinks there are too many shelves in the library and they are very crowded. On one hand, she believes that the library is overcrowded with too many shelves.（调整句子结构，使表达更自然。）

Besides, there are a lot of books put on the shelves. There is no room for them. Additionally, there is no room for new books due to the large number of existing ones on the shelves.（合并两个句子，使表达更连贯。）

On the other hand, online accessing the library books is a good way for students. On the other hand, accessing library books online is beneficial for students.（调整句子结构，使表达更自然。）

It's very easy to use the book and students not should go to the library. They can read books in the dorms. It's very convenient, as students don't need to go to the library and can read books in their dorms.（调整句子结构，使表达更自然。）

修订版（140字）：

The university library has announced that books not borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the shelves. The woman agrees with the plan. On one hand, she believes that the library is overcrowded with too many shelves. Additionally, there is no room for new books due to the large number of existing ones on the shelves. On the other hand, accessing library books online is beneficial for students. It's very convenient, as students don't need to go to the library and can read books in their dorms.

6.思维导图

• University library

  • Announced plan
    • Remove books not borrowed in 5 years

• Woman's opinion

  • Agrees with plan
    • Overcrowded library
    • No room for new books
    • Online access beneficial
      • Convenient for students
      • Read books in dorms

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速较为稳定，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议发言者练习更流畅、自然的语言表达，避免在不适当的地方停顿。同时，注意准确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, but it could be improved by providing more specific examples or details from the listening passage to support the woman's opinion. Additionally, the response could benefit from clearer transitions between ideas to make the overall structure more cohesive.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university plans to remove the books that five years nobody borrowed and create space for new books. At the same time, the old books will be scanned and be published on website. The woman totally agree with this statement and points out that the shelf is really crowded. The librarian has complained for a long time. The office has bought new books but no room for storage them. So this announcement is really practical. And the online access is really easier for students to find books. Students can operate it in dorm room. And the woman wishes that all books will be published on website one day.

Corrected Answer: The university plans to remove the books that five years nobody borrowed haven't been borrowed in five years (五年来没有人借阅的书，表达不够准确) and create space for new books. At the same time, the old books will be scanned and be published on website made available on the library's website (在网站上发布，表达不够准确). The woman totally agree completely agrees (完全同意，语法错误) with this plan and points out that the shelf is really crowded. The librarian has complained for a long time. The office has bought new books but no room for storage them there is no room to store them (没有地方存放它们，表达不够准确). So this announcement is really practical. And the online access is really easier much easier (真的更容易，表达不够准确) for students to find books. Students can operate it access them (操作它，表达不够准确) in their dorm rooms. And the woman wishes that all books will be published on website available online (在网站上发布，表达不够准确) one day.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to remove the books that haven't been borrowed in five years, creating space for new books. Simultaneously, the old books will be scanned and made available on the library's website. The woman completely agrees with this plan, pointing out that the shelves are overcrowded, and the librarian has been complaining for a long time. The office has purchased new books, but there is no room to store them, making this announcement practical and beneficial. Online access is much easier for students to find and access books from their dorm rooms. The woman hopes that eventually, all books will be available online, further enhancing the convenience and accessibility of library resources for students.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Remove books
    - Not borrowed in five years
  - Create space
    - New books
  - Old books
    - Scanned and available online

- Woman's Opinion
  - Completely agrees
  - Reasons
    - Overcrowded shelves
    - Librarian complaints
    - No room for new books
  - Online access benefits
    - Easier for students
    - Access from dorm rooms
  - Future hope
    - All books available online

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, try to maintain a consistent pace throughout the response and minimize unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focus on accurate pronunciation to avoid any potential spelling errors.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the listening passage to better support the woman's opinion. To strengthen topic development, try to include more direct quotes or paraphrases from the listening passage that relate to the woman's opinion and reasons for holding that opinion.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: According to a recent article, the university library will remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library shelves. As stated in a recent article, the university library plans to remove books that haven't been borrowed within the last five years from its shelves. (Improved sentence structure and word choice) This is because they need more rooms to accommodate new books. This decision is due to the need for additional space to house incoming books. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) Additionally, the removed books will be digitized and made available online. Moreover, the removed books will be digitized and accessible online. (Improved transition and word choice)

Revised Answer (140 words): As stated in a recent article, the university library plans to remove books that haven't been borrowed within the last five years from its shelves. This decision is due to the need for additional space to house incoming books. Moreover, the removed books will be digitized and accessible online. The woman thinks that this is an excellent idea during their conversation. She mentioned that when she worked at the library last year, she noticed that the shelves were overcrowded, leaving no room for new book arrivals, which was unfortunate. Furthermore, she expresses her desire for not only the removed books but also new ones to be digitized and available online. She believes this would provide convenience and ease for students as they could access these resources anytime, anywhere without having to carry physical copies around.

