TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3.5

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 24

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议在练习发音时注意语速和停顿，以便让听众更容易理解。此外，尝试减少不必要的停顿，以保持流畅的语言表达。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步改进。首先，在总结阅读材料时，请确保提供足够的详细信息以便听众了解背景。其次，在解释女学生观点时，请确保提供充足的支持和例子来证明她的观点。最后，注意在回答中保持一致性和逻辑性，以便让听众更容易跟随你的思路。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading material, there is an announcement that the university wants to afford the students' rental car at a discounted rate. In the reading passage, it is announced that the university plans to provide students with rental cars at discounted rates.（将“afford”改为“provide”，使句子更自然。同时，调整句子结构以提高语言流畅性。）

This is because the campus thinks it is much more easier for the students to go shopping for a shortened use of the campus to go to the town. The campus believes this will make it easier for students to travel to town for short-term use, such as shopping.（简化句子结构，去掉多余的词汇，使表达更清晰。）

And besides, the university thinks it is expensive for the students to afford to own their own cars. Additionally, the university considers car ownership too expensive for students.（简化句子结构，去掉重复的词汇。）

And the student strongly agrees with this proposal. The woman in the conversation strongly agrees with this plan.（将“student”改为“woman in the conversation”，使描述更准确。）

She believes that first of all, the university is far from the town, so the bus is very inconvenient because it costs a lot of time. She believes that, firstly, since the university is far from town, taking the bus is inconvenient due to the time it consumes.（调整句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And the second reason is that managing a car is not only about its own rates, it also requires extra costs on the gas and the parking lot. Her second reason is that owning a car involves not only its initial cost but also additional expenses for gas and parking.（调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

修订版（140词）：

In the reading passage, it is announced that the university plans to provide students with rental cars at discounted rates. The campus believes this will make it easier for students to travel to town for short-term use, such as shopping. Additionally, the university considers car ownership too expensive for students. The woman in the conversation strongly agrees with this plan. She believes that, firstly, since the university is far from town, taking the bus is inconvenient due to the time it consumes. Her second reason is that owning a car involves not only its initial cost but also additional expenses for gas and parking.

6.思维导图

• Reading passage

  • University plan
    • Rental cars
      • Discounted rates

• Campus opinion

  • Easier travel
    • Short-term use
      • Shopping
  • Car ownership
    • Expensive for students

• Woman's agreement

  • Distance from town
    • Inconvenient bus
      • Time-consuming
  • Car ownership costs
    • Initial cost
    • Additional expenses
      • Gas and parking

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音不够清晰，语速不稳定，有时出现不必要的停顿。建议练习发音和语调，以便在说话时更自然流畅。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 回答内容虽然涉及了文章和听力的部分信息，但组织结构不够清晰。建议在回答时先简要概括计划，然后明确陈述女士的观点，并给出她的理由。此外，在陈述理由时，尽量使用准确的细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university had decided to discontinue their summer yoga, because only a few students participate in, so they decided to cancel some courses because they believe it doesn't work for that. The university decided to discontinue the summer yoga program due to low student participation, leading them to cancel some courses as they believed it was not effective. (将原句中的语法错误进行了修正，使句子更加通顺。)

And the women, both the men and women in the conversation, felt disappointed about this policy. The woman in the conversation expressed her disappointment about this decision. (删除了重复的信息，并简化了句子结构。)

First, batch is noisy and chaotic for the women where she resides, and also sometimes she even hides in the window of his room. First, she mentioned that the gym is noisy and chaotic, making it difficult for her to relax during yoga sessions. (修正了原句中的错误词汇和不清晰的表述。)

But there are also benefits, like, for example, the women, she don't need to get up so early because some courses set up in the 7 a.m. and she can stay up late and to play something. However, she acknowledged that there were benefits to having classes later in the day since students wouldn't have to wake up as early as 7 a.m. for yoga sessions. (重新组织了句子结构，使其更加清晰。)

