TOEFL TPO 67 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the Student Association's recent purchase. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there is room for improvement in pronunciation and reducing unnecessary pauses. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and focus on accurate pronunciation of words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening material to strengthen their arguments. Additionally, the speaker should ensure that they accurately represent the information from both the reading and listening materials to create a more compelling response.

5.Language Use

While the Student Association proposes plans to purchase a new sound system in the Old Lincoln Hall for movies, the man in the listening material disagrees with this idea and counters it with two arguments. First off, the man doesn't believe the Old Lincoln Hall as is the right place to purchase the system, since the Old Lincoln Hall is over 100 years old and it is too old for any improvement. Besides, the man also doesn't think movies as are the favorite activities the students have of students. Actually, students in the campus doesn't don't have anything else to do besides movies, if provided with more recreation and activities, the students may not go to movie theaters.

("proposes" changed to "plans" for a more natural-sounding verb; "as" removed and "is" added for proper grammar; "as" replaced with "are" for correct verb form; "the students have" replaced with "of students" for a smoother sentence structure; "doesn't" changed to "don't" for subject-verb agreement.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

While the Student Association plans to purchase a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall to enhance movie experiences, the man in the listening material disagrees with this decision and presents two arguments. Firstly, he argues that Old Lincoln Hall is not an appropriate venue for installing the new sound system, as the building is over 100 years old and its age may hinder any significant improvements. Secondly, the man questions whether movies are genuinely the favorite activity of students on campus. He suggests that students might have chosen movies as their preferred activity due to a lack of alternative recreational options. If more diverse activities were available, students might not prioritize going to movie theaters as much as the survey results indicate.

6.Mind Map

- Disagreement
  - Old Lincoln Hall
    - Inappropriate venue
    - Age of the building
  - Movies as favorite activity
    - Lack of alternatives
    - Diverse recreational options

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 总体而言，发言者的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。首先，可以尝试提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。此外，适当减少停顿次数，保持一致的语速，有助于使表达更流畅。建议多加练习和参加相关培训课程，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得相当不错。回答内容条理清晰、组织有序，并且在关键点上给出了足够的支持和例证。然而，在解释男子为什么认为购买新音响系统是浪费钱时，可以进一步阐述一下老林肯大厅的声学效果问题。此外，在谈到学生选择电影作为首选活动的原因时，可以尝试提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。总之，在话题发展方面还有一定的提升空间，建议多参加讨论和练习，以便更好地组织和阐述观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The man opposes the student association's decision to purchase the new sound system to attract the students to movies and to raise the ticket sales for mainly two reasons. The man opposes the Student Association's decision to purchase a new sound system for attracting students to movies and increasing ticket sales, mainly for two reasons.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

First, the man thinks that purchase of new sound system would be a totally waste of money because the auditorium is located in a building with 200 years old history, which used to be a gym. First, the man believes that purchasing a new sound system would be a complete waste of money since the auditorium is located in a 200-year-old building that was once a gym.（修改了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇，并修正了语法错误。）

So he assumes that the acoustic effect there must be very terrible and therefore he thinks the expense would be unnecessary. Thus, he assumes that the acoustics there must be terrible, making the expense unnecessary.（简化了句子结构，使其更自然。）

Second of all, he doubts whether the top option of student's choice is going to the movies because actually there's nothing else to do on the campus since there's no recreational facilities available for students. Secondly, he questions whether going to movies is truly students' top choice, as there are no other recreational facilities available on campus.（简化了句子结构，使其更自然。）

Therefore, the prerequisite for the decision is flawed. Consequently, the basis for the decision is flawed.（使用了更高级的词汇。）

修订版（140字）：

The man opposes the Student Association's decision to purchase a new sound system for attracting students to movies and increasing ticket sales, mainly for two reasons. First, the man believes that purchasing a new sound system would be a complete waste of money since the auditorium is located in a 200-year-old building that was once a gym. Thus, he assumes that the acoustics there must be terrible, making the expense unnecessary. Secondly, he questions whether going to movies is truly students' top choice, as there are no other recreational facilities available on campus. Consequently, the basis for the decision is flawed.

6.思维导图

• Main Idea: Opposition to sound system purchase
  • Reason 1: Waste of money
    • Auditorium location: 200-year-old building
    • Previous function: Gym
    • Acoustics: Terrible
  • Reason 2: Doubt about students' preferences
    • Lack of recreational facilities on campus
    • Basis for decision: Flawed

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语言表达较为清晰，但仍有一些不流畅的地方。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，避免过快或过慢。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。在练习时，可以多加强对于词汇和短语的发音练习。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题要求的信息，但在组织结构和连接词方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意使用恰当的连接词来使句子更加连贯，并确保每个观点都有足够的支持或例证。同时，可以尝试使用更多不同类型的句子结构来丰富表达。

5.语言使用

原文：The school is going to purchase new sound system for the old Lincoln Hall Auditorium to attract students and increase the ticket sales. The school plans to purchase a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium to attract more students and boost ticket sales.（将“is going to”改为“plans to”，使句子更自然；在“old Lincoln Hall Auditorium”前加上定冠词“the”；将“increase”改为“boost”，丰富词汇。）

And students disagree with the policy and think it's a waste of money. However, some students disagree with this decision, believing it is a waste of money.（将“And”改为“However”，使句子更连贯；将“policy”改为“decision”，更符合语境；使用“believing”代替“think”，使句子更自然。）

It has two main reasons. There are two main reasons for their disagreement.（使用“There are two main reasons for their disagreement.”代替“It has two main reasons.”，使句子更自然。）

Firstly, he thinks the old Lincoln Hall Auditorium is too old that it was built nearly 200 years ago. Firstly, they argue that the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, being nearly 200 years old, is not suitable for such an investment.（使用“they argue that”代替“he thinks”，使句子更自然；调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

