TOEFL TPO 69 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the announcement. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 27

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and work on reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific details about the woman's opinion and reasons for holding that opinion. To enhance topic development, the speaker should elaborate on the woman's suggestions for alternative study spaces for undergraduates and emphasize her concerns about maintaining a quiet environment for graduate students.

5.Language Use

The university announced that they will open the graduate lawngraduate study lounge to all students due to its low utilization and to provide more space for the undergraduate students. And the woman disagreed with this announcement because first she thinks that graduate students need quitequiet a space to think because they have a lot of research work to do. And a larger space provides them with more table and more spaces to do their research. And secondly, the woman suggests that to really handle the problem, the university should find some extra spaces for the undergraduate students. Like there is a new dormitory that is going to be used so the university could set up a learning space for the undergraduate students for them to study and leave the lawn placelounge for them.

("graduate lawn" was changed to "graduate study lounge" for accuracy; "quite" was corrected to "quiet" for proper word usage; "lawn place" was changed to "lounge" for consistency.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced its plan to open the graduate study lounge to all students, as it is currently underutilized and there is a need for more study space for undergraduates. The woman disagrees with this plan, stating that graduate students require a quiet environment for their research work, which is facilitated by having ample space and tables in the lounge. She believes that opening the lounge to undergraduates would compromise this environment. Instead, she suggests that the university should explore alternative solutions, such as designating additional study areas specifically for undergraduates. One example she provides is utilizing the new dormitory being built as a potential study space for undergraduates, thus preserving the graduate study lounge exclusively for graduate students.

6.Mind Map

- University Plan
  - Open graduate study lounge to all students
  - Reasons: underutilization, need for undergraduate study space

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with plan
  - Reasons: quiet environment needed for graduate research, ample space and tables

- Alternative Solutions
  - Designate additional study areas for undergraduates
  - Example: new dormitory as potential study space

7.Key Words

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The delivery of your response is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. Additionally, pay attention to pronunciation, as some words were not pronounced accurately. To improve your delivery, practice speaking at a consistent pace and work on reducing pauses.

4.Topic Development Your response is coherent and well-organized, but it could be further developed. You summarized the plan and the woman's opinion effectively, but you could provide more specific examples or details from the listening passage to support your points. To improve your topic development, focus on incorporating more information from the listening passage and making clear connections between ideas.

5.Language Use

Original: The university announces that they are going to allow undergraduates to use the parking study lounge. This is because the lounges now are underutilized and also there is insufficient study places for undergraduates. The woman feels disappointed about this idea. First, she thinks that it's a bad thing. This is because now it's perfect enough, there are nut not packets so students can spread their books on the table to discuss about the research and think quietly there. But if it's changed, it's not on that anymore. In addition, to solve the problem of oversize of the undergraduates, the school should add the new study places and the new dorm. This can readily solve the problem.

(Corrected "parking" to "study" as it was a pronunciation error; Corrected "nut" to "not" as it was a spelling error due to inaccurate pronunciation.)

Revised (140 words): The university has announced that they will allow undergraduates to use the study lounge, as it is currently underutilized and there is a lack of study spaces for undergraduates. The woman expresses her disappointment with this decision, stating that she believes it is a negative change. She explains that the current situation is ideal because there are not many students using the lounge, allowing for ample space to spread out books and work on research projects in a quiet environment. However, if undergraduate students are allowed access, this peaceful atmosphere may be disrupted. To address the issue of overcrowding among undergraduate students, she suggests that the university should create additional study spaces and build a new dormitory specifically for them, which would effectively resolve the problem without impacting graduate students' study environment.

6.Mind Map

- University's Announcement
  - Allow undergraduates to use study lounge
  - Underutilized space
  - Insufficient study spaces for undergraduates

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disappointment
  - Negative change
  - Current situation is ideal
    - Quiet environment for research and studying

- Suggested Solution
  - Create additional study spaces for undergraduates
  - Build a new dormitory specifically for them

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语速和发音需要改进。有时候，发言者在句子中的停顿不太合适，导致语句听起来不够流畅。此外，发言者需要注意正确的发音，以避免拼写错误。建议发言者多练习发音和语速控制，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者对于阅读和听力材料的总结较为简略，没有充分展示对材料的理解。建议发言者在回答问题时更加详细地概括阅读和听力材料，并给出更多支持或例子来说明女士对计划的看法及其原因。同时，在组织回答时要注意逻辑性和连贯性，使回答更加清晰易懂。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the university has decided to change the policy about parking lounge to let the undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge. The university has decided to change the policy about Perkins Lounge, allowing undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge.（将“parking lounge”改为“Perkins Lounge”，并调整句子结构使其更自然。）

First off, the university thinks that they can let all the students to use in this study lounge because they have some spare room for undergraduate students. Firstly, the university believes that they can accommodate all students in this study lounge because there is extra space for undergraduate students.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Besides, the undergraduate students have insufficient room for studying, so they had to find some new places for studying. Moreover, undergraduate students lack adequate study space, so they need to find additional places for studying.（使用更高级的词汇，并调整句子结构。）