But she also felt She also suggested that (改进了句子的开头，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university decided to discontinue the summer yoga program due to low student participation, leading them to cancel some courses as they believed it was not effective. The woman in the conversation expressed her disappointment about this decision. First, she mentioned that the gym is noisy and chaotic, making it difficult for her to relax during yoga sessions. She also shared her positive experience with the outdoor yoga classes by the river, highlighting the calming effect of nature and the sound of water. However, she acknowledged that there were benefits to having classes later in the day since students wouldn't have to wake up as early as 7 a.m. for yoga sessions. She suggested that if the university scheduled these classes at a more convenient time, more students might be interested in participating.

6.思维导图

- Discontinue Summer Yoga Program
  - Low student participation
  - Cancel some courses

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disappointment
  - Gym: noisy and chaotic
  - Outdoor yoga: calming effect of nature and sound of water

- Benefits of later classes
  - More convenient for students
  - Increased participation

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要更好地组织句子结构。建议在练习时注意提高发音的准确性，并尝试保持一致的语速，以便听众更容易理解。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释女士观点时提供更多详细信息。例如，在提到她需要大量书籍进行研究时，可以进一步说明这对她学术成果的重要性。此外，尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加流畅。

5.语言使用

Original: In reading, the student suggests that school should limit on the number of library books a student can borrow one time. In the reading, it is suggested that schools should limit the number of library books a student can borrow at one time. (在原文中，建议将“the student suggests”改为“it is suggested”，使句子更自然。同时，将“limit on”改为“limit”，并将“one time”改为“at one time”。)

Original: However, in listening, the woman disagrees. However, the woman in the listening disagrees. (在原文中，建议将“in listening”改为“the woman in the listening”，使句子更清晰。)

Original: As her, she has registered for five classes and all of them need to do research. She has enrolled in five classes, and all of them require research. (在原文中，建议将“As her”删除，并将“registered for”改为“enrolled in”。同时，将“need to do research”改为“require research”。)

Original: So she needs a lot of books before and during her research's progress. Therefore, she needs numerous books both before and during her research process. (在原文中，建议将“So”改为“Therefore”，并将“a lot of books”改为“numerous books”。同时，将“research's progress”改为“research process”。)

Original: Once she had borrowed for like 20 books, but she can read all of them. She once borrowed around 20 books and was able to read all of them. (在原文中，建议将“for like”改为“around”，并将“can read”改为“was able to read”。)

Original: It's good for her to have this book. Having access to these books is beneficial for her. (在原文中，建议将“It's good for her to have this book”改为“Having access to these books is beneficial for her”，使句子更自然。)

Original: And second, she thinks that it won't easily happen for students to lose a lot of books as the reading thinks. Secondly, she believes that students losing many books, as the reading suggests, is unlikely. (在原文中，建议将“And second”改为“Secondly”，并重新组织句子结构以使其更自然。)

Original: The students are already adults, so school need to trust them that they can take care of the book but not just assume they will get the book lost. Since students are already adults, schools should trust them to take care of the books instead of assuming they will lose them. (在原文中，建议重新组织句子结构以使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading, it is suggested that schools should limit the number of library books a student can borrow at one time. However, the woman in the listening disagrees. She has enrolled in five classes, and all of them require research. Therefore, she needs numerous books both before and during her research process. She once borrowed around 20 books and was able to read all of them. Having access to these books is beneficial for her. Secondly, she believes that students losing many books, as the reading suggests, is unlikely. Since students are already adults, schools should trust them to take care of the books instead of assuming they will lose them.

6.思维导图

- Reading suggestion
  - Limit number of books

- Woman's disagreement
  - Enrolled in five classes
    - Require research
    - Numerous books needed
  - Borrowed 20 books
    - Able to read all
    - Beneficial access
  - Unlikely to lose books
    - Students are adults
    - Trust instead of assuming loss

7.关键词