TOEFL TPO 71 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 总体而言，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意以下几点：首先，尽量减少不必要的停顿，让语言更加流畅。其次，在发音方面需要注意一些单词的准确度，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得相对较好，能够概括文章中的计划并阐述女士对计划的看法及原因。但是，在组织结构上还有一定的提升空间。建议在回答问题时，先简要概括计划，然后明确指出女士的观点，并逐一解释她给出的理由。这样可以让回答更加有条理和连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：So the plan suggests that the school will sponsor a lunchtime concert monthly as a music hall to allow the music students to perform their articles and snacks are available during the 10-minute intermissions for the audience and the performers and the woman is totally on board with these ideas and she's looking forward to it. The plan proposes that the school will sponsor monthly lunchtime concerts in a music hall, enabling music students to showcase their pieces. Snacks will be provided during the 10-minute intermission for both the audience and performers. The woman wholeheartedly supports this idea and is eager to participate.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加清晰易懂。同时，对一些词汇进行了替换，使表达更加准确。）

Firstly, she thinks it's a good opportunity for music students to perform the articles they have learned but are naturally not having a chance to perform it. First, she believes it's an excellent opportunity for music students to perform pieces they have learned but haven't had a chance to showcase.（调整了句子结构，并使用了更高级的词汇。）

Secondly, she thinks the snacks available is also a good idea because much of the students will squeeze out between classes and don't have time to eat and the music hall isn't close to any of the dining hall and the 15-minute walk is necessary so it would be a good idea to provide snacks. Second, she considers providing snacks a thoughtful gesture since many students have limited time between classes and can't grab a meal. Additionally, the music hall's location is far from dining halls, requiring a 15-minute walk, making the snack provision convenient.（调整了句子结构，使其更加清晰。同时，对一些词汇进行了替换，使表达更加准确。）

修订版（140字）：

The plan proposes that the school will sponsor monthly lunchtime concerts in a music hall, enabling music students to showcase their pieces. Snacks will be provided during the 10-minute intermission for both the audience and performers. The woman wholeheartedly supports this idea and is eager to participate. First, she believes it's an excellent opportunity for music students to perform pieces they have learned but haven't had a chance to showcase. Second, she considers providing snacks a thoughtful gesture since many students have limited time between classes and can't grab a meal. Additionally, the music hall's location is far from dining halls, requiring a 15-minute walk, making the snack provision convenient.

6.思维导图

• Plan

  • Monthly lunchtime concerts
  • Music hall
  • Snacks during intermission

• Woman's opinion

  • Supports the idea
  • Eager to participate

• Reasons

  • Excellent opportunity for music students
    • Perform learned pieces
    • Showcase talents
  • Thoughtful gesture of providing snacks
    • Limited time between classes
    • Music hall's location far from dining halls

7.关键词