TOEFL TPO 17 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the upcoming change. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发音清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方停顿稍多。建议在练习时注意掌握自然的语调和节奏，尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了男生的观点和理由，但在组织结构上可以更加清晰。建议在回答时先简要陈述男生的观点，然后再分点阐述他提出的理由，这样可以让回答更有条理。

5.语言使用

Original: The university decided to replace the multi-person study table by the personal study cubicles because students could have some privacy and work in isolation, so there will be less noise and students could concentrate better. The university plans to replace the multi-person study tables with personal study cubicles, allowing students to have privacy and work in isolation, thus reducing noise and improving concentration.（将句子结构调整得更简洁明了）

Original: And furthermore, because there are more students coming in this university this year, the cubicle will increase the space efficiency. Moreover, due to the increased number of students attending the university this year, the cubicles will enhance space efficiency.（使用了更高级的词汇，如"moreover"和"enhance"）

Original: The man is opposed to the opinion because, well, first of all, now there are no place to do the group project for them now. The man disagrees with this change because, firstly, there will be no place for them to work on group projects.（调整句子结构，使其更自然流畅）

Original: Students should build more meeting rooms instead. Instead, more meeting rooms should be built for students.（改为被动句式，使表达更准确）

Original: And furthermore, although there are more students this year, there are many empty tables, so it is already space efficiency right now. Furthermore, despite the increased number of students, there are still many empty tables, indicating that the current space is already efficient.（调整句子结构，使其更自然流畅）

Original: There is no need to build more cubicles. Thus, there is no need to add more cubicles.（使用"thus"使结论更强烈）

Revised (140 words): The university plans to replace the multi-person study tables with personal study cubicles, allowing students to have privacy and work in isolation, thus reducing noise and improving concentration. Moreover, due to the increased number of students attending the university this year, the cubicles will enhance space efficiency. The man disagrees with this change because, firstly, there will be no place for them to work on group projects. Instead, more meeting rooms should be built for students. Furthermore, despite the increased number of students, there are still many empty tables, indicating that the current space is already efficient. Thus, there is no need to add more cubicles.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Replace multi-person tables with cubicles
  - Privacy and isolation
  - Reduced noise, improved concentration
  - Enhanced space efficiency

- Man's disagreement
  - No place for group projects
    - Suggestion: build more meeting rooms
  - Current space already efficient
    - Many empty tables
    - No need for more cubicles

7.关键词