TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some instances where the speaker could improve their pronunciation to avoid confusion. For example, "upload" should be "uploaded," and "it's no room" should be "there's no room." To improve delivery, the speaker should practice proper pronunciation and work on maintaining a consistent pace throughout their response.

4. Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there are some areas where the speaker could improve topic development. For instance, the speaker could provide more specific examples from the listening passage to support their points, such as mentioning the woman's desire for all books to be digitized. Additionally, the speaker should work on making smoother transitions between ideas to create a more cohesive response. Overall, practicing these skills will help improve topic development in future responses.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: The university announced that they are going to remove the old books that are not borrowed from the shelves. The university announced plans to remove old, unused books from the shelves. (Simplified and clarified phrasing) This can create more space for new books and also the old books will be scanned and upload to the computer. This will create space for new books, and the old books will be scanned and uploaded to the library's website. (Corrected grammar and added specific detail) The woman agrees for the following reasons. The woman supports this plan for several reasons. (Improved phrasing) She believes that the shelves were packed with many old books and lots of people complained about it. She believes that overcrowded shelves with old books have caused complaints from many people. (Rephrased for clarity) Also there are piles of new books in the library office that are going to be loaded to the shelf but it's no room. Additionally, there are piles of new books waiting to be shelved, but there is no room for them. (Corrected grammar and improved phrasing) In addition, if students can make access to all the books online, it's much more easy since students can just sit in their dorm room and access all the books they need. Furthermore, providing online access to all books would make it easier for students, as they could access the materials they need from their dorm rooms. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced plans to remove old, unused books from the shelves. This will create space for new books, and the old books will be scanned and uploaded to the library's website. The woman supports this plan for several reasons. She believes that overcrowded shelves with old books have caused complaints from many people. Additionally, there are piles of new books waiting to be shelved, but there is no room for them. Furthermore, providing online access to all books would make it easier for students, as they could access the materials they need from their dorm rooms. By addressing these concerns and implementing the proposed changes, the university can improve the library experience for all students while ensuring that valuable resources remain accessible through digital means.

6. Mind Map

• University's plan

  • Remove old, unused books
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitize old books

• Woman's opinion

  • Supports the plan
  • Reasons:
    • Overcrowded shelves
    • Complaints from people
    • New books waiting to be shelved
    • Online access benefits

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更自然、流畅的发音和语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在解释女士持有这一观点的原因时，可以更详细地说明。例如，在提到图书馆空间不足时，可以具体描述新书如何受到影响；在谈到电子图书的便利性时，可以进一步解释为什么在线查阅对学生更有帮助。通过提供更多具体细节和例子，可以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The plan is that the school will implement the policy that the books that have not been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library and make the room for the new books and bring the old books into the Internet and students can check them at their leisure time. The plan involves the university implementing a policy to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, creating space for new books, and digitizing old books for students to access online at their convenience.（将原句拆分为多个子句，使表达更清晰。）

The women agree with the plan, there are two primary reasons. The woman agrees with the plan for two main reasons.（改进语法和表达。）

One reason is that she thinks that the shelf is pretty crowded, so piles of new books have no room to lay. One reason is that she believes the shelves are quite crowded, leaving no space for stacks of new books.（改进词汇和表达。）

Second reason is that it is easier to use the old books which are not frequently being borrowed from the library. The second reason is that it would be more convenient to access infrequently borrowed old books online.（改进语法和表达。）

We can stay in the draw room and it is easier to watch them and check them from the Internet. Students can stay in their dorm rooms and easily view and check these books on the internet.（改进词汇和表达。）

修订版（140字）：

The plan involves the university implementing a policy to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, creating space for new books, and digitizing old books for students to access online at their convenience. The woman agrees with the plan for two main reasons. One reason is that she believes the shelves are quite crowded, leaving no space for stacks of new books. The second reason is that it would be more convenient to access infrequently borrowed old books online. Students can stay in their dorm rooms and easily view and check these books on the internet.