And in the conversation, the woman doesn't like this idea because she says that she wants some place to spread their books, but the study lounge for graduate students is too noisy and crowded. In the conversation, the woman dislikes this idea because she wants a place to spread out her books; however, she believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates will make it noisy and crowded.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Besides, the woman points that she needs a diagnosed place like dormitory for studying. Furthermore, the woman suggests that a designated space, such as a dormitory, should be provided for studying.（将“diagnosed”改为“designated”，并调整句子结构。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has decided to change the policy about Perkins Lounge, allowing undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge. Firstly, the university believes that they can accommodate all students in this study lounge because there is extra space for undergraduate students. Moreover, undergraduate students lack adequate study space, so they need to find additional places for studying. In the conversation, the woman dislikes this idea because she wants a place to spread out her books; however, she believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates will make it noisy and crowded. Furthermore, the woman suggests that a designated space, such as a dormitory, should be provided for studying. This would address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates while maintaining a quiet and less crowded environment for graduate students in Perkins Lounge.

6.思维导图

• University policy change

  • Perkins Lounge
  • Allowing undergraduates

• Reasons for change

  • Extra space available
  • Insufficient study space for undergraduates

• Woman's opinion

  • Dislikes the idea
  • Quiet and less crowded environment needed

• Suggestion

  • Designated study space (e.g., dormitory)

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation problems that result from inappropriate pauses. To improve the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper punctuation and phrasing to avoid awkward pauses. Additionally, working on accurate pronunciation of words can help eliminate spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in topic development. The speaker should focus on providing more specific details from the listening passage to support their points. Additionally, the speaker could work on paraphrasing the information from the reading and listening passages more effectively to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.

5.Language Use

The article announces a change in the campus university policy, which the principal Dean of Students is going to let the ungraduates undergraduates use graduate study log Perkins Lounge, a graduate study space. However, the woman in the lecture disagrees with this announcement. She goes on to say that the graduate study log lounge is a quiet place for the graduate to study, which they can spread books on the table. It is especially good for researching projects. Furthermore, it is not a noisy place for them to study. Also, she talks about that when the ungraduate undergraduate doesn't have much space to study, she suggests that the principal to make more extra place for them to study. Also, she suggests that the principal can make another building for them to study.

(Changed "campus" to "university policy" for clarity; changed "principal" to "Dean of Students" as mentioned in the reading passage; changed "ungraduates" to "undergraduates" for correct spelling; changed "graduate study log" to "Perkins Lounge, a graduate study space" for accuracy and clarity; changed "log" to "lounge" for correct terminology; changed "ungraduate" to "undergraduate" for correct spelling.)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The article announces a change in the university policy, in which the Dean of Students plans to allow undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge, a graduate study space. However, the woman in the lecture disagrees with this announcement. She argues that the graduate study lounge is a quiet place for graduate students to study, where they can spread out their books on the table and work on research projects. Furthermore, it is not a noisy environment for them to concentrate. She also mentions that when undergraduates lack sufficient study space, she suggests that the university should create additional spaces specifically for them. For instance, she proposes that the university could include a study area in the new dormitory being built, allowing Perkins Lounge to remain exclusive for graduate students.

6.Mind Map

- University policy change
  - Perkins Lounge
    - Graduate study space
    - Open to undergraduates

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagreement
  - Reasons
    - Quiet environment for graduate students
    - Spacious for research projects

- Suggestion for undergraduates
  - Create additional study spaces
  - Example: New dormitory study area

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流畅度。此外，发言者需要注意准确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The speaker provided a coherent response, summarizing the plan and stating the woman's opinion. However, the response could be better organized by clearly separating the summary of the plan and the woman's opinion, as well as providing more specific examples from the listening material to support her opinion. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on creating a clear structure and incorporating more details from the listening material to strengthen their argument.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, there is a proposal that the school should open the lounge room for all students for the reason that there are also lots of graduate students learn in that room and there is no sufficient room for undergraduate students to study. The university has proposed opening the lounge room to all students because it is underutilized by graduate students, and there isn't enough study space for undergraduates. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰) However, in the listing material, the women hold a negative opinion about this proposal for the reason that, first of all, it is a quiet space for the graduate students to do some research. In the listening material, the woman expresses her disagreement with this plan because it provides a quiet space for graduate students to conduct research. (修改了句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然) They can do the research here, don't worry, don't need to worry to be disturbed. They can work without worrying about being disturbed. (简化了表达，使语言更流畅) And if the undergraduate students are allowed, it's not a good thing for the graduate students. Allowing undergraduates would negatively impact graduate students. (简化了表达，使语言更流畅) Another reason is that the school should explore another space for the undergraduate students such as the dormitory for them to learn. She also suggests that the university should find alternative spaces for undergraduates, like study areas in dormitories. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university has proposed opening the lounge room to all students because it is underutilized by graduate students, and there isn't enough study space for undergraduates. In the listening material, the woman expresses her disagreement with this plan because it provides a quiet space for graduate students to conduct research. They can work without worrying about being disturbed. Allowing undergraduates would negatively impact graduate students. She also suggests that the university should find alternative spaces for undergraduates, like study areas in dormitories. This would help address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates without disrupting the quiet environment that graduate students currently enjoy in Perkins Lounge. Overall, the woman believes that maintaining a separate study area for graduate students is essential and that other solutions should be explored to accommodate undergraduate needs.