So it's not wise to spend money on it. Therefore, they believe spending money on it is unwise.（使用“they believe”代替“it's”，使句子更自然；将“spend”改为“spending”，使句子结构更准确。）

Secondly, he thinks it's because the students have not much to do in school. Secondly, they feel that the lack of recreational activities on campus is the main reason for students' preference for movies.（调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

So he decides to see the movies. As a result, students choose to watch movies as their primary form of entertainment.（调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

And what the school really needs is to add the new social activities. They suggest that the school should focus on providing more diverse social activities instead.（使用“They suggest that”代替“And”，使句子更连贯；调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school plans to purchase a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium to attract more students and boost ticket sales. However, some students disagree with this decision, believing it is a waste of money. There are two main reasons for their disagreement. Firstly, they argue that the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, being nearly 200 years old, is not suitable for such an investment. Therefore, they believe spending money on it is unwise. Secondly, they feel that the lack of recreational activities on campus is the main reason for students' preference for movies. As a result, students choose to watch movies as their primary form of entertainment. They suggest that the school should focus on providing more diverse social activities instead.

6.思维导图

- School's decision
  - Purchase new sound system
  - Attract students and boost ticket sales

- Students' disagreement
  - Waste of money
  - Reasons for disagreement
    - Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium
      - Nearly 200 years old
      - Unsuitable for investment
    - Lack of recreational activities on campus
      - Main reason for movie preference
      - Students choose movies as primary entertainment

- Suggestion
  - Focus on providing diverse social activities instead

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但在某些地方存在不适当的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流利度。此外，发言者需要注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details to support their points, such as mentioning the specific issues with the acoustics in Old Lincoln Hall or suggesting alternative social activities that students might prefer over going to the movies. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on providing more evidence to support their claims and elaborating on their ideas.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The reading says the student association have purchased a new sound system for Old Lincoln House to give a better environment for students to watch a movie. But the listening have an opposite idea with it. The speaker thinks that the student association is just wasting money to purchase the sound system first. The Old Lincoln House is like 200 years ago and it used to be a gym. So the sound environment over there is very terrible. The new sound system won't improve anything. And moreover, the students have other social activities besides watching movie. They got better choice and most of them won't choose to watch the movie.

Corrected Answer: The reading states that the student association has purchased a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall to provide a better environment for students to watch movies. However, the listening presents an opposing view. The speaker believes that the student association is wasting money on purchasing the sound system. Old Lincoln Hall, which is around 200 years old and used to be a gym, has terrible acoustics. Therefore, the new sound system will not improve anything. Furthermore, students have other social activities besides watching movies, offering better choices, and most of them would not choose to watch movies. (将have改为has，House改为Hall，listening后加presents，with it改为view，first去掉，ago去掉，over there改为in that place，watching movie改为watching movies，got改为offering，watch the movie改为watch movies)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage states that Northfield College's student association has purchased a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall in order to enhance the movie-watching experience for students on campus. However, the listening passage presents an opposing view, with the speaker arguing that this investment is a waste of money. The speaker points out that Old Lincoln Hall, a 200-year-old building that was once a gym, has poor acoustics, rendering the new sound system ineffective. Additionally, the speaker contends that students have alternative social activities available to them besides watching movies. These other options may be more appealing to students, leading them to choose activities other than movie-watching. In conclusion, the speaker believes that the student association's decision to purchase a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall is misguided and will not yield the desired results.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall

- Listening Passage
  - Opposing view
  - Wasting money
  - Poor acoustics
  - Alternative social activities

- Revised Answer
  - Reading vs. Listening views
  - Old Lincoln Hall's issues
  - Other social activities for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答者的语言流利度和语速较为一致，但偶尔存在停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议回答者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答者的回答内容较为连贯和有条理，但在解释男生观点的原因时可以更具体一些。建议回答者在解释原因时提供更多细节和例子，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the reading passage, we know that the student association have has(因为主语是单数，所以应该使用has) purchased a new sound system for improve improving(应该使用动名词形式) the sound system in the old Lincoln Hall, and they wish that will attract more students to watching movie and raise the sales of ticket. The man in the conversation thinks it will be a bad idea, because the old Lincoln Hall is too old to perform as a cinema, and use the money to improve the sound system will be a waste of money. Furthermore, he doubt that watching movie is the first choice if students have alternative choice like recreation and other social activities.

Revised (140 words): According to the reading passage, we know that the student association has purchased a new sound system for improving the audio quality in Old Lincoln Hall, hoping to attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales. However, the man in the conversation believes this decision is unwise because Old Lincoln Hall's antiquated structure makes it unsuitable for use as a cinema, rendering any investment in its sound system wasteful. Additionally, he questions whether watching movies would remain students' top choice for entertainment if they had access to alternative options such as recreational facilities or other social activities.

6.思维导图

- Reading passage
  - Student association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall

- Man's opinion
  - Unwise decision
  - Antiquated structure
  - Wasteful investment

- Alternative options
  - Recreational facilities
  - Social activities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但仍有部分地方需要改进。首先，在语音方面，可以尝试提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。此外，在语速和停顿方面，可以适当调整，使之更加自然流畅。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了所需的信息，并对男生的观点和理由进行了解释。然而，在组织结构上还有待加强。可以尝试使用更清晰的连接词和过渡句子来组织回答，使其更具条理性。同时，在给出理由时，可以尝试提供更具体的例子或细节来支持观点。通过这些改进，话题发展将更加完善。

5.语言使用

Original: The Student Association purchased a new sound system for the O. Lincoln Hall Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium which is used to play movies. (原文中的“O. Lincoln Hall”应改为“Old Lincoln Hall”。) The Student Association believes that this is correct since in the survey, students think that watching movies in the hall is the first choice for entertainment, so that the Student Association thinks that this purchase will make a lot of profit for the school.

