TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the student's proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion and explain the reasons he gives forholding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在连接思路和提供足够的支持或例子方面还有待加强。建议发言者在回答问题时更加关注论据的组织和逻辑性，以便更好地展示自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the proposal is appealing the teacher to pay for the assistant and give them a professional training about how to use the professional equipment. The proposal suggests that teachers should pay the assistants and provide them with professional training on using specialized equipment. (建议使用更自然的表达方式，并使用更准确的词汇。)

In the conversation, the man totally agreed with the proposal and he gave the first reason about why. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with the proposal and provides his first reason for it. (使用更自然的表达方式，并改进语法结构。)

The first reason is that the students also very need money to meet their requirement and if they don't need to get money, they will make a progress about their real job that the real job may take time to do the assistant work. The first reason is that students need money to meet their needs, and if they are paid for their assistant work, they can focus on it without having to take up another job. (简化句子结构，使其更清晰易懂。)

Secondly, the equipment in the theatre are more complicated than before. You must manipulate it step by step, then you will protect it well. Secondly, theater equipment has become more complicated than before. It must be operated step by step to ensure proper handling. (改进句子结构和词汇选择。)

So it's very useful for the theatre to train them. Therefore, it is beneficial for the theater to provide training for the assistants. (使用更自然的表达方式。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal suggests that teachers should pay the assistants and provide them with professional training on using specialized equipment. In the conversation, the man completely agrees with the proposal and provides his first reason for it. The first reason is that students need money to meet their needs, and if they are paid for their assistant work, they can focus on it without having to take up another job. This would prevent their other jobs from interfering with their responsibilities as theater assistants. Secondly, theater equipment has become more complicated than before. It must be operated step by step to ensure proper handling. Therefore, it is beneficial for the theater to provide training for the assistants, as this would not only improve their skills but also enhance the overall quality of campus plays.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Pay assistants
  • Professional training

• Conversation

  • Man's agreement
  • Reasons
    • Financial needs of students
    • Focus on assistant work
    • Complicated theater equipment
    • Benefits of training

7.关键词