TOEFL TPO 47 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state the woman's opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

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Professor Evaluations The university requires students to complete written evaluations of their professors at the end of each course taught during the semester. But the current system is private, since only the professors actually read the evaluations once the students submit them. I suggest that the university publish these evaluations online for everyone to read Both professors and students would benefit from having these evaluations published. Professors would feel more motivated to improve their teaching if they knew that their course evaluations were publicly available to all students. In addition, prospective students could read the evaluations and make more informed decisions about which classes they want to take.Sincerely,Chris Jacobs

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The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state the woman's opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

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1.子项得分

交付 (Delivery): 3
主题发展 (Topic Development): 3
语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

总分: 23

3.表达回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高发音准确性，请注意在练习发音时多关注元音和辅音的发音。同时，尝试在练习时减少不必要的停顿，以使语言更流畅。

4.话题发展回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在一些地方进行改进。首先，在总结建议时，请确保更明确地指出建议的来源（即信件）。此外，在解释女士反对意见的原因时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词（例如“因此”、“然而”等），以使回答更具连贯性。最后，在提供女士观点的理由时，可以考虑给出更具体的例子或详细信息，以使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The student proposed that the university should publish the evaluation online for everyone because it can motivate the professors to improve the teaching styles and it can help the students in the future to choose the classes. The student suggested that the university publish evaluations online for everyone, as this would motivate professors to enhance their teaching methods and assist future students in selecting classes. (将原句中的"it can"改为"this would"，使句子更自然。同时，将"teaching styles"改为"teaching methods"，使表达更准确。)

Well, in the listening, the woman disagreed with it because it won't help to improve the teaching styles because the professors won't be happy to see their styles are criticized published so they won't read the letter and be influenced by this. In the listening, the woman disagreed, arguing that it wouldn't improve teaching methods since professors would be unhappy with public criticism and might not read or be influenced by these evaluations. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

~~What's more, it won't help the student in the future to choose the classes because the students won't write something helpful or specific because they always write this in the last day of the class.~~ Moreover, it wouldn't help future students choose classes, as current students might not provide helpful or specific feedback due to writing evaluations on the last day of class. (使用“Moreover”替换“What's more”，使连接词更自然。同时，简化句子结构。)

~~They all want to live in a hurry.~~ They are all eager to leave quickly. (将原句中的"live in a hurry"改为"leave quickly"，使表达更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The student suggested that the university publish evaluations online for everyone, as this would motivate professors to enhance their teaching methods and assist future students in selecting classes. In the listening, the woman disagreed, arguing that it wouldn't improve teaching methods since professors would be unhappy with public criticism and might not read or be influenced by these evaluations. Moreover, it wouldn't help future students choose classes, as current students might not provide helpful or specific feedback due to writing evaluations on the last day of class. They are all eager to leave quickly.

6.思维导图


- Introduction
  - Student's proposal
  - Woman's disagreement

- Motivation for professors
  - Unhappy with public criticism
  - Might not read or be influenced by evaluations

- Help for future students
  - Current students' feedback
    - Not helpful or specific
    - Written on the last day of class
  - Eager to leave quickly

7.关键词

Word	Phonetic Symbols	Parts of Speech	English definitions	Simplified Chinese translations	Sample sentences
evaluation	/ɪˌvæljuˈeɪʃən/	noun	A judgment or assessment of something's value, quality, or performance.	评价，评估	The evaluation of the professor's teaching methods was mixed, with some students praising their clarity and others criticizing their lack of engagement.
motivation	/ˌmoʊtɪˈveɪʃən/	noun	The reason or reasons one has for acting or behaving in a particular way.	动机，激励	The motivation behind publishing evaluations online is to encourage professors to improve their teaching methods and help future students make informed decisions.
criticism	/ˈkrɪtɪsɪzəm/	noun	The expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes.	批评，评论	The woman believed that public criticism would make professors unhappy and less likely to read or be influenced by evaluations.
specific	/spəˈsɪfɪk/	adjective	Clearly defined or identified; precise or exact.	具体的，明确的	The woman argued that students might not provide specific feedback in their evaluations, making them less helpful for future students.
enhance	/ɪnˈhæns/	verb	Intensify, increase, or further improve the quality, value, or extent of something.	提高，增强	The student suggested that publishing evaluations online would enhance professors' teaching methods by motivating them to improve.