Corrected: The Student Association purchased a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, which is used to play movies. According to a survey, students consider watching movies in the hall as their top choice for entertainment. Therefore, the Student Association believes that this investment will significantly increase ticket sales and generate substantial revenue for the school.

Original: The man in the listening disagrees with this idea because he thinks it is a waste of money. Since the O. Lincoln Hall Auditorium is 200 years old and the acoustics there is terrible, this will not make the movies better.

Corrected: The man in the conversation disagrees with this decision because he believes it's a waste of money. He argues that since Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium is 200 years old and has poor acoustics, investing in a new sound system will not improve the movie-watching experience.

Original: Secondly, he thinks that it is not the first choice for social activities since there are not much things for students to do on campus, so that the only thing they can do is to watch a movie.

Corrected: Furthermore, he contends that watching movies may not be students' top choice for social activities if more options were available on campus. The lack of alternative recreational activities may have skewed survey results in favor of movie-watching.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The Student Association purchased a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, which is used to play movies. According to a survey, students consider watching movies in the hall as their top choice for entertainment. Therefore, the Student Association believes that this investment will significantly increase ticket sales and generate substantial revenue for the school. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision because he believes it's a waste of money. He argues that since Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium is 200 years old and has poor acoustics, investing in a new sound system will not improve the movie-watching experience. Furthermore, he contends that watching movies may not be students' top choice for social activities if more options were available on campus. The lack of alternative recreational activities may have skewed survey results in favor of movie-watching.

6.思维导图

- Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium
  - Survey results
    - Top choice for entertainment
    - Increased ticket sales and revenue

- Man's disagreement
  - Waste of money
    - Poor acoustics in old auditorium
  - Not the first choice for social activities
    - Lack of alternative recreational options on campus

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper pauses and work on accurate pronunciation of certain words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen the argument. Additionally, the speaker could work on paraphrasing the information from the reading passage more effectively to avoid repetition. Overall, focusing on these aspects will help improve topic development in future responses.

5.Language Use

The university announces that they are going to install a new sound system in the old Lincoln Hall. This is because this can attract more students to watch the movie, and also they know that watching movie is the best recreational activities in the school. However, the man disagrees for the following reasons. First, he thinks it's a waste of money since the Lincoln Hall was too old and acoustic technique there was very bad and there is no way to improve it. In addition, there are much to do on the campus, like recreational and social activities, so the man thinks students won't think the watching movie is best if there are more other activities.

The university announces announced(change to past tense for consistency) that they are going to install a new sound system in the old Lincoln Hall. This is because this can it could(use a more natural-sounding phrase) attract more students to watch the movies,(plural form for consistency) and also they know that watching movie movies(plural form for consistency) is the best recreational activities in the school. However, the man disagrees for the following reasons. First, he thinks it's a waste of money since the Lincoln Hall was too old and acoustic technique there was very bad the acoustics were terrible,(use a more natural-sounding phrase) and there is no way to improve it. In addition, there are muchto do on more to do around(use a more natural-sounding phrase) the campus, like recreational and social activities, so the man thinks students won't think the watching movie watching movies(use a more natural-sounding phrase) is best if there are more other activities.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced that they were going to install a new sound system in the old Lincoln Hall. They believed it could attract more students to watch movies and knew that watching movies was one of the best recreational activities at the school. However, the man disagreed for several reasons. First, he thought it was a waste of money since Lincoln Hall was too old and the acoustics were terrible, with no way to improve them. Additionally, he believed there was much more to do around campus, such as recreational and social activities. Therefore, the man argued that students wouldn't consider watching movies as their top choice if there were other engaging activities available on campus.

6.Mind Map

• University announcement

  • New sound system
  • Old Lincoln Hall

• Attract more students

  • Watching movies
  • Recreational activities

• Man's disagreement

  • Waste of money
  • Old hall and poor acoustics

• Other campus activities

  • Recreational and social options
  • Students' preferences

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了听力材料中提到的观点，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在练习时尝试使用更清晰的逻辑结构，如首先陈述男生的观点，然后分别解释他给出的两个理由。此外，在解释理由时可以尝试提供更多细节或例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university wants to install a new movie theater in the school. Actually, the university plans to upgrade the sound system in the existing movie theater. (原文中的描述与阅读材料不符，应改为升级现有电影院的音响系统。) First off, the university wants to do a survey and attract more students and improve the movie tick sales. Initially, the university conducted a survey to determine students' preferred entertainment options and aimed to attract more students and increase ticket sales. (修改了句子结构，使其更清晰，并纠正了“tick sales”为“ticket sales”。)

But in the conversation, the man strongly disagrees with this idea, because he thinks that first of all, it's a waste of money, because the movie will be played on the old building, However, in the conversation, the man strongly disagrees with this plan, arguing that it's a waste of money since movies will be shown in an old building, (重新组织句子，使其更自然。) and it may be a terrible experience for students. which might result in a poor experience for students. (修改表述，使其更准确。)

Besides, he thinks that many students will not choose movie as a first choice as a recreation activity. Furthermore, he believes that if there were more recreational activities on campus, many students would not choose movies as their first choice. (调整句子结构，使其更清晰。) So, it's not a good idea for the man to let the university build a new movie theater in the old house. Therefore, he thinks it's not a wise decision for the university to invest in upgrading the sound system in the old auditorium. (修改描述，使其与阅读材料一致。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Actually, the university plans to upgrade the sound system in the existing movie theater. Initially, the university conducted a survey to determine students' preferred entertainment options and aimed to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man strongly disagrees with this plan, arguing that it's a waste of money since movies will be shown in an old building, which might result in a poor experience for students. Furthermore, he believes that if there were more recreational activities on campus, many students would not choose movies as their first choice. Therefore, he thinks it's not a wise decision for the university to invest in upgrading the sound system in the old auditorium.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Upgrade sound system
  • Conducted survey
  • Attract students and increase ticket sales