6.思维导图

- Plan
  - University policy
  - Remove books (not borrowed in 5 years)
  - Create space for new books
  - Digitize old books

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Crowded shelves
    - Convenience of online access

- Students' benefits
  - Access from dorm rooms
  - Easy viewing and checking online

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，发言者的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意控制停顿的频率，以使表达更流畅。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，并在回答中明确地阐述了文章中的计划、女士对计划的看法以及她持有这一观点的原因。为了进一步提高回答质量，建议在描述女士观点时更具体地引用听力材料中的细节。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to make change to the library's book. The university plans to make changes to the library's books.（将“change”改为复数形式“changes”，将“book”改为复数形式“books”，使句子更符合语法规则。） They want to remove some of the old books that have not been used for about five years and prepare space for the new books. They plan to remove some old books that haven't been used for about five years and create space for new books.（将“want”改为“plan”，使句子更正式；将“have not”缩写为“haven't”，使句子更自然；将“prepare”改为“create”，使句子更准确。） And the remote books will be scanned and uploaded on the school's website. Additionally, the removed books will be scanned and uploaded to the school's website.（将“remote”改为“removed”，使句子更准确；用“Additionally”替换“And”，使句子更连贯。） And the woman in the conversation thinks that's a timely change. The woman in the conversation believes this is a timely change.（用“The woman in the conversation believes”替换“And the woman in the conversation thinks”，使句子更连贯；用“this is a timely change”替换“that's a timely change”，使句子更自然。） While she is working in the library, she found that the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available. While working in the library, she noticed that the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable.（将“she is”改为“she”，使句子更简洁；将“found”改为“noticed”，使句子更自然；将“the shelves of the books are crowded with the old books and the new books are not available”改为“the shelves were crowded with old books, making new books unavailable”，使句子更连贯。） So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed. She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed.（用“She believes that this change will provide space for new books to be borrowed”替换“So she thinks with this kind of change, the new books will have space to be borrowed”，使句子更连贯。） And at the same time, the scanned books are much more easier for readers to use because students do not have to go to the library and carry the book around. Simultaneously, scanned books will be much easier for readers to use since students won't have to visit the library and carry physical books around.（用“Simultaneously”替换“And at the same time”，使句子更连贯；将“are much more easier”改为“will be much easier”，使句子更自然；将“do not have to”改为“won't have to”，使句子更简洁；用“visit the library and carry physical books around”替换“go to the library and carry the book around”，使句子更准确。） They only have to do is to stay in their room and read. All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read.（用“All they need to do is stay in their rooms and read”替换“They only have to do is to stay in their room and read”，使句子更自然。） And she thinks it will be much better if all the books can be scanned or digitalized. She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized.（用“She also believes that it would be even better if all books could be scanned or digitized”替换“And she thinks it will be much better if

6.思维导图

- University Library Changes
  - Remove old books
    - Not used for five years
    - Create space for new books
  - Digitize removed books
    - Upload to the website
  - Woman's opinion
    - Timely change
      - Shelves crowded with old books
      - New books unavailable
    - Benefits of digitization
      - Easier access for students
      - No need to visit the library and carry physical books
    - Suggestion for improvement
      - Digitize all books

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅度，请注意在适当的地方停顿，并确保发音准确。

4.话题发展 发言者对文章中的计划进行了简要概述，并阐述了女士对计划的看法及其理由。然而，回答中存在一些组织上的问题。建议在回答时更加关注逻辑结构和连贯性，以便更清晰地传达观点。同时，可以尝试提供更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The woman thinks the measure is a practical one. The woman believes the plan is practical. (将“measure”改为“plan”，使表达更准确。)

Original: First off, she thinks that the new booths which don't go to shelves is a waste of resource. Firstly, she believes that not placing new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. (调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

Original: Because last year when she helped the library, she saw a pile of new books crowded in the office but didn't go to the shelves so the students can't get good use of them. This is because last year, when she assisted at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. (调整句子结构，使表达更连贯。)

Original: Besides, she thinks that these old books which can be accessed online offers students an easier option to look through these old books because they won't go to the library and maybe can sit in the dormitory to read these books. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with an easier option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library. (调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

Revised answer (140 words):

The woman believes the plan is practical. Firstly, she believes that not placing new books on the shelves is a waste of resources. This is because last year, when she assisted at the library, she noticed a pile of new books in the office that were not placed on shelves, preventing students from utilizing them effectively. Additionally, she thinks that digitizing old books provides students with an easier option to access them since they can read them from their dormitories without visiting the library.