6.思维导图

- University Proposal
  - Open lounge room to all students
  - Underutilized by graduate students
  - Insufficient study space for undergraduates

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagreement with the plan
  - Quiet space for graduate research
  - Negative impact on graduate students

- Alternative Solution
  - Find other spaces for undergraduates
  - Study areas in dormitories
  - Address study space issue without disrupting graduate students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的语速较为稳定，但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持流畅的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和内容支持方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意明确地陈述观点，并提供充分的理由或例子来支持观点。此外，尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加连贯和有条理。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university plans to open graduate study lounge to all students, which is disagreed by the woman in the listening. The university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students, a decision that the woman in the listening disagrees with. (添加了定冠词，调整了句子结构使其更自然)

Firstly, she thinks in such condition it's pretty perfect for graduate students since it is very quiet so they can just spread their book on the desks, especially during the research project. Firstly, she believes that under such conditions, it's ideal for graduate students because it is very quiet, allowing them to spread their books on the desks, especially during research projects. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然流畅；使用了更高级的词汇)

Secondly, she thinks since graduate students are pretty busy, so they can avoid noises and crowded in such condition. Secondly, she thinks that since graduate students are quite busy, they can avoid noise and crowdedness in such an environment. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然流畅；使用了更高级的词汇)

What is also mentioned is that undergraduate students don't have sufficient room to study. Well, even though that is true, as the woman says, there are room in the new dormitory which can be assigned by the university and just leave space to graduate students. It is also mentioned that undergraduate students don't have sufficient study space. However, even though that is true, as the woman suggests, there is room in the new dormitory that can be designated by the university, leaving the lounge exclusively for graduate students. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然流畅；使用了更高级的词汇)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students, a decision that the woman in the listening disagrees with. Firstly, she believes that under such conditions, it's ideal for graduate students because it is very quiet, allowing them to spread their books on the desks, especially during research projects. Secondly, she thinks that since graduate students are quite busy, they can avoid noise and crowdedness in such an environment. It is also mentioned that undergraduate students don't have sufficient study space. However, even though that is true, as the woman suggests, there is room in the new dormitory that can be designated by the university, leaving the lounge exclusively for graduate students.

6.思维导图

- University's Plan
  - Open graduate study lounge to all students

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Quiet environment for graduate students
      - Spread books on desks during research projects
    - Avoid noise and crowdedness for busy graduate students
  - Suggestion
    - Designate room in new dormitory for undergraduates
    - Keep lounge exclusive for graduate students

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more consistently and reduce unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help eliminate any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciation.

4.Topic Development

The topic development in the response is well-done, as it provides a coherent and well-organized summary of the plan and the woman's opinion. The speaker also effectively explains the reasons behind her opinion. To further improve, the speaker could consider adding more specific examples or details from the listening passage to strengthen their argument.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: The university plans to allow undergraduates to use the graduate study lounge. This is because it's underutilized now and there is a sufficient study area for undergraduates. However, the woman disagreed with the following reasons. First, she believes that now the study lounge is perfect because it's never packed. In this way, graduates can have a quiet and nice place to spread books on the table and work on the research project. In addition, to address the insufficient study area problem, the university should designate another place for undergraduates to study, like adding a new study place in a new dormitory. In this way, both undergraduates and graduate students can benefit from this new policy.

Corrected Answer: The university plans to allow undergraduates to use the graduate study lounge. This is because it's underutilized currently underused ("underutilized" is not incorrect, but "currently underused" sounds more natural) now and there is a sufficient lack of adequate (to clarify that there is not enough space for undergraduates) study area for undergraduates. However, the woman disagreed with the following reasons. First, she believes that now the study lounge is perfect because it's never packed. In this way, graduates can have a quiet and nice comfortable ("comfortable" is more specific than "nice") place to spread books on the table and work on the their (to specify that it's their own research projects) research project. In addition, to address the insufficient study area problem, the university should designate another place for undergraduates to study, like adding a new study place in a new dormitory. In this way, both undergraduates and graduate students can benefit from this new updated ("updated" sounds more natural than "new" in this context) policy.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to allow undergraduates to use the graduate study lounge because it is currently underused and there is a lack of adequate study space for undergraduates. However, the woman disagrees with this plan for several reasons. Firstly, she believes that the study lounge is perfect as it is since it is never crowded, allowing graduates to have a quiet and comfortable place to spread out their books and work on their research projects. Additionally, she suggests that the university should designate a separate space for undergraduates to study, such as adding a new study area in an upcoming dormitory. By doing so, both undergraduate and graduate students can benefit from an updated policy that addresses their respective needs for study spaces.