• Man's Disagreement

  • Waste of money
    • Old building
    • Poor experience for students
  • Other recreational activities
    • Students' first choice

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：25

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整。例如，可以减少一些不必要的停顿，以保持语速的一致性。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，能够明确表达男生对购买新音响系统的看法及其原因。然而，在解释原因时可以更具体一些，例如提供更多关于老建筑声学问题的细节。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出这些原因如何影响到购买音响系统的决策。建议在练习时尝试提供更多具体细节和例子，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：A student proposed purchasing a new sound system to provide more entertainment for students, which could also increase ticket sales. The reading passage mentions that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. (原文中提到的是学生会购买了新音响系统，而不是学生提议购买。这里需要更正描述。) However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this perspective for two main reasons. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision for two main reasons. (这里的“perspective”应改为“decision”，以便更准确地描述男生的观点。) First, he believes that the old hall building is almost 200 years old with poor acoustics, so the new sound system would hardly make any improvement in the overall movie-watching experience. Second, he thinks that if students have additional social activities available on campus, they might not choose to watch movies as their first choice for entertainment. Therefore, the man believes that investing a new sound system might not be the best decision for attracting more students and increasing ticket sales. Considering the building limitations, a student poses an interest in other social activities.

修订版（140词）：

The reading passage mentions that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision for two main reasons. First, he argues that the old hall building is almost 200 years old and has poor acoustics, which would make the new sound system ineffective in improving the overall movie-watching experience. Second, he believes that if there were more social activities available on campus, students might not prioritize watching movies as their primary form of entertainment. Consequently, the man thinks that investing in a new sound system may not be the most effective strategy for attracting more students and increasing ticket sales. He suggests considering the building's limitations and exploring alternative social activities to better cater to students' interests.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Attract more students
  - Increase ticket sales

- Conversation
  - Man's disagreement
    - Old hall building
      - Poor acoustics
    - Alternative social activities
      - Students' preferences

- Revised Answer
  - Man's opinion
  - Reasons for disagreement
    - Ineffective sound system in old building
    - More social activities needed on campus
  - Suggestion for improvement
    - Explore alternative social activities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

17. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答有一些语法错误和不清晰的表达。建议在发音和语法方面进行更多的练习，以提高口语表达的准确性和流利度。同时，注意适当地使用标点符号，以避免不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答没有很好地组织和连接观点。建议在回答问题时，先简要陈述男生的观点，然后详细解释他给出的理由。此外，在解释理由时，尽量使用恰当的例子或证据来支持观点。最后，注意保持回答内容与问题紧密相关，并确保内容条理清晰。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading material, the school is considerably requiring the students that the place where the movies are on the campus are certainly shown. In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the school has installed a new sound system in the auditorium where movies are shown on campus.（将原句中的不清晰表达修改为更准确的描述。）

Because the first reason is that student association hopes that the more students will see the movie, and they want that increase the ticket sales. The first reason is that the Student Association hopes to attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales.（修改了语法错误和不自然的表达。）

The second reason is that in the rank of the school, most students love to watch movies. The second reason is that according to a survey conducted by the school, most students prefer watching movies as their favorite entertainment activity.（将原句中的不清晰表达修改为更准确的描述。）

And in the listening material, we can clearly learn that the man don't think it's a good idea. In the listening passage, we can clearly understand that the man disagrees with this decision.（修改了语法错误和不自然的表达。）

Because the first reason is that it's just a waste of money. Because the building which the school center is too old and there is no improvement. His first reason is that it's a waste of money since the building where the auditorium is located is too old and has poor acoustics, making no significant improvement.（将原句中的不清晰表达修改为更准确的描述。）

And the second reason is that he thinks there is not so most students think the watching movie is the best. Because there isn't any other fun activities student can do without watching movie. If there is any activities, they couldn't go to school. The second reason is that he believes not many students would consider watching movies as their top choice if there were other recreational activities available on campus.（修改了语法错误和不自然的表达。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is mentioned that the school has installed a new sound system in the auditorium where movies are shown on campus. The first reason is that the Student Association hopes to attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales. The second reason is that according to a survey conducted by the school, most students prefer watching movies as their favorite entertainment activity.

In the listening passage, we can clearly understand that the man disagrees with this decision. His first reason is that it's a waste of money since the building where the auditorium is located is too old and has poor acoustics, making no significant improvement. The second reason is that he believes not many students would consider watching movies as their top choice if there were other recreational activities available on campus.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - New sound system
  - Auditorium
  - Increase ticket sales
  - Survey: students prefer movies

- Listening Passage
  - Man disagrees
    - Waste of money
      - Old building
      - Poor acoustics
    - Other recreational activities
      - Movies not top choice

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达还算清晰，但在某些地方存在不太自然的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持连贯流畅。此外，发言者需要注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is generally coherent and well-organized, but there are some issues with the content. The speaker incorrectly refers to the "Square Association" and "Square Auditorium" instead of the "Student Association" and "Old Lincoln Hall auditorium." Additionally, the response could benefit from more specific examples or details from the listening passage to support the man's opinion. To improve, focus on accurately incorporating information from both the reading and listening passages and providing clear connections between ideas.