6.思维导图

• Plan
  • Practical
    • New books
      • Waste of resources
      • Not on shelves
      • Students can't utilize effectively
    • Digitizing old books
      • Easier access
      • Read from dormitories
      • No need to visit the library

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意以下几点：1）尽量保持流利的语速，避免不必要的停顿；2）注意正确发音，以免出现拼写错误；3）在练习时可以尝试朗读，以提高语言的流畅度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论据方面还有待提高。建议发言者注意以下几点：1）在回答问题时，先简要概括文章中的计划，然后再陈述女生的观点及其理由；2）在陈述理由时，尽量使用具体的例子或事实来支持观点；3）在组织结构上，尽量让回答更加清晰、条理分明。

5.语言使用

原文：The newspaper stated that University Library has some changes, and the girl in the conversation likes the idea. The article mentioned that the University Library is planning some changes, and the woman in the conversation supports this idea.（将“报纸”改为“文章”，将“女孩”改为“女人”，使语言更准确。同时，调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

First off, she once walked in the library, and she found that the library was really crowded. Firstly, she experienced the library being overcrowded during her visit.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

The shelves were packed with a lot of books, and piles of books are stacked somewhere. The shelves were filled with numerous books, and stacks of books were placed in various locations.（使用更高级的词汇，并调整句子结构。）

So though they have some new books, they just have no room to put it, or put on the shelf. As a result, even though there are new books available, there is no space to store or display them on shelves.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

And they felt it quite a shame, because some students may just have need to read them. She believes it's unfortunate since some students might need to access these books.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

And she also think the digital-type books is a real useful access for students to read books online, because students are more easy, because they don't have to go to library and carry the books around. Additionally, she thinks that digital books provide a convenient way for students to read online, as they don't have to visit the library and carry physical books around.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

They can sit in the dorms and read books online. Students can comfortably read these digital books in their dormitories.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

And she even hopes all books can be digital-type, because it is an easier method. She even hopes that all books can be digitized, as it's a more convenient approach.（使用更高级的词汇，并调整句子结构。）

修订版（140字）：

The article mentioned that the University Library is planning some changes, and the woman in the conversation supports this idea. Firstly, she experienced the library being overcrowded during her visit. The shelves were filled with numerous books, and stacks of books were placed in various locations. As a result, even though there are new books available, there is no space to store or display them on shelves. She believes it's unfortunate since some students might need to access these books. Additionally, she thinks that digital books provide a convenient way for students to read online, as they don't have to visit the library and carry physical books around. Students can comfortably read these digital books in their dormitories. She even hopes that all books can be digitized, as it's a more convenient approach.

6.思维导图

• University Library changes
  • Woman's opinion
    • Overcrowded library
      • Filled shelves
      • Stacks of books
    • New books storage issue
    • Digital books advantages
      • Convenient access
      • Reading in dormitories

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。建议在发音和语调上多加练习，以便更自然地表达观点。此外，注意避免不必要的停顿，以保持语言流畅。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上涵盖了文章和听力中的关键信息，并提供了一定程度的支持。但是，在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在准备过程中更加注重逻辑结构和信息呈现的顺序，确保回答内容更加连贯和有条理。

5.语言使用

原文：The university wants to remove the books which haven't been used for a long time. The university plans to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years.（将“which haven't been used for a long time”替换为“that have not been borrowed in the past five years”，使表达更准确。）

First off, it can make some spaces for the new books which can be used in the future. This will create space for new books that will be acquired in the future.（将“it can make some spaces”替换为“This will create space”，使表达更自然；将“which can be used in the future”替换为“that will be acquired in the future”，使表达更准确。）

Besides, the university wants to digitize these books in the website, Additionally, the university intends to digitize these books on their website,（将“Besides”替换为“Additionally”，使过渡更自然；将“in the website”替换为“on their website”，使表达更准确。）

and students can read these books on the computer. allowing students to access them electronically.（将“and students can read these books on the computer”替换为“allowing students to access them electronically”，使表达更自然。）

In the conversation, the woman likes this idea. In the conversation, the woman supports this plan.（将“likes this idea”替换为“supports this plan”，使表达更准确。）

First off, she thinks it is really crowded in the library shelves, so the library complained a lot about this. Firstly, she believes that the library shelves are overcrowded, causing complaints from users.（将“it is really crowded in the library shelves, so the library complained a lot about this”替换为“the library shelves are overcrowded, causing complaints from users”，使表达更自然。）