6.Mind Map

• University plan

  • Allow undergraduates to use graduate study lounge
  • Reasons: underused, lack of adequate study space for undergraduates

• Woman's disagreement

  • Current state: perfect, not crowded
    • Benefits: quiet, comfortable, space for research projects
  • Suggestion: designate separate space for undergraduates
    • Example: new study area in upcoming dormitory

• Revised policy benefits

  • Address needs of both undergraduate and graduate students

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 回答中的语速和发音大部分都很清晰，但有时会出现一些不必要的停顿。建议练习更流畅地表达自己的观点，减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在总结计划时可以更简洁明了。在解释女士对计划的看法时，可以进一步强调她的观点和原因。例如，可以指出女士认为开放研究生休息室会影响她们的学习环境，并提出了一个具体的解决方案。总体来说，尝试更清晰地表达观点，并在适当的地方提供更多支持或例子。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university is going to open the graduate study lounge for all students. The university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students. (更自然的表达方式) First, it is underutilized right now, and there is not so many graduates to study. First, it is currently underutilized, and there aren't many graduate students using it. (修正语法错误和提高表达流畅度) Besides, there is insufficient study place for undergraduate students. Moreover, there is a lack of study space for undergraduate students. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式)

However, the woman doesn't like this idea. However, the woman disagrees with this plan. (更自然的表达方式) First, she says the right now place is perfect because it is sufficiently quiet to read books or think and do the research. First, she believes that the current lounge is ideal as it provides a quiet environment for reading, thinking, and conducting research. (改善句子结构和表达清晰度) It is noisy or crowded, It isn't noisy or crowded, (修正语法错误) but when undergraduates come, the situation will change. but the situation will change when undergraduates are allowed in. (更自然的表达方式)

Besides, she says that the school should designate extra place specifically for undergraduates, like they are building the new dormitory so they can add study space for them. Additionally, she suggests that the university should allocate specific areas for undergraduates, such as adding study spaces in the new dormitory being built. (改善句子结构和表达清晰度) Therefore, the woman doesn't like this idea. Therefore, the woman opposes this plan. (更自然的表达方式)

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students. First, it is currently underutilized, and there aren't many graduate students using it. Moreover, there is a lack of study space for undergraduate students. However, the woman disagrees with this plan. First, she believes that the current lounge is ideal as it provides a quiet environment for reading, thinking, and conducting research. It isn't noisy or crowded, but the situation will change when undergraduates are allowed in. Additionally, she suggests that the university should allocate specific areas for undergraduates, such as adding study spaces in the new dormitory being built. Therefore, the woman opposes this plan.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Open graduate study lounge to all students
  - Reasons: underutilized, lack of study space for undergraduates

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons:
    - Current lounge: quiet environment, ideal for reading, thinking, research
    - Situation will change: noisy, crowded with undergraduates
    - Suggestion: allocate specific areas for undergraduates (e.g., new dormitory)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰流畅，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。但在某些地方，发言者的发音可能不太准确，导致了拼写错误。建议发言者多加练习，提高发音准确度。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得很好，回答内容条理清晰、组织有序。他们在回答中明确提到了大学的计划、女士的观点以及她给出的理由。为了进一步提高，可以尝试在回答中加入更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: Essentially, the university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students because graduate students underutilize the space and there is insufficient study place for undergraduate students. Essentially, the university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students due to the underutilization of the space by graduate students and the insufficiency of study areas for undergraduate students. (将“因为”改为“由于”，使句子更自然流畅。同时，将“study place”改为“study areas”以更准确地表达意思。)

Original: However, the women in the conversation disagrees with the proposal. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with the proposal. (将“women”改为“woman”，使句子在语法上更准确。)

Original: The first reason is that it is perfect to have a place for graduate students to do their research spaciously and silently. The first reason is that having a quiet and spacious place for graduate students to conduct their research is ideal. (调整句子结构，使其更自然流畅。)

Original: They can spread out their book on table to do their research project in silence. They can spread out their books on tables and work on their research projects in silence. (将“book”改为复数形式，并调整句子结构以提高自然度。)

Original: The second reason is that if the university really want to address the insufficiency of study place for undergraduate students, they should designate places specifically for them. The second reason is that if the university truly wants to address the insufficiency of study areas for undergraduate students, they should designate specific places for them. (调整句子结构，使其更自然流畅。同时，将“want”改为“wants”以符合语法规则。)

Revised Answer (140 words): Essentially, the university plans to open the graduate study lounge to all students due to the underutilization of the space by graduate students and the insufficiency of study areas for undergraduate students. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with the proposal. The first reason is that having a quiet and spacious place for graduate students to conduct their research is ideal. They can spread out their books on tables and work on their research projects in silence. The second reason is that if the university truly wants to address the insufficiency of study areas for undergraduate students, they should designate specific places for them. For example, they can open a new study space for them in the new dormitory building.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Open graduate study lounge to all students
  - Underutilization by graduate students
  - Insufficient study areas for undergraduates

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the proposal
  - Reasons
    - Quiet and spacious place for graduate research
    - Designate specific places for undergraduates
      - Example: New study space in dormitory building

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow. To improve, the speaker should work on maintaining a consistent pace and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, the speaker should focus on accurate pronunciation to avoid any confusion due to spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, there is room for improvement in providing more specific examples or support for the points made. To enhance topic development, the speaker should consider elaborating on their ideas and incorporating more detailed examples to strengthen their argument.