6. Mind Map

• University library

  • Remove books
    • Not borrowed in 5 years
  • Create space
    • New books
  • Digitization
    • Online access

• Woman's opinion

  • Excellent idea
    • Overcrowded shelves
    • Convenience for students

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答内容基本清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍微减少停顿，以保持流畅的语速。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。为了提高表达能力，可以多加练习和模仿地道英语发音。

4.话题发展 回答内容条理清晰，主题发展较好。但可以在解释女生观点的理由时提供更多具体细节和例子，以增强说服力。为了进一步完善话题发展，可以尝试在练习中更深入地探讨观点和论据。

5.语言使用

Original: The woman believes that the plan is practical. Firstly, she believes that not placing new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. This is because last year when she assisted at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with an easier option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library. By the way, she also stressed that maybe the library can digitize all the books in the library into the computer.

Corrected: The woman believes that the plan is practical. Firstly, she believes that not placing failing to place new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. This is because last year when she assisted volunteered at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with an easier more convenient option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library. By the way, Furthermore, she also stressed that maybe the library can digitize all the books in the library into the computeran electronic format.

(将“not placing”改为“failing to place”，使句子更自然。将“assisted”改为“volunteered”，使表达更准确。将“easier”改为“more convenient”，提高词汇水平。将“By the way”改为“Furthermore”，使过渡更顺畅。将“the computer”改为“an electronic format”，使表达更准确。)

Revised (140 words): The woman believes that the plan is practical. Firstly, she believes that failing to place new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. This is because last year when she volunteered at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with a more convenient option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library. Furthermore, she also stressed that maybe the library can digitize all the books in the library into an electronic format, which would not only save space but also make it easier for students to access and search for information in these books. This way, the library can better serve its purpose of providing valuable resources to students.

6.思维导图

- Practical Plan
  - Waste of resources
    - Failing to place new books
    - Volunteered at the library
  - More convenient access
    - Digitizing old books
    - Reading from dormitories
  - Further suggestion
    - Digitize all books
    - Electronic format

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意自然地停顿，以及提高发音的准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在一些地方可以更加明确地表达观点。建议在练习时注意更清晰地阐述观点，并尝试提供更多相关的支持或例子。

5.语言使用

原文：There is an announcement about the change that will be taken by the university library about the old books, which is less used and low-loaded in the last 5 years, so the university will remove the books and change them into digital version. The university library has announced a plan to remove old books that have been infrequently used and borrowed in the past five years, and convert them into digital versions. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加清晰易懂)

In the audio, the girls agree with the announcement because of the two main reasons. In the audio, the woman agrees with this plan for two main reasons. (改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表达更准确)

First one is that the overcrowded shelves is a problem for the library because so many books stacked in the same shelves, so no room for the new books. The first reason is that overcrowded shelves are a problem for the library as there is no room for new books due to many books being stacked on the same shelves. (调整了句子结构，使其更加清晰)

Another reason is that it is a great idea to change the old book into digital version so that students see it easier to use the book rather than go to the library check their books in person. The second reason is that converting old books into digital versions makes it easier for students to access them without having to visit the library in person. (改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表达更准确)

Therefore, the reasons are why the girls believe that changing some library system is a good idea. Therefore, these reasons explain why the woman believes that implementing this change in the library system is a good idea. (调整了句子结构，使其更加清晰)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university library has announced a plan to remove old books that have been infrequently used and borrowed in the past five years, and convert them into digital versions. In the audio, the woman agrees with this plan for two main reasons. The first reason is that overcrowded shelves are a problem for the library as there is no room for new books due to many books being stacked on the same shelves. The second reason is that converting old books into digital versions makes it easier for students to access them without having to visit the library in person. Therefore, these reasons explain why the woman believes that implementing this change in the library system is a good idea.