5.语言使用

Original: So the Square Association Student Association wants to portray the new sound system to improve the experience of watching movies in the Square Auditorium Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. However, the board disagrees with this proposal for too many reasons. (原因不够明确，建议使用更具体的表述) First, he thinks it is truly a waste of money as the building itself is truly old, so there will be no improvement in the experience of watching movies in this building. And the second reason is that he casts doubt on the result that watching movies tops the list in the student's wish list because he thinks that there isn't any other available activity for students to choose when they were doing the questionnaire. So the school should provide more activities such as some society activities or recreation for them to choose. And going to a movie is not their true willing.

Corrected: So the Square Association Student Association wants to implement a new sound system to enhance movie-watching experiences in the Square Auditorium Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. However, the man disagrees with this decision for several reasons. (更具体的表述) First, he believes it is a waste of money since the building itself is quite old, and thus, there will be no significant improvement in movie-watching experiences. Secondly, he questions whether watching movies truly ranks first on students' wish lists, as there are limited activities available on campus for students to choose from during their free time. He suggests that the school should offer more diverse activities, such as social events or recreational options, for students to engage in. Consequently, going to the movies may not be their genuine preference.

Revised Answer (140 words): The Student Association plans to implement a new sound system to enhance movie-watching experiences in the Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. However, the man disagrees with this decision for several reasons. First, he believes it is a waste of money since the building itself is quite old, and thus, there will be no significant improvement in movie-watching experiences. Secondly, he questions whether watching movies truly ranks first on students' wish lists, as there are limited activities available on campus for students to choose from during their free time. He suggests that the school should offer more diverse activities, such as social events or recreational options, for students to engage in. Consequently, going to the movies may not be their genuine preference.

6.思维导图

- Student Association
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall auditorium

- Man's disagreement
  - Waste of money
    - Old building
    - No significant improvement
  - Questioning students' preferences
    - Limited activities on campus
    - Genuine preference for movies?

- Suggestion
  - Offer diverse activities
    - Social events
    - Recreational options

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation issues that result from inappropriate pauses. To improve, the speaker should work on their pausing and phrasing to ensure a smoother flow of speech. Additionally, some spelling errors indicate inaccurate pronunciation, which should be addressed for better clarity.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully addressing the man's opinion and reasons for holding that opinion. To enhance topic development, the speaker should focus on providing more detailed explanations of the man's concerns about the sound system's effectiveness in the old building and his doubts about movies being the top choice for entertainment if other options were available on campus.

5.Language Use

According to a recent announcement, the Student Association has just purchased and installed a new sound system at the Arlington Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium where movies are played. This decision is based on a survey where students rank movies as the best option for entertainment. So by installing the new sound system, the university hopes that it will attract more students and increase tiki ticket sales. However, the men man in the conversation disagreed with this decision. First, he said that it is such a waste of money because the Arlington Old Lincoln Hall is about 200 years old and it used to be a gem gym, making the acoustic effect very terrible. So this new sound system is not going to improve much. He said that the reason why movies are the best option is because there is nothing to do on campus. If there were other forms of entertainment or recreation, no one would be interested in going to the movies.

(Arlington was changed to Old Lincoln because it was mentioned in both reading and listening passages. Tiki was corrected to ticket as it refers to ticket sales. Men was changed to man as only one person expressed their opinion. Arlington was again corrected to Old Lincoln for consistency. Gem was changed to gym as it refers to the building's previous use.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to a recent announcement, the Student Association has purchased and installed a new sound system at the Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium, where movies are shown on campus. This decision was based on a survey in which students ranked movies as their top entertainment choice. The university hopes that the new sound system will attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision. He argues that it is a waste of money because Old Lincoln Hall, being around 200 years old and a former gym, has poor acoustics. Therefore, the new sound system will not significantly improve the movie experience. Additionally, he believes that if there were other forms of entertainment or recreational activities on campus, students would not prioritize going to the movies.

6.Mind Map

• Announcement

  • New sound system
  • Old Lincoln Hall Auditorium
  • Survey results

• University's hopes

  • Attract students
  • Increase ticket sales

• Man's disagreement

  • Waste of money
  • Poor acoustics
  • Limited campus activities

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方有些停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音的连贯性和减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答较为完整，能够明确表达男生的观点及其理由。但在组织结构上可以有所改进，例如可以先总结男生的观点，然后再分别阐述理由。此外，在解释理由时可以尝试使用更多的连接词和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Student Association has purchased a new sound system in order to attract more students to the movie. The Student Association has purchased a new sound system to attract more students to the movies.（将"has"改为"The"，将"to the movie"改为"to the movies"，使句子更自然。）

But the man in the listening part doesn't like this idea. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision.（将"But"改为"However"，将"in the listening part"改为"in the conversation"，使句子更自然。）

Because, firstly, he says that this purchasing is just a waste of money, since the place where the new sound system was installed is 200 years old, which means its environment is so bad that cannot improve anything. Firstly, he argues that this purchase is a waste of money because the building where the new sound system was installed is 200 years old, implying that its poor condition would not allow for any significant improvements.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Secondly, he thinks that, besides watching movie, there are not many other things for students to do. Secondly, he believes that aside from watching movies, there aren't many other activities available for students on campus.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Therefore, if a new recreation or entertainment emerges, watching movie might not be the first choice for students to get relaxed. Thus, if new recreational or entertainment options were introduced, watching movies might not be the students' top choice for relaxation.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The Student Association has purchased a new sound system to attract more students to the movies. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision. Firstly, he argues that this purchase is a waste of money because the building where the new sound system was installed is 200 years old, implying that its poor condition would not allow for any significant improvements. Secondly, he believes that aside from watching movies, there aren't many other activities available for students on campus. Thus, if new recreational or entertainment options were introduced, watching movies might not be the students' top choice for relaxation.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student Association
  - New sound system