5.Language Use

Original: It looks like there is a change on the university campus. You see, the university will allow undergraduates to use the parking lot, which was only available for graduates before. There is a change occurring on the university campus, as the university will now permit undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge, which was previously reserved for graduate students. (Clarified the subject and provided more accurate information)

Right off the bat, the woman as a graduate student is disappointed about this plan. Immediately, the woman, being a graduate student herself, expresses her disappointment with this plan. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)

Firstly, she mentions that although the lounge is not fully filled with graduates, it's not a bad thing. Firstly, she points out that even though the lounge isn't always full of graduate students, this isn't necessarily negative. (Improved sentence structure and word choice)

If there are lots of undergraduate students, this place will not be quiet anymore. She believes that if many undergraduate students were to use the lounge, it would no longer remain quiet. (Improved sentence structure and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words):

There is a change occurring on the university campus, as the university will now permit undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge, which was previously reserved for graduate students. Immediately, the woman, being a graduate student herself, expresses her disappointment with this plan. Firstly, she points out that even though the lounge isn't always full of graduate students, this isn't necessarily negative. They enjoy the quiet atmosphere, which allows them to spread their books on the table and focus on their research projects. She believes that if many undergraduate students were to use the lounge, it would no longer remain quiet. Secondly, she argues that the university should address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates by designating specific areas for them, such as adding a study space in the new dormitory they are building, instead of opening Perkins Lounge to all students.

6.Mind Map

• Change on campus

  • Perkins Lounge
    • Previously for graduate students
    • Now open to undergraduates

• Woman's opinion

  • Disappointment
  • Reasons:
    • Quiet atmosphere for graduate students
    • Alternative solutions for undergraduates

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，说话者的语言流利，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方可能需要注意适当的停顿以增强表达效果。此外，尽量避免发音不准确导致的拼写错误。建议练习更多的发音和语言节奏。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，说话者提供了一个相对连贯和有组织的回答，并在一定程度上解释了女士对计划的看法及其原因。但可以尝试更清晰地阐述观点和论据，以使回答更具说服力。建议多做练习，提高论述逻辑性和条理性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university announced that the Graduate Study Lounge is now open to all students. The first reason is the space is underutilized now, and the second is the university has a problem with insufficient study space for graduates. The university announced that the Graduate Study Lounge will now be open to all students due to its underutilization and the need for more study spaces for undergraduates. (将两个原因合并为一个更自然的句子)

However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this idea. In the conversation, however, the woman disagrees with this plan. (改进语言流畅性)

The first reason is it's perfect the way it is now, it's a quiet place to sit and think, and it's really nice to have a space to spread out their book on the table, especially when they're working on research projects. Her first reason is that the current situation is ideal because it provides a quiet environment for contemplation and ample space for spreading out books while working on research projects. (改善句子结构和连贯性)

The second reason is the university should design an extra place for undergraduate students, such as a new dormitory. The university could add a study place for them. That is why the woman disagrees with this announcement. Her second reason is that she believes the university should create additional study spaces specifically for undergraduates, such as in a new dormitory, instead of opening the Graduate Study Lounge to them. (简化句子并提高清晰度)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university announced that the Graduate Study Lounge will now be open to all students due to its underutilization and the need for more study spaces for undergraduates. In the conversation, however, the woman disagrees with this plan. Her first reason is that the current situation is ideal because it provides a quiet environment for contemplation and ample space for spreading out books while working on research projects. Her second reason is that she believes the university should create additional study spaces specifically for undergraduates, such as in a new dormitory, instead of opening the Graduate Study Lounge to them. This revised answer addresses language use issues and improves sentence structure, vocabulary, and grammar while maintaining a natural-sounding language style.

6.思维导图

- University Announcement
  - Graduate Study Lounge open to all students
  - Reasons: underutilization, need for more study spaces for undergraduates

- Woman's Disagreement
  - Reason 1: Current situation is ideal
    - Quiet environment, ample space for books and research projects
  - Reason 2: University should create additional study spaces for undergraduates
    - e.g., in a new dormitory

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确度，避免出现拼写错误。同时，尽量保持语速一致，减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 发言者对问题进行了回答，并提供了一定程度的解释和例子。但在话题发展方面还有提升空间。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注重逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加紧密，并尝试提供更多具体的支持或例子来增强论述。

5.语言使用

Original: The university is going to allow undergraduates to use Parkinson's Perkins Lounge as well, but the woman in the listening part doesn't like it, first because she said that the Parkinson's Perkins Lounge offers a quiet space for graduate students to sit and think. (原文中的“Parkinson's”应为“Perkins”，请注意发音。)

Revised: The university is going to allow undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge as well, but the woman in the listening part doesn't like it, first because she said that the Perkins Lounge offers a quiet space for graduate students to sit and think.

Original: The students can spread out their books on the table. As a graduate student, it's really nice to have a space that is not noisy and crowded. Secondly, she said that if the university wants to address the problem that there is not enough space for studying, the university can build a new dormitory for undergraduate students to study in there.