6.思维导图

- University Library Plan
  - Remove old books
    - Infrequently used and borrowed
    - Past five years
  - Convert into digital versions

- Woman's Opinion
  - Agree with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Overcrowded shelves
      - No room for new books
    - Easier access for students
      - No need to visit the library in person

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：2

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：2

2.预估分数

• 总分：19

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语速不够流畅，有些地方停顿不当。建议发言者注意提高发音准确性，避免不必要的停顿，保持语速的连贯性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对文章中的计划进行了总结，并表达了女生对计划的看法及原因。但在组织结构上可以更加清晰。建议发言者在陈述观点时使用更明确的连接词，如“首先”和“其次”，以帮助听众更好地理解观点及其支持理由。

5.语言使用

原文：The university had decided to move out a book which had a long time not been landed by others out to the library because they think they can move out the room for the new book they acquired and they scanned the books and they provided them on a website and the girl agreed with this idea. The university decided to remove books that have not been borrowed for a long time from the library, as they believe it will create space for new books. These removed books will be digitized and made available on a website, and the girl agrees with this idea. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰易懂)

Firstly, she thinks that the library shelf is so crowded and there are many piles of books stuck in the office and someone would want to use them. First, she believes that the library shelves are overcrowded, with many stacks of books in storage, which could be useful to someone. (修改了词汇和句子结构，使表达更准确)

And secondly, she thinks it's easy to use these books for students because they can access them on the website and they shouldn't have to go to the library to use them. Secondly, she thinks it's more convenient for students to access these books online, as they won't have to physically visit the library. (修改了词汇和句子结构，使表达更自然)

修订版（140字）：

The university decided to remove books that have not been borrowed for a long time from the library, as they believe it will create space for new books. These removed books will be digitized and made available on a website, and the girl agrees with this idea. First, she believes that the library shelves are overcrowded, with many stacks of books in storage, which could be useful to someone. Secondly, she thinks it's more convenient for students to access these books online, as they won't have to physically visit the library.

6.思维导图

• University decision

  • Remove books
  • Create space for new books

• Digitization

  • Books available online

• Girl's opinion

  • Agreement
    • Overcrowded shelves
    • Convenience of online access

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发音清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意掌握自然的语调和节奏，尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题要求的方面，但在组织结构上还有待加强。建议在准备过程中先梳理好思路，确保回答条理清晰、层次分明。同时，在表述时尽量使用恰当的连接词，使句子之间的衔接更自然。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the school library are going to make changes to those books that are used infrequently. Well, the school library is going to make changes to the books that are used infrequently. (将“are”改为“is”，因为主语是“the school library”，是单数。)

This is to create space for the new books, and the old books will be digitalized, so that they can be read through the computer. This is to create space for new books, and the old books will be digitized so that they can be accessed through a computer. (将“digitalized”改为“digitized”，这是更常用的词汇；去掉“the”使表述更自然；将“read through”改为“accessed through”，使表述更准确。)

And the woman in the conversation likes this idea. The woman in the conversation likes this idea. (去掉句首的“And”，使句子更流畅。)

She thinks the old shelves are so crowded with the old books, and the library bought many new books and just doesn't have enough space to put on the shelf. She thinks the shelves are overcrowded with old books, and since the library has purchased many new books, there isn't enough space for them on the shelves. (调整句子结构，使其更清晰；使用“since”增加连贯性。)

So she thinks that's not a good idea. So, she believes the plan is a good idea. (将“that's not a good idea”改为“the plan is a good idea”，使表述更准确。)

And besides, she thinks the online access is a wonderful idea, so that the student will not have to go to the library, so that they can read the books on their dormitory. Besides, she thinks online access is a wonderful idea because students won't have to go to the library and can read the books in their dormitories. (调整句子结构，使其更清晰；使用“because”增加连贯性。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Well, the school library is going to make changes to the books that are used infrequently. This is to create space for new books, and the old books will be digitized so that they can be accessed through a computer. The woman in the conversation likes this idea. She thinks the shelves are overcrowded with old books, and since the library has purchased many new books, there isn't enough space for them on the shelves. So, she believes the plan is a good idea. Besides, she thinks online access is a wonderful idea because students won't have to go to the library and can read the books in their dormitories.

6.思维导图

- School library
  - Make changes
    - Infrequently used books

- Create space
  - New books

- Old books
  - Digitized
  - Accessed through a computer

- Woman's opinion
  - Likes the idea
    - Overcrowded shelves
    - Not enough space for new books
    - Online access benefits
      - No need to go to the library
      - Read books in dormitories