- Disagreement
  - Man's opinion

- Reason 1
  - Waste of money
  - Old building
  - Poor condition

- Reason 2
  - Limited activities on campus
  - Watching movies not the top choice

- Conclusion
  - New recreational options needed

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微改进。例如，在句子之间适当地使用停顿可以使表达更加流畅。此外，注意正确发音单词以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高发音准确度和语言流利度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在解释男生为什么认为购买新设备是个坏决定时，可以更详细地描述他的观点和理由。此外，在提供支持或举例时，尽量确保内容充分且相关。建议在练习中关注组织结构和内容连贯性，以便更好地回答问题。

5.语言使用

Original: The written text says about the student association have conducted a survey on what entertainment students like best. And according to the result, they purchased a lot of movie equipments in order to improve what the students have already liked the most. And the man in the conversation thinks this is a bad decision. He thinks firstly it is a waste of money because the place where to share movies is too old and the condition is terrible so there may be no improvement on the quality of the movie. And secondly, he thinks movie is not really the best option for students but because there are no more other social activities so the students have to choose movie according to current situation.

Corrected: The written text says mentions (“says”改为“mentions”更自然) that the student association have has (根据主语单数，将“have”改为“has”) conducted a survey on what entertainment students like best. According to the result, they purchased a lot of movie equipments numerous movie equipment (“a lot of movie equipments”改为“numerous movie equipment”，更准确且自然) in order to improve what the students have already liked the most. The man in the conversation thinks this is a bad decision. He thinks, firstly, it is a waste of money because the place where to share movies movies are shown (“to share movies”改为“movies are shown”，更清晰明了) is too old and the condition is terrible, so there may be no improvement in the quality of the movie. Secondly, he thinks movie going to the movies (“movie”改为“going to the movies”，更符合上下文) is not really the best option for students, but because there are no more other social activities, students have to choose movie going to the movies (同上) according to the current situation.

Revised (140 words): The written text mentions that the student association has conducted a survey on what entertainment students like best. According to the result, they purchased numerous movie equipment in order to enhance what students already enjoy most. However, the man in the conversation believes this is a poor decision. He argues that it is a waste of money because the venue where movies are shown is too old and in terrible condition, which might not lead to any improvement in movie quality. Furthermore, he thinks going to the movies is not genuinely the best option for students; instead, due to a lack of other social activities on campus, students have no choice but to opt for going to the movies under current circumstances.

6.思维导图

- Student Association
  - Survey
    - Entertainment preferences
  - Purchase
    - Movie equipment

- Man's opinion
  - Bad decision
    - Reasons
      - Old venue
        - Terrible condition
      - Lack of other social activities
        - Forced choice for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习口语时，注意保持连贯性和自然的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和有条理的。然而，在解释男生提到的两个原因时，可以更详细地说明他们为什么认为这些原因导致了学生会购买音响系统的决策不合理。例如，在谈到老林肯大厅声学效果差时，可以进一步解释这将如何影响音响系统的性能；在谈到校园内其他社交活动不足时，可以提供更多具体例子来支持观点。通过这样做，可以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The reading passage mentions that Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the decision for two main reasons. First, he argued that the old whole building is almost 200 years old and has poor acoustics, which would make the new sound system ineffective in improving the overall movie-watching experience. Second, he believes that if there were more social activities available in campus, student mind would not choose to watch movies at first. That's why the man disagrees with these decisions.

Corrected Answer: The reading passage mentions that Student Association the Student Association (添加定冠词，使句子更自然) purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the decision for two main reasons. First, he argued argues (使用现在时，保持时态一致) that the old whole building entire old building (调整词序，使句子更自然) is almost 200 years old and has poor acoustics, which would make the new sound system ineffective in improving the overall movie-watching experience. Second, he believes that if there were more social activities available in campus on campus (使用正确的介词), student mind students might (修正表达，使句子更自然) not choose to watch movies at first as their first choice (使用更自然的表达方式). That's why the man disagrees with these decisions this decision (保持一致，指代同一个决策).

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage mentions that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students and increase ticket sales. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision for two main reasons. First, he argues that the entire old building, which is almost 200 years old, has poor acoustics. This would make the new sound system ineffective in enhancing the overall movie-watching experience for students. Second, he believes that if there were more social activities available on campus, students might not choose to watch movies as their first choice for entertainment. They might prefer other forms of recreation or social events instead. Therefore, the man thinks that investing in a new sound system for Old Lincoln Hall may not be the best way to increase ticket sales and improve students' satisfaction with on-campus entertainment options.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Reading passage: Student Association's new sound system
  - Man's disagreement

- Reason 1
  - Poor acoustics in Old Lincoln Hall
  - Ineffective sound system

- Reason 2
  - Lack of social activities on campus
  - Movies not necessarily the first choice

- Conclusion
  - Man's disagreement with the decision

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微改进一下语速和停顿。建议同学在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，适当地使用停顿，以便更好地表达自己的观点。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。然而，在解释男生观点的原因时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词（例如，因此、然后等），以便使回答更加流畅。同时，在给出原因时，可以尝试提供更多具体的例子或细节来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The institution has purchased a new sound system for the place where movies on campus are currently shown. The university has acquired a new sound system for the auditorium where on-campus movies are screened.（将"institution"改为"university"，使语境更清晰；将"purchased"改为"acquired"，词汇更高级；将"the place where movies on campus are currently shown"改为"the auditorium where on-campus movies are screened"，使句子更简洁。）

And the man in the listening part disliked it, because firstly, he said that it's a waste of money, because the place where movies on campus are shown is too old, which means the acoustics there are terrible. The man in the listening passage disapproved of this decision, stating that it is a waste of money since the venue for screening movies on campus is quite old, resulting in poor acoustics.（将"disliked it"改为"disapproved of this decision"，使表达更准确；将原因部分进行了简化和重组，使句子更流畅。）

