TOEFL Speaking Task 3 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在适当的停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意以下几点：1) 在句子之间保持连贯性，避免不必要的停顿；2) 注意正确发音，以免出现拼写错误；3) 在练习时，可以尝试加快语速，使发言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答较为完整，能够概括提案内容并阐述男生的观点及理由。但在话题发展方面仍有改进空间。建议发言者注意以下几点：1) 在总结提案时，尽量使用更精炼的语言；2) 在解释男生观点和理由时，可以适当加入更多细节和例子以支持观点；3) 注意保持回答的条理性和连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: A student suggests the university should allow all students to borrow camera instead of only students who took photography course. A student suggests that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras, not just those enrolled in photography courses. (建议使用更自然的语言表达，同时注意名词复数形式。)

First, it would advance students' photography skills. Firstly, this would help improve students' photography skills. (使用更自然的连接词和动词。)

Second, it is better to short the camera long time. Secondly, it would be better to shorten the camera loan time. (调整句子结构，使其更清晰。)

And the man in the conversation doesn't like this idea because firstly, he thinks a camera is sophisticated. There's various settings and adjustments to make. Unless students be trained, it would be impossible for them to use cameras. Second, the assignments in this course is demanding and abundant. So if the university took time frame as the student suggested, it would be impossible for them to complete their assignments because they have to go out campus to complete their assignments.

Corrected Answer: A student suggests that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras, not just those enrolled in photography courses. Firstly, this would help improve students' photography skills. Secondly, it would be better to shorten the camera loan time. The man in the conversation disagrees with this idea because, first of all, he believes that cameras are sophisticated with various settings and adjustments to make. He thinks that without proper training, it would be impossible for students to use the cameras effectively. Secondly, the assignments in the photography course are demanding and time-consuming. If the university implemented the shorter time frame as suggested by the student, it would be impossible for photography students to complete their assignments, as they often have to go off-campus to capture images.

Revised Answer (140 words): A student proposes that the university should permit all students to borrow cameras, not just those enrolled in photography courses. This would enhance students' photography skills and optimize camera usage by shortening loan times. However, the man in the conversation disagrees, arguing that cameras are sophisticated devices with numerous settings and adjustments. Without proper training, students would struggle to use them effectively. Additionally, he highlights that photography course assignments are demanding and time-consuming. Implementing a shorter loan time frame, as suggested by the student, would hinder photography students from completing their assignments, as they often need to venture off-campus to capture diverse images.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Allow all students to borrow cameras
  - Improve photography skills
  - Shorten camera loan time

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with the proposal
  - Reasons
    - Cameras are sophisticated
      - Various settings and adjustments
      - Proper training needed
    - Assignments in photography course
      - Demanding and time-consuming
      - Shorter loan time would hinder completion
      - Off-campus locations for capturing images

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的语音清晰，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。但是，有一些标点问题是由于不恰当的停顿造成的。所有拼写错误都是因为发音不准确造成的。在今后的练习中，请注意提高发音准确性和适当控制停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答内容连贯，组织结构清晰，观点之间关系明确，并且提供了足够的支持和例子。但是，在今后的练习中，请注意更加深入地探讨观点和论据，以便更好地支持你的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：In the letter, the student suggests to the university to increase workspace and a computer lab because it currently tightly packed together in the computer lab and the lab for students, they are not very crowded. In the letter, the student proposes that the university should increase workspace in the computer lab because it is currently tightly packed, and there are not many students using it.（将原句中的语法错误进行了修改，使句子更加通顺。同时，对原句中的表述进行了简化，使其更加清晰。）

In the conversation, the man disagrees with this idea. In the conversation, the man disagrees with this proposal.（将“idea”替换为“proposal”，使得表述更加准确。）

First, he thinks the student exaggerated the problem. For most of the time, it's able to find enough room and people don't need to put so much books because they only need one or two books at a time. First, he believes that the student exaggerated the problem. Most of the time, there is enough room, and people don't need to have many books out because they only need one or two at a time.（修改了原句中的语法错误，并对表述进行了简化。）

Second, the student's computer lab is crowded at night. He suggests that the student put forward the letter, he must attend the, Second, he mentions that the computer lab is crowded at night. He implies that the student who wrote the letter must be attending during less busy hours.（修改了原句中的语法错误，并对表述进行了简化。）

修订版（140词）：

In the letter, the student proposes that the university should increase workspace in the computer lab because it is currently tightly packed, and there are not many students using it. In the conversation, the man disagrees with this proposal. First, he believes that the student exaggerated the problem. Most of the time, there is enough room, and people don't need to have many books out because they only need one or two at a time. Second, he mentions that the computer lab is crowded at night. He implies that the student who wrote the letter must be attending during less busy hours.

6.思维导图

- Letter
  - Proposal
    - Increase workspace
    - Tightly packed computer lab
    - Not many students using it

- Conversation
  - Man's disagreement
    - Exaggerated problem
      - Enough room most of the time
      - Only need one or two books at a time
    - Crowded at night
      - Student attends during less busy hours

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流畅度。同时，注意发音的准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于提案的总结和男生观点的陈述较为清晰，但在解释男生观点的原因时，表述略显简单。建议在解释原因时尽量详细阐述，以使回答更加充分和有说服力。例如，在提到学生可以节省很多钱时，可以具体说明出租车费用较高等情况。同时，在提到假期期间课程较少时，可以进一步解释学校巴士的调整不会对其他同学产生影响。

5.语言使用

Original: So there are many students need to get to airport for going home when summer and winter vacation. And since that, the university decide to re-rotate the school bus to airport. And speaker Meng Wen agree with this plan because he think in this way the student can save a lot of money since the school bus to airport is free. And the second reason is there are less class that still running in the vacations. And in this way, the students don't need to get university more often.

Corrected: So there are many students need Many students need (去掉"So"，使句子更简洁) to get to airport the airport (加上"the"，使句子更通顺) for going home when summer and winter vacation during summer and winter vacations (改为"during"，使句子更自然). And since that, Therefore, (使用"Therefore"替换"And since that,"，使句子更连贯) the university decide decides (改为第三人称单数形式) to re-rotate reroute (使用"reroute"替换"re-rotate"，使句子更准确) the school bus to airport the airport (加上"the"，使句子更通顺). And speaker Meng Wen agree The male student agrees (使用"The male student agrees"替换"And speaker Meng Wen agree"，使句子更清晰) with this plan because he think thinks (改为第三人称单数形式) in this way the student can save a lot of money since the school bus to airport the airport (加上"the"，使句子更通顺) is free. And the second reason is there are less class that still running in the vacations. fewer classes running during vacations. (使用"fewer classes running during vacations."替换"less class that still running in the vacations."，使句子更简洁和准确) And in this way, Thus, (使用"Thus"替换"And in this way,"，使句子更连贯) the students don't need to get university to the university (加上"to the"，使句子更通顺) more often.

Revised (140 words): Many students need to get to the airport during summer and winter vacations. Therefore, the university decides to reroute the school bus to the airport. The male student agrees with this plan because he thinks that in this way, students can save a lot of money since the school bus to the airport is free. The second reason is that there are fewer classes running during vacations. Thus, students don't need to go to the university more often. By providing a free bus service between campus and the

6.思维导图

- Proposal
    - Reroute school bus
    - Airport

- Male student's opinion
    - Agrees
    - Reasons
        - Save money
            - Free bus service
        - Fewer classes during vacations
            - Less need for campus transportation

7.关键词