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意控制停顿的频率，以使表达更流畅。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，并在回答中明确地阐述了文章中的计划、女士对计划的看法以及她持有这一观点的原因。为了进一步提高回答质量，建议在描述女士观点时更具体地引用听力材料中的细节。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to make change to the library's book. The university plans to make changes to the library's books.（将“change”改为复数形式“changes”，将“book”改为复数形式“books”，使句子更符合语法规则。） They want to remove some of the old books that have not been used for about five years and prepare space for the new books. They plan to remove some old books that haven't been used for about five years and create space for new books.（将“want”改为“plan”，使句子更正式；将“have not”缩写为“haven't”，使句子更自然；将“prepare”改为“create”，使句子更准确。） And the remote books will be scanned and uploaded on the school's website. Additionally, the removed books will be scanned and uploaded to the school's website.（将“remote”改为“removed”，使句子更准确；用“Additionally”替换“And”，使句子更连贯。） And the woman in the conversation thinks that's a timely change. The woman in the conversation believes this is a timely change.（用“The woman in the conversation believes”替换“And the woman in the conversation thinks”，使句子更连贯；用“this is a timely change”替换“that's a timely change”，使句子更自然。） While she is working in the library, she found that the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available. While working in the library, she noticed that the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable.（将“she is”改为“she”，使句子更简洁；将“found”改为“noticed”，使句子更自然；将“the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available”改为“the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable”，使句子更连贯。） So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed. She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed.（用“She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed”替换“So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed”，使句子更连贯。） And at the same time, the scanned books are much more easier for readers to use because students do not have to go to the library and carry the book around. Simultaneously, scanned books will be much easier for readers to use since students won't have to visit the library and carry physical books around.（用“Simultaneously”替换“And at the same time”，使句子更连贯；将“are much more easier”改为“will be much easier”，使句子更自然；将“do not have to”改为“won't have to”，使句子更简洁；用“visit the library and carry physical books around”替换“go to the library and carry the book around”，使句子更准确。） They only have to do is to stay in their room and read. All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read.（用“All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read”替换“They only have to do is to stay in their room and read”，使句子更自然。） And she thinks it will be much better if all the books can be scanned or digitalized. She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized.（用“She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized”替换“And she thinks it will be much better if

6.思维导图

- University Library Changes
  - Remove old books
    - Not used for five years
    - Create space for new books
  - Digitize removed books
    - Upload to the website
  - Woman's opinion
    - Timely change
      - Shelves crowded with old books
      - New books unavailable
    - Benefits of digitization
      - Easier access for students
      - No need to visit the library and carry physical books
    - Suggestion for improvement
      - Digitize all books

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅度，建议发言者在练习时注意保持一致的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得很好，回答内容条理清晰，观点和论据之间的联系紧密。为了进一步提高，可以尝试在解释原因时提供更多具体的例子或细节，使回答更加充实。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The plan suggests that the books that have not been borrowed in the last five years will be removed from the library, since that it will provide more space for the new books getting into the library, and the removed books will be digitized and become electronically available on the university's website to students who want to read it on a computer. The plan proposes removing books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, as this will create more space for new books. The removed books will be digitized and made electronically available on the university's website for students who wish to access them on a computer.（建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复单词，并简化句子结构。）

The woman in the listening agrees with this idea because, for her own experience, she worked in the library for the last year, and she found that a lot of the books are packed in, and the shelves are really crowded, and the new books getting to the library are stacked on the piles in the office of the library. The woman agrees with this plan because she has personal experience working in the library last year. She noticed that many books were tightly packed, causing overcrowded shelves, and new books were piled up in the library office.（使用更简洁的句子结构，避免过多的并列句。）

And secondly, it will make it easier for students to assess the books, since they don't have to even go to the library and carry the books around. Additionally, it will simplify students' access to these books, as they won't need to physically visit the library and carry the books around.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

They can just read the books in their own dormitory. Students can conveniently read the books in their dormitories.（使用更自然的表达方式。）

And she also thinks that it would be even better if all books are digitized, because it would make the reading process more convenient. She also believes that digitizing all books would further enhance the reading experience's convenience.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The plan proposes removing books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, as this will create more space for new books. The removed books will be digitized and made electronically available on the university's website for students who wish to access them on a computer. The woman agrees with this plan because she has personal experience working in the library last year. She noticed that many books were tightly packed, causing overcrowded shelves, and new books were piled up in the library office. Additionally, it will simplify students' access to these books, as they won't need to physically visit the library and carry the books around. Students can conveniently read the books in their dormitories. She also believes that digitizing all books would further enhance the reading experience's convenience.

6.思维导图

- Plan
  - Remove books (not borrowed in 5 years)
  - Create space for new books
  - Digitize removed books
  - Electronically available on university's website

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with the plan
  - Personal experience working in the library
    - Overcrowded shelves
    - New books piled up in the library office
  - Benefits for students
    - Simplified access to books
    - No need to physically visit the library or carry books around
    - Convenient reading in dormitories
  - Suggestion: Digitize all books for enhanced convenience

7.关键词