In this way, setting new sound system there will improve nothing. Thus, installing a new sound system would not lead to any improvements.（将"in this way"改为"thus"，使句子更连贯；将原句进行了简化和重组，使表达更自然。）

Secondly, he said that maybe a movie is not students' first choice. Furthermore, he mentioned that movies might not be the students' top preference.（将"maybe"改为"might"，使表达更准确；将"first choice"改为"top preference"，词汇更高级。）

That's because there is not much to do on campus besides watching movies. This is due to the limited recreational activities available on campus apart from watching movies.（将原句进行了简化和重组，使表达更自然。）

If students can do other social activities, they may not choose a watching movie as their first choice. If other social activities were available, students might not opt for watching movies as their primary choice.（将原句进行了简化和重组，使表达更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has acquired a new sound system for the auditorium where on-campus movies are screened. The man in the listening passage disapproved of this decision, stating that it is a waste of money since the venue for screening movies on campus is quite old, resulting in poor acoustics. Thus, installing a new sound system would not lead to any improvements. Furthermore, he mentioned that movies might not be the students' top preference. This is due to the limited recreational activities available on campus apart from watching movies. If other social activities were available, students might not opt for watching movies as their primary choice.

6.思维导图

- University
  - Acquired new sound system
  - Auditorium for on-campus movies

- Man's opinion
  - Disapproved
  - Reasons
    - Waste of money
      - Old venue
      - Poor acoustics
    - Movies not top preference
      - Limited recreational activities on campus
      - Other social activities might change preferences

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

15. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery could be improved by focusing on clearer pronunciation and reducing pauses. Additionally, it would be helpful to maintain a consistent pace throughout the response. To enhance the delivery, practice speaking more fluidly and work on enunciating words correctly.

4.Topic Development The response could be better organized and more coherent. The speaker should focus on clearly stating the man's opinion and providing specific reasons for his disagreement with the Student Association's decision. To improve topic development, try to create a clear structure for your response, such as first stating the man's opinion, then discussing each reason in separate sentences or paragraphs. This will help make your response more organized and easier to follow.

5.Language Use

The university would like to introduce a new sound system to the auditoryauditorium(auditory is not the correct term for the context, use auditorium instead), however, the mainman(typo: main should be man) disagrees with the proposal. The university claims that it will attract more students to see the movie and increase the ticket sales, however, the main thing is a waste of money because it is 200 years old for the auditory, and it is too old to have improvements on the auditory, which used to be in June.man thinks it's a waste of money since the auditorium is 200 years old and too old for improvements, especially considering it used to be a gym.(Reworded for clarity and corrected grammar) Moreover, the university says that they will do a survey and finds that the movie ranks the first as the social activity for students, however, the main thing is that they ask any other activity that students can do if they are on a social activity such as recreation.man believes if there were other recreational activities available on campus, going to movies wouldn't be students' first choice.(Reworded for clarity and corrected grammar) This movie demand will decrease.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to introduce a new sound system to the auditorium; however, the man disagrees with this proposal. He believes it's a waste of money since the auditorium is 200 years old and too old for significant improvements, especially considering its previous use as a gym. The university conducted a survey and found that going to the movies ranked first as a social activity for students. Nevertheless, the man argues that if there were other recreational activities available on campus, going to movies wouldn't be students' top choice. He implies that the survey results may not accurately reflect students' preferences due to the limited options available on campus. Therefore, he concludes that investing in the new sound system might not lead to increased ticket sales as the university expects.

6.Mind Map

- Disagreement
  - Waste of money
    - Old auditorium
    - Previous use as gym

- Survey results
  - Movies as top social activity
  - Limited options on campus

- Man's argument
  - Other recreational activities
  - Impact on movie demand

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但是，有些地方的停顿不太合适，可能会影响听众的理解。此外，发言者在发音上也存在一些小问题，导致拼写错误。建议发言者在练习时注意调整停顿位置，并多加练习提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of elaborating on the reasons given by the man in the conversation. The speaker could provide more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen their argument. Additionally, the speaker could work on making smoother transitions between ideas to enhance the overall flow of their response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The man disagrees with the announcement of purchasing new subsystem for movie shows in Auditorium and highlights two reasons for his opinion. The man disagrees with the decision to purchase a new sound system for movie screenings in the auditorium and presents two reasons to support his opinion.（将“subsystem”改为“sound system”，将“movie shows”改为“movie screenings”，使表达更自然。同时，将“announcement”改为“decision”，使语境更准确。）

First, the man believes that the new subsystem will not attract more students to watch movie and increase the ticket sales. First, the man believes that the new sound system will not attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales.（将“subsystem”改为“sound system”，将“watch movie”改为“watch movies”，使表达更自然。）

It's just a waste of money, because he believes the building is too old and the acoustic condition is terrible, so it won't be possible to improve the sound quality significantly. He thinks it's a waste of money because the building is too old and has poor acoustics, making it impossible to significantly improve the sound quality.（将“acoustic condition”改为“acoustics”，使表达更自然。同时，调整句子结构以提高语言流畅性。）

Second, the man disagrees that students love movies for entertainment. Second, the man questions whether watching movies is truly students' preferred form of entertainment.（调整句子结构以提高语言流畅性。）