Revised: The students can spread out their books on the table. As graduate students, it's really nice to have a space that is not noisy and crowded. Secondly, she said that if the university wants to address the problem of insufficient study space, they can build a new dormitory with designated study areas for undergraduate students.

140. words revised version:

The university plans to allow undergraduates access to Perkins Lounge, which was previously reserved for graduate students. However, the woman in the listening part disagrees with this decision. She believes that Perkins Lounge provides a quiet and peaceful environment for graduate students to concentrate on their work and spread out their books on tables. As graduate students, having such a space without noise and crowds is highly valuable. Furthermore, she suggests that if the university wants to address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates, they should consider constructing a new dormitory with designated study areas specifically for undergraduate students. This way, both graduate and undergraduate students can have their own dedicated spaces for studying and working on projects.

6.思维导图

- University plan
  - Allow undergraduates access to Perkins Lounge

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Quiet and peaceful environment for graduate students
    - Insufficient study space for undergraduates can be addressed differently
      - Construct new dormitory with designated study areas for undergraduates

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答中的语音清晰，流利度较好，但有时会出现停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，在总结计划时应更明确地指出这是关于Perkins Lounge的政策变更。此外，在解释女士观点时，可以更详细地描述她提到的其他解决方案（例如，在新宿舍建设学习空间）。在练习时，请注意提供充足的支持或例子，并确保回答中的观点之间有明确的联系。

5.语言使用

Original: The university decided the graduate study lounge not open to all students because there are just a few undergraduate students in there, and besides, there is insufficient study space for undergraduate students. The woman disliked the university's decision and she thinks it's very disappointing. Firstly, she argues that it's a nice and quiet place to allow students to think and read, and they can just sparkle books in desks. But after this announcement there, they cannot do that. And besides, she thinks there is another way can solve this problem. The university should build extra space for undergraduate students, like open new auditorium or other buildings.

Corrected: The university decided the to make the graduate study lounge not open to all students because there are just a few undergraduate students in there, and besides, there is insufficient study space for undergraduate students. The woman disliked the university's decision and she thinks it's very disappointing. Firstly, she argues that it's a nice and quiet place to allow students to think and read, and they can just sparkle spread books in on desks. But after this announcement there,, they cannot do that. And besides, she thinks there is another way can to solve this problem. The university should build extra space for undergraduate students, like open opening a new auditorium or other buildings.

(将“the”改为“to make the”，使句子更自然；去掉“not”，使句子表达正确；将“sparkle”改为“spread”，使句子意义明确；将“in”改为“on”，使句子表达正确；去掉“there,”，使句子更流畅；将“can”改为“to”，使句子结构正确；将“open”改为“opening a”，使句子更自然。)

Revised (140 words): The university decided to make the graduate study lounge open to all students due to the limited number of undergraduate students using it and the insufficient study space available for them. The woman disagrees with the university's decision, finding it disappointing. She believes that the lounge's quiet and peaceful atmosphere allows students to concentrate and read, and they can easily spread their books on desks. However, after this announcement, they will no longer have this privilege. Furthermore, she suggests that there is an alternative solution to address this issue. The university should create additional study spaces specifically for undergraduate students, such as opening a new auditorium or constructing other buildings dedicated to studying. This way, the graduate study lounge can remain exclusive for graduate students while still addressing the needs of undergraduates.

6.思维导图

• University decision

  • Open graduate study lounge to all students
  • Limited undergraduate students using it
  • Insufficient study space for undergraduates

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with the decision
  • Disappointing

• Reasons for disagreement

  • Quiet and peaceful atmosphere
  • Spreading books on desks

• Alternative solution

  • Create additional study spaces for undergraduates
  • Opening a new auditorium or constructing other buildings

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on proper pauses and work on accurate pronunciation of certain words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to support their points. Additionally, mentioning the woman's suggestion for a separate study space in the new dormitory would strengthen the response. Overall, focusing on incorporating more details from the listening passage will help improve topic development.

5.Language Use

Original: The plan is mainly about the dean of students decided to open the study lounge for graduates to undergraduates due to its insufficiency in using. The plan mainly involves the dean of students deciding to open the graduate study lounge to undergraduates because of its underutilization. (Changed sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity and natural flow)

Original: The woman expressed her disagreement about this act. The woman expresses her disapproval of this decision. (Improved vocabulary and grammar)

Original: She thought that it is a reason why all the graduates want to study at the lounge. She believes that its quietness is a reason why many graduate students prefer studying in the lounge. (Clarified meaning and improved sentence structure)

Original: Because of its quiet and peacefulness, and she thinks that maybe there should be a special space for undergraduates without taking their special spaces. Due to its quiet and peaceful atmosphere, she suggests that there should be a separate space for undergraduates without taking away from graduate students' dedicated areas. (Improved sentence structure, grammar, and clarity)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The plan mainly involves the dean of students deciding to open the graduate study lounge to undergraduates because of its underutilization. The woman expresses her disapproval of this decision. She believes that its quietness is a reason why many graduate students prefer studying in the lounge. Due to its quiet and peaceful atmosphere, she suggests that there should be a separate space for undergraduates without taking away from graduate students' dedicated areas. To address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates, the woman proposes that the university designate extra places specifically for them, such as adding a study area in the new dormitory being built. By doing so, the university could accommodate the growing undergraduate population without compromising the quiet and focused environment that graduate students value in Perkins Lounge.