Besides, she thinks it is a good choice to make these books online, Moreover, she considers digitizing these books to be a good decision,（将“Besides”替换为“Moreover”，使过渡更自然；将“make these books online”替换为“digitizing these books”，使表达更准确。）

and students won't have to be to the library, as it eliminates the need for students to physically visit the library,（将“and students won't have to be to the library”替换为“as it eliminates the need for students to physically visit the library”，使表达更自然。）

and she hopes all the books can be made digitalized one day. and she hopes that all books will be digitized eventually.（将“can be made digitalized one day”替换为“will be digitized eventually”，使表达更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years. This will create space for new books that will be acquired in the future. Additionally, the university intends to digitize these books on their website, allowing students to access them electronically. In the conversation, the woman supports this plan. Firstly, she believes that the library shelves are overcrowded, causing complaints from users. Moreover, she considers digitizing these books to be a good decision, as it eliminates the need for students to physically visit the library and provides easier access to resources. She also hopes that all books will be digitized eventually, making the library more efficient and user-friendly.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Remove books
    - Not borrowed in past five years
  - Create space
    - New books
  - Digitize books
    - Accessible on website

- Woman's Opinion
  - Supports plan
    - Overcrowded shelves
      - Complaints from users
    - Digitization benefits
      - No need for physical library visits
      - Easier access to resources
  - Hopes for future
    - All books digitized eventually

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微提高流利度。建议练习更自然地连接单词和短语，以提高口语的连贯性。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以避免句子之间的混乱。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释女士观点时提供更多细节。例如，在提到女士认为在线访问是个好主意时，可以进一步解释她为什么觉得这样做对学生更方便。此外，在总结时，可以更明确地指出女士对计划的看法及其原因。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the reading passage announces that the university library is going to remove the books which haven't been borrowed for about 5 years. The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years.（将 "announces" 改为 "states"，使语气更加中立；将 "is going to" 改为 "plans to"，使句子更加简洁；将 "for about 5 years" 改为 "for approximately five years"，使表达更加准确。）

And it is because it can create the space for new books, and the old books have already been scanned into digital way, and the students can easily access the books on the computer in their dormitory. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories.（将原句中的多个 "and" 删除，以提高连贯性；将 "scanned into digital way" 改为 "digitized"，使表达更加简洁。）

And in the conversation, the woman agrees with the announcement, and it is because she has already been the librarian, and she knows that it is so crowded for the piles of books stacked in the office, including new shipments of books that the university has bought. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university.（将 "announcement" 改为 "plan"，使表达更加准确；将 "it is because she has already been the librarian" 改为 "as she has experience as a librarian"，使表达更加自然。）

Secondly, she thinks it is a great idea to use online access because the students don't have to go to the library or carry the books around, and it can be easy for them to read the books. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.（将 "Secondly" 改为 "Furthermore"，使句子更加连贯；将 "it is a great idea to use online access" 改为 "utilizing online access is beneficial"，使表达更加简洁。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university library plans to remove books that have not been borrowed for approximately five years. This is to create space for new books since the old ones have been digitized, allowing students to easily access them on their computers in their dormitories. In the conversation, the woman agrees with this plan as she has experience as a librarian and understands how crowded it can be with stacks of books in the office, including newly purchased ones by the university. Furthermore, she believes that utilizing online access is beneficial as students won't need to visit the library or carry books around, making it easier for them to read.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • University library
  • Remove books (not borrowed for ~5 years)
  • Create space for new books
  • Digitization of old books

• Conversation

  • Woman's opinion
    • Agrees with the plan
    • Reasons:
      • Experience as a librarian
      • Crowded office with stacks of books
      • Online access benefits students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，但有时会出现停顿。建议练习更流畅地表达，保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但可以在提供原因时更加详细和具体，以增强说服力。例如，在提到在线图书的优点时，可以进一步解释为什么这对学生更方便。

5.语言使用

原文：The school decides that books that have not been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library shelves from next semester. The university has decided to remove books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years from the library shelves starting next semester.（将"school"改为"university"，使之更符合托福考试的语境；调整句子结构，使之更自然流畅。）

The woman thinks that is a great idea for two reasons. The woman believes this is an excellent plan for two main reasons.（将"thinks"改为"believes"，使之更正式；将"great idea"改为"excellent plan"，提高词汇的级别。）

Last semester, she worked at the library. In the previous semester, she had worked at the library.（将"Last semester"改为"In the previous semester"，使之更正式；使用过去完成时态表示过去发生的动作。）

The shelves were very crowded and although the school bought new books, there is no room for them. The shelves were overcrowded, and even though the university purchased new books, there was no space to accommodate them.（将"crowded"改为"overcrowded"，提高词汇的级别；调整句子结构，使之更自然流畅。）