According to him, if there are other recreational and social opportunities for students on campus, going to movie will not be students' first choice. He argues that if there were more recreational and social activities available on campus, going to the movies would not be students' top choice.（将“going to movie”改为“going to the movies”，使表达更自然。同时，调整句子结构以提高语言流畅性。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The man disagrees with the decision to purchase a new sound system for movie screenings in the auditorium and presents two reasons to support his opinion. First, the man believes that the new sound system will not attract more students to watch movies and increase ticket sales. He thinks it's a waste of money because the building is too old and has poor acoustics, making it impossible to significantly improve the sound quality. Second, the man questions whether watching movies is truly students' preferred form of entertainment. He argues that if there were more recreational and social activities available on campus, going to the movies would not be students' top choice. These reasons contribute to his opinion of disagreeing with the decision.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Decision to purchase sound system
  - Reasons
    - Ineffectiveness
      - Old building
      - Poor acoustics
    - Questionable preference
      - Other recreational activities
      - Students' top choice

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确导致了拼写错误。建议练习发音和提高语速，以便在考试中更清晰、流利地表达观点。

4.话题发展 回答内容需要更加连贯和组织得更好。在解释男生观点的原因时，应该更详细地描述他的观点，并提供足够的支持或例子。此外，注意在回答中使用正确的代词，例如在这个回答中，应该使用“他”而不是“她”。建议多做练习，提高话题发展能力。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the writing thinks that there are good news for movie fans. The reading passage states that there is good news for movie fans. (将“the writing thinks”改为“the reading passage states”，更符合语境。同时，将“are”改为“is”，因为“news”是不可数名词。)

Original: Firstly, the association by the sound system for old Lincoln Hall auditoriums. First, the association bought a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. (将“by”改为“bought”，使句子更通顺。同时，将“old Lincoln Hall auditoriums”改为“The Old Lincoln Hall auditorium”，以保持一致性。)

Original: Besides, students' first choice is watching the movie. Moreover, going to the movies was ranked as students' top choice for entertainment. (将“watching the movie”改为“going to the movies”，以保持一致性。同时，使用更准确的表述。)

Original: In the conversation, the woman doesn't like the idea. In the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision. (将“the woman doesn't like”改为“the man disagrees with”，因为是男生表示反对意见。)

Original: Firstly, she says that it's just a waste of money. Because Lincoln Hall has 200 years old. Its environment is very terrible. First, he argues that it's a waste of money because Old Lincoln Hall is 200 years old and has terrible acoustics. (将“she”改为“he”，并将原因合并到一个句子中，使表述更连贯。)

Original: As a result, there is no improvement for Lincoln Hall. Therefore, he believes there will be no improvement in the sound quality. (使用更准确的表述。)

Original: Besides, she says that watching movie is not the number one choice for students. If there is another social activity, the watching movie is not popular anymore. Additionally, he doubts that going to the movies is the top choice for students and thinks that if there were other social activities, movies would not be as popular. (将“she”改为“he”，并使用更准确的表述。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage states that there is good news for movie fans. First, the association bought a new sound system for the Old Lincoln Hall auditorium. Moreover, going to the movies was ranked as students' top choice for entertainment. In the conversation, the man disagrees with this decision. First, he argues that it's a waste of money because Old Lincoln Hall is 200 years old and has terrible acoustics. Therefore, he believes there will be no improvement in the sound quality. Additionally, he doubts that going to the movies is the top choice for students and thinks that if there were other social activities, movies would not be as popular.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Good news for movie fans
  - New sound system
  - Old Lincoln Hall auditorium
  - Top choice for entertainment

- Conversation
  - Man disagrees
    - Waste of money
      - Old building, terrible acoustics
    - Doubts top choice for students
      - Other social activities would affect popularity

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太合适，导致了标点问题。此外，发言者在发音方面也存在一些不准确之处，导致了拼写错误。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确性，并尝试在适当的地方进行停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个相对连贯和有组织的回答，并在一定程度上阐述了男生对学生会购买新音响系统的看法及原因。然而，在解释男生观点时，发言者没有充分利用听力材料中提到的关键信息（如旧林肯大厅的声学效果很差），这使得回答显得支持不足。建议发言者在练习时更加关注听力材料中的重要信息，并尝试将其融入回答中以增强论据的说服力。

5.语言使用

From the announcement, we can know that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students to go to see the movies and want to increase the ticket sales. But a friend of mine, he thinks it's a bad decision. At first, it wastes a lot of money. The old Lincoln Hall was a 300-year-old building. Students don't like to go there to see a movie. Besides, they think going to see the movie is the first number for students to relax. But instead for students on campus, if we have other social activities, the first choice is not the movie. We will choose to go to other places and do other activities. So he thinks it's a bad decision. That's all.

From the announcement, we can know that the Student Association purchased (学生会购买了) a new sound system to attract more students to go to watch (去看) movies and want aims (旨在) to increase ticket sales. However, my friend believes it's a bad decision. Firstly, it wastes a lot of money. The Old Lincoln Hall is a 300-year-old building, and students are not fond of watching movies there. Moreover, they think going to movies is the top choice for students to relax. However, if there were other social activities on campus, watching movies wouldn't be their first choice; they would opt for other places and activities instead. So he thinks it's a bad decision.

Revised Answer (140 words):

From the announcement, we can know that the Student Association purchased a new sound system to attract more students to watch movies and aims to increase ticket sales. However, my friend believes it's a bad decision. Firstly, it wastes a lot of money. The Old Lincoln Hall is a 300-year-old building with poor acoustics, and students are not fond of watching movies there. Moreover, they think going to movies is the top choice for students to relax. However, if there were other social activities on campus, watching movies wouldn't be their first choice; they would opt for other places and activities instead. Therefore, he argues that investing in the sound system is not an effective way to improve students' entertainment experience on campus.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • Student Association
  • New sound system
  • Attract students
  • Increase ticket sales

• Friend's opinion

  • Bad decision
    • Wastes money
    • Old Lincoln Hall
      • Poor acoustics
    • Other social activities
      • First choice not movies

7.关键词