6.Mind Map

- Plan
  - Dean of students
  - Open graduate study lounge
  - Underutilization

- Woman's opinion
  - Disapproval
  - Quietness and peacefulness
  - Graduate students' preference

- Suggestion
  - Separate space for undergraduates
  - Extra study areas
  - New dormitory study area

7.Key Words

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The delivery of the response is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance your delivery, try to maintain a consistent pace throughout your response and minimize unnecessary pauses. Additionally, pay attention to pronunciation to avoid any spelling errors that may arise from inaccurate pronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response provides a coherent and well-organized summary of the plan and the woman's opinion. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details and examples from the listening passage. To strengthen your topic development, make sure to include all relevant information from both the reading and listening passages, and establish clear connections between ideas. This will help you create a more comprehensive and well-supported response.

5.Language Use

Original: This student proposal suggests that the university will allow undergrad students to use the parking lot study lounge, which used to only open to grad students, for two reasons. The university's plan is to allow undergraduate students to use Perkins Lounge, previously reserved for graduate students, due to two main reasons. (Clarified the subject and location of the plan) First, there is not a lot of graduate students actually use it. First, not many graduate students are actually utilizing the space. (Improved grammar and word choice) Besides, there is insufficient study space for undergrad students, and the population of undergrads has increased for several years. Additionally, there is a lack of study space for undergraduate students, and their enrollment has been increasing over the past few years. (Enhanced vocabulary and sentence structure)

However, in the listening part, the woman felt disappointed with this new suggestion. However, in the listening passage, the woman expresses her disappointment with this new plan. (Clarified context and improved word choice) She believed that this is quite a bad thing, She thinks that it is a negative change, (Improved grammar and vocabulary) because, well, in the past, undergrad students do not have to pack when they study, because previously, undergraduate students did not have to deal with crowded spaces while studying, (Corrected tense and clarified meaning) and they can spread out their books, especially when doing their research projects, and the space never noisy or crowded, which is really benefits for undergrad students. and they could spread out their books, particularly during research projects. The space was never noisy or crowded, which greatly benefited the undergraduate students. (Improved sentence structure and grammar)

In addition, she believed that schools should designate extra space for undergrad students. Furthermore, she believes that the university should allocate additional study spaces specifically for undergraduate students. (Enhanced vocabulary and clarity) For instance, like building a study room in the new dorm. For example, by creating a study room in the new dormitory. (Improved sentence structure and word choice)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university's plan is to allow undergraduate students to use Perkins Lounge, previously reserved for graduate students, due to two main reasons. First, not many graduate students are actually utilizing the space. Additionally, there is a lack of study space for undergraduate students, and their enrollment has been increasing over the past few years. However, in the listening passage, the woman expresses her disappointment with this new plan. She thinks that it is a negative change because previously, undergraduate students did not have to deal with crowded spaces while studying, and they could spread out their books, particularly during research projects. The space was never noisy or crowded, which greatly benefited the undergraduate students. Furthermore, she believes that the university should allocate additional study spaces specifically for undergraduate students, such as by creating a study room in the new dormitory.

6.Mind Map

- University's Plan
  - Allow undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge
  - Reasons:
    - Underutilized by graduate students
    - Insufficient study space for undergraduates

- Woman's Opinion (Listening)
  - Disappointment with the plan
  - Negative aspects:
    - Previously uncrowded and quiet space for studying
    - Beneficial for research projects
  - Suggestion:
    - Allocate additional study spaces specifically for undergraduates
    - Example: Study room in the new dormitory

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高发音的准确性和流利度，请注意练习连贯地表达观点，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response provides a summary of the plan and the woman's opinion, but it could be better organized and more coherent. To improve topic development, try to structure your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. In the introduction, briefly mention the plan and the woman's opinion. In the body, elaborate on the reasons she gives for her opinion, making sure to connect them back to her main argument. Finally, in the conclusion, restate her opinion and summarize her reasons. This will help create a more organized and coherent response.

5.语言使用

Original: The university decided to allow undergraduate students to use parking Perkins lounge because the space is underutilized and secondly, the university has a problem with insufficient study place for undergraduate students. However, in the conversation, the woman disagreed with these decisions. First, she points out that the graduate students will lose this quiet space where they can spread books when doing research books. And as graduate students, they have a lot of work to do. So this place would be noisy, crowded and not suitable for them. Secondly, the woman said that the school could address the insufficient study place by some extra space specifically for undergraduate students, such as in the new dormitories, they can set some study place for undergraduate students. So that's the reason why she disagreed with this decision.