Besides, she also mentions that the online books are a great idea. Furthermore, she also points out that having online books is a brilliant concept.（将"Besides"改为"Furthermore"，使之更正式；将"mentions"改为"points out"，提高词汇的级别；将"great idea"改为"brilliant concept"，提高词汇的级别。）

It is more easy for students to read. It makes it easier for students to access the material.（调整句子结构，使之更自然流畅。）

Students do not need to go to the library. There is no need for students to visit the library physically.（调整句子结构，使之更自然流畅。）

They can just stay at the dorm and read the book. They can simply access the books from their dormitories.（调整句子结构，使之更自然流畅。）

She thinks that if all books have the online version, that's a great idea. She believes that having all books available online would be an outstanding initiative.（将"thinks"改为"believes"，使之更正式；将"great idea"改为"outstanding initiative"，提高词汇的级别。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has decided to remove books that haven't been borrowed in the past five years from the library shelves starting next semester. The woman believes this is an excellent plan for two main reasons. In the previous semester, she had worked at the library. The shelves were overcrowded, and even though the university purchased new books, there was no space to accommodate them. Furthermore, she also points out that having online books is a brilliant concept. It makes it easier for students to access the material. There is no need for students to visit the library physically. They can simply access the books from their dormitories. She believes that having all books available online would be an outstanding initiative.

6.思维导图

• University's decision

  • Remove books
  • Next semester

• Woman's opinion

  • Excellent plan
  • Two main reasons
    • Overcrowded shelves
      • Previous semester experience
      • No space for new books
    • Online books
      • Brilliant concept
      • Easier access for students
      • No need to visit the library physically

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。为了提高交付得分，请注意以下几点：

• 在发音时要保持一致的语速，避免过快或过慢。

• 在适当的地方暂停，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

• 注意发音准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在以下方面进行改进以提高主题发展得分：

• 在总结计划时，可以更详细地描述图书馆将如何处理被移除的书籍（例如，将它们数字化并通过图书馆网站提供）。

• 在解释女士对计划的看法时，可以更具体地说明她为什么认为这是一个好主意（例如，她认为数字化图书会让学生更容易查找和阅读资料）。

• 可以在回答中加入一些转折词或连接词（如“因此”、“然而”等），以使观点之间的联系更加明确。

5.语言使用

原文：The university will remove the books that have not been borrowed from the library. The university plans to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library.（更准确地描述计划的细节，以便听众更好地理解。）（更准确地描述计划的细节，以便听众更好地理解。）

This is because it can create more space and because these books will be digitalized. This is to create more space for new books and to digitize the removed ones.（使用更自然的语言表达原因。）（使用更自然的语言表达原因。）

The woman likes this idea. The woman supports this plan.（使用更正式的词汇来表达女士的观点。）（使用更正式的词汇来表达女士的观点。）

Firstly, she has worked in the library last year and she thinks that the books there were very crowded and the library was packed with books. First, she mentioned her experience working in the library last year, stating that it was overcrowded with books.（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）

In fact, there are piles of books in the library but they do not go on the shelf because there is not enough space for them. In fact, many books could not be placed on shelves due to limited space.（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）（简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。）

Besides, the woman thinks that it is easier to check the books if they are digitalized. Moreover, she believes that digitized books would be more accessible for students.（使用更自然的语言表达观点。）（使用更自然的语言表达观点。）

In the past, they had to go to the library and carry a lot of things. Previously, students needed to visit the library and carry numerous items with them.（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）

However, they can read it in the dorm right now. However, now they can access these materials from their dormitories.（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）（使用更自然的语言表达情况。）

As a result, she thinks that it is a great idea for the library to remove those books. Consequently, she considers the library's plan to remove and digitize these books to be highly beneficial.（使用更自然的语言表达结论。）（使用更自然的语言表达结论。）

修订版（140字）：

The university plans to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library. This is to create more space for new books and to digitize the removed ones. The woman supports this plan. First, she mentioned her experience working in the library last year, stating that it was overcrowded with books. In fact, many books could not be placed on shelves due to limited space. Moreover, she believes that digitized books would be more accessible for students. Previously, students needed to visit the library and carry numerous items with them. However, now they can access these materials from their dorm

6.思维导图

- University Library Plan
  - Remove books
    - Not borrowed in past 5 years
  - Create space
    - For new books
  - Digitize removed books
    - Accessible online

- Woman's Opinion
  - Supports the plan
    - Overcrowded library experience
      - Limited shelf space
    - Digitized books benefits
      - More accessible for students
      - Convenient access from dormitories

7.关键词