(将“parking”改为“Perkins”，因为原文中提到的是Perkins Lounge。)

Revised (140 words):

The university decided to allow undergraduate students to use Perkins Lounge because it is underutilized and there is an insufficient amount of study space for undergraduates. However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this decision. Firstly, she points out that graduate students will lose their quiet space where they can spread out their books while working on research projects. As graduate students have a significant workload, having a peaceful and uncrowded area is essential for them. Secondly, she suggests that the university could address the issue of insufficient study spaces by designating extra areas specifically for undergraduate students, such as creating study spaces in new dormitories. This way, Perkins Lounge could remain exclusive to graduate students. These reasons explain why she disagrees with the university's decision to open Perkins Lounge to undergraduates.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - University's decision
  - Woman's disagreement

- Reason 1
  - Graduate students losing quiet space
  - Importance of peaceful area for research

- Reason 2
  - Alternative solution: extra spaces for undergraduates
  - Example: new dormitories

- Conclusion
  - Summary of woman's opinion and reasons

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议练习在句子之间自然地连接，减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，能够清楚地表达女士对计划的看法及其原因。但在解释女士观点时，可以尝试更详细地描述她提到的建议，例如在新宿舍里为本科生提供专门的学习空间。这样可以使回答更具说服力和深度。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the announcement, the graduate study lounge is now open to not only graduates but also undergraduates. The announcement states that the graduate study lounge is now open to both graduates and undergraduates. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然) This is because the lounge is underutilized and there is no sufficient space for undergraduates. This change was made due to the lounge being underutilized and the lack of sufficient study space for undergraduates. (改进了句子结构和词汇) The woman in the listening does not support this change. To begin with, she points out that the lounge is a quiet place for them to think and sit, and they can spread out books on the tables, especially when they have some researching programs. So they really need a place without noise. Moreover, she argues that the school should designate extra places specifically for the undergraduates, such as new dormitories.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The announcement states that the graduate study lounge is now open to both graduates and undergraduates. This change was made due to the lounge being underutilized and the lack of sufficient study space for undergraduates. The woman in the listening disagrees with this decision. Firstly, she emphasizes that the lounge provides a quiet environment for graduate students to concentrate and work on their research projects, allowing them to spread out their materials on tables. Thus, having a noise-free space is essential for them. Furthermore, she suggests that instead of opening up the graduate lounge to undergraduates, the university should allocate additional study areas specifically for undergraduate students, such as incorporating study spaces in the new dormitory construction. This way, the needs of both graduate and undergraduate students can be met without compromising the quality of their study environments.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • Graduate study lounge
    • Open to graduates and undergraduates
    • Reasons: underutilized, lack of study space for undergraduates

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with the decision
  • Reasons:
    • Quiet environment for graduate students
      • Concentration, research projects, spreading out materials
    • Suggestion: allocate additional study areas for undergraduates
      • Example: new dormitory construction

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，答案的语言流利度和连贯性较好，但仍有一些不太自然的地方。建议在练习中注意提高发音准确性，避免不必要的停顿。同时，注意在句子之间保持恰当的语速和节奏。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，答案内容基本上符合题目要求，但在总结计划和女士观点时可以更加简洁明了。建议在练习中注意组织回答的结构，确保回答内容条理清晰、逻辑严密。同时，在解释女士观点时可以给出更多具体的例子或细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：According to announcements, the university has decided to allow undergraduate students to use the parking lounge as well, According to the announcement, the university has decided to allow undergraduate students to use Perkins Lounge as well, (根据录音，这里应该是Perkins Lounge而不是parking lounge。) because there were not enough graduate students in the university and there were not sufficient places for undergraduate students to study. due to the underutilization by graduate students and insufficient study spaces for undergraduates. (这里的表述可以更简洁明了。)

The woman in the conversation totally disagrees with this change for several reasons. The woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan for a few reasons. (这里的表述可以更自然。) First, she mentions that the lounge used to be the quiet place for them to look books and work on their research projects. First, she mentions that the lounge used to be a quiet place for them to read books and work on their research projects. (这里的表述可以更准确。)

However, after the implementation of the new policy, the lounge will definitely be very noisy and be unsuitable for their study. However, after implementing the new policy, the lounge will likely become noisy and unsuitable for their studies. (这里的表述可以更自然。)

Additionally, the woman mentions that in her idea, the suitable way to address this problem is to add extra study places for undergraduate students, because undergraduate students always need somewhere quiet place to study and work. Additionally, the woman suggests that a more suitable solution would be to provide additional study spaces for undergraduate students, as they also require quiet places to study and work. (这里的表述可以更自然和准确。)

修订后的答案（140词）：

According to the announcement, the university has decided to allow undergraduate students to use Perkins Lounge as well, due to the underutilization by graduate students and insufficient study spaces for undergraduates. The woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan for a few reasons. First, she mentions that the lounge used to be a quiet place for them to read books and work on their research projects. However, after implementing the new policy, the lounge will likely become noisy and unsuitable for their studies. Additionally, the woman suggests that a more suitable solution would be to provide additional study spaces for undergraduate students, as they also require quiet places to study and work.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • Perkins Lounge
  • Undergraduates allowed
  • Underutilization by graduate students
  • Insufficient study spaces

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Reasons
    • Quiet place for reading and research
    • New policy may cause noise and unsuitability
    • Suggests alternative solution: additional study spaces for undergraduates

